Hi Yea Forums,
Made a similiar thread yesterday about the lore to a story I'm writing. In the picture is a brief overview of the events that happen before the start of the Main story arc. The lore feels incomplete so I'm looking for suggestions to things to add in (can be characters, gangs, whatever) and things to change. Any feedback would be appreciated.
This was my original timeline from yesterday, like to think I improved it a little bit
>Bambini Terribili
People in Italy know french.
And people both in Italy and France have played MGS.
My Priest played MGS, actually.
"Progetto Ventuno Grammi" is omnious enought but Please change some names.
Ah you got me there, I'll change it. Got any suggestions?
All in all it looks like an interesting idea. How do You plan to develop It exactly? Does it start with Iroquois waking up?
Yeah pretty much, what I have in mind for the first scene he wakes up on the slab then the Members of the church undercover his disguise and it's basically a nightclub shootout once they find out an impostor transferred souls.
what would you add to it?
Strong start, cool.
I would have the prophets having predicted This sort of thing and having a collateral plan which will become apparent later. Maybe Iroquois Pilskin later discovers that some police agentes have secretly already undergone the soul transfer process. This would mess him up good.
So MGS + NGE?
That's not a bad idea. I could work it so that since Judas and the prophetas stole the research data when they smoked section III it could lead them to the delusion that mary is bringer of destruction since she is technically the second oldest living bambini terribilis. And wouldn't it be awesome if members of S.A.T were actually double agents working with the church?