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Andrew Cook
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Parker Nelson
Please listen and give feed back
‘Trip to space’ very pop
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Lincoln Nguyen
I love your production and voice and melodies. Super bubbly but kind of electronic. Awesome job
I'll comment on more when more people post
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More music on the way soon
William Reed
I’ve reviewed your song before. I really like your instrumental but maybe you might need to do more of a indie sound instead of rock and improve vocals.
David Johnson
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>bedroom indie
>lo-fi
>guitar
Alexander Phillips
Hey thanks appreciate the review
I don't really wanna change my sound but I definitely agree my vocals aren't the best. Thanks
You're a great guitar player and your production is really good. Some of your songs have like kind of an underwater sounding quality to them in a great way. Keep up the great work
Evan Howard
I really liked this like I dont have anything bad too say. Maybe adding a vocalist similar to Lana del rey if you get a female vocalist. Not too sure on a male vocalist
William Sanchez
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> dream pop
> garage rock
> conceptual EP
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> indie folk
> vocal harmonies
> sad banjo
the track bops my guy, i feel like in some aspects the production could hit a bit harder, but all the fundamentals are there for a great track
Andrew Price
Industrial/dark ambient
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Great production! It's very dreamy
I really like the instruments but the vocals kind of kill it for me. I'd work on them.
Bentley Wilson
Love both of your projects, great songwriting
Chase Martinez
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>industrial Ariel Pink rip-off
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>80s Dark Electro
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>Electronic Rock
Connor Martinez
Your first track is really good. Quite dreamy and seems like a really good movie soundtrack
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Benjamin King
I like your 80s and ebm songs. I feel they a little bit outdated though and maybe add a vocalist?
Connor Gonzalez
Thank you.
Yeah, I need to turn my lo-fi sound into a hi-fi one.
Vocals planned for later; instrumentals for now.
Gabriel Roberts
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>sweaty punk
>instrumental
>synthy guitar effects
>pedal whore
You've improved a lot since the last time I tangled with you. Well done. This is quantifiably cleaner sounding and almost entirely in time. Big step up imbred, not perfection but much better.
Out of my wheelhouse and hard to be objective with. Your lyricism and sense of melody is strong but I find the vocal FX grating. That's a grip with the genre and not you however.
Amazing vocal work. Have been a fan of those harmonies for a while on sanity defamed. Gives me goosebumps. Great work.
Wyatt Gomez
Aye that's not too bad at all. Great vocal melodies. Could use some better production with the percussion unless that's what you were going for. Has old old school house vibes. Very nice stuff.
Ayooo I think this is a much better track of yours. I think a little touch of distortion/saturation would really help your vocals on here, though they are very close to being right on the money loudness-wise.
Lovely lo-fi! Recc.
In your garage rock project, I feel the drums are lacking a lot of energy but I do very much enjoy the composition and choice of sounds.
In the indie folk I love the voices and they carry the song so well I don't even care about the drums. Lol
Really enjoyed all the tracks but Generator was pretty damn rough. Lol. Especially enjoyed the first two ambient tracks.
Lovely old-school feel to these productions, especially enjoyed the rock track Lesions.
Pretty sick. You have the vocals down but I'd like to hear more melodies and more rhymes, if you catch my drift. Nice stuff m8 hope to hear more.
Recc recc recc! Crazy fun composition.
If you respond to this post, I'll offer feedback to your music, or whatever the fuck you want, mang. Industrial - Hip-Hop - Horrorcore
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>Deranged EP
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Sebastian Butler
>cybermelodic
>alternative
>emotional
Adam Ward
Just uploaded this today
>space vibes
>DnB
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Dominic Anderson
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>666 mannnnn
>led zep flip flip
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Juan Reyes
Really dope song but like others have said work on vocals. Your guitar shreds
Xavier Adams
I finally have time to give feedback yay
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>singer songwriter
>folk
>indie/emo
Funky, love the lyrics, wish there was a lil more to the instrumental
Looove the vibe, i wanna make music with a lot of the same types of riffs, hope to see you around sometime
Really smooth, like it a lot.
Xavier Gutierrez
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>Electronic
>Glitch Pop
>Bass
>Gabber
Hudson Morgan
Hamartia is grimey as fuck and I love it
Lucas Nelson
What else would you recommend to improve instrumental?
Oliver Williams
I really like this track and its quite hard hitting and definitely a nice vocal melody with quite emotional vocals. All I could say is maybe improve vocal production.
Mason Turner
More swelling/drawn out synths or a a more punctuated lead
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Christopher Flores
check it out
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Ian Moore
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>stoner rock/metal
>doom
>fuzz
>sludge
>psychedelic
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