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may i please have feedback on this? i uploaded it a few minutes ago. thank you.
May i please have feedback on this? i uploaded it a few minutes ago. thank you
Jace Bennett
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Oliver Peterson
Pretty good I enjoyed it
Jack Hall
Pretty chill user. Sounds like your picking hand could use a bit more consistency in how you strike chords
Camden Perry
thank you
yeah probably. i didn't realize how poppy my pick was until after i recorded it either, it's a little more attack-y than i like it.
David Myers
Not half bad my guy, I enjoyed it
Adrian Green
thanks man
Asher Harris
where the porn ?
Xavier Kelly
pretty solid, maybe start practicing with a metronome a bit
added a vocal track for you
clyp.it
Ryder Jones
lmfao i love it man, that was fucking awesome.
Jeremiah Ramirez
huh/
Robert Morris
Has a very 1997'ish Creed sound to it. I dig it.
BTW... show more of that beautiful ass in the pic you posted!
Aiden Taylor
WITH ARMS WIDE OPEN
hell yeah dude, i love old creed lol
Tyler Barnes
Fuck yeah man. Creed gets a lot of hate, but I have always liked them. Good stuff. And thanks for more of that beautiful ass! Please keep posting if you have more. She's wonderful.
Sebastian Nguyen
hell yeah
i have nothing better to do so i also drowned it in synths
clyp.it
Dominic Allen
yeah i got more
John Peterson
dang dude you're good
Aiden Baker
she's amazing.
Yours?
Ethan Adams
You are a legend. Thanks! Who is she? Girl you know? or just some chick online? Either way, shes fantastic.
Austin Morris
nah she's not mine, just some guy posted in some cuck thread years ago and i saved em lol.
Aiden Myers
Well... It's neat for a concept, needs development to become a song. The riff is repetitive as is. You play nice.
Brody Johnson
i wish i knew her lol. just some girl her cuck bf posted her years ago
John Peterson
I don't blame you
any more with face?
Ryder Perry
yeah i probably didn't need to repeat it 3 times. i just kinda left it because i think i want to come back to it, add some different instrumentation, maybe i can think of some lyrics to accompany it. just been in a huge fucking rut lately.
thank you for the feedback.
Hudson Thompson
yeah from the front, they're not as magical imo but here you go man
John Williams
That dude is a lucky mother fucker to have that as a girlfriend.
Robert Ross
or whoever is her current bf, he probably was posting her because she ditched him or something. who knows.
Elijah Young
Totally man, nice going with the creative process so far. Keep at it, dude. You're doing great.
Justin Walker
True. Fair enough point. A girl that hot probably can be picky with who she wants to fuck. She probably did ditch him.
Zachary Wright
Fuck off underage newfag
Jack Nelson
Well aren't you just a ray of fucking sunshine.
Leo Barnes
who knows, i'm glad that guy left us with his treasure trove though lol.
Evan Ramirez
Not your personal blog, nobody cares about your shit music. Just go back to r*ddit.
John Jones
You and me both!
Brody Martinez
Kys
Charles Fisher
well interest seems to be petering out man, got a couple more
Anthony Parker
>Kys
Confirmed literal underage newfag.
You have to go back, maybe listen to everyone telling you to fuck off on the forums you spam your garbage on.
Lucas Nelson
and interest has official petered out :/
i do have a couple more pics but the best have already been posted.
Justin Davis
i know it doesn't mean anything to anyone except me but i didn't really think i'd ever break the 5,000 plays milestone. i know it's not much but i don't really mean anything to anyone so it means something to me
Liam Hill
I didnt click your link cus im lazy as fuck but grats . Pretty cool, user
Wyatt Bennett
Today OP was a bro
Carson Baker
Very nice, OP. I'm not amusic expert, but I'm downing a few beers and was looking for something to listen to while doing so.
Thank you very much :)
Dylan Lopez
thanks bro
yeah i'll pass nudes forward lol
thanks man, hope you're having a good night
Sebastian Johnson
I am. Cheers!
>pic of random ass to cheer this thread up
Carter Cruz
I will assist in the cheering of this thread with ass
Adam Cruz
very nice makes me feel like im at the sunshine cost
Grayson Baker
Good!
Jaxson Cook
Ryan Richardson
Alexander Campbell
hell yeah epic ass
Nathaniel Campbell
Caleb Allen
Landon Nguyen
This is Yea Forums so I was expecting crap, but it's pretty solid. Sounds a bit too lo-fi to me, but that's in these days. Like others mentioned, your timing could use a little work. Maybe put some percussion in your headphones while you play.
Sebastian Morgan
I dig it op. Reminds me of mid 90s stuff like soul asylum
Brandon Brooks
thanks man, man chillin at the sunshine coast sounds pretty great right about now
yeah the timing is a problem, i'm really undisciplined, i'd rather play than practice so i never play with a metronome.
thanks man. mid 90's were good to me.
well i better head to bed, it's almost 4 am and i need to leave to work by 8 lol. thanks everyone who listened and gave feedback, hope everyone has a great week.
Ryan Turner
pretty good my dude