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I'll kick the thread off with my project in the next post.
Your mix is ridiculously low. Especially the vocals. Like, I'm turning my volume up all the way and it still sounds too low. Was the beat this quiet when you got it?
Im making an album is based on the original Spiderman video game for PS1. Here is my second promotional single. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, thanks.
listened to it's all or nothing. holy fuck. absolute banger. that sample is insaneeee. christ. not sure I fuck with the raps much, your flow needs some refining. the production is solid though.
It’s better than a lot of stuff here but it’s too one dimensional. I think that it needs more changes and more vocal dominance. If something goes on too long you can get bored with it, you know what I mean? I’m not trying to make it seem bad because it’s not, but it just needs more dynamics. I think you know how lyrics should be laid out and delivered though, which a lot of people dont
Isaiah Sanchez
You know what? This isn't my shit at all but it's so (You) I fuck with it either way. Just keep working on cleaning it up.
Can't hear it. But some bars are cool, I like the games on your phone part but I'd take it somewhere else.
I'd chop and skrew this. Otherwise, nothing of substance to say... Sorry :(
Bad mix. Too low on the instruments. That voice is played out, are you one of those doomer kids? Sorry to be harsh, just trying football style feedback with you. Your music makes me annoyed.
Reminds me a bit of mf-doom, only critique I would have is that you should go a bit harder on the lyrics and use a tad less interjections I love drone music and this is right down my aisle, the sound and space you are using is great and would love to hear more Absolutely amazingly crafted I love your screaming and would totally pay to see this live, I wish I had a drummer heh guitar work is hectic just as the songs are in general and that's great, my favourite one is to ask a question. Would fuck with it more if the volume was higher especially since you're going for the "hardcore" Been following you for a while and the new stuff is great, go tour with this cuz it's heavy as shit could see this in a toejam and earl game make it longer friend I dig this wouldn't mind an instrumental section but it seems like you know what you're doing Fuck yeah miles davis, make it a bit longer and it will be an absolute banger. I love how the synth flows with davis, I wonder if he ever thought that he will be sampled like this heh I like this because of the really spacey atmosphere, sing a bit louder and it will be great also the percussion is really really good again I like this because I am an absolute sucker for nonsense and overly loud things would love if you would add some distorted drums kind of like xiuxiu does it So lush and happy, but how is it post trap .-.? I like the synthwork but would add an 808 just to give it more punch Jesus fucking christ I would spend so many hours on this game, you really struck a nostalgia chord with this ugh I love the guitar work and even doh I am not sure I would relate it to the game I think it's such a fun concept I can't wait for carnage
Logan Phillips
The image is a cyber sigil; a spell. It can be decoded if your savvy.
Nice sigil. Your music is also nice. I like your more minimal tracks. Cyberfuzz is nice, but almost too much fuzz, in my opinion. ;o Keep up the lovely work.
Fug yeee. Big fan of this genre. Reminds me of Nothing Nowhere. Good shit keep it up!
Nice logo. I dig the content you are aspiring to create but I feel you need to work on your mixing and mastering, majorly. Keep at my dude, and you'll get your sound down in no time.
Ayeee that's pretty good. Love female/male duets. Love how it builds up too. It's like a Progressive-Rock XX. Lol. Very nice song.
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Thanks! I like yours. There could be some more variation on the melodies to keep them more interesting and not so square, also some of your drum sounds could feel a little fuller. Other than that the idea works quite well.
Liam Wright
This is straight from another planet in a good way, quite unique.
William Sullivan
admittidly, some songs on there are more melodic than others (She's A Vampire is all build for instance, but Mother of Martyrs or Reverse Execution is all melodies) but thanks! :D
I've got a track that's in the bank that I'm going to post this weekend. I need to re-record it though. There's an audible complete rhythm flub that I made in it, where everything skips a beat. Planning to post that Friday Night. I'm getting a move on the lyrics for the song I've been working on, I'm hoping to get that up Sunday. Should be a good weekend.
- these guys rock. Not a fan of the death metal angle (Just not my genre), but they have some fucking AWESOME stuff in the catalog - I'm so happy there's a new Pretty OP song. This made my week. - BIG MOOT! If you ain't recc'ing Moot or Pretty OP, you suck