Just looking for some opinions on a thing I’m working on

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The mirror doesn't work. Awful/10.

post more info if you want opinions faggot

It’s just a small little game. Two chapters so far. You play as a girl who awakens from a car crash, and in order to determine if what happened is true or not, you must collect memories along the way.

Six are planned once the game is finished, by the way.

You should add a ceiling tile stretch to the top field above the wall and don't put side doors like that, it look retarded, but just push one empty tile inside the wall.

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Thank you for your criticism. I appreciate it. I’m fairly new at this anyways.

He could also just remove the gray.

The gray is unfortunately part of the wall, however.

A cg scene from the mirror.

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I assume this is either VX or MV? If you want feedback upload thegame/project so we can play it.
inb4 dolphin porn

MV, yes. I’ve got a demo up on itch.
fizzyallison.itch.io/valhalia-diary-the-first-pages

Don’t use rpgmaker first off

Your map design is horrid. Why are you using a front-facing door for an side-exit?

Please play some other RPG Maker games to get a good feel for what makes for a good RPG map design.

I’m going out of my way to ensure I use as few of the defaults as possible.

Good job OP. The layout could be cleaned up and the door needs to be rotated though. Also there are two mirrors in the room and that seems redundant

Don’t use rtp assets at all.
Also while realistic room sizes don’t always work great in rpgmaker, you can definitely make that room a lot smaller, it’s way to open and empty for a bedroom

i am saving these for when you release your game i will #cancel you for browsing alt-right 4channel

I’ll surely replace the entire tileset provided I can at least commission someone for a tileset. For now though, the defaults are all I’ve got that are fine for commercial use.

>commercial use
Don't aim for commercial use if this is your first project, aim for making a finished game.
Once you've proven you can do that, you can start thinking about selling your games.

This is basically my second so far. And yeah, finishing it is the goal. I’ve been working on it as regularly as I can.

What appears to be a mirror up north is actually a window, by the way.

I’ve taken the lessons I’ve learned from my first game (which was horrible) and applied them to this one.