Lyric thread

>genius lyrics
let us decide that buddy

>hands in the air
>just don't care

We entered that door
No more
Could we be
Free much more

Hatred
Scum
Putresence

Fuck you skull
And dissolve you in acid

Hate
Hate
Hate
HATE

I FUCKING HATE YOU CUUUUUUNT

(Guitar solo)

black metal I assume?

Really like this

We're sort of twee, but kind of cross alt-metal

spbp best in the thread. based and redpilled

I don't like how you repeated time in the last two lines at all

get passed me? Or get past me

fuck i wanna post some shit but it's too self-identifying and i dont want yall finding my shit

Introduction
Humanity… All of my suffering on this world has been at the hands of humanity, particularly women.
It has made me realize just how brutal and twisted humanity is as a species. All I ever wanted was to fit
in and live a happy life amongst humanity, but I was cast out and rejected, forced to endure an existence
of loneliness and insignificance, all because the females of the human species were incapable of seeing
the value in me.
This is the story of how I, Elliot Rodger, came to be. This is the story of my entire life. It is a dark story
of sadness, anger, and hatred. It is a story of a war against cruel injustice. In this magnificent story, I will
disclose every single detail about my life, every single significant experience that I have pulled from my
superior memory, as well as how those experiences have shaped my views of the world. This tragedy did
not have to happen. I didn’t want things to turn out this way, but humanity forced my hand, and this
story will explain why. My life didn’t start out dark and twisted. I started out as a happy and blissful
child, living my life to the fullest in a world I thought was good and pure…

Young girls out there
Singing on the streets
From the sunrise
Through to sunset

No way they can be
Dancing on the way
Cars drive
As they play

Woah oh-ho-ho
Woah-oh-oh

We're going long
The first man on the moon
Had the same last name
As drug cheat
Lance Armstrong

Young girls
Flying through the sky
Dancing
Singing

Yeah yeah, cheers
Chug a few of these hot beers
Treat them like they was all still breathing and eating
Eat brownies hold the walnuts extra ganja
All one or all none to quote professor Bronner
Doctor of hot mamas
Sign me on the spot on dot got honours, partner
Spit it on a CD like he did it on graffiti
Ridden like a dead chain letter gone to Haiti
Make it seem easy
It ain't so fun
No wit, more sponsorship to rumble in the jumble
With tongue-fulls of lung flow
Every breath count
Foe like toes feeling very left out
Boy, imagine how the heel feel
Seal a deal
Santorini Black metallic with the alloy wheels
Supercharged by the time he gets to rhyme road
Seen the future retired on an old time boat
With some rice, curry and a bowl of prime gold
Word, heard they stole a vault, hold up, hold my coat
Soldiers for hire, fire
They're full of more ear than you spare a good year tire

wholesome

>fire
>desire

Blue jeans
Got a Coors
AirPods in
We'll hit the city

You won't know
What hit ya
Like Kanye
Crossed with Obistya

Soho
To Togo
We fly it up
Chappaquiddick
You suck my sick

Filth slut
Whore
Swallow my load
Your Dad will still hate you

Ghost of the field
I’ll shake you up
Ghost of the field
I can’t wake up
Ghost of the field
Oh, let me go
Ghost of the field
Everything has gone cold

A will to live is sliced
Blood scatters like mice
Rolling off life’s soul sucking dice
A twisted game of luck
nobody gives a fuck
about an animal skinned alive

will theistic slavery allow for my soul to reap?

Vampire Weekend got pretty dark after Rostam left

Can't say I'm a fan of this. When I read vengeful lyrics written in a pretty basic manner I just imagine a school shooter. While I read it I get the feeling some lines are just there to make a rhyme for the next/previous one and if you want great lyrics that should never be the case. If you're deadset on writing an angry song I'd say lose the megalomaniac persona and add some depth with metaphors, try to write a story. Keep at it though, you'll be surprised at how fast you'll improve.

suck my dikc
you a bich
you a shit
you a snitch
you a cukc
you a fukc
fukc fukc fukc
sukc sukc suck

This has potential, what genre?

in a comfort cage
a warm interior
at a slowing pace
relived experience
back on my face
i'll drown in a puddle

the same embrace
that kept me standing here
fuck it, i'll give
my hands are dirtier
wrapped up my waist
wrapped up in myself

>have a lot to write about
>can't write shit in my native tongue

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>Your Dad will still hate you
Based.

[Chorus]
Ayy AYy ayy Ayyy
Bitch ass niggas gon' get smoked (wit' the 9) (BOOM)
Rich ass niggas gon' get robbed (wit' the 9) (BOOM)
Snitch ass niggas gon' get raped (prison time!) (Ahhhhhhh)

[Verse 1]
I grew up 'round killers so I fuck with killers (REAL NIGGA SHIT !)
I pull up on your bitch and fuck her kitter (KEK GANG !)
I rule this drill shit, ask Lil Duck (QUACK QUACK)
Yo bitch I rule her, and my dick 40 cm (BBC GANG)
My dick's like a ruler, fat like moffugin' E-40 on her (PUT IT ON !)

[Chorus]
Ayy AYy ayy Ayyy
Bitch ass niggas gon' get smoked (wit' the 9) (BOOM)
Rich ass niggas gon' get robbed (wit' the 9) (BOOM)
Snitch ass niggas gon' get raped (prison time!) (Ahhhhhhh)

THEY CALL ME XANAX CUZ BITCH IM A DOWNER
ITS MY PERSONALITY BUT ALSO MY MAUSER
YO SISTER AINT SAFE WHENEVER I AM AROUND HER
BOND WIT THEM BUNS WHEN I SECRETLY POUND HER

>When I read vengeful lyrics written in a pretty basic manner I just imagine a school shooter. While I read it I get the feeling some lines are just there to make a rhyme for the next/previous one and if you want great lyrics that should never be the case.

Yeah I realize it needs tweaking but it's just the latest thing I've been writing, not quite done yet. As for rhyming stuff for the sake of it I actually had the opposite problem, everything is there because it's what came to me and has a personal relevance to the situation I'm writing about but I actually didn't think it all worked well in terms of rhyme scheme and that's mainly what I'm working on changing. Appreciate the criticism though, and I know lyrics like that are automatically going to give off some angst/school shooter cringe, but that's kind of the vibe of the project. Very 90's angst rock/metal inspired.

What genre?

Punk Rock.

Today is gonna be the day
That they're gonna throw it back to you

Stuck here, not sure how to continue

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