IN OEN DAY

IN OEN DAY

REWIA

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please for sake of my sanity what should i change???? be specific!!!!!

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thank youuuuu desu

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I don't get it, he didn't change anything

showing admiration by reposting

he just put the crane to the middle a bit for some reason...

tried my best..

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nice also the bottom part of 令 shouldn't go past the end part of >
sorry for the wait

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ok, now the top kanji turned out beautifully this time.
Yeah, thanks for the tip, I had to look it up to remind myself.

Here's a tip from my end: the box on the right side of 和 should be small. Smaller than the left hand part.

Oh, and on the left hand part, try making the middle horizontal line the longest and the others shorter

so like this ?

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Box - smaller and closer to the rice grain
rice grain - middle horizontal line the longest. all others very short.

well, apart from the vertical line, that's long as well

Put it in your calendars

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