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Album coming in the next week, might drop another track first though, been tryna hit up as many Yea Forumscore pages as possible droppin likes and comments.
It's incredibly hard for me to critique industrial records as I'm an outsider but I'll try my best. You obviously know your sound design well but I feel like it gets a bit stagnant at times, especially with the drones, I'd love to see some more modulation. The drums make the most sense to me and i actually do find that they are quite well done, good job on that. I'm not sure if this goes against the point you're tying to make, but some of the noises you made are incredibly ear-splitting as they resonate, take that advice as you will. I think compositionally it makes sense to the genre but I'd prefer if it there was more progression. I don't think this genre is for me but from the looks of it I think you did a decent job with trying to represent stagnation/feeling stuck in a loop.
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recc really nice sound imo reccing these two bcs im a weeb too
im th guy fromok so your track is very happy or i could see where it shines but you made it somewhat boring,a melody like that would fit in edm type music,some drums might add the funk that you need
William Robinson
some lofi bullshit i made in my bedrooom enjoy (or dont) >indie rock?? >folk?? >pop??
You know, as far as bullshit lofi bedroom acoustic guitar shit goes (I do the same thing), this is actually pretty good. Solid tunes and a good lo-fi aesthetic without it just being shit. Didnt give you any money, but I downloaded it.
thanks, drums aren't my strong point but I'll try. You stuff is very intriguing, it sounds like it was made by AI or something, but it has a very human quality to it, very structured, has progression and melody to some extent. Trains is definitely my favorite track, especially the ending is a very relevant conclusion to the EP. There were some cool moments where you switched the style up seamlessly and I'd love to see more of it. I'd also love to see a narrative or story behind it, right now you're nailing the style but having an actual story behind it (or at least a more obvious one) would bring it to the next level in my opinion. Good shit.
March: some very weird harmonies, i'm not sure what emotion I can tie to it but it's somewhere in the "good old times" area. I actually think it's quite pretty once you consider the larger picture of multiple elements coming together and them reverting back to the old. Merged_Embryo: The intro is a good hook imo, very abstract which makes me curious as the where the track is going. Definitely the last 40 seconds is my favorite part where you kind of go crazy after building up to it for so long. I think the ending kinda comes out of nowhere though. Superorganism: Sick ass drone. Although I think it is a bit headsplitting to listen to. Mind Link: I'm not the best with drone music but at least the sound design is on point. Nue: I really like the structure of the track and the changes in the sections but I think things take a little too long to happen.Float: Despite being one of the more melodic tracks, it definitely feels the weirdest, I know it's trying to say something but I don't know what. It's a nice interlude from the more aggressive sound design in the rest fo the EP. UUH2: I actually do like the idea of how the bass was modulated but I would have like it to be longer so it was more developed. This track is a rollercoaster of different feelings. Mett: reminds me of old cowboy movies, maybe it's the same brass? I think it needs a better ending though. 511 Loer: huh, the melody doesn't make sense, but it does work? I don't get why but I'm not complaining lmao. Tawfik: some nice arabic vocals, I think it needs a bit more progression though. Nue outro: exactly what a corrupted jingle sounds like, pretty impressive. In conclusion I think that on the surface level I would have dismissed this as just another abstract record, but I can clearly see there's some actual though behind it, it has musical ideas, themes, mood shifts. Although not everything makes sense, I can feel it was definitely done on purpose to convey some sort of emotion or reaction.
>People who post links and shill themselves after 5-10 posts without participating in any feedback/discussion are unwelcome and should be ignored.
Matthew Roberts
I recced OHJI. But I’ll remove my shit.
Joseph Walker
It's easy to autorec without even checking if it has been posted here
Landon Hall
Right. Which is why I removed my shit. I was being a fucking dick. Unfortunately I’m stuck at my shit job and can’t play anything loud. Rather than fuck over other people’s shit I should leave it alone archive this shit for later and respect everyone.
V interesting, I like the blend of influences here and for lack of a better term is v "vibey." I guess I'd like to see you expand on the stuff you do here, maybe extend the track add a change of some sort.
Alexander Parker
This is actually super interesting! I like the weird unsettling blend of chords and tonal shit and the song builds very nicely. With a lot of stuff like this, it comes across as more of an idea than a song, so nicely done.
Michael Thomas
iT'D BE COOL IF YOU MADE A PLAYLIST OF YOUR PRIVATE SHIT. i'D GLADLY LISTEN TO IT.