Critique

>soundcloud.com/tutenkhamenbeats/lfs
The melody is nice and the drums are really crisp. The lead synth is rather weird, some of the freqs are louder than they should be. It sounds like a bad EQ job on that. Also I got bored by the end, which is weird considering I listen to 4 bar loops for hours.

youtube.com/watch?v=m7OdlofH65Y
(shillin' a new song)
>post-rock
>folk
>experimental rock
>ambient
>shoegaze
>drone
>RAINY and COLD
FULL ALBUM (also available on my channel) also includes:
>alt rock
>country
>pop
>and many others...

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your voice is great, now the song needs proper instrumentation. keep us updated!
unusual set of sounds for house music, liked it
reccing this again, check out if you're into brutal stuff

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will return feedback, have a nice one bros!

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Made a couple of visualizers for my songs, they're not that special, but I wanted them on youtube so

youtube.com/watch?v=P1boNt3RyQs

youtube.com/watch?v=JjGDD7Wt7wc

recc

There are a couple problems in the production off the bat. The clap is too loud, and the hats a bit too low, also the 808 feels a bit off key. I get that this is a beat, but it just feels too repetitive, maybe add some automation and layers to the piano.

Damn dude this shit goes hard. The riffs are heavy af but catchy and those drums are incredible. Those blast beats are amazing. The only problem I have are the vocals, but that's a personal feel. I feel like they would fit a black metal or grindcore track a bit better. Also the track feels a bit too clean, but again that's just my taste. Good song anons

love your song underwatr, but besides that other stuff are a bit too out there for me. I admire your production skills tho, I wish I could make stuff like that.

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forgot to say the genres

>Electronic
>Synthwave
>Retrowave
>Cyberpunk
>John Carpenter inspired

>youtube.com/watch?v=m7OdlofH65Y
The instrumental parts are really cool. I hate acoustic guitars with passion but you made it bearable. The distortion and reverb washes over everything nicely. I don't like the vocals tho, sounds like you're bored or half asleep (I know, shoegaze and all, but still). That ping-pongish delay on the vocal track was very unnecessary if you ask me.

thanks for taking the time to listen bro! sorry that you didn't enjoy my voice, have a nice day!

>youtube.com/watch?v=P1boNt3RyQs
>youtube.com/watch?v=JjGDD7Wt7wc
I really hope this synthwave meme dies eventually. It could be just my taste but every single stuff in this genre sounds exactly the fucking same and not in a good way. Distorted saw arp basslines and sidechained kicks are way overplayed.

Nothing personal user, it's very hard to impress me with vocals. Keep up the good work, cheers!

soundcloud.com/mcgeed

>psych rap

really nice mix, smooth bass nice work

beat is nice and you got some flow, keep at it

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>soundcloud.com/mcgeed
Your voice sounds very weird, but in a good way. The flow is a bit off. Shout out to Quelle Chris for that beat, it's like straight off some obscure early 90's conscious jazzy hip hop tape. Interesting stuff.

>It sounds like you are very unfamiliar with NI Reactor but you keep trying. The songs are way too long, very unstructured and get stale after half a minute. Sorry dude, it's whack.

None of my music is made with Reaktor or things like that, I don't use vsts or made-up plugins because I create my own instruments. I'm not trying to be defensive but It seems you lack a wider perception of music if you think everything should be 'structured' or have a specific length, not in experimental or especially acousmatic music. Perhaps you're just not familiar with the genre and I don't blame you.

thanks man, check out my ep if you're after something weirder

Oh, cool, I honestly thought you were just poorly messing about with skrewell. I'd love to get more details about your self-made instruments, if these are really acoustic sounds that's very interesting. Indeed, I am not very familiar with acousmatic music, but even your shorter songs drag on a bit too much in my opinion and I think it'd benefit if you cut some of drones in half at least. Cheers mate!

static

burnmyurethra.bandcamp.com/album/-

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Hell's Frequencies - ASHEN RIID

macrofonie.bandcamp.com/album/hells-frequencies

>Noise
>Glitch
>Not a wall of noise
>Kazumoto Endo influences

I will listen to stuff as soon as possible, and will check your albums if you listen to mine! Cheers

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scrugley.bandcamp.com/album/scars-as-souvenirs

>somewhat experimental
>piano with drums
>depressive vocals
>kinda folky

reccing
this is so fucking good, congrats dude
shoegaze is really good
my headphones were too high for this, fuuuck. this is decent tho

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thanks for the feedback! you seem to have a very wide range of musical genres, the album you shilled recently (of which I told you it reminded me of GYBE and Phil Glass) and now this! nice voice also, made me think of Empyrium (great German band). recommended!

hey man I just make music that I like to listen to, and I like synthwave. Besides, I don't see many synthwave producers in this board. I don't make this as a meme, I genuinely like the elements that make it, like arps and plucky distorted basslines. I know it might get repetitive after a while, but hey as you said, it might be your taste. For me most trap also feels repetitive, and I see a lot of it on this board. And I doubt the ''meme'' will die, there are plenty of artists and fans of the genre who will keep it alive.

What about you? Have you ever experimented in Max-msp or Supercollider? Any kind of manual architecturing environment? Those are the instruments I was talking about. You seem to know lot about since you define my music as "poorly messing around" and I was wondering if you can give some insightful advice.

soundcloud.com/xxvan1sh/samplechallenge

My first ever sample challenge !!

If any producers wanna join in that would be sick, rules and prizes are in the description ambient
>emotional
>sadtrap

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Made a song with a beat switch, trap drums, guitar loops, and a sax solo

soundcloud.com/pool-view/victory-formation

> Trap
> Rock
> Jazz

You can spit, big beastie boys vibes. You use your voice very well

Dude fuck the other critique you got this track was real as fuck. One of my favorite things I’ve heard here. I love your voice and the sincerity in it, I was buying into everything you were saying. If the beat dropped halfway through it would’ve been 5x more fire though.

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soundcloud.com/saftb69

>electronic
>ambient
>synth
>beats

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wubby.bandcamp.com/album/pisniarfik-ep

The songs are dedicated to people/places/or things.

>lo-fi
>bedroom whiny bitch rock

I'm pretty bad at music but I think my opinion may still be valid.

I think my friend would really like this stuff. This reminds me of Silent Hill's music and I really like that.
This is good!
I'm around 2:35 for Cicatrices and yeah this is my favorite part
I had to skip through Foilage Ink and Utan Mening but from what I heard they were good
I bookmarked your page
I don't see the appeal of noise but this reminds me again of Silent Hill or survival horrors in general. I can see myself writing stories to this. Yeah this is making my veins pulse with fear of hell. I'm gonna bookmark this too.
Listening to It's About That Time. Got a unique voice and your lyrics and beat reminds me of 80s and 90s rappers. I think you're one of my favorite rappers.

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This is some hardcore shit
I liked Mindcage the most, seemed more dynamic than the others.

Got a noisy, experimental, electronic post rock
album out soon.

Here's my track

soundcloud.com/eternal100000000/08-sweet-hart-bruxism

>Experimental
>Electronic
>Glitch
>Noise

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I like this.
The vocals kind of took me out of it
Not a fan of your vocal/lyrics. You can clearly rap but it just felt forced
I wish the vocals were quieter/less bassy, so they'd blend in more. Also I like your angel graphic

Spicechateau.bandcamp.com
>Lofi
>Hip Hop Influenced Indie
>guitars, synths, samples

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soundcloud.com/niccar95

I apreciate and will return all feedback. New song has some Kraftwerk vibes, but my main styles are:

>Electronic
>Dance
>Ambient

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Just listened to the last 4 things you put out.
To me, 'I Promise' sounded the most legit, the synth work
has a lot more energy and seems a bit smarter than the others. If you amp your beats up a bit, make them a bit slicker it would really hit hard.

my track - soundcloud.com/eternal100000000/08-sweet-hart-bruxism

Me:
This music is very chill. I like the calm tone of your voice. Reminds me of Mac Demarco.

Interesting mix of styles. The beats are tight and the other instruments accompany them beautifully.

Thanks for the feedback!

Hey all. Some time ago I've finished a new album. Wanted to share with you a possible single for it until I decide whether or not to release the whole thing sooner or later. Would love to hear some feedback but it's not necessary if you don't want to.

soundcloud.com/turdidaemusic/03-d/s-estE0
>ambient & drone
>air-quality
>water, voice, drone, birdsong, organ

Other releases:
turdidae.bandcamp.com/

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soundcloud.com/springsight
>electronica
>house, halftime
>melodic

I love the slightly surreal vibes on the entire thing. Eden has to be my fav track, I'm a sucker for random introspective vocal samples.

Dude, this is awesome! It reminds me of the soundtrack to a cyberpunk film. Really polished and inventive.

Honestly, your stuff reminds me of a lot of indie folk. Very atmospheric. Well done!

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You got great work overall. I can tell you are very good at mixing your music, I can hear every sound clearly in many of your songs. There is also a lot going on in your songs, which makes them very entertaining to listen to.

Me:
You got some great tracks. I like how chill they are and the production is great, specially on the beats. Overall great music!

Ah, I thought you meant like merzbow style scrap metal, springs and mangetic pickups kind of things, the word "acoustic" threw me off. Yes, I am very familiar with Max/MSP, I have actually made a few albums of varying quality using that (albeit in Max for Live for easier sequencing).

superlust.bandcamp.com/album/freque
>poor man's autechre

superlust.bandcamp.com/album/tcp-ip
>poor man's autechre with soothing synth pads

superlust.bandcamp.com/album/basic-emotion
>weird, abrasive tunes mixed very poorly

superlust.bandcamp.com/album/vector-superfields
>bunch of weird drum sounds modulated to hell and ran thru degrade, i guess you can call this post-footwork

superlust.bandcamp.com/album/the-origin-of-mass
>boring ambient drone thing

Me:
"It's about that time" has that classic old school hip hop lofi sound that is just beautiful. I loved the piano in it too. Your psychedelic songs are great too. They are very atmospheric, which I personally like.

soundcloud.com/iluminatimusic/iluminati-beat-2

>boom bap beats

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fuck god you're talented

MF doom feel but if his body was made out of lecroix cans

>the sound of water on sunlight

soundcloud.com/4a0000/nvm-stay-inside

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soundcloud.com/ashlandsummit/nojest

single i produced and rapped on.
>farming trap
>deep woods rap

loving the new single, perfect ambience and sound. followed for the album drop.

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soundcloud.com/whoisknvs/dying-being-me-prod-gucciwitch

>trap
>melodic hip-hop
>autotune rap
>alt pop

RECS

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>acousmatic music
you're retarded.

>I think it would benefit from a little more angst really. The chord progression is simple but works, though the recording quality is bad even for a bedroom demo. The vocals are way louder than it should be and I personally don't find the tone of your voice very appealing. Not my cup of tea, but don't let that get you down.
Thanks! Gotta agree with all of your points, you got good ears sir.
>your voice is great, now the song needs proper instrumentation. keep us updated!
I'm planning on buying a $50 keyboard since there's a music store nearby that sells them, they are smaller than other keyboards but I think that's actually a selling point since there's not much room for one. Sorry for the blog and thanks for your feedback. Now as to my feedback to you, you list a lot of genres but all I hear is a nice chill pop rock tune; maybe being less aware of the shoegaze genre you could really let go and add some big dick energy to your tune to make it even more hypomanic!