The homosexuals complain about equality While doing things of some questionable legality And invading every corner of society In a rampage that destroys all propriety Until they succeed in ruining your life Because they wish to marry men and children, and not take a wife And if you are quite astute You will notice that they want to recruit So they go to preschool to molest some infants But then they claim "Between gay and straight there is no difference" So when the homosexuals come to take our stuff The White Race must stand up and shout, "That's enough!" And once we all stand strong together The future of our children will be assured forever
Anything that puts faggots in their place is good in my book
Adam Lopez
The rhyme scheme is weird. The first four lines rhyme with each other (AAAA) but than everything rhymes in groups of two (AAAABBCCDDEEFF) The poem has no meter or rhythm. Some lines are incredibly long and others are incredibly short. For instance >And if you are quite astute >You will notice that they want to recruit >So they go to preschool to molest some infants >But then they claim "Between gay and straight there is no difference" This is terrible. It’s like you go grasping for a rhyme without care for how the poem will sound when read out loud All in all, like another user said, this is third grade tier work. This isn’t a great poem at all.
Dominic Diaz
Its good for them too, the fags
Evan Campbell
Spotted the homosexual.
Luke Hall
You seem awfully defensive when it comes to criticism of homosexuals. I wonder why that is.
Camden Hill
I didn’t say anything about the message
Robert Evans
>I hate everything about this poem! RRRR GRRR What? No, I'm not defensive about the homosexual lifestyle. Where would you ever get that idea?
Joshua Perez
Very nice satire user. I'm sure you'll get many replies.
Owen Baker
Based You have a knack for poetry OP
Blake Peterson
Thanks! : D
Jaxson Peterson
Your actually a fag who can’t discern literary criticism from the someone shoving in there own self. /pol/ or r/ anything is more your speed.
Sebastian Scott
Greatest poem of this generation. Keep speaking truth to power.
Ayden Torres
>Your actually a fag >Your >HELP HOW DO I MAKE ENGILS SENTANCE
Ayden Ortiz
It's got everything you could possibly want in a poem.. words, rhymes.. everything
Jayden Nguyen
If you're going to make such god awful bait you could at least put enough effort into it to make a workable poem, or something funny
John Cox
>REEEEE EEEE EEE EE EEEEE EEEEEE Calm down.
Evan Allen
I’m gonna try rewriting this so it’s good, cause you’re a shitty poet. The homosexual he cries I’m a victim of societies lies It should come to you as no surprise All I want is love With different men every single night Playing the old game of loose and tight Till I’m a beast of serious fright Disease is in my blood We’re oppressed and so the city Will give us a parade of degeneracy A funeral march for western society Found positive with AIDS At the adult in leathers wild exhort Young boys will dance in booty shorts Scream over the protests that try to thwart Our sacred pride parades Broken is the community church Broken still is my fathers shirt Broken cries of my ancestors hurt But it doesn’t affect you What do you think that preacher meant When he told us all to repent From the pulpit till his breath was spent And his face turned blue Red is the color of the fires of hell Gold is the color of the old church bell My color matters not, I’m an empty shell Dead and godforsaken No father stood by my graveside No mother shed tears she cried But in the earth I smiled wide At least I’d had your children
Adam James
Sperg-tastic, truly! Bravo user
Gavin Anderson
>I’m a victim of societies lies >societies >HELP WHY IS WRITING ENGILS SO CONFUSING
Elijah Torres
user you have to understand that nobody here has thin enough skin for something like this to actually hurt them, or even for it to come across as edgy. You're not on tumblr. I doubt you've spent more than a year on Yea Forums. Sometimes when people tell you you're being retarded, it's not because you triggered them and they're angry. It's because you're being retarded.
Jordan Russell
You’re just jealous cause my homophobic poem is better than your homophobic poem. I could have made every word a typo and it would still be better than yours
Adam King
My poem is not homophobic. Also, all of the religious stuff in your poem was weird and unnecessary.
Ryder Taylor
I hope the entire point of this troll is too decry any criticism of the awful poem as "triggering" you have been duped, I don't think Opie is actually trying to offend anyone
Carter Adams
Your homophobic poem was the equivalent of buying a pride flag and wiping your ass with it >gross >unnecessary >only will be known by yourself My homophobic poem is the equivalent of going to a pride parade and setting a rainbow flag on fire >cool >beautiful >sends a message Sorry, maybe someday you’ll be able to work your way up to my level
Asher Bailey
huh?
Caleb Wright
OP here. I'm bored now and I'm leaving.
Grayson Garcia
You got scared off by the superior homophobic poet
Aaron Rodriguez
The breeder was quiet pleased To go around and spread his seed And as a present to his bastard spawn He’d passed life’s woes to carry on A nagging wife he called his rock His life devouted to his cock His freedom gone, the end draws near Grins contentedly “at least I’m not a queer” Dear reader heed and scorn this fate Learn to abstain and masturbate
Liam Allen
Dude, your poem is funny. It is not a masterpiece but I think that with some effort, time, and reading you will be able to write truly decent poems. Good luck!
Kayden Hughes
Ok this is another level
Jeremiah Fisher
OP here. That's actually pretty goddamn good. Okay, now I'm leaving for real.
