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Finally! Clean production, great chords and vocals. Engaging tune. The synths are really unexpected. Vocals sound a little overproduced in the acapella bit, but that's a personal preference and it sounds good once everything else kicks in.
i made this a year ago and did nothing with it. it's too repetitive, skip forward if you want. these were the lyrics. is there anything worthwhile in it
take what you can and leave with it everyone else is invalid say what you want and leave the room don't play the victim when the room devours you
would you feed a snake trapped without a hole? trapped beneath the sky hating a world it barely knows did you scream the first time you saw the floor? crush your feelings outside when you have nowhere to go
take what you can and leave with it everyone else is invalid say what you want and leave the room don't play the victim when the room devours you
Trying to boost our Spotify plays so we present better to promoters.
I've seen you posted around a lot lately, been listening to your album off and on over the weekend. Autumn and Delirium are damn cool. What are you using to record? You clearly have a good ear for production and mixing. Saved to my Spotify playlist
listened to a few tracks here and there, and this seems like a pretty fun album. Pretty good production and groovy chord progressions from what I heard.
It was recorded in Protools. It was mastered through Adam Gonsalves who did Elliot Smiths either/or and that gave it a lot of the shine. Guy definitely knows what he's doing. Thanks for the support!
I listened through . Something about your voice feels really 80's. The last track is really mellow. I think I liked the heavier stuff like two ghosts though
Thanks for the recc. Kinda makes me think of the binding of Isaac soundtrack. Only criticism I have is the end seemed a little abrupt.
>It was mastered through Adam Gonsalves who did Elliot Smiths either/or and that gave it a lot of the shine Professionally recorded? Props man, it really shows.
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Knew by the description I was gonna like this, sounds amazing. Cool artwork aswell :) Interesting how the beat seems to be changing constantly at times, love how detailed it is
I want to like this but it definitely needs some work. The mix is muddled with two much low end. The click in the bass drum is too much for me, I like the general sound you are trying to go for just needs refining
I'm about to hit babby's first 100 followers! Writing a new track this week that's going to be a bit more relaxed to add some more sonic variety. soundcloud.com/b-rad-94 >alternative rock >punk >hard rock >post-hardcoreish? >garage
hell yeah man, tasty riff on When I Hear My Voice, hope you can get to a studio
it's juicy. I think it'd be better if you just let it rock and added some variations or layers. maybe take a layer away instead of filtering all of it. keep it up man.
I like the sound you are going for here. This is nice. If I had to critique it I'd say the piano could use less velocity and some reverb to make up for it. Might make it even comfier.
get major incubus vibes. This is really well produced. surprised me with the synths there. I don't think there is much to add. You know what you're doing and have talent. keep killling it.
can't listen to stuff right now, but check these guys out after me (as a palate cleanser) been keeping an eye out on you for some time. love your vibe. haast is sick too oh cntrl alt dlt is sick as fuck my man
Things I've already listened to but are really good: super clean production, really cohesive and chill. raw sauce, as advertised. Super well produced and dynamic psych, great vocals too.
Feedback: Broken is my favorite thing I've heard from you, it's super clean and simple but the melodies and everything going on is super uplifting. It's like a slow sunrise. The xylophone is a nice touch too. Gave you some clicks from my YT account. You seem to have a lot of range from what i've heard of yours so far.
The drums on two ghosts is really engaging but the synth sounds really cheap and bland. Maybe that's just me. The melody and chords it's playing are good, I just don't like the texture when it's on its own. It sounds good in the mix later, though. The horns section sounds fantastic and perfectly raspy. Overall you have a clean sound but I'd like to hear some more energy in the production. It sounds like someone went over the mix with sandpaper, same with the first song. I don't know if that suits your sound and the energy you're going for. Lots of potential here though.
This could make for a great ost, and when it seems to pick up around 1:15 it gets pretty engaging and has some force to it, too. Otherwise it's a little plain and repetitive but it sounds really well made and produced. All the parts mix together really coherently.
No exaggeration I like this more than the new Tame Impala singles. I wish he had come out with something more like this. The vocals are a bit off though, but it's just the notes, your voice itself actually suits the track super well. Happy to see something funky in this thread.
This is surprisingly nice. Reminds me of early Maroon 5, I love the buzzy but reverbed guitars too. Great production, everyone should check this out.
sick part 3 is really sweet, and the way it transitions into Defense is FANTASTIC. I couldn't help but smile when it happened. Super super good shit. I love the passion in your voice, the breakdown at the end is so good too. You've got a great balance of noise and energy with hardly a hint of restraint.
This sounds kinda muddy. There's a lot going on in the low end and not much beyond the synth and vocals in the high end. It's a little hard to make out the bass and the guitar at all. Besides the lack of clarity in the production though, I really like your sound. The melodies and vocals are really good (like really good), and the textures are great too.
I've listened before but everyone should check this out if you like harsh noise and industrial sound palettes. This is easily my favorite of the harder and experimental artists in these threads.
and of course I'll respond to anyone who is kind enough to leave me some feedback too :)
"Blackened" Trap : trap with black metal vocals, ambiance and imagery
Parker Thompson
and fuck you and I just ignore you to ego man what you child but a theory what have you done your site is will eventually go down I will one day raise an army and trust we will destroy your internet and your gonna have to get a real job ego man look like everyone else does it seem clear or can you do anything original that is not a meme what have we become
Nathan Brown
I honestly use you people like you do me but I leave you with some funny psychological scars your psychology don`t work on me I am a stoic I am a cynic I am spit on your ego and that spit is gold compared to your ignorance of your own actions what have you really done and you ignore me at least I am a Fool I admit I know nothing you what are you but chaff and a husk just shadow of other people`s dreams and yet the cosmic horror has such a depth that it will literally ripe your entire being into oblivion and death will be kind compare to this suffering
ignore me ok good I am not aware you were ignoring me who is this guy talking about again oh yeah these are people who have no honor only worship memes and have no casting of the light and look at them what are they but unreality the ones who remain in the denial of willful ignorance yet the will will triumph over man and your pride will shelter your eyes and you begin eating your own flesh and you take into account your countenance and every pain and every number every stone and every ruin and you will being devoured a dying God will be from the awakened therewith the tides whom feast on your entrails and your road becomes naked and this is Rome and what are you child but naked and dead and the resurrection hitherto being enlightened the girders of the soul
Hunter King
exactly destroy their ego with the unfathomable cosmic horrors in the halls of sleep such sights unseen and they whisper the wind and it tear thereupon ones very being
Jayden Peterson
you know there is this funny bug in the youtube algorithm where you can just click view video on youtube and it you sit there and watch it a few seconds or something and you reload it and it literally gives you a view for free this is funny
honestly dude it sounds flat very appealing to homosexuals and people with problems confronting the reality that they are slowly decaying in the excess of the delusions and what we sit back and give them encouragement
Charles Rogers
Best point of view ever.
Not bad, good idea but repetitive
Jonathan Myers
nice vocals, very suiting to the mood of the instrumentals. i especially like when the reverb comes in. the melodies and everything aren't super memorable, but it's not offensive at least. excellent little ditty. the guitar on its own is wonderful, the other stuff coming in only enhances it. love all the weird noises and stuff that are hard to make out. makes me think of some blissful childhood flashback. really peaceful stuff. that guitar part could easily make a 5pm track from animal crossing. vocals are good too, and the effects coming in with the chorus work very well with the sound, not overbearing with the intensity.
Dude, your production is pretty good as it is already. Just keep doing what you want to do. I literally can't come up with anything to tell you critically. Just keep working on it and refining what you're doing.
WoW thanks, that really cheers me up. Its because of people like you that give hope and meaning to me life. Im gonne work even harder now you said this. Much love, this positivitie will reflect om you, i’ll promise.
Asher Bell
Send from met phone btw. Im still that Ratchet guy
This band is largely a conceptual project at the moment. Our goal is to assemble a large group of people with seemingly incompatible tastes in music and see what happens. As of right now, there's only three of us. The biggest influences here are noise rock, pop punk, and indie. Any and all feedback would be useful at this stage!
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>post-hardcore >post-rock >a little classic emo in there
The only thing I can really think of musically is to maybe add harmony voices in place of the common reverb. Otherwise I love the mixing and use of bass and melody with the guitar
>i was fucked up all along >she don't want her friends to know >yawn and moan
about the criticism i'm not advanced enough to give my perspective lmao but i can tell you all which songs i like from the you guys posted,
#1 #2 #3
Brandon Ward
Thanks! Vocals in the first tune remind me of Dino Jr at times. Wish they were a bit higher in the mix. The second tune has a better mix IMO.There's good dynamic through the tune. Third was my favorite of the three I listened too good stuff.
Christopher Martinez
I can tel you guys are from Allentown just by the shoegaze sound. You guys into the album Hyperview?
Jack Perry
I kinda wish they were too but I think our guitarist (really the head of the project) wanted them a little lower to give it a drone-y/shoegaze-y feel. We played with different texture here than on our past EPs. Thank you for the feedback Mr. Moot.
Parker Peterson
My favorite is the last song. Lemme know what you think.
If it's a stylistic choice then that makes sense. I really don't know the audience for shoegaze that well. I stopped after the third to listen to some others in the thread. Feel free to PM my repost account with a link and I'll definitely get to it sooner or later. Usually you want one of the strongest tracks starting, did the guitarist prefer the others?
Reminds me a little bit of the strokes. I dig Noice. Would break the speed limit to at night I really liked this song. Needs more work on the production/mix though Probably the best one so far. You did good user This reminds me of flylo fm
This is my band. We just released our first EP and trying to get it some attention
Well, actually I’d say that first song just always felt like an intro to us. It was all of us. These songs simmered for almost 5 years while we were on hiatus and we always knew what order we wanted the songs to be in.