How's the writing career coming, Yea Forums?

I feel as if you made it one paragraph in and called it scattered.

About to finish college with English degree. I think I'll get a story published within the year because I've improved a lot. As for jobs, I dunno, I don't have too bad of loans, and every job I've had so far has offered me higher level positions, so even if it doesn't connect directly or even tangentially to english, I think I'll make decent enough money and have time to write.

I made it one paragraph in. It is scattered. The phrasing in lines like "his left one surviving member of a species that once held a population in the hundreds of thousands," and "they were thought to be no more until an expedition sent out from the Smithsonian Institute found just eight surviving seals" is just awkward. Also, don't post shit to Yea Forums and then get butthurt when people reply to hit. He didn't have to read your essay at all, don't get mad because he didn't read the whole thing

I got a day job in a major metropolitan area so I can leave my comfy rural life behind for a few miserable years.

Let's go! instagram.com/yaaqovs/

Plenty of ideas, I write down my dreams these days and use them as fuel for outlines.
I have a bunch of novels that I switch between when writing on them and it's pretty fun honestly.
I don't even care if they ever get actually published but putting my weird dreams into text is entertaining to me.
Currently working on some monstergirl guro type of thing, no idea where I'm gonna go with it but it's fun writing about it at the very least.