critique thread as the last one died.
here's a poem
>ex aqua
Blue on blue, almost indistinct
Against the whim of wave aglow
The crossing color binds them so-
Watch them mirror High Apollo,
But sadder. Sadder, darker, trust
Broken up like minuteterra
Shifting for another era.
Broken up like pale-armed Hera
Could never hope to do.
Little birds flit above them, Anu
Not truly exerting potency
Over those skimming above Enki.
Currents snake by, surfacing Abzu
Reflecting the deeper, older Nammu.
Transparent and threatening like broken glass,
or the air between man and an angered Shamash,
Shining down on inhospitable breakers of truce-
Cyclopean glaring at loud-thundering Zeus,
Spying maiden upon maiden in time of crisis,
Seeing the loveliest of all in Sothis-Isis.
Blue on blue, representing emanations
Upon emanations, reflections upon reflections.
Blue on blue in beautiful cerulean flirtation,
Blue on blue in breathtaking aquamarine fixation
On water, and water, in humble genuflection
To the Gods, who made all by Water's subjection.