Post lyrics to a song/poem you wrote, and other anons do the best they can to record/cover it. Should be fun

Post lyrics to a song/poem you wrote, and other anons do the best they can to record/cover it. Should be fun.

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fuck you suck you

give me like 30 minutes, in the middle of something right meow

I’ll post this without the music for reference, if someone does a cover I will then share my own recording. Should be interesting!

>A Simple Choice

I think of all the times I tried to keep you satisfied
Of all the earthly pleasures you stubbornly denied
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go

Never thought that it was possible for time to move so slow
I no longer give a damn I’ve nothing left to show
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go

I still feel that serpent bite digging in my heel
Don’t you dare pretend you care how you made me feel
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go

Now I’ve pieced back the fragments of my shattered mind
I suppose it was more fragile than I’d hoped to find
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
You just had to go
It was a simple choice
I just had to go

I’m picking up good vibrations
She’s givin me excitations
I’m picking up good vibrations
She’s giving me excitations

Sorry, reposted with a minor correction.

I have not forgotten user

Cool, I’m still here.

I would be into this if I hadn't just desperately tried to make a song with writer's block, then gave up and went on /mu

Writers block is a bitch, I went for six months without writing a single song but then I have wrote over ten good ones in the last few months.

I’ve found random noun generators are quite good for forming ideas, also I quite like half listening to a documentary on the television, writing down any interesting sentences then trying to form a song out of them.

I have tried something like that for lyrics. I like the idea of writing random nonsensical shit so I can hide behind it when my lyrics are bad. I'm not the most eloquent person.
Rn I just have a creativity block. I mostly do techno or electronic stuff

lil late for me to do a cover but if I were to tackle this. I would rewrite a bit of it for myself, in my mind it's structured into:

I think of all the times I tried to keep you satisfied
Of all the earthly pleasure that you had got denied

It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to know

Don't give a damn I’ve got nothing to show
Never thought that it was time for us to move slow
I still feel snake bitten digging in my heel
Don’t you dare pretend to care how make me feel

It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to know

Now that I’ve pierced back the fragments of my shattered mind
I suppose it was more broken than I’d hoped you find

It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go
It was a simple choice
One of us had to go

"cherish me from a depth not of mutual respect or adoration"

i thought it was cool

vocaroo.com/i/s0GuuUElFHDO

Sorry user, I though I could do better.

Will need to go to bed soon, not sure I can wait for person covering my song.

Here’s the original that will be on my first album for anyone interested.

clyp.it/jtkgthlv

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that timing

Don’t apologise, it’s not easy setting something to music you haven’t written yourself.

I actually think your approach is quite cool in places. I like what you have done with the guitar and I think your approach to the chorus is nicely done. Well done and thanks for covering. :)

Not my best work, but I gave it a shot.

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All i wanna do is talk with you without people standing all around
Will you miss me knowing that i miss you everyday?

She's got her new friends
We share nothing, believings nor tastes
It's so much easier for you to forget

And i feel happy, but soon i'll know
That fantasies can make me go
To a place where i don't want to be

You make my health decay
I decided i'll never think of you again
But i still won't be able to forget
Your body or your name

Poor blind woman
She never noticed
The love that was 'round her
The love that could save her
From lies and betray
Greed and disgrace

Poor blind woman
She have seen it all
She tries to save money
She'll die for her son
Only had to spell the truth
But she won't say a word
Cause she is too quite
Too quiet for this world

Her dreams were ruined by the illness in her eyes
She won't be forgotten, they'll keep her in their hearts

When the glint dies
In your gray eyes
Now on your knees
Hail your Mary's

Temporary
We are Temporary
We are

Safe in the pitch
Exhaust your ticks
Not for you or me to say we're

Temporary
We are temporary
We are temporary

Technically,I already made it into a song but I would love to hear a different take.

I changed it slightly to make it flow better as a song, hope you enjoy.

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Had a shot at it, this was just what I came up with on the spot.

clyp.it/ddtt1uyo

Big booty, big booty, big booty, big booty
She got a big booty like escalade
Trippin of morphine lemonade
Gives new meaning to bitch you fine
Drops moar bustas than two slugs from a nine

damn this is a great song, are you not scared someone will steal it?

Thanks. Nah, it’s copyrighted, so if it gets pinched I wish the person every success so I can sue them for the royalties.

All i wanna do is talk with you
Will you miss me
know that i miss you

She's got her friends
oh, We share nothing
so it's easy to forget you

i feel happy, And soon i'll go
To a place where i do not know

But i won't forget Your body
or name You decay my love away

All i wanna do is talk with you
Will you miss me
know that i miss you

Well, i think you don't get the concept. Sorry, i don't like it

Holy shit i loved it. Thx user
Can you try to sing it with Eb Db B Ab chords?

Sorry, it’s 4:40am, I’m done for the night - glad you liked it though!

I tried to write something for my girlfriend, but only got a snippet

Oh love
How can I thank you
You are my star
For all that you do
And when the darkness comes
And our wings fall away
I'll look into your eyes
And right there I will say
I love you.

The rest of my lyrics are overly rhymey punky shit influenced by listening to too much Sex Pistols and Green Day

Nice user,I really like this,thanks!

I almost have something for you. Cleaning it up now.

When is your album coming out and where can we find it?

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I don’t react right

you got in that car crash and i didn’t even blink

The efforts of a long night, filled my throat

I hope this polyester breeze will cool the sweat off of me

A banshee runs wild round down in the street.

And all the while Lilark hasn't left her seat