It's so bad I thought this post was either a troll or a joke, but here is your response anyway.
Camden Murphy
Not trolling I'm serious about my music or I wouldn't be paying $35 a day on reddit ads but thanks for listening
Levi Ramirez
probably trolling but here's some advice: tell your drummer to practice and also record with a metronome through headphones, his tempo is all over the place. also your vocals are okay but aren't really syncing up with the music rhythm-wise in certain parts. getting your drummer to use a metronome might help with this too. also some of the notes you sang were a little flat/sharp or basically slightly out of key in some parts. not bad, i like the idea of a grunge revival type band, you all just need to refine your technique a bit.
Camden Phillips
You should stop wasting your money. I work for twitch and I'm pretty sure reddit's demographic is largely similar to ours, and literally 90% of our users use adblock. There is no way your 35 dollars a day is actually hitting 35 dollars worth of eye balls.
Nathan Robinson
You look like a young Weird Al Yankovic.
Elijah Russell
Thanks for checking it out I don't feel it's fair to blame the drummer I can't play to a metronome to save my life so I just record at whatever pace feels right to me and then send it to an e drummer. It's not their fault it's mine for being rhythmically retarded. Thanks for checking it out and the feedback
Oliver Myers
hey i remember when i saw one of your posts several months ago. congratulations youre internet famous now! too bad your music is still awful and not awful in a fun way but you already knew that
Thomas Foster
YO I WAS JUST ABOUT TO TYPE THAT.
Anthony Nguyen
yeah in my opinion it would be better just to save money and invest in a quality video editor for a well-done stylized music video to throw up on youtube and spam everywhere.
Jeremiah Smith
It gets the views I pay for and a little extra. I pay 25 cents a click usd and that gets me 100 clicks a day and I usually get more views than that from people listening to multiple songs. It's better than nothing I'm flattered by that
Isaiah Bennett
So you understand you are untalented and the music sucks
Aaron Evans
HIVEMIND
William Reed
Wants to be successful music artist. Doesn't have rhythm... Why don't you try doing something you're good at...
Bentley Taylor
Idk some people seem to like it I can't please everyone I know it's not perfect I'm just Tryna find a niche that will accept me for me Reddit ads have been good to me I got reposted a bunch of times and I get like 200 views a day from it but it gets shown to like 100k people a week
Alexander Garcia
He's a retarded entitled zoomer
Luis Bennett
OH okay that totally makes sense. Yeah basically the cardinal rule to recording is to always record the drums first. Most professional albums are recorded that way. I do know one album that was recorded with the guitar first but the guitarist used a metronome and so it still sounds pretty good. (but not as good as their other albums where the drums were recorded first like they are supposed to be)
David James
Art is subjective I like my riffs and melodies I get that it's not perfect but some people dig it
Jason Davis
I can't play along to drum tracks it feels weird and fucks with my natural flow and sounds choppy and wrong to me (more so than what I'm doing)
Ryder Walker
No you aren't you fucking faggot you expect to make money off of absolute trash and cry about it
interesting, yeah i might try that reddit ad thing temporarily for some of my music then, didn't realize it could be that effective.
Julian Hall
I never asked for any money I just wanna create art and have it appreciated and not gone to waste I just wanna make a name for myself and make a better life for myself
Cameron Wilson
"I can't play to a metronome to save my life" is all you need to know about this guy.
Blake Davis
Music is barely subjective. It falls into two broad categories: 1. Wide diverse sounds interesting/ unpredictable (classical/ jazz) 2. Ultra predictable, simple, easy to understand (pop music, modern rock)
Number 1 requires you to actually be good at music (which you state you aren't) Number 2 requires you to have rhythm or program a drum machine.
You could just grow up and get marketable skill, since you'll never compete with a simple AI designed to manipulate dumb people.
This is my calling and passion I don't wanna do anything else. There's enough perfect art in the world maybe something imperfect makes it different
Jeremiah Thomas
who is in your picture? i wanna know sauce on this ugly oscar the grouch haired lookin tranny
Nolan Morris
So you're a loser. Gotcha. Well enjoy being poor for the rest of your life. Do me a favor and don't vote for the state to steal my money because you made irresponsible decisions.
Easton Cruz
do you know how many people think this way and go no where? you are no different and you certainly arent talented enough to go anywhere
Chase Kelly
That's me
Charles Roberts
Well I gotta try
Alexander Peterson
you're so fucking clueless that you're capping reddit
Brandon Moore
This is hot fucking trash. Maybe your shitty garage rock had the slightest chance of being popular 30 years ago but this is honestly just embaressing. Most musicians who develop a unique style usually understand the theoretical aspects of music before recording a shitty slopfest. Play to a click for fucks sakes
Jason Russell
It doesn't work for me I don't understand rhythm at all I just do what sounds right to me. Thanks for checking it out I know not everyone likes it but some people do and I'm just Tryna find people who accept me for me
Joseph Martin
Jesus Christ you are legit retarded aren't you? Do you think any that nonsense you typed means something? Stop it. You arent going to make a living off of music, realize it before it's too late.
Cameron Jones
This is the epitome of narcissism. You suck the way you are. Change yourself to be a better person. That's literally the point of life. You start out shitty, and you get better at it.
Matthew Allen
You aren't trying, you're being a douchebag.
John Allen
I don't care I have dreams an I gotta follow them no matter what the haters say
Noah Mitchell
Your voice... Is not my cup of tea, yeah let's stick with that. But then again I'm not a rock fan but, still, keep on rocking man. Big boi support.
Like I said I can't please everyone I just wanna find people who accept me for who I am I spend hours/days/weeks Tryna find riffs melodies words etc. it's not perfect but I do try and I'm passionate about this
Zachary Howard
And your dream is to just spam the same shit in Yea Forums everyday
Henry Bell
no you dont thats called growing up
you can tell you are still immature not just by how nieve you are but by the fact you have a haircut only a 12 year old would think is cool
Xavier Campbell
Thx for checking it out the 2 biggest criticisms I always get are my voice and timing they're not my strong suits but I did my best
Luke Thompson
That's just sad
Blake Cox
That's a negative way of thinking If I never tried to follow my dreams I'd never achieve anything Sure I might fail but at least I know I tried my best
Joseph Cox
any time you ask someone what they think of your music just know that if they say its good they are humoring you.. that way they dont have to tell you it sucks to your face
also what is with the shitty feminist hair?
Lincoln Lopez
You seriously are developmentally disabled aren't you?
Brandon Evans
Im proud af of what I've made even if everyone thinks it's trash
Michael Lewis
Yuh I'm autistic
Joseph Moore
Why don't you try to gain a skill that produces value to others. If you get compensated very little for music, then you're contributing little to society. Try contributing something people want.
Colton Morgan
I just wanna express myself and make art
William Diaz
spoken like a true autist this may be true if you had any talent this is like william hung trying to follow his dreams
you dont realise how cringey and aweful your music is and that is just sad
Julian Rodriguez
I love art. I made a picture. It sucks and nobody wants it. Therefore I should get good at making art, so people will like it. Or I should quit making art, and do something else.
It's your choice, but if you remain shitty you'll literally be a waste of a human being.
Like I said I can't please everyone and I don't want to I just wanna find people who appreciate me for what I have to offer it's a big world and there's loads of people who have said they dug my music
Christopher Clark
You do you man don't let anyone discourage you from creating what you want if it makes you happy
Jordan Torres
No one is stopping you from doing that, but you aren't good and it's not going to be something you can live off of.
Austin Baker
I'm willing to bet anyone that likes your music was either being polite, or is also a shitty human being.
Jace Campbell
I gotta follow my dreams no matter what people on Yea Forums say Nah man people have different tastes I like it anyway
Grayson Smith
Bump
Jayden Mitchell
I listened to Abilify. The vocals don't really cut through the mix in a few parts and the rythm is way off here and there. I wouldn't recommend recording to a metronome but it is crucial to practice with one.
Benjamin Moore
Thanks for checking it out. I feel the rhythm has to be a little off with the guitar to kind of go under my vocals and for how I want it to. I sing while I play and record (vocals not recording) to set the right rhythm but yeah I know my songs are out of time I don't understand that stuff no matter how hard I tried and I feel it messes with my natural flow of how I want it to sound Thanks for listening though
Anthony Nguyen
I'm a musician and I also sometimes play for hours curious if I can make a new song. The difference between you and I is that even with my 11 years of guitar playing and my advanced technique I'm smart enough to understand that I need to learn more theory/scales/pieces and work way harder to be able to achieve a sound I want. You're not going anywhere by literally fucking around on a piece of wood and steel.
Liam Ward
i made this last night guys, please be gentle. i started writing lyrics 3 days ago. this is very much a rough draft, bare bones skeleton. none of the background track is finished.
I'm already achieving the sound I want it may be basic but it expresses what I want it to. Keep up the good work Cool stuff keep creating man I like the drums and lyrics
Gavin Perry
yeah they were lying to you no one is going to be honest unless its a platform like this if you arent going to believe us that this music is god awful then you are simply being delutional and you dont really care about anyone opinion and you are doing this all for your self
Joshua Taylor
have you ever heard of the Shaggs? check out “philosophy of the world”
I like it I love the shaggs someone who commented on sc said my music was like the shaggs doing grunge
Jason Davis
Bump
Eli Morris
The more humble you are the more natural the progression of your success will be. Instead of purchasing ad space, get involved with an online community; other creators will probably appreciate the work that you do if they personally understand who you are. Another way I see it is that advertisements are seen in a negative light, at least to myself, so you're appearing as someone who is paying to be seen above others, whereas if you just continue doing what you love and don't try to force your work onto others, sooner or later you'll get a hit; people will just find it. You don't need to broadcast yourself to people you don't care about, chances are they won't care about you, either.
Appreciate this but I have to advertise I posted on mu in SoundCloud threads for a whole year and that was a dead end. Reddit ads are good I get mixed feedback but I think everything I'm doing with the internet and stuff is interesting
Christian Bailey
I used to play live too but I moved in w my dad in a small town to save on rent and pay for ads
Parker Cook
Bump
Jason Ortiz
Bump
Jace Long
I do is a blatant ripoff of about a girl by nirvana
Jordan Jones
the melody and chords are different
Logan Fisher
THe lyrics are similar bc of the I do but the melodys different and the chords are different too
Jeremiah Rivera
I dont care, you have to be a real faggot to try and act like you just didn't copy the song directly. Itd be better if you just did a cover if youre going to copy so much from a song. I'm not saying no one shluld be influenced by a song but you gotta be creative to make it not so obvious.
Gavin Rivera
Idk if this is in the right key but
About a girl: melody A cd fgf
I do Cd df age
Xavier Hernandez
what happened? did btfo'd you already so you come here seeking validation? in the very heart of the cesspool? That's what I call a last ditch effort of salvaging your already decimated ego.
See my reply w the notes idk if they're in the same key but the only thing I copied was I was influenced a bit by the lyrics but the chords and melody are both different
Its called a different key and because its a different key does not mean its not a ripoff dude.
Mason Parker
I’m too musically retarded to know what key it’s in but if u wanna transpose then both to the same key I’d be interested to see the notes the melody is totally different to my ears
Luke Foster
Starting with a on both melodies:
I do: Ab bd f#dc#
About a girl A CD fgf
Kayden Watson
Just keep being a liar and dishonest with yourself or others. I would not of said it sounded like about a girl if it didnt sound like it. You obviously already knew a connection before I even said anything.
Eli Adams
See The lyrics are similar and I took inspiration from them the chords and melody are different
Connor Nguyen
Ok, i give up. You will not have any sucess music wise if you cant write your own song or even fucking copy one correctly
Levi Kelly
I wasn't Tryna copy anything see my reply I transposed them both into the same key and they're different
Michael Johnson
Bump
Matthew Fisher
Bump
Asher Foster
Bump
Dominic Bailey
weird al yankovic wants his image back
Adam Watson
I’m weird als son
Liam Anderson
nice dubs,
is he a mean dude? when i met him he was very rude
Yeah me n the hamster found love and now there’s lil hamster babies running around with weird als hair
Nathan Taylor
no thats not what happens. the sanitation workers really didnt approve so you pack up your accordian and have to move to a city in ohio where you live in a tree and you work in a nasal decongestic factory and you play on the company bowling team