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The buildup is great. The variety implored in the track retains my attention without sounding like you're changing things up for the sake of it. Nice work.
Super fun indeed. The combination of filthy 808's with the cutesy sound of the "Ape Escape" style synths really works well. If you could get a decent rapper on this then you'd defos get even more views.
Thx for the feedback. Really interesting of almost Black Metal inspired tones with some non-ambient electronic elements. Just want the drums to be real and the low end thicker and scarier, but the track itself is sweet.
Appreciate it. Oof that Doom / Slowcore intro really gets my goat. Track would go next level if the drums were more "thiccly" recorded, like with the double kicks. Really love the sound though. Vocals would work well as well.
Sweet beans. Mix is great. Track changes up exactly when it needs to. Retains listening retention. Your chopping and glitching of the OST sample is fantastic man. Please make more.
ok, actually sick big recc on this one. the influences u described really come through but still unique experience make mroe please hell yeah. fun as hell thank u for making this dig this a lot, love the chopped and skewed bits
>indie rock >indie folk >instrumental (tracks are structured for vocals but couldnt get them right originally and havent found anyone else who'd want to try singing over them) >lofi >post-punk
These are my recent two singles, I'm working towards an EP over the next few months ^_^ >Post-punk inspired >Folky flavourings >Rather Jangly >A bit off-kilter
I would recommend really like your vibe, looking forward to hearing more! really like "Drift", the guitar line is really catchy :)
Pleasant ducco noises here. Heard "A.O.D. Copy B" and the only major complain I have is that vocals are mixed a bit wobbly, sometimes they tend to push the music downwards in volume, squashing it a bit too much. But hell, with better mixing it could be really a great jam!
Vibe is cool but some instruments just doesn't sync well with each other or are in the same rhythm - something to keep in mind once the full release will be out of the demo stage. Also >around 3k listens in 3 months How?
The lack of more punchy drums and lack of an emphasis of a doom sounding guitars makes this work almost like an interlude more than the final work. I think you should also consider making bass more quite if you are going for that trve kvlt feel.
Agreed withe the other poster - the drums has to feel heavier for this thing to work better, to provide more emotions out of the track. Also, I feel that certain parts of the track has inconsistent volume leveling making me to have to change volumes a lot of times for the track to stay relevantly on the same volume the entire runtime
good flow. I would bring up the high end of the voice and turn down the lower end to make it pop more. Sounds eerie and I like it. I think this could work very well in a film or game. The sample fits really well. The 808s seem slightly out of key
nice pads and drums pretty hard to say much more with such a short snippet
only listened to a bit of the first track but ended up listening to more than I expected. great combination of textures and synths. What kind of recorder do you use for your field recordings? gonna bookmark this for next time im in bed staring at the ceiling
other than the chorus on that guitar riff and other light reverb youve basically made post-folk punk on augury. digging it
Hey, glad you've enjoyed it so much and I do hope this album of mine will find some right time in your life. As to your question - I use Zoom H4n Pro for recordings, some mics added to it, mostly borrowed ones, while some of the samples used for the release are made by other people I know and they tend to have much more professional setups I assume. I hope this answer satisfy you :) As to your work - heard "outta none" and parts of "love me tinder" - the music is not to my taste at all but got to say I haven't heard anything like it as of today - it's always a pleasure to hear something unique once and a while and I'm glad I had an opportunity to do so through your work
Ryan Flores
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It’s nice to see people giving in depth feedback, please keep it up.
>first song from my next album >each song title will be one of the lines of this song >set around a fictional working class town in the late 19th century >will contain sea shanties, whaling songs and songs about industry among others
Very original and unusual tone you have going on the guitar in Phonos. The song sounds good but for my own preference I would prefer if the lyrics were more coherent, possibly sung just a little more slowly or recorded without as much distortion? It’s difficult to make out what you are singing.
Lovely guitar on I Didn’t Know Why but same problems with lyrics being indecipherable. Beat is pretty cool though.
I listened to A Bird Going Upwards, it’s not really for me. It doesn’t sound bad, I just doesn’t really go anywhere. Yes was more interesting but I am not so sure about the use of out of out of tune instruments.
Have given feedback before, I really like your music and would love to hear some other tracks.
It’s nice to see people giving in depth feedback, please keep it up.
>first song from my next album >each song title will be one of the lines of this song >set around a fictional working class town in the late 19th century >will contain sea shanties, whaling songs and songs about industry among others
Very original and unusual tone you have going on the guitar in Phonos. The song sounds good but for my own preference I would prefer if the lyrics were more coherent, possibly sung just a little more slowly or recorded without as much distortion? It’s difficult to make out what you are singing.
Lovely guitar on I Didn’t Know Why but same problems with lyrics being indecipherable. Beat is pretty cool though.
I listened to A Bird Going Upwards, it’s not really for me. It doesn’t sound bad, it just doesn’t really go anywhere. Yes was more interesting but I am not so sure about the use of out of out of tune instruments.
Have given feedback before, I really like your music and would love to hear some other tracks.
Intresting sound, feel it's a bit repetitive at times but still digged it. Really well done and put together nicely, sounds amazing very haunting and chill. Wish drums were more present but it's still great Great sound, really nailed the trap video game feel imo, feel it's a bit short though wanted more haha
interesting, pretty fkn nutty towards the end. maybe find some more interesting sounds, everything sounds a bit tinny as is. keep going though!!
this is clean, sort of a glitchy/futuristic vibe goin on with the leads that i enjoy. the half time switch rly bangs
i enjoyed a good number of your tracks towards the top, rly nice mix of sounds to give a nice warm atmosphere. i think you could maybe work on making things louder? i know that's kind of vague and generally a matter of preference, but a larger sound might convey more of the emotion you're after. sounds great, though
Super Tom Waits/Nick Cave idk it’s super cool. I love it. I love the tone on the guitar. It’s pretty, but I’m not super into noise. I’d totally love this as an intro or outro on an album. It’d be cool to hear you collaborate with a musician. This is awesome. I love the combination of sounds going on. What are your influences?
Loving this new track. Reminds me of Nick Cave a bit. Your guitar playing as always is fantastic. Excited for this new album
Really dig the psychedelic elements here. Love all the details and the soundscape here. Not incredibly into every part of the singing, but your production is fantastic.
The dreary piano on this is great, your vocals work really well on this track.
Thanks You guys! Yeah, a lot have mentioned that about drums and after that i do feel the same. I dragged them way too down, cause before i felt that they are way too in front the mix.
Brody Gutierrez
>Loving this new track. Reminds me of Nick Cave a bit
Thanks very much man! I actually wrote it after getting Red Right Hand stuck in my head so no coincidence there.
I absolutely love your rhythm and Drift is fucking fantastic, hard to hear the vocals at some points but I don't know if that was intentional or not. Otherwise fantastic producing, I love it
lots of interesting ideas but sounds dischordant at times, I figured 'Yes' was supposed to be relaxing but the guitars made me feel uneasy. Eat is easily the best piece out of the bunch, keep it up
absolutely sick beat, I love the drums. you should add the lyrics in the description
I do whatever genre I'm feeling and have only a few of the songs I've made on SoundCloud. >Rap >Metal >Acoustic >Trance >Anything
>soundcloud.com/poodge/twintailssingle I dig this a lot. Love the instrumental and vocals. It's a very chill sound with still yet a lot going on to catch your ear. Can't really say if it needs anything.
>soundcloud.com/bbwav Dark tone always a fan favorite for me in any genre. Beat production is fantastic and sets the mood well. Like your vocal editing, but you could use maybe a bit of a change in vocal style to help it mesh a little better.
>soundcloud.com/oweniam/sets/mug Things seems out of sync but at the same time it feels like it works when I listen. Really gave me a stop and listen with my eyes closed moment to figure it out. I like the idea overall.
BIG recc, i listened to love me tinder and it really grabbed me, it sounded like an auditory collage. the vocal chops were great. this is cute and creative drift is real good i love the guitar sounds and the telephone-like effect on the vocals and the weird little harmonies an album i just released:
Really fucking good. You’re a dick for ignoring the feedback rules though.
Ryan Morris
Demos from upcoming album: soundcloud.com/bonbos/sets/dust-storm-demos First album: soundcloud.com/bonbos/sets/cardboard-girls Bandcamp: bonbos.bandcamp.com/track/test-upload >dream pop >psychedelic pop/rock >synthpop >lofi (hifi setup most likely complete before the end of august) Sex in My Head bored and underwhelmed me. I don't hate it, that solo at the end was good, there's just not enough going on with it songwriting-wise; it sounds like it stuck on the same two verses and melodies and didn't know where else to go. The organ could also be a tiny bit lower in the mix.