Onpu wants u to play my mario maker level ;^P ~ <3

Onpu wants u to play my mario maker level ;^P ~

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I don't have mario maker I only have maiden maker but im sure it's really nice tho and i like your level ID

Your fortune: Outlook good

onpu is not real

I wish I cud see it fren, but I have no switch...

Your fortune: Bad Luck

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It's very polished. It's plain to see you put a lot of time and effort into it. But don't you think maybe it relies just a little too heavily on fake challenge?

By which, of course, I mean tricking the player. Making the level seem harder than it is by withholding information until the last minute.

Here are all the areas for improvement I could find:
>you can't tell there's a hidden question block at the beginning with a giant monty mole in it until you activate it trying to dodge the giant paragoomba
>you can't tell the pipe at the right side of the first screen produces spinies until you're too late to avoid them
>you can't tell the thwomp at the beginning of the second screen will crush you until you kill the banzai bill
>you can't tell the pipe at the end of the second screen spawns enemies until they kill you (i never found out what enemies they are but they look like monty moles)
>you don't really have time to see the spike floor at the beginning of the third screen until you fall on it (but thankfully i was already holding y+right so it didn't matter)
>you can't tell there's a thwomp hidden offscreen at the end until it comes down on you if you jump
>if you jump a little later you will hit an invisible question block (which you can't see until you hit it) and fall to your death

I bet if you thought pretty hard about it, you could find ways to convert these fake challenges into genuine challenges. However, your level relies SO heavily on fake challenge, that it gives me the impression that it might have been an intentional choice. Which, too be tbh, comes off as kind of disrespectful of your players' time and energy. Though I'm sure you didn't mean it to be.

Btw i still can't get past what I presume is the very last challenge in the level, i.e. the invisible question blocks. Not because they keep tripping me up, but because I literally intellectually can't figure out how to avoid them. I'm stumped. How do you get to the flagpole?

Never mind, I figured it out. You have to jump on the blocks on the right to gain enough height to jump on the lakitus. I kept trying that, but I thought that couldn't have been it because the spinies they throw block the way. Turns out it just takes luck.

Is this Mario Maker 1 or 2 (I assume this matters)?

i think its 2, there's a level on 2 with this id and le gutsybird has the world record on it

Only have the first one :(

*Taeks notes* Thamk u fren, dis was beary helpflel to me!! Next tiem I will try harder to warn da player b4 I gib dem a difficult challenge!!! Dis wuz my first leblel so I didn kno any better :^P

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