Post your short story ideas. It's not like they're going anywhere

You know what I came up with this plot on the fly based on the concept of collecting things and mold in an unsettling unity.

The protagonist kidnapping women seems like an inevitable outcome, doesn't it?

make it newborn infants instead

Hey, you stole my movie idea!

reposting because the previous thread died too soon

A Memoir from the Future
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Set in 2995, a young woman named Arge (short for Argentina) reflects in a diary on her interplanetary life, society, technology, recent history and so forth. The entire story is told while she's in transit in the solar system. The idea is that she's a "Moonie" (someone born on the moon) and recalls her time growing up, what it was like when she came to earth as an expat to study (and the discrimination she experienced, like assholes in college - or whatever the equivalent of advance/specialized/higher education would be - shouting "Show us your moons!" etc), the stuff she's seen and her criticism of some of the cultural activities of her time (like one thing that could be is highly advanced holographic DnD type of game causing teens to be completely immersed in a fake fantasy world).

She'd also tell about the transportation technology, how life on the different colonized planets are and which ones are in the process of being prepared for colonization, and in which ways humans changed and the unique societies that developed - on planets as a whole and the different states/civilizations within. Of course, she will touch on history as well. I'm not sure where she's going, maybe just on her way for vacation.

The biggest challenge of this kind of project is keeping the science in sci-fi. On the one hand, it's extremely difficult to predict even the general advancement of humanity (I'm sure we'll come to colonize the star system eventually, but that's about it), and on the other, any actual realistic prediction leads to dystopian cyberpunk singularity run by a world-government of oligarchs (yeah I think Land is right on the money, even if this isn't exactly what he believes). Then the whole thing with technology - having the current year and a few decades to come, maybe a century, as the starting point for a logical and creative speculation on the development of technology up to a thousand years. The same with governments and states actually. What I am basically saying is that in order to write this novel or novella successfully I will have to become a polymath and study all existing methodologies, and maybe invent some, for the understanding of history. and I'm kind of doing that actually, but I will still probably never get my hands on this project anyway, maybe when I'm fucking 70

so these two girlcops knock on the door of an apartment-dwelling with the windows all blocked out and then a third, even hotter girl answers the door. She's hotter because she's not as old as the cops.

Upon seeing the two cops, the hot girl immediately asks the prettier of the two officers out on a date. The prettier cop, named Teriana, responded that she wasn't here to ask her on a date.

The hot girl, who was named Amber, said "I know, I asked you, you didn't ask me." And so the second cop interjected and said, we're here to ask you about your neighbour, if you heard any unusual noises last night. The hot girl folded her arms and said that she wasn't answering anything without talking to a lawyer.

"You're not a suspect" Teriana said.
"That's nice to know" Amber replied.
"So what, because I wouldn't go on a date with you, you're not answering my questions?" Amber scoffed
"No, I wasn't going to answer your questions no matter what."

And then Amber slid her right hand down into the crotch of her pants.

"Ma'am, take your hand out of your pants."
"This is my house and I can put my hand where I want to."
"We can arrest you for public masturbation"
"Don't worry, I'm not masturbating, I'm just keeping my hand warm." Amber replied evenly.
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well it's a work in progress anyway

I don't really think the way my novel would play out that it can be a movie

>Show us your moons!

The short story outlined is a better premise and has more room for exploration beyond Houellebecq's tired transgressivism

This is really good. It's not porn yet but I feel like it's gonna be porn. That's the porn I like. A+++

>tfw have tons of ideas
>turn many of them into premises and develop a cast of characters
>never knuckle down and actually write fully fledged stories out of them

4k-5k words, is going to center around a certain magical concept, which is used as a plot device for a sad, romantic, mildly philosophical story to unfold. There is no happy ending. Just worried that the readers will be able to understand the magical device and hold a suspension of disbelief.

Deadline in one week. Doing a really shitty draft now.

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Fantastic

Fucker stole my moonslut idea

I'm doing my pensées on Pascal pensées

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My diary desu but in sets of 2 and black mold on decomposing heads. I think it might be childhood PTSD.

>Argentina is white
>moon nigress
>discriminated on Earth for culture differences
>savant
I wish the best for your story, user. Consider something more intelligent than "show us your moons". Consider gravity increase and implying that it's slowing/weighing her down in cognitive abilities.

I kinda have this idea with this guy that is always wearing a bunny suit and constantly eats dog feces he finds on the street.and maybe i make something where he takes off his suit and then just works a normal 9/5 job and he has a wife. His brother is retarded.

This a road trip movie? maybe has potential, could probably do some whacky shit that gets them to do some shit related to the ideas from those authors

>Consider something more intelligent than "show us your moons"
I just thought it would be funny, nothing is on paper yet or ever will be. No idea what sort of scientific elements to include either so thanks for the suggestion.

A man moves to a town where the inhabitants often act irrationally. Eg, they take the long roads even when they are late, they disregard parsimony, they laugh at the idea of reasoned thought and practicality, they seemingly have a skewed value structure (eg a man may work in a company for years as part of a scheme to steal eg, a pen.)

When I was an 18 year old autistic virgin, I wanted to write a short story about a guy who develops serious mental illness and has a mysterious encounter with a qt emo/core grill from his former school that sets him on the normie path of life again.

I wrote about 11 pages before I realized how immensely edgy this whole crap was. Haven't worked on it since.

Sounds promising. Dont give up, user. Keep working on your dialogues!

>implying moonies speak english