Wrote this earlier. Post your raps and stuff
My attitude stinks worse than my ass
That's why I'm the first to get searched and harassed as if I'm purchasin grass
Thirstin for cash got me searchin for purses to snatch
Virgins to flash
Murders to hatch
Al Capone, I cut coke with detergent and glass
I can't judge a Rap from the lyrics alone. I need to know how you deliver your rhymes in relation to the beat, because depending on that it will sounds completely different.
Maybe record yourself on a beat of your choice with Vocaroo. If you don't want us to recognize your voice, pitch-shift it with Audacity.
Or rewrite your verse by using a flow diagram where you show us how you fit syllables in relation to the meter, where you stress and where you accentuates
solid rhymes well done
>I can't judge a Rap from the lyrics alone
Of course you can. You can see the rhyme pattern, the syllables, the multies, the word play, the metaphors, the imagery, the punchlines the similarities
Thank you user. I've gone from mildly shit to mildly ok
I can guess from the rhymes how he is spitting, but this is really just guessing. I don't know if he is rhyming off or on beat, if each lines represents a bar, or if he speed up to pack more syllables in a bar when saying :
>That's why I'm the first to get searched and harassed as if I'm purchasin grass
Considering that there are more syllables there than with other lines. I don't know when he makes pauses, I don't know if some of his phrases extend to multiple bars.
In short, I can just guess his cadence from the rhymes, but this is assuming that he is rhyming on-beat, which is not always true. It doesn't give me much insights on his flow and how it relates to the beat
Of course you can't know how a person raps a rap until you hear the person rap it. I do think you can get a sense of the flow of a rap and that there are raps written that are easier and cooler to perform then others. And OP's rhyme pattern and the way its written you can kind of tell its gonna sound nice on a beat. If we get like 5 different person to record them self rapping that on a beat without having listened to each other then i am pretty sure you'd get a very similar outcome. That is just my guess anyhow
I'm the lyrical surfer murderer
The miracle server, sturdier Thugger
The original diverse Middle-Eastern sucker!
Motivation drives everything we do
Its a factualization that ill help you review
Back in fifth grade i was selling that work
Fuck with me you will get put on a shirt
Play with tha gang we knock off yo top
Like ah Tsunami we wet up yo block
After I hit Im on chill mode
Blowing out big smoke
OOGA BOOGA GOOGA BOOM
BOOGA OOGA SOOGA LOOGA
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
BANG BANG BANG OOGA
BOOGA OGGA SOOGA LOOGA
OOGA BOOGA LUGGGA
OOGA BOOGA OOGA
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
BANG BANG BANG OOGA
OOGA BOOGA GOOGA BOOM
BOOGA OOGA SOOGA LOOGA
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
BANG BANG BANG OOGA
BOOGA OGGA SOOGA LOOGA
OOGA BOOGA LUGGGA
OOGA BOOGA OOGA
Have you joined us straight from an eminem comment section? record some shit and put it on soundcloud if you want to be taken seriously
im white but I wanna be a nigger, uh
I wanna rape women like a nigger uh
I'm rapping like a pro I have the flow im best wigger
I shoot you down just like a nigger
I rape your mom just like a nigger
I leave the kids just like a nigger
based
I will eventually. Gotta get a decent mic first
There is nothing inherently Black about Rapping. It's just a vocal technique :
>Scandinavian invented Rap in the 7th century A.D.,
>It was known as "skaldekvad", and it was a combination of poetry and rhythmic interplay with an instrumentation
>By means of accentuations, assonances, alliterations, and rhyme schemes, Scandinavian poets were playing their poems against the meter of their fiddles in the goal of creating a rhythm, all the while telling stories about culture and heritage
You can also trace back Rapping to many bard traditions.
Soup I be brewing your mom I be doing.
Despite making up on 13% of the people (yuh!)
Niggers make up 52% of the murders (yuh!)
Exterminate the niggers (hot damn!)
White Power! White Power!
White gang, White gang, White gang, White gang
White gang, White gang, White gang (White gang!)
Spend ten racks on a new slave
My dick love the slave's pussy
I fuck a slave, I forgot her name
I can't give a slave no mulatto
Rather go and abort him
White gang, White gang, White gang (White gang!)
White gang, White gang, White gang, White gang
White gang, White gang, White gang (White gang!)
It seems that I'm very talented for Rapping. I would like to start a group called whose content will be based on Yea Forums imageboard culture. There will be story-telling about the most interesting events in the history of Yea Forums(e.g Project Chanalogy), braggadocio Rap about how reddit niggers are inferior to us, or where different boards diss each others, and other things...
I still don't know how to name it though. "Chan Gang"?
So if one of you anons is a producer, rapper or manager, hit me up.
Pic related are lyrics I wrote in 5 minutes to show you my incredible skills
Yea Forums sucks these days
Used to suck always
Rather eat out a ashtray
Lather up my butthole
and take Mandingo sideways
Jannies with too much control
And kids that ban evade
Worst of all is OP
He takes so much cock
He gonna need a gatorade.
cruisin down the street in my 64
yo rate my bars
your asses thick as molasses
stick my pinky in you shit out some gasses
smell so sick it raises my dick quick
I got more flow than your diarrhea
Rap is crap, so wrap it up
Put it in trash, like a plastic cup
Rap isn't music, there is no rhythm, melody or harmony
Just confused sick niggers with hibben, melanin, no art and that's it
Nigga I don't give no fuck, that's a calomny
A degeneracy, really saddening.
based
Cringe.
>Has never written rap
Ok
I went down to the Paki shop to buy a loaf of bread
Put it on the counter and this is what he said
Hip hop Paki shop two ninety-nine
Don't let the Paki shop rip you off next time
Bump