Reciprocloud thread

soundcloud.com/halfbakedhuman/arachnid

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feel like this would be in the movie ex machina. weirdly kinda pretty and chil

i love this instrumental but i’m not a fan of your voice. the melodies fit well enough but it’s like you’re focusing too much on having a certain tone of voice. you could hit the notes smoother

sick beat. some of the drops are cool but some feel out of place. reminds me of bones

i’m

youtu.be/oWYIXf90YfU

>trap

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soundcloud.com/aedact/amnidsill

New track, a lot of time took me to create this, would love to know what you guys think of it!

>electronic
>glitch
>abstract
>experimental
>acousmatic

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soundcloud.com/galantron/what-comes-after

>Electronic
>Dance
>Progressive House

reccs

I love that reverby glitchy synth right at the beginning, reminds me of burial for some reason. Props for the great mixing too.

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Spyro themed groovy house?
> soundcloud.com/ckbaudio/sex-education-snippet

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soundcloud.com/music-for-alaska-nights/song-for-alaska-nights

>country
>folk
>COMFY and WARM

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nice porn flick soundtrack unironically
epic! really nice for something that came out of an "inspirational drought"

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will return all feedback!

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soundcloud.com/my-uta/myuta

soundcloud.com/in-the-bottling-room/baby-craig-david-remix

> R&B, trap, garage
> odd

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Posted an album a few days ago

soundcloud.com/istasha/sets/haute-couturered-light-disctrict

>experimental rap

Feedback in next post

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New tune folks

soundcloud.com/tomerkrail/alma-mater

>Indie
>Alternative
>Uncomfortable and cold

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The mix is very poor I'd say

I like this very much, personally I'd use some more bass just to thicken it a little

This is also great, love the sound design nice work

Vocals are weird and so are the stutters

Is me

New short EP with two tracks

soundcloud.com/socialparadigm/sets/urban-chaos-station-to-station

>Social Paradigm - urban chaos / station to station
>Instrumental Hip-Hop, Experimental Hip-Hop, Glitch, Post-Industrial, Wonky, Trap

Recs

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soundcloud.com/lucasle/oheum
>vox thing beat
>trebly

peepin'

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I like this very much, personally I'd use some more bass just to thicken it a little

Appreciate it man, compromised a bit of the fullness for a more trebly fuzz but will probably round it out a bit better on the next track.

Your song is pretty tight as well, cool vocals and really digging the instrumentals

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soundcloud.com/ljosmusic/frakkur

My most ambitious track yet, took ton of work. I don't really know what tags to leave. Kinda crescendo-core, but not really.

I think the dynamics are all fucked. Nice sample work anyway.

Nice work, in my opinion the mix gets a little too busy in the chorus, especialyl the guitar is distracting, while I believe the attention should be focus on the vocals. (those are great, btw).

Obviously good. I know the genre kinda calls for it, but the mix is too harsh even for that, imo. Also at 1:40 vocals could be a lot clearer.

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soundcloud.com/randomstar/battletoads-the-vidyagame-the-movie-official-soundtrack

>vidyagame music medley i pooped together

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Cheers for the feedback :)

soundcloud.com/crackbery/tell-me

>Glitch R&B
>Glitch Hop
>Wonky

reccs
nice mixing on '' i feel''

very different, in a good way. reminds me of Ash Koosha

interesting sounds man, great job.

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>trap
>trippy
>dark
soundcloud.com/infernl/israfel
youtube.com/watch?v=fJztBKiQ6Bc
recs
vocals are a little rough and too high in the mix, but this is a cool concept, keep working on it brother

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soundcloud.com/pool-view/needle-in-the-hay

> Trap
> Piano

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(me)

thanks! i can see the ash koosha comparison. your latest song is beautiful man. the way you incorporated the glitch and that occasional distortion while keeping it so dancy and soulful is incredible. really well done.

wow, very interesting and unique style. can't even wrap my head around how you came up with that and how you executed it. sounds gorgeous. the way the vocals distort, warp, shift around and change pitch towards the end seems to detailed and calculated. like you took really great care of getting that perfectly in every way. amazing work.

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sharp piece, the texture that comes in about 0:50 in sure shines, and the overall structure is on point.
i'd work a little on the vocals, and lay some variation on the drums during the verse.
also, watch your tone, pal.

shit, that's pretty cool.

soundcloud.com/angelo_cc/marchand

>orchestral
>soundtrack-ish, dunno (loops and stuff)
>lotsa woodwind

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>>sharp piece, the texture that comes in about 0:50 in sure shines, and the overall structure is on point.
i'd work a little on the vocals, and lay some variation on the drums during the verse.
also, watch your tone, pal.

Thanks I appreciate the feedback man, mind elaborating on which tone you mean? Just checked out your track, production value is on point, a little too chipper for me at points (bassoon) but overall I liked it, will be checking out more of you in the future mate

DROOPIES
open.spotify.com/artist/5GW3bt2D7aqhOUS1YaolBO

droopies.bandcamp.com/
>vocals drums guitars
free album download codes:
yrat-bswn
2ga3-jaw3
jp4f-kue6
redeem @ droopies.bandcamp.com/yum

droopies.bandcamp.com/merch
t-shirts tapes fuzz pedals

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soundcloud.com/user-277054480/wschodnia-woda

>ambient
>hip hop
>experimental
>bits of industrial sometimes

low end sounds great here. also the bits of sound effects make the song feel even more dynamic.

lots of nice little details in this song. 2:53 is a great moment.

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soundcloud.com/james-3k/get

>synthpop
>vintage
>arcade

recs (feedback on SC like a normal person):

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Genuinely interesting work... perhaps it’s not metal but a noise based electronic expression...

A true breath of fresh air against the generic MIDI bullshit generally found around these parts...

>Vaportrap

youtu.be/iZ65Bqz4MUM

>Post-Experimental

open.spotify.com/track/60K4cMeaDwDe8Icy35oMU8?context=spotify:album:74R9Z8akFqvK0c2pQqkilv&si=QtJCfBS9Q9Ox1pKZD7zFEw

>The Dead Musician

soundcloud.com/aloyscrimshaw/learn-to-code

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tone as in the delivery and tuning of the vocals, sometimes you kinda start detuning (not very much, but sometimes it can become quite noticeable, specially in the long notes). While for me it delivers a part of the track's color, you gotta watch it so it doesnt actually clashes with whatever's going on the background. A part of that comes within the delivery, I suggest you try to control breath more and try to really keep the air flowing in a constant manner (it's all about control).
look up some vocal training exercises for breathing, it may help (just making it clear i really like your voice the way it's working on the track, but it's those little touches that can make it sound better for longer)
sorry i tried being quick I just ended up being unclear.
thanks for the feedback. basson's really a little bit chiffy here but I kinda like it when it comes to these jumpy melodies.

soundcloud.com/whoisknvs/knvs-x-von-slots-used-to-prod-knotperry

>trap
>dreamy pop
>melodic hip-hop
>dark r&b

RECS

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bahia mansa
>folk, lo-fi, ambient, electronic

soundcloud.com/bahiamansa

Also released first album in BC. Tapes incoming, just finishing the artwork, hopefully by August I'll have some.

bahiamansa.bandcamp.com/album/memorias-de-los-pajaros-ninos
Always recommending this guy. OST to a movie horror film with in an industrial setting.

This is great, I love it, blew my mind desu, kinda like the bastard child of Ikeda and Fennesz. It shows the talent, not just in the way to create emotions but in sound desing. You up for a collab perhaps? Gave you a follow.

I'm not from the States, but God do I love country. And you had composed a very beautiful song, with a modern touch without falling in this spotify-modern-country cliché. Congrats, buddy, I did miss some steel guitar (besides the nice end touch) or harmonica, but I still enjoyed it immensely.

Heavy Stereolab/Broadcast vibes, I'll tag it as space age pop/lounge. It's a beautiful composition, the finale is great and unexpected, and the girl who sings is fitted to this music genre. You should really exploit this facet. Your ambient songs are great, but this stands above all, a rather unique song. PS: Sorry, I'm listening to "Last Thing I Do" now and I wonder how this isn't more famous. Send your shit to labels, friend, this is really really great!

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soundcloud.com/gagger-music/the-game-test

>pop/dance
>virgincore
>for the boys

This is a very good idea, Im a little disappointed in the execution. Solid Space meets hip-hop is a very cool sound, and you pull it off well in the instrumentals, but the actual rapping is underwhelming. I get it, you probably have a shitty mic and are trying to make it work with the ambient thing. But man, you're holding yourself back from your potential if you dont start actually working with audible flows over those tracks.

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thanks for the feedback! as promised I listened to your stuff, more precisely 'tierra de plata'. I was taken on a real journey. that was so epic man, really, t'was some of the best stuff I've heard on here. will listen to the two others tracks very soon. please keep us updated about your future projects, or at least PM me on Soundcloud when you have some new stuff. cheers

Hella based

soundcloud.com/wateroverdose

>Experimental/Chill

>recs

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soundcloud.com/iluminatimusic/beat-77

>beats

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soundcloud.com/yungchuck420
>egg music
>new album
>based
>techno, funk punk, soul, hip hop, prog

hey cuties

battle toads 4lyfe. nice track

always like this track :)

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soundcloud.com/woodsman93/truthseeker
in for thread
new track i uploaded be as critical as possible please

>house
>future
>boba
>weird
>a e s t h e t i c

whats up Yea Forums!

open.spotify.com/artist/1XOqtxoidOJCvRC2FLnLdP

soundcloud.com/boba_boi

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soundcloud.com/expanding-sponge

>shitty electronica
>borderline noise
>also ttng on a sega is hiding in the backlog

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Dark shit senpai

>blck
>wlf
>heavy
>dubstep
>idk

hope you guys like my tracks!

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whoops forgot the link

soundcloud.com/blck_wlf

thanks for listening, i fixed the mix a lil

listened to the first song on the album, this is surprisingly good. second thing to remind me of bones, your voice along with your delivery and the mix
i think the hook is weak, it’s too muddy and out of place, it messes with the flow of the song. the singing near the end is good but it’s mixed too low. aside from that though one of the best things i’ve seen in these threads

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just released part 2 of my double album , this one leans a lot more into "emo trash" territory
>pop punk
>hip hop
>emo trash
>yung lil dylan
soundcloud.com/therealyunglildylan/sets/life

reccs:

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it's quite sad you guys are still uploading most your tracks onto soundcloud, a dying site, as opposed to youtube, the surefire place to be discovered. guess it must be the interface.

ꝈȺᎠӋ βԱƓϚ

soundcloud.com/ladybugstunes

>pastoral/industrial

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soundcloud.com/elizaione/song-about-running-without-shoes
>singer songwriter
>dreampop

I love your vocals and the simple instrumentation works super well with your singing style.
I do really enjoy your beats, and specifically all day and It's Chill because it feels very immersive

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i like it. the moment the bass comes in is very nice. the hi-hat in the right channel gets pretty distracting.
the line about being there with the boys is cool as well.

Demos for upcoming album: soundcloud.com/bonbos/sets/upcoming-second-album-demos
First album: soundcloud.com/bonbos/sets/cardboard-girls
>dream pop
>psychedelic pop/psychedelic rock
>synthpop
>lofi (financial constraints)
This was alright, nice little disco tribute. Could use a tiny bit more bass on the drum track, but I like everything else about it ok.
The instrumental to this is great, the echoey vocals kind of take away the essence and potential it starts off with though.

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this one is me wow what a great album chuck! everyone should listen to it all the way through 25 times everyday!!!

yeeehaw this one is fire :)

lol, really groovy and pretty funny too. this is a good track that id def listen to again.

been meaning to check out ur stuff for a while now, and im pissed i slept on it now. groza is a fuckin beautiful ttrack, and all day is dope too, really chill as well but u could also boogie to it. also i see from ur likes that ur a fellow drainer. huge salute for that

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whatchall some pussies? make some recs!

Everything about this feels more uncanny than the last one, but it also has happier, more memorable songs (Freedom, Uncle Pumpkin, Peter Pan). This was still a little better than the last EP even though they sound just as varied though one is stranger than the other, I like.

soundcloud.com/user-741399026/alone-in-the-event-horizon
>synthwave
>space

my first try

bump

A WILD TRASHFIRE APPEARS

soundcloud.com/shroomydaze/sets/cough-syrup

Listening to others right meow

soundcloud.com/mephisto_waltz/mephisto-waltz-full-set

>Noise, Drone, Ambient

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soundcloud.com/slapabass
>Jazz, Metal

mainly

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soundcloud.com/frasermaccallummusic/augury
soundcloud.com/frasermaccallummusic/aod-copy-b

These are my recent two singles, I'm working towards an EP over the next few months ^_^
>Post-punk inspired
>Rather Jangly

I really like the vibe of this, I like how the vocals sit in the mix
I really like your synth sounds
Comfy indeed, especially liked the slide guitar, I would try and include it on future tracks :)

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woahhh.... I have an even NEWER music video!! for my new song "Jazz Song Dedicated to the A.I. Gods" it's a beast-mode song in 333BPM!!!!

youtu.be/TJoDgtmbBVY
>Free Jazz
>Techno Jazz Fusion
>333BPM
_______________________________
lots of RECs!! wow!!

skippin' this if you aren't musically illiterate

Make sure you actually turn up the dials on your fuzz/distortion pedals. You don't seem to know how to make your guitars sound heavy. your music sounds soft.

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And forgot this!! This is my 2 most recent L.P's "Volume 8.0" a.k.a "MEniverse" ..... and "Volume 7.0" a.k.a "MEGADUBB" ....They will BLOW YOUR MIND!!

"MEniverse"
djdubbi.bandcamp.com/album/volume-80-meniverse
>Techno Boom
>Progressive House
>Experimental Pop
released July 7, 2019

CREDITZ:
Me - Production(on tracks 1 & 11), Ideas, Time Management, Support.
Max Montagne - Production.
GioteX - Keyboards, Production, Engineering.
$wagg $tuff - Sampling, Production.
DJ BluFlaim - Production.
DJ Majikk - Production.
Smear-City - Production.
S.W.S.T.L.P. - Production.
Love-Mode Machine - Production.
Hi-Hat Hank - Hi-Hat Production.
That Swifty&Doubles - Production.
Ocean SköPé - Production.
Sm0keshowz - Production.
Fr33Dumb Beats - Beat Sampling.
Freddy "Zero Stop" - Engineering.
DJ Whopshow Test - Engineering.
Kev "Hold My Drink" K. Bennson - Engineering.

"MEGADUBB"
djdubbi.bandcamp.com/album/volume-70-megadubb
>Post-Dubstep
>Progressive-House
>NuTechno
>Electro-ProgBeat
released May 15, 2019
CREDITZ:
DJ Dubbi - Ideas
GioteX - Keyboards, Production, Engineering
$wagg $tuff - Sampling, Production
DJ BluFlaim - Production
DJ Majikk - Production
Hi-Hat Hank - Hi-Hat Production
Trebby6foot2 - Production
Love Mode Machine - Production
Hi-Hat Hank - Hi-Hat Engineering
FreeFallin' P.G Peller - Engineering
Yung Gilly B. - Engineering
$kullAx1$ D3D is as follows:::
Joshua B. "Flash" Fredricks - Guitar
HELL SMOGG - Guitar
DJ Quicc2Death - Scratching
Mike P. W. Quest - Drums
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Misc links:

"Blassé" music video
youtu.be/i4Oy1bbwj3Y
>Progressive Hybrid Trap
>Experimental Trance
>Basement Style

soundcloud.com/dj-dubbi
>Dubstep & Post-Dubstep (because I officially ended the genre with my song "End of Dubstep" in 2014)
>Hybrid Trap
>Progressive House
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This is shit. don't insult jazz like that.

Fourth and final single for my upcoming project Spiderman: Redux. The album is based album on the original Spiderman video-game for PS1 Any feedback is greatly appreciated (:

>electronic
>rock
>ambient
>experimental
>videogamemusic
>banger

soundcloud.com/allinesik/mysterio
www.youtube.com/watch?v=sbQd2KhJXoc

tried listening to tierra de plata but the intro is just too long m8.

listened to Augury. I like how you mixed the guitar tracks together. your voice is great, goes well with your guitar style.

damn another new track. I'm a huge fan of your music and this track is no disappointment. I really love your vocals (as usual). The synth is integrated quite well. Getting some Portishead vibes off this 1 and i love it.

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big REC... yet you forgot to REC me..

>Spotify
Bro, no offence bro but spotify will destroy your career, or I should say your attempt at one before it even begins. Spotify's whole gameplan is to securely steal music from artists and then when that artist disappears they rebrand the music under a new name. Basically like what the industry did with Lady GaGa but now it's spotify doing it and no one knows.

Me

you're the biggest asshole on this site. fuck you.

soundcloud.com/y-4-antiultra/sets/eproxis

>Electronic
>Experimental
>Ambient
>Trap

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So you've finally admitted I'm smarter than you. Although.... Your a smart cookie, I'll give you that. It took you quite a while to understand your place at my FEET. I'm glad you learned that what I say is the TRUTH!

lmao the only reason i changed my url is because i changed my artist name. you retardedly spewing insults at me didn't make me want to change it. take your meds

Pretty insecure about it huh? That's pretty embarrassing for you... LOL . Lying is a bad habit. And yup, I'm gonna, I usually take them between midnight and 3AM

soundcloud.com/mbius-strip/thrice-demo
>electronic
>melodic
>repetitive

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Check my two new tracks out, thinking about putting vocals on the 2nd one as well
lmk nigs

TRANNY
soundcloud.com/montezoomer/tranny-2

Loner
soundcloud.com/montezoomer/loner-instrumental-monte

>psychedelic >alt rock

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soundcloud.com/zzbleed/keep-living-even-if-it-hurts
>experimental
>abstract hip-hop
>DOOM remix

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>soundcloud.com/mephisto_waltz/mephisto-waltz-full-set

Not usually what I like, but this is pretty good.

soundcloud.com/user-201161889/melodyidea1keyofeminormaybever3

I need someone to tell me if this actually sounds like shit from a composition standpoint, or if I'm just being ridiculously hard on myself.

soundcloud.com/floruit

>down/off-tempo
>dark
>synth-rock

new snippet
new ep eventually

recc

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soundcloud.com/hwitenoice/death

>Melodic Rap
>Trip-hop
>Epic

About a girl who overdoses and meets death

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This needs dynamics, adjust the velocity of certain notes. Plus your u.r.l. should be changed to your artist name.

This is lthe opposite of my new song

Me

Cringy and also orally fixated. you're weird for that.

Your guitar tones SUUuuUcK!!

Boost your bass. If you need advice on how to do that reply to this and I'll help you.

Me

REC

Yeah so here's the thing, you need to >edit profile
> edit url
>(change to artist name)
Your welcome. This will make you not look like such a beginner right off the bat. We don't click those kinds of links.

They're all too egotistical to do anything more than dry post their generic music.

STOP MAKING EXCUSES

"Singer Songwriter" is as dumb as saying "music by a musician"

I am

your music makes me feel like I'm inside an Apple sensory deprivation orb (I enjoy it). what's your tips for increasing the bass, I'm on FL if that's relevant.

soundcloud.com/thatsawackbeat/anothersongabouther-featheartblake

>triphop
>alt wave
>emo trap

>FL
Perfect! 1st what you need to focus on is Making great bass patches. to make a beginner bass, get a defult patch in Harmor, turn the low-pass on A to 10% and 0% on B, and then turn the Sub up on both A and B, and next turn on some slight distortion and then EQ the sub in the mixer up all the way!!

The whole meme-genre of "emo trap" is dead LOL, you realize that genre was booming like 4-5 years ago. You learned about that genre when lil peep died you little poser LOL.

Me

soundcloud.com/aku/chaos-monkey

just posted this
>experimental
>glitchy
>electronic

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Boring and I knew the whole song. Just be honest about being EDM, Like what...
99% of EDM out there is cookie cutter. That's why people hate my music, I'm actually trying to change the genre up instead of pooping while listening to kicks hit on 1 and 3 saying "yup! that's finished!"

Me

people still out here making emo rap and emo influenced hip hop, it ain't dead just because you don't like it.

LOL get mad

this ain't it

Your song is so generic and I'm recognizing the samples big time, those better be samples because if they're not you gotta step your songwriting abilities up. Your beats are a big generic and I recognize the Samples. the sample sounds like it was recorded to a D.R 15ids tape machine with a live band going straight through a console, and the drums are coming from a drum machine, synth, or stock DAW drum samples, chances are the context won’t make sense, you should always focus on that crispy sound quality bro.
In my mind I’m thinking “ok, what can I do to make these drums sound better, like they BUMP to the sample, but still stick out and hit hard?” Bro... Think about it like this, it might mean you have to be processing to the sample, or processing to the drums, or both. And generally needssome experimentation to make it BOOM in the speaker. And also mmatching the space is super key. This isn’t easy, it takes a really ADVANCED ear like mine. But if you can train yourself to listen to the ambience in the sample and recreate that ambience around the drums, but don't get confused. You follow? Next turn up the EQ low end (bass) and ta-da you're better.

Me

>people still out here making emo rap and emo influenced hip hop
That doesn't mean anything. Don't be so defensive over the fact you jumped on the bandwagon late LOL. When did you start making this genre? 2018 or something? LOL!!!

Stay jealous of me.

>emo rap isn't dead! lots of people make emo inspired rap so it's obviously a great and lively genre!
Just get laid and stop crying. Emo is pathetic.

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soundcloud.com/igkllmyslf/sets/im-tired-so-i-made-a-mixtape

>beats
>kinda lo fi
>kinda electronic

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thank you for the advice I'll play around with adding bass

soundcloud.com/bennysilver/do-you-even-know-me-prod-angelvs

can you shit on me too please

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soundcloud.com/buriedbythebuzz

>singer/songwriter
>early demos

let me know what you think.

Pretty boring so far. Here's what you need to do:
Delete everything & start from scratch.
From there:
-1st you need to buy fl studio, its all you need at 1st
-2nd you just need to make a kick/snare rythem
-invite some producers over to hang out and get them to help get a melody / bassline idea
-3rd get some studio time,
4th, get some experienced producers to work with you durring your session(s)
5th let them do whatever they want to the song to make it good.
6th DONE! you have a new song you can upload online and start blowing up

I'd rant about how the whole Wannabe Bones/XxxConstipation anime picture "emo trap" is dead but I was already putting in his place for that.
So to be more constructive;

You need to work on having energy to your vocals. It's painfully obvious that you sat there in your bedroom talking(not rapping)talking into your microphone just going through the motions of "rapping" but not really doing it. Olus you were probably somewhat quiet so your parents or siblings wouldn't hear you. You gotta evoke some emotion!! Say your lyrics like you MEAN it. Use some gusto! Put some Umph into it!

Honestly, Throwing all these words like "Lofi" & "Bedroom" infront of your genre isn't some sort of indie tagline. I know you fake musicians THINK it is... but.. it's not. Real guys in the industry laugh all day long at "bedroom" and "lofi" musicians. You think any real musician walks into a studio and tells the production team he's looking for a "bedroom pop" feel? absolutely NOT! If there was a dummy that ever did that they'd be thrown outta there pronto. I know you've never dealt with real industry peeps like me, and you've never even set inside a legitimate studio like I have, so this is just a word of advice to a beginner like you. Grow up and make real music .

Me

i appreciate that man im trying to get that gusto like you were talking about, without trying to come off as corny. simply put i have a drawing in my head of how i want it to sound but cant do it quite just right yet. im also queit cus im bad at mixing so what i do is i try to rap so it doesnt spike so i dont need to cut and chop as much, not working out so much thanks for the feedback man!

Given the quality of the "song" that you posted I don't think you should be giving anyone advice on much of anything.

Im pretty sure hes an autist with schizophrenia so he's probably not gonna care about what you said and just ramble on about how his music is the best and how everyone else is shit

soundcloud.com/b-rad-94
youtube.com/channel/UC4ZXgMLXwCPaO1in5GOosgg

New track dropped Saturday, and I set up a youtube channel. Shows hopefully by the autumn.

>garage rock
>alternative
>blues rock
>hard rock
>punk

reccs
I checked out Wrath. Vox could be mixed a little lower, but the singer is good. And always great to hear guitar driven stuff.
This is such a nice change of pace in these threads, *love* it
I love alaska nights, that's what I have to say.
Droopies are based af.
I don't know what it is about yungchuck, but your shit BUMPS, even though it's not normally my style
- Guitar is cool and good, but it feels really subdued in the mix. Good stuff, and good singer, just needs mix adjustment, in my tastes anyways

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Read my advice, I give good advice.
Maybe if your father wasn't a pvssy-wipped beta you would be able to handle criticism. You see, people who had propper father figures growing up learn to have a thick skin to criticism.

You generally can't go too extreme, especially in the year 2019. Listen to Death Grips or Zillakami or any older Xxx, crazier the better.
Honestly, just go as extreme as you can in the direction you want the song. Then, if certain things are just too crazy you can dail certain things back and/or re-record certain parts.
If you're having problems with the audio clipping when you're recording there's ways around that. Try recording with the input turned wayy down. you can conpress it to be louder and then do noise removal after to get rid of any other sound that was turned up during the compression.

It's pretty annoying how you all get obsessed about my diagnoses...

REC

Me

don't take him too seriously, he's said before that he's heavily medicated for schizophrenia lmao.

Also this is a photo of him.

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>It's another thread devolved into screeching about dubbi.

As soon as you guys learn to just take what he says on the chin or ignore him, the better this situation will be.

Dubbi says some asinine things, alot of it just to get a rise out of people like poking fun at there genre description or name or whatever. But, you know what? When he bothers to actually listen and make comments on the music, he's not wrong usually, my brethren. Other than his trolling, he's one of the most active listeners in these threads. This is coming from someone who gets shat on by Dubbi regularly.

Just ignore it my dudes.

Agreed. Dubbi sometimes makes valid points. They may be obvious points (like the time he told me to hit a real studio as soon as possible to get a cleaner recording, and to get a real drummer involved), but he really was right and it was genuine advice. Granted, I knew it already, and was planning to, just on a longer timetable. He can be a good guy. If he shits on you, take it in stride because it's probably a meme. And it's best for all of us if we take it in stride, so these FUCKING THREADS DON'T CONSTANTLY DEVOLVE INTO DUBBI DEBATES.

>When he bothers to actually listen and make comments on the music, he's not wrong usually, my brethren. Other than his trolling, he's one of the most active listeners in these threads.
Thanks brother.
It's crazy how after a decade of doing this, people STILL act like children about a legitimate entity. Actually even more childish then back in lets say 2014. This site keeps getting softer and more S0i by the month as more emasculated zoomers show up.

What you 2 are saying is actually pretty important for some anons here to learn:
IF YOU CANT HANDTCRITICISM AND/OR JOKES ABOUT YOU OR YOUR MUSIC WITHOUT BEING AN INSECURE CHILD ABOUT IT THEN YOU WILL *NEVER* MAKE IT AS A PROFESSIONAL MUSICIAN.
Boom.
*Mic drop*

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btw, you guys listen to my new song?!!

based. just ignore him

Or better yet learn how to handle jokes instead of having to hide from it.

Dubbi you look like a brick

No neither of you have been actually bullied by him. When he tells you that your genre is stupid and your music sucks day after day you get pretty pissed off. I can't deal with that kind of harassment.

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Lmao! Look at those small dead eyes.

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KEK holy shit.
Shoop one of him on Pink Floyds The Wall

Are you the same guy who starts this every thread? It's gotta be you, you always type about 'harassment' and bullying'. Holy shit, get a grip. If youre gonna post DIY music in a public forum, you gotta be less sensitive than this.

Lmaoooooo.

soundcloud.com/user-557417298/if-it-werent-for-me-you-wouldnt-be-dead

>inb4 stan barrett

There's meant to be lyrics btw I just haven't gotten around to that yet

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>that URL
Read about fixing that.

These keep getting better, we need to spam him with these any time he shills his shit.

>Basically like what the industry did with Lady GaGa but now it's spotify doing it and no one knows.
What?

Look into it. GaGa has an interesting past with the industry.

National Socialism Song.
Returning all feedback
soundcloud.com/adam-black-and-blue/nss

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thanks! 'Augury' is a nice pop song, reminds me of that Bristol-based label Sarah Records. awesome voice also
hey! haven't seen you in a while. still rockin' it? nice riffs

I think the drum player doesn't keep up with the guitar player skill-wise. He has to practice a bit more at times. Also, the guitar sounds great to this. What kind of amp/pedals are you using?

>bass
>dubstep
>electronic
>bass

hey guys! i hope you all like my tracks!!

soundcloud.com/blck_wlf

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I have to set this back to private. My [x] player would reeeee if he heard this track.

soundcloud.com/torsktunga/gurka

>electronic
>ambient
>something
>something

thx for listening

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>boba
>house
>boba
>house
>a e s t h e t i c

hi

open.spotify.com/artist/1XOqtxoidOJCvRC2FLnLdP

soundcloud.com/boba_boi

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