>"I'MA" Idk why exactly, but using this word feels reallly cringey to me. I guess it's that it's just not something anyone would ever actually say in real life. It feels like forced cuteness, and like your pandering to an audience lr something.
I think the worst mistake a writer can make is to write for an audience. You should things you genuinely like, that entertain you. I think it's more fun writing this way too.
Overall though I really like it. The joke of that second one made me laugh. The mother lies to her kid to spare her feelings, and only ends up fucking her over as a result. The art is cute too.
Please make more.
Thomas Young
Thanks for the advice man Yeah i'll try to write more and make as many as i can