Making a comic

Making a comic
What do you guys think?

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I think too many people make comics these days when they could be doing much more productive things with their time.

Ch 2

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looking good, op

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Ch 3

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I think it depends, whats more productive when its entertainment?

Thanks dude, thats all i got so far. I'm still trying to find the writing style

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:)

Bump

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I think its pretty good

Thanks man, i wanna make more chapters before i release them online.

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Op you're a fag but I like your comic keep it up!

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Best compliment I've had

>"I'MA"
Idk why exactly, but using this word feels reallly cringey to me.
I guess it's that it's just not something anyone would ever actually say in real life.
It feels like forced cuteness, and like your pandering to an audience lr something.

I think the worst mistake a writer can make is to write for an audience. You should things you genuinely like, that entertain you. I think it's more fun writing this way too.

Overall though I really like it. The joke of that second one made me laugh. The mother lies to her kid to spare her feelings, and only ends up fucking her over as a result. The art is cute too.

Please make more.

Thanks for the advice man
Yeah i'll try to write more and make as many as i can