Write some epic bars for me so I can become a successful rapper

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There ya go user, go acquire those monetary gains now.

sick burn

dope shit imma make a beat for this

Hit the plug then I'mma rob 'em
Get a check and go autistic
Bitch I started from the bottom
In my city I'm a target
Said I'm broke and then I bought it
Push a button just to start it
Liquor, pills I'm a zombie

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what up is this thing on

my name is OP and im a fucking faggot
I like my dick long and hard like a baguette
never got tested but im probably autistic
im fucked up in the head too, a lil bit sadistic
no religion or morals so my life is hedonistic
I dont have a single positive characteristic

so fucking bunk stop trying to write like your favorite rapper
decent and kinda funny but reeks of white rapper who uses words with more syllables to sound like a "lyricist"

>reeks of white rapper who uses words with more syllables to sound like a "lyricist"

ill take it tho Mr. Critic, wouldve been a crime to not rhyme with autsitc

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List words that rhyme with nigger

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your post is by far the best itt and you shit on op so dont feel too bad

You'd screm i'd shout baby i want this too end

no second chance these rules bend with our intention to mend

but with intention came apprehension and the acension of tension without any comprehension and let me mention your CONSTANT reprehension towards us, so this love could never maintain it's prehension.

What u think?

Just say stupid shit. People buy it up because society is dumb.

I'm over my head
these drugs got me spinning
I love you she said
but you cant stop sniffin
I don't want you dead
but I need you to listen
the old you is something ive been missing

????

ok logic

Ill definitely take that.

Solid hook

thanks user,

I like too write.

I feel too deeply; I cant control it
so much for being sober
waiting for the day its all over
or for the day I'm in that rover.

Im a producer. Used to write dont anymore. But i can eyeball a groovy hook from a mile away.

Your bitch says my dick big like Squidward's nose

I'm hella deranged now
I fuck around and shoot ya whole squad where you hang out i rather get the money than the fake clout imma hit the game and clean house run up on your safe and clean that bitch out

Been looking at mics and shit just so I can fuck around and make a new hobbie/maybe vent through music.

For now I've just been writing. But I feel like itd feel better to actually let it out on a beat or some shit.

I almost went to jail last night, cause I figured Id hold my own

Started not to give a fuck after you quit hitting my phone

thought we were forever, the way you looked into my eyes felt like home

and you know it hurt so bad to find out I was wrong

One minute you love me, the next minute you hate me

you say I make you sick, then why do you date me?

We aint talkin now and i feel that you played me

But i cant front we both know this relationship was far from pushin daisys

with with your pushin you have got me mistaken

it came so far with us all it was, was tribulation

you pushed I pulled to this there was no relation

and dont get me wrong i was part of this mess we were making

You'd screm i'd shout baby i want this too end

no second chance these rules bend with our intention to mend

but with intention came apprehension and the acension of tension without any comprehension and let me mention your CONSTANT reprehension towards us, so this love could never maintain it's prehension.

So I just wanna say im sorry i couldnt hold my composure

poppin them stupid fuckin xans lookin for some sort of closure

i should of put those drugs down, I should of held you closer

but these demons i was fighting had won and now im sorry but its over
COMPLETED ROUGH DRAFT WHAT YALL THINK

lol that's why you fucking suck

its wild seeing what you youngins think is good writing just emulating your favorite rappers and talking about shit you've never lived

why the fuck do you all write about drugs, murder, and robbery or just being a sad faggot?
I know you're all sad faggots but that shit is lame

Are you fucking retarded? I barely listen to logic, but he is a good lyricist. So I wasnt emulating anything.

And I was ONLY writing about shit I've lived.

Go listen to some more tupac lord-farquad.
Times are changing.

Because that kind of music is what makes people millionaires.

Lets see some of your bars.

If it was colors and shapes, the imaginary
Instead of all of this weight that we have to carry
Would you be able to breathe?
And if you could just find where that comfort resides
No distraction or movement that fucks with your mind
Would you let them see?
While beneath the ocean I met with the captain
Who sank to the floor on his ship
All of his passengers escaped to safety
But he was not done with his trip
He looked up and smiled, asked me ''how do you do?''
I told him I'm losing my grip
He told me ''son, if you want to hold onto yourself
Then let yourself slip''

Around blackfriday you can easy catch a recording bundle online that will come with Mic, interface\preamp, flat response monitors, boom arm and backshield for mic and headphones for ~$250-300USD. Picked one up a couple years back for a friend that wanted to get into the craft. The focusrite ones that have Rockville stuff are really good for beginners.

ok well first off logic is wack as fuck
and second my comment was more directed toward other posters, you're one of the people posting gay ass sad shit
welllll if you're making "art" just to make money you're doing it for the wrong reason
huge artists essentially sell their souls to get where they are and none of you will even get the opportunity to do that
and nah I'm good I write for myself i have nothing to prove here

Your points are weak, go find another thread to shit up kiddo.

I never said logic was fire.... but you cant say hes not a good lyricist????

If you do then youre clearly retarded, and don't know what youre talking about....

You can not like someones style but still appreciate theyre talent.

you'll critisize others too but wont show what you have to offer, another reason I think you have no idea what your talking about.

Be gone.

Thanks user, I appreciate the heads up! when is blackfriday again? around Christmas?

good copout without addressing any point at all
you took it as a compliment when I made that comment
eminem can rap but hes wack as fuck too
lol because I have nothing to prove here, doesn't change the fact that yall suck

Immediately after thanksgiving. After going to look for one i found this one for $170 this is the type of thing your gonna look for. Some come with way more than this
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Can you explain why theyre wack??? lol

Eminem is an extremely good lyricist and has insane word play, so I don't know what you mean.

troll else where

Nigger Nigger Nigger Nigger Nigger Nigger

they're corny as fuck, as are most white rappers. sure eminem is good technically but I don't like him

Yooo thanks bro, I'm keeping tabs .

Any specific recommendations? I'm willing too spend 500-600

Black lives matter, white lives splatter. Splatter in her chatter until her brain shatter.

LOL

are they corny cause theyre white?

You have just as much to back up what your saying, so i dont see how its any different. Your talking about writers but have shown no proof your a writer yourself, you have opinions on art but cant show any form of education on art to validate your opinions. Did OP say everyone post quality lyrics i can copy and monetize on with ghost writer creds? No this dude said gimme epic bars i wanna be a rapper which facilitates the idea he wants trash bars to put on a beat that makes people put the song on repeat. Get real or get lost faggot.

The focusrite stuff is amazing. IF you can cop one with the scarlet 2i2 its the best interface for its price, you can plug midi and stereo inputs into the same input so its great for instrument input like guitars or mic inputs. Plus it has 2 inputs so guitar+mic is really ideal for any basic studio setup.

Notes thanks user

I can play acoustic alright, I just don’t have a real good singing voice lol

nah it just so happens most white rappers are corny
dont worry black people can be corny too like hopsin
idk man everyone wanted to call me out for my opinion
I write occasionally for fun but I don't share it because I do it for my enjoyment and I know I'm not great
"education on art" makes no sense anyway it's all subjective, not something you can learn
nothing itt has been "epic" and op is retarded if he couldn't come up with anything better than this trash

It’s not entirely subjective at all... if you think so then you clearly have no say

art is subjective
but I guess you're talking about commercial music designed to appeal to the lowest common denominator just to make money anyway

I feel like I’m arguing with an autist. Please go back to college

So your telling me that music class isnt a thing???? Or any basic crash course for any artform?? How about learning from experience as you do it??? You can be educated about any subject. Just because art is subjective does not mean it cant be viewed objectively first before its views subjectively. As a person that went to uni for art education i can say it helps you understand things in a way an uneducated artist does not. I have met people that are self taught and played instruments better than people i went to school with that learned professionally. That being said once i showed them the objective side of what they was doing it opened up more artistic avenue for them because they better understood things they had already figured out on their own.

If art was REALLY subjective you fucking faggots wouldnt have made the artists of the new sonic redo the whole fucking movie like a bunch of crybabies.

art is subjective
you cannot change that fact
sure music class is a thing but every decent artist I've met is self taught because art is about self expression
just read that you went to art school so now I get it :) gotta make sure mommy and daddy didn't waste their money on a useless degree

/thread

Thanks user. add me on Kik

Username: johnathandoe33

lmao what? cant speak for everyone itt but I dont give a shit about that movie no matter how it looks

Sure it can be subjective, but do you wanna be an incompetent unsuccessful artist or do you wanna be the opposite. Because if you wanna be the opposite 9/10 times it’s not as subjective as you’d think.

it absolutely is 100% subjective in its purest form, in any medium
art is not about "success" and if you believe it is you are doing it for the wrong reasons
get a fucking job if you want to be "successful" and get rich

I’m on 4chisel shit postin’
Not par token’
Not kush pokin’
I’m on 4chisel shit postin’ ...

Pouchi pouchi pouchIIII i like spaghetti with no pasta sauce
My friend is a hippie and a hobo with with colossal loss
I can't get him to pay for me
But at least i can get into the state army
Rate on 10

My god, how about I take a shit on your face and drag you through broken glass, that’d sure be art.

yeah it could be if that was your intention in creating it
now you're understanding!

You are fucking retarded wow

explain please :)

Yes art can be entirely subject, 99% of the time in today’s age it is not. Just because it’s not doesn’t mean it’s not art.

Quit trying to be a smartass

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Paid for my degree myself. I only learned music theory though not any actual music shit. Just how notes and scales and everything work together, something you cant self teach. I have several close friends that are self taught successful artists. How i know you have no idea what your talking about is the fact that you really think music is only subjective. Yes self expression is important, but that does you absolutely no good if you have no idea how to make other people understand what your expressing. That is the objective side of art. If you dont do that part you wont do any good because nobody will understand or give a single fuck about what you make no matter what artform it is. You cant make sculptures of animals if you dont study how they look first, you cant paint a picture of something that doesnt exist in our world and expect people to know what it is, you cant make a song about something painful unless its a pain you have went though. These are all forms of art education as well as objective views of art. The idea that i understand music less because i went to school for it is just redundant. Go troll another thread

And what I mean by it’s not in today’s age is that a lot if not most art is created to for a specific targeted audience.

yes because most of the art we are exposed to now is commercial, and meant to make money
but art itself in it's pure form is self expression and totally subjective
I'm not being a smartass I'm being honest. btw you cant /thread with your own post newfag

again, art is about self expression
when you do it for other people or for monetary gain you're doing it wrong

Fucking this. This is the objective side of art. This guy gets it.

>your doing art wrong
I had no idea there was a right and wrong way to do art??? lmao you just went full retard.

Never trust a ho they always lie
Nigger bitch cunt commit drive-by
Fair enough virgin's sister cry
Maybe for you it's better to die
Rate on 10 my famous gangsta style

Okay I can agree with you on that.

So basically your just some incel coming to the thread to critique everyone else’s writing with no plan to show your own because your actually a shittier artist then they are.

But don’t worry what I’m saying is
Subjective

It’s been me, the one talking about wanting to buy a mic and shit.

Add me on Kik if u were the user helping me: johnathandoe33

Lafe suck
im in lok lok lok
Efribody mi friend
Till he end end end
Rate on 10 my glorious mumble style

creating art for personal gain is a perversion of what art actually is
nah I'm just here to provide some insight on how much yall suck at writing and all basically wrote the same shit
I never claimed to be an artist though and I already said I write for myself because I enjoy doing it :)
I know I'm not great at it but that's why I don't go around acting like I am

also incel lol you guys need to come up with better insults rather than the one size fits all "incel" and "cuck"

Like I said youre retarded and have no idea what your taking about

Done wasting my time with u

you don't even know the proper way to use your and you're, I'm not too phased by your opinion
already wasted plenty lmfao

All you niggas wack and uh
Y’all trippin, don’t act like ya
Faggots can shit on my vernacular
Suckin red rocket like Dracula
Face, it I’m spectacular

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Nobody can ever define what art REALLY is, because as you said it is self expression, art is what you want it to be. BUT it is not 100% subjective. There are objective sides to every artform. One could argue that getting people to buy shitty music is an art in and of itself and not simply a perversion of art as you said.

Hardest bars in this thread

10/10 you are a genius i want to be your friend
Meh 2/10

Look at you hair, what the hell was you thinking?
Your barber must be blind or must always be blinking.

let's just leave it at: there is art, then there is commercial art
commercial art is a perversion of art as organized religion is a perversion of spirituality

I browse 4 chan
Everyday of summer
No regret ever

I poop in the soup
mypoop make loops
I eat da poop, and I feel goood
i poo poop, zoop moop doot

LMAOOOO the bait is so real. Religion and spirituality are 2 different things, your relating music and graphic art. They are both art but one is visual and one is sonic. Religion and spirituality are both about higher consciousness but one is inward the other is outward. Just because you cant invalidate my points doesnt mean you just get to change the bait you silly troll.

Oof this guys obviously a ghost writer

Thanks homie, appreciate it

While I could leave you sick lines,
I just ain't go no rhymes,
I'm a white boy, whatddya expect,
Ima colonise Africa

-ER

Real recognize real my negro

I tried to keep it inside,
The feelings I have for Africa,
But when I see these monkeys outside,
I apologise cause they might be nice guys

-ER

Holy fuck are you seriously that delusional???????? Please be fucking around lol...

I’m fat, my parents are gay
I can’t say, how i feel anyway
The sun is black, the trees are dead
I’m fed up, my soul is dead
i’m ugly too
i poop green poo
which is probably unhealthy too
i’m dying
i’m emotionally trying
to not die
and live life
cause that’s not dying

ok newfag cya I got shit to do
keep posting paragraphs on Yea Forums like anyone cares

ps you're wrong and clearly do not understand metaphor

damn straight

strong MF Doom influence

All the porn on this website disgusts me,
Yet still it fuckin' excites me,
Ima bust a nut all up in yo ass
Cause this is my rap and I'm horny

-ER

I don't know the difference between rap and poetry,
I'm white, brought up in a nice country,
I ain't never been down to the hood,
Where my bitches at make me feel good

-ER

I'm bout to get up, get workin',
But first, mcdoobreyfurkin,
These lines just keep getting better,
Now you got em stop bein a wetter

Uh
Yeah
Now nigga go get me my glock,
I got bitches to shoot, egos to dock,
Rolling round in my hummer,
Tinted windows, shiny 22s,
You'll know I'm coming when you hear the rumble,
The V8 it starts making you shake,
I've ran out of lit lines,
Maybe I should just get an office job

-ER

Eat shit OP
You ain't a rapper like me
My flow's so clean like pg-13
I post in your dreams, my roasts are so mean
Now your turkey's in the oven at the highest degree
Can you feel the heat?
You Yea Forumstards couldn't see far
If I wore your glasses fucking sally by the seashore
My knee's sore from kicking these whores
Out my door
Said their sons don't get off of Yea Forums no more

*insert obnoxious hi hat triplets*
>scredda *imitate a car screeching to a halt with your mouth, "skrrt!"*
>scredda (woooh!)
>scredda (yuh!)
>scredda (who?)
>I said (You!)
>erry day's sober when bitches be trippin
>scredda makes dem thots get dippin
>hos smack crack when dey see da rollie on da wrist an'
>can' say no wid dem M's I'm bankin'
>'thought I'd stop strappin gats when da time wen'
>bu'da glock never left ma waistband
>shit gets real bud' im fuckeed up t'iff you think im bout get wasted
>Got da scredda now gimmi a fuck (get it)
>Got da bitches now gimmi a fuck (get it)
>Got a story now that'd I'm hordin'
>Sell me a future cause I'm shit outta fucks
>Scredda (Brrap)
>Scredda (Cash register dinging)
>Scredda (Woooh!)
>Scredda (Skrrrt!)
>Say who (U!)

this is what my brain hears on a daily basis and if this inaccurate I must be out of touch

>1.2 million plays on Jewify

dubs of holy validation