New Soundcloud thread

RULES: give feedback at least to three users after the first three ones have posted. Don't be an asshole and be nice to others. Ok, go.

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soundcloud.com/aedact/rez#t=1:50
crystalcage.bandcamp.com/track/into-the-dark
socomd.bandcamp.com
youtu.be/HnNDcayOotk
soundcloud.com/frasermaccallummusic/aod-copy-b
soundcloud.com/frasermaccallummusic/augury
open.spotify.com/artist/76RRLmI4jCmVU0nbhf5ZHo?si=ACle8ou0TWmeB30m9QWJ1Q
soundcloud.com/adovyady/vynuzhdennnost-vtoraya-chast
soundcloud.com/poodge/twintailssingle
elendeleiber.bandcamp.com/album/elende-leiber
soundcloud.com/a_tape/sets/glimmer
youtube.com/watch?v=VpXb8U_lJoo
soundcloud.com/thosecoloursaremuted/muted-colours-set-in-stone
soundcloud.com/degenerates/after-rain
dynamiclover.bandcamp.com/track/running
soundcloud.com/music-for-alaska-nights/song-for-alaska-nights
soundcloud.com/infernl/israfel
youtube.com/watch?v=fJztBKiQ6Bc&t=29s
soundcloud.com/wagemage/destination-girl
soundcloud.com/wagemage/clusterfuck
wagemage.bandcamp.com/
soundcloud.com/count_00/witchfingers
youtube.com/watch?v=ujnNW9orgzM
soundcloud.com/aloyscrimshaw/wheres-your-scissors-syd
open.spotify.com/track/13n0gzDq3V13SCtiEZ6wcU?context=spotify:album:2nabCWZ6yLQwSC7147Hl8Q&si=zv-r8CgSSJ6-_6_DhC0Ynw
youtu.be/iZ65Bqz4MUM
soundcloud.com/bigqqq/no-answer-1
qqq-music.bandcamp.com/album/shriveling
open.spotify.com/artist/5GW3bt2D7aqhOUS1YaolBO
droopies.bandcamp.com/
droopies.bandcamp.com/yum
droopies.bandcamp.com/merch
soundcloud.com/bedroommusicianorchestra/music-for-millennials-whose-parents-bought-them-their-house
soundcloud.com/mnroe/solda
youtu.be/F9AOfFcyPsU
djdubbi.bandcamp.com/album/da-circus-e-p
djdubbi.bandcamp.com/album/volume-80-meniverse
djdubbi.bandcamp.com/album/volume-70-megadubb
soundcloud.com/bbwav
open.spotify.com/album/7rD2h0P5lzTgy0aryqfvjS
soundcloud.com/whoisknvs/knvs-its-like-dancing-ft-promantic-prod-808iden
soundcloud.com/mrsoulmusic/i-might-fall-prod-by-xanax-prod
soundcloud.com/lilroyalmane/god-damn-i-feel-like-the-man-prod-buckshot-bumble
soundcloud.com/allinesik/mysterio
soundcloud.com/retrogradeamnesia/homehope
retrogradeamnesia.bandcamp.com/
soundcloud.com/blck_wlf
soundcloud.com/beestroot
youtube.com/watch?v=cDMe10ROZlQ
expandingsponge.bandcamp.com
soundcloud.com/expanding-sponge
soundcloud.com/agroboys/yachty-i-ville
soundcloud.com/user-683199226
soundcloud.com/mephisto_waltz/mephisto-waltz-full-set
youtu.be/S8qSWg5_OwY
soundcloud.com/y_4/martyr
hoopjones.bandcamp.com/album/hoop-dose-mixtape
soundcloud.com/hwitenoice/freestyle-2
soundcloud.com/lilkpin/tracks
soundcloud.com/slacc_attacc/first-try
soundcloud.com/glitterrazor/femicide
twitter.com/NSFWRedditVideo

soundcloud.com/aedact/rez#t=1:50

New track.

>electronic, glitch, idm, experimental

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crystalcage.bandcamp.com/track/into-the-dark
>black bass, blackgaze

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socomd.bandcamp.com

>dark ambient
>industrial
>brain warp textural torment avant tarde

>>


youtu.be/HnNDcayOotk

prejail promo 7/19 drops tomorrow.

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Soundcloud:
soundcloud.com/frasermaccallummusic/aod-copy-b
soundcloud.com/frasermaccallummusic/augury

I am also on Spotify:
open.spotify.com/artist/76RRLmI4jCmVU0nbhf5ZHo?si=ACle8ou0TWmeB30m9QWJ1Q

These are my recent two singles, I'm working towards an EP over the next few months ^_^
>Post-punk inspired
>Folky flavourings
>Rather Jangly
>A bit off-kilter

brilliant as ever, keep it up
very heavy, loving the sounds
has a listen to the second track of your latest album, very interesting textures, much enjoyed

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soundcloud.com/adovyady/vynuzhdennnost-vtoraya-chast
>ambient

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rules are simple

I don't know english well to describe your tracks

soundcloud.com/poodge/twintailssingle

>Synths
>Glitchy
>Vocals
>Off kilter rhythms

liking the rawness of these tunes

lovely drums and sound design as always, keep it up!

very odd production style, not sure if it's the style ur going for but judging from the tags it seems like ur doing the right thing

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This is great. Newest track is unbelievably heavy.

Hope you play this live. 8/10 would get psychosis.

Sounds pretty similar to Sisters of Mercy, but thats a good thing. Like the harshness.


elendeleiber.bandcamp.com/album/elende-leiber

>gloomgaze

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Singles from my EP "Glimmer"
soundcloud.com/a_tape/sets/glimmer
youtube.com/watch?v=VpXb8U_lJoo

>lofi hip-hop

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>folk
>neo-folk
>acoustic
>new song

soundcloud.com/thosecoloursaremuted/muted-colours-set-in-stone

This is pretty great, love the dark atmosphere.
The vocals could be a little higher in the mix
Catchy and cheerful, I love it!
This needs some work, there something there for sure though.
A bit too monotonous for my taste.

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soundcloud.com/degenerates/after-rain

>analog electro, ambient

I don't normally like things too glitchy but you've made it feel funky in places and the sound design really helps.

ambient?! ambient horror movie more like.

This is fucking great. Top quality production, great melodies.

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>This is pretty great, love the dark atmosphere.
>The vocals could be a little higher in the mix
Meant for

dynamiclover.bandcamp.com/track/running
>electronic

Rec
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soundcloud.com/music-for-alaska-nights/song-for-alaska-nights

>country
>folk
>COMFY and WARM

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nice chilly and dark, eerie track. your guitars sound so good!

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will return all feedback!

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Thank you!

>trap
>dark
>new
soundcloud.com/infernl/israfel
youtube.com/watch?v=fJztBKiQ6Bc&t=29s

recs

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>new releases
soundcloud.com/wagemage/destination-girl
soundcloud.com/wagemage/clusterfuck

>bandcamp
wagemage.bandcamp.com/

>rock


Good but I wish the vocals were stronger/louder
You can make music, but frankly I feel the genre is saturated with artists who sound like the shins. You are one of them. I'd focus on doing something more unique with vox. But the songs, their structure, and recording quality are sufficient. The mix/master definitely needs work. I get that you're trying to make a big sound with only one instrument, but drowning everything in reverb is not always the answer.
ton of potential here, but I'd reiterate what I said for the last guy about getting into that saturated folky-ish stuff. Obviously your mix needs work. Your consonants are muffled and there are a lot of parts where you sound out of key, and my sense of key is pretty bad (my music demonstrates this). If you can hone in on your vocals in a unique way, and go more country (and I mean REAL country, perhaps even a rockabilly direction) I think that you could make something unique and inspiring. My recommendation is to listen to Dwight Yoakam. Not for the voice (although his is great) but more for the style... the rock/country fusion is a perfect blend, but more country than rock... if indeed you are aiming for country like you said.

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soundcloud.com/count_00/witchfingers

>synthwave
>dreamwave
>chillwave

Good guitar production and I dig the song, nice :)
nice songwriting and I like the guitar parts. Drums could do with a bit of work on the mix side though, more parallel compression. But otherwise the mix is tight
fucking dig this. the composition is awesome, love the synths. the drums could be better, maybe use better samples. that lead synth is fucking sweet though

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>I feel the genre is saturated with artists who sound like the shins. You are one of them
Just out of curiosity, what Shins so G does it remind you of?

I like your music, feel like the vocal delivery is a bit weird though

youtube.com/watch?v=ujnNW9orgzM

My first ever music video
>actually good
>psychadelic influence
>handdrawn animation
>bars on bars
>smooth
Los Recomiendos, honestly there's a lot of good music around I wish we had more collaboration in our community (;;)))

yay more poodge ::) and your album comes out the day before my birthday and you changed your animal motif to a tiger!! Exciting exciting!!

strings were mad solid, I liked the vocal mastering too ::)

this is pretty sick!!

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Hella heavy and dark... certainly a favorite of Aloysius amongst the bland offerings that generally clog the pipes of Yea Forums...

Our own nonsense is pernicious at best...

>Aloysius
>Scrimshaw

soundcloud.com/aloyscrimshaw/wheres-your-scissors-syd

>Post-Vaporwave
>Industrialmusicforindustrialpeople
>Experimental

open.spotify.com/track/13n0gzDq3V13SCtiEZ6wcU?context=spotify:album:2nabCWZ6yLQwSC7147Hl8Q&si=zv-r8CgSSJ6-_6_DhC0Ynw

>Dead Musician

youtu.be/iZ65Bqz4MUM

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just put this out

soundcloud.com/bigqqq/no-answer-1

here is the tape
qqq-music.bandcamp.com/album/shriveling

working through these - comments on ur clouds incoming

89188502 - really interesting soundscapes. it's aggressive but has a lot of movement. good shit

89190028 - this has a beautiful melancholy feel, this definitely made me feel comfy.

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my bad i fucked up the jawns

Hella fresh bro

DROOPIES
open.spotify.com/artist/5GW3bt2D7aqhOUS1YaolBO

droopies.bandcamp.com/
>vocals drums guitars
free album download codes:
jp4f-kue6
zwhs-795f
5ywc-w7z5
redeem @ droopies.bandcamp.com/yum

droopies.bandcamp.com/merch
t-shirts tapes fuzz pedals

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fuck man i love this, great work
i like this too man

soundcloud.com/bedroommusicianorchestra/music-for-millennials-whose-parents-bought-them-their-house
>acoustic prog
>no percussion
>layers and changes

I would like to be personable here, is anybody else angry every day at least? I cannot describe it. It's almost like anger, but it's not red hot. It is like a burning impatience with things not quite directed at people, not really even directed at me, or anything. It's just a general anger I won't point at anything. I cannot sit still, and I do believe I actually hate music.

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soundcloud.com/mnroe/solda

Wonk hip hop

Interesting concept. Kinda like a black metal meets blade runner

This is so well mixed! Lovin the analog techno vibe and the chord drone at the end

Very nice! Like the groove in "Nothing Is Alright"

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this has got a cool vibe
it's nice to see some country music on these threads, this is a good song too

this is me, i didn't read the 3 person feedback rule sorry.

So I know what you'll say:
>"dubbi, we can't handle any more of your god-tier music!!!
and that's when I say:WANT TO WITNESS THE FUTURE?
Step into the future world.
Where robots and cyborgs live in a
techno-political neo-society
where you trade cloud storage space as payment.
Post-Tribal warfare breaks out between
rival gangs in A.I governed Smart-Cities
While Cyber-Enhanced super humans
feast on human flesh.....
With that introduction.....

This is my music video for "Ay YOo!"

youtu.be/F9AOfFcyPsU
>Techno Boom
>Breakbeat Trance
>Progressive House

&
This is my NEW EP titled "Da Circus!"

djdubbi.bandcamp.com/album/da-circus-e-p
>Hybrid Trap
>Trap
>Trap Metal
~CREDITZ:
DJ Dubbi - Ideas, Time Management, Snare drum(on track3)
GioteX - Keyboards, Production, Engineering
$wagg $tuff - Sampling, Production
DJ BluFlaim - Production
DJ Majikk - Production, Engineering
•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••
And:
This is my 2 most recent L.P's "Volume 8.0" a.k.a "MEniverse" ..... and "Volume 7.0" a.k.a "MEGADUBB" ....They will BLOW YOUR MIND!!

"MEniverse"
djdubbi.bandcamp.com/album/volume-80-meniverse
>Techno Boom
>Progressive House
>Experimental Pop
released July 7, 2019

"MEGADUBB"
djdubbi.bandcamp.com/album/volume-70-megadubb
>Post-Dubstep
>Progressive-House
>NuTechno
>Electro-ProgBeat
released May 15, 2019
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You could be more experimental.
You should definitely boost your bass
Good work Mr OoOga!
Do what I told you to do.
I'd tell you put more effort into your posts but you can't even but you can't even be bothered to put effort into your music.
Then you should pick up a dictionary
You should actually try to enhance your beats/rhythm by using more extreme polyrhythms
Interesting

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soundcloud.com/bbwav

open.spotify.com/album/7rD2h0P5lzTgy0aryqfvjS

>industrial
>grimy
>dark
>hip hop

This is a really strange and off-kilter beat. The synth choice is fantastic, reminds me of something that would be played in an 80's arcade.

Love the analog synths on this. Feels very Vangelis-esque. I'm not incredibly in love with the vocals, but they definitely fit the mood of the track

This new track is fantastic. The beat is driving, and I love the lead synths on here. Feels like a more sinister Ulrich Schnauss. Solid structure as well, constantly engaging

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soundcloud.com/whoisknvs/knvs-its-like-dancing-ft-promantic-prod-808iden

>trap
>r&b
>beach goth
>alternative
>pop

RECS
production on this is great, everything sounds SO good and the song is catchy too, vocals are horror punkish to me

was not expecting what i heard when i listened, the synths in the back are so cool and add so much to the song, love your singing

the melody is super chill, and love the production on this

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Pretty grimy stuff.
Learn to produce propper hip hop you beginner
B O R I N G
What equipment do you use
Try to experiment more
Fake country
Definitely boost your bass
Not bad overall, but bro heres a tip
for getting your guitars to actually
sound heavy:
Turn knobs marked "gain" or "overdrive"
all the way up. Turn other volume
knobs down to get the loudness
you want. Once you've proved
you can get heavy distortion,
dial things back to find the tone
you want. Focus on being LOUD!!
Some amps won't distort at low
volumes, mainly because that's
dumb as all hell LOL. If yours is like
this, either just play loud or give up
You should be recording with analog if your going to rep the 80s
Maaaaan yo! this is so boring
>spotify
Yup you know what i'm about to say
Learn to explain yourself better you n00b
Copypasta boy
Boring. use more fuzzed out electric guitar
Not experimental enough

Me

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Disgraceful to R&B you suburban poser.
Plus Your beats are a bit generic and
I recognize the Samples.
the sample sounds like it was
recorded to a 15ips tape machine
with a live drum machine going straight
through a console, and the drums
are coming from a drum machine,
synth, or stock DAW drum
samples, chances are the context
won’t make sense, you should
always focus on that crispy sound
quality bro.
In my mind I’m thinking “ok, what
can I do to make these drums
sound better, like they BUMP to the
sample, but still stick out and hit
hard?” Bro... Think about it like this,
it might mean you have to be
processing to the sample, or
processing to the drums, or both.
And generally needssome
experimentation to make it BOOM
in the speaker. And also mmatching
the space is super key. This isn’t
easy, it takes a really ADVANCED
ear like mine. But if you can train
yourself to listen to the ambience in
the sample and recreate that
ambience around the drums, but
don't get confused. You follow?
Next turn up the EQ low end (bass)
and ta-da you're better.

Me

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soundcloud.com/mrsoulmusic/i-might-fall-prod-by-xanax-prod
>alternative
>post-emo
>sad
recs

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soundcloud.com/lilroyalmane/god-damn-i-feel-like-the-man-prod-buckshot-bumble

>the thinking man's music
>not meme rap
>music for people who wake up like the man
>new rolex

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Fourth and final single for my upcoming project Spider-Man: Redux. The album is based album on the original Spiderman video-game for PS1 Any feedback is greatly appreciated (:

>electronic
>rock
>ambient
>experimental
>videogamemusic

www.youtube.com/watch?v=sbQd2KhJXoc
soundcloud.com/allinesik/mysterio

love this, has a really nice retro feel to it. Reminds me a tad of Flaming Lips but more glitchy. not a huge fan of the section after 1:30 --- seems off. Otherwise its a delightful track.

beautiful track. very nice sound design here. love the vocals, they come in really well. This is one of my fav things ive come across in these threads recently, great job man. liked and followed (:

interesting stuff. gives me some Flylo (Los Angelas Era) vibes. i fuck with it a lot actually, you did a great job texturally, the sound design is on point. I like the drum programming here a lot too, all around you snapped man ! my fav part of the track is at 2:00 when the synths all come back in. Liked and followed, this shit slaps hard m8.

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>Making anything emo after 2008
LOL
Not intellectual at all, plus You need to Learn how to boost your bass.
I can help you out quite a bit if you ask,
but for now what you need to focus
on is Making great bass patches.
to make a beginner bass,
get a defult patch in Harmor,
turn the low-pass on A to 10%
and 0% on B,
and then turn the Sub up on both
A and B,
next turn on some slight distortion
and then EQ the sub in the mixer
up all the way.
I can't believe you forgot to say how great I am

Me

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soundcloud.com/retrogradeamnesia/homehope

retrogradeamnesia.bandcamp.com/

>lo-fi indie
currently working on an ep and an album

great guitar sounds, interesting lyrics, you should work on your vocal mixing though

I love the dreamy synths on this

everything about this is great keep doing what you're doing

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>soundcloud.com/mrsoulmusic/i-might-fall-prod-by-xanax-prod
yesssss i dig this so hard! good work with the vocals and instrumental. love that fuckin emo vibe

>bass
>electronic
>dubstep
>heavy

hey guys! i hope you like my tracks!

soundcloud.com/blck_wlf

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Makes me feel happy. I wanna hear the lyrics more but I like how it sounds so not sure. It feels like waking up in a good mood, when reality is still a bit fuzzy, and I wouldn't feel like that if it was tighter and clearer. Maybe it's perfect the way it is?
This is completely fucked up. I like it. The song structure is really cool actually. Getting doom vibes as well. good stuff.

soundcloud.com/beestroot
>hiphop
>postapocalyptic hopscotch
>hostin bodies like a crypt
>cremated hot,
>botched slaughter in the yard
>top chef
>top notch
>sizzling toasted testicles
>pop rocks

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forgot number three....

Yeah this shit funny. Good rapping no joke. I'll drop a like. Beat idk.. too memey maybe, but still enjoying it so

youtube.com/watch?v=cDMe10ROZlQ
>trap
>emo
>resident evil sample

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>dynamiclover.bandcamp.com/track/running
this got loud faster than i expected, the chord progression is nice, and i like the balance of the guitar and bass. wish the drums were louder though. end was awesome.

i really like the texture of the guitar but not super keen on the song as a whole, it didn't really feel like it needed to be 6 minutes long, but that's probably part of the genre or something.

really liked how subdued 'no answer' started off, the high synth is a bit grating, and the vocals are a bit overpowering. (plus i kinda just don't like them sorry lol) the chords and melodies are great, really liked the end section in particular.


expandingsponge.bandcamp.com
soundcloud.com/expanding-sponge
>various beep and boops

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Very amateur. Sounds like really weak video game music. The songs go nowhere and the whole "epic" chord progressions and 2013 dubstep drum sounds are pretty wack.

I love this sounds fucking tight! the production quality is amazing.

I love your style.

Shut the fuck up dubbi.

soundcloud.com/agroboys/yachty-i-ville
agrotrap
drill shit
drive-by music

Unfulfilled potential. You could do way better with your vocal performance and mixing. I can't hear anything but the fact that it's off key.
What the fuck. I like this. Reminds me of viper's best stuff. Confusing and great
I like your songwriting. The song you linked could be mixed a lot better. bass sounds like its coming from the bottom of a well.

soundcloud.com/user-683199226
>Beats dude.
>I don't know what genre
>Trap, electro, synthpop influences

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not dubbi. i'm It literally sounds like fruity loop present music. very unfulfilled, very immature

Recs

soundcloud.com/mephisto_waltz/mephisto-waltz-full-set

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>very unfulfilled
just like my life, i don't use FL tho
(it wasnt me that tried to call you dubbi btw)

>i don't use FL tho
Ok, so basically this is what you need to do:
-1st buy fl studio,
its all you need at 1st
-2nd make a kick/snare rythem
-invite some producers over to
hang out and get them to help geta
melody / bassline idea
-3rd get some studio time,
4th, get some experienced
producers to work with you during
your session(s)
5th let them do whatever they want
to the song to make it good.
6th DONE! you have a new song
you can upload online and start
blowing up.

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word. yeah your stuff just sounds so lame. sorry

just please listen to what i tell you.

ignore what everyone else is saying

it's not like it's your fault, i don't know if i've been accused of using presets since i stopped doing guitar pro math rock, and the two most recent songs were me having a bit of nostalgia for that time.

Hella heavy and dark... certainly a favorite of Aloysius amongst the bland offerings that generally clog the pipes of Yea Forums...
thanks!

youtu.be/S8qSWg5_OwY
liked this period from you the most...it had that magic

soundcloud.com/y_4/martyr

>Breakcore
>Trap
>Experimental
>Electronic

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not mine but a friend’s

Hoop Jones - Hoop Dose (2019)

> experimental hip-hop
> sample-based electronics
> instrumental, musique concrete
> field recordings

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Shit forgot link

hoopjones.bandcamp.com/album/hoop-dose-mixtape

soundcloud.com/hwitenoice/freestyle-2

>Freestlye

I might just make more shit like this

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>cloud rap, dark cloud rap, noise rap
soundcloud.com/lilkpin/tracks
>doing free features the whole month
>appreciate feedback and listens
feedback
the monotone flow doesn't suit that beat imo
also overdubs and adlibs on the tracks would make the freestyles sound better
idk what im listening to so i cant leave feedback
not a fan of breakcore i feel like this tune would sound better if u made it a straight up dnb track with trap influences

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this is the first song ive ever wrote please be easy on me fellas.

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first vocal track ever

>rap
>soul
>midwest underground

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beat is super generic, flow is nice but make sure you use consistent enunciation, and try to stray from stereotypical lyrics

This sounded super great, but the background synth was super loud in comparison to the breaks. Also try to give any open percussives room to breath so they font sound muddy.

The breakcore-y parts are super rad, but the trap influenced stuff feels like it ruins the pace, however at a couple points they gelled really well.

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There's not enough bass synth presence. Also, I feel like you could do something with the backing pad to make is stand out a bit more. Like it needs grit, and maybe even sidechain compression to make it jump out and balance the repetitive drum beat. That said, its not a bad start. It's repetitive and loopy but I suffer from the same problem.

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thanks a lot dude i appreciate the advice