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cringe writing you mean

Dies irae is on par with legends like Schopenhauer.

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The prose in Dies Irae is terrible, pages upon pages of unnecessary fluff that says nothing at all. The setting is boring as fuck and the actual interesting aspects of the universe, like the throne, don't get enough spotlight. Most characters are uninteresting. It presents itself as if it has themes like the eternal recurrence and general Nietzschean ideas, but it's all as surface level as possible, it's really just flair without any depth. If you want an urban fantasy battle VN, just reread F/SN. If you want a VN with actual GOAT writing, read pic related.

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Reminder that Light killed itself making a mobage that never came out.

>It presents itself as if it has themes like the eternal recurrence and general Nietzschean ideas, but it's all as surface level as possible, it's really just flair without any depth.
It goes hard into eternal recurrence because it's essentially a retelling of the Odyssey, Ulysses, Wagner's Ring Cycle, and more.

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>grand delusion
>not delusion of grandeur
It doesnt even make sense. Who did this translation?

It's being ironic

let's overcome reality

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Wilhelm's not very smart or well-spoken, it fits his character.

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Those mean different things.

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I cant believe JSLs conned me into thinking Dies Irae was good bros...

>t.supporting character

Wheres that one visual novel where they're talking and the dude just goes "that doesnt explain the Nigger though". I think about that often

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king arthur is cute

fucking mangagamer

>fuck you, I really want you to die

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>wait... someone is knocking at the door....

>Oh my God, Ed covered in blood... coming to kill me... locked myself in the bathroom... he's gone crazy... he keeps shouting we'll be together forever and he'll never let me go... someone please hel...
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Bump

>F/SN
You went full retard at the end.

Wilhelm didn't go to school user. He's not supposed to be well-spoken like the other user said.

>asking for help by writing it in her diary
So fucking stupid when games to this

itchy tasty

And if you have a brain, avoid wasting 50 hours on the garbage that is Trannineko.

"I let you gang rape my wife and cut her into five pieces, is that something a sane man would do?"

Nothing short of poetry

>those diary entries in the sewers
>I heard something, what was that? oh well, guess I'll keep going in
>think I saw something, people are missing, dying and going crazy
>AAAAAAAA I'M BEING EATEN HELP ME AAAAAAAA IT HURTS EEEEEEEEEK AAAAA OUCH AAA (the writing trails off the end of the page)

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>Game does this
>It's clear its actually been written by the killer in postscript.

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Sauce

Based as fuck

nonono, maybe it's an "Aah!" of suprise!

>king arthur is cute

S-sauce.

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>Dies Irae
I will never listen to the retards on this site again. I wish I got my time back from this kusoge.

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kino

Wait what the fuck, Conjueror fucking DIED?

Evenicle

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Best Girl

lolicatfags need not apply

oh my goodness, is this senran kagura but with actual porn!?

No, it's literally Rance, but with a protagonist who isn't a completely irredeemable asshole.

>If you want an urban fantasy battle VN, just reread F/SN.
I also think the setting of FSN is really boring. Fuyuki is inspired by so many interesting places but the city itself is one of the most bland shit ever

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>He didn't play Evenicle Rance

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>I wonder how Evenicle Rance will be
>How will Rance avoid getting a black ring instantly
>Oh

Better than the full game honestly.

It is, yeah. I didn't say F/SN's setting was better, just that the VN itself is better.

Do you never have rambling conversations with your bros that cover multiple different topics? I feel like this excerpt is more so written by someone or from the perspective of a character that has no friends.

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this

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test

post the foreknowledge one

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Weird thread idea but okay

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heh

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based DiesCHAD of high IQ

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"Why did I follow him? I don't know. Why do things happen as they do in dreams? All I know is that when the Wanderer beckoned I was compelled to follow. From that point on we travelled together, into the East. Always...into the East..."

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I want this to have a proper anime adaptation, i can't read vns

Didn't it get one last year?

It's the modern tsukihime anime fiasco

No adaptation will ever be as good as the source, especially for most VNs. The DI adaptation had some good music, even if it was mostly remixes.
It was shit since they used their budget that was built up for a movie and tried to spread it out for 11 episodes instead. If they decided to just make one good movie, it probably would have been great.

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Finished all 3. What should I read next?

>Who did this translation?
Some ESL faggot. The translation is awful.

read Hollow Ataraxia
use the voice patch and select original OPs in the options menu

Reminder that you have to read all these to even attempt understanding Dies Irae beyond a surface level:

A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man by James Joyce
Anna Karenina by Leo Tolstoy
As I Lay Dying by William Faulkner
Beowulf by Unknown
Catch-22 by Joseph Heller
Chess by Stefan Zweig
Crime and Punishment by Fyodor Dostoevsky
Divine Comedy by Dante
Don Quixote by Miguel de Cervantes Saavedra
Ex Libris: Confessions of a Common Reader by Anne Fadiman
Faust by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Foucault’s Pendulum by Umberto Eco
Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad
House of Leaves by Mark Z. Danielewski
Infinite Jest by David Foster Wallace
Lolita by Vladimir Nabokov
Motherless Brooklyn by Jonathan Lethem
Mrs Dalloway by Virginia Woolf
My Struggle by Adolf Hitler
Naked Lunch by William S. Burroughs
On the Road by Jack Kerouac
Pale Fire by Vladimir Nabokov
Paradise Lost by John Milton
Satin Island by Tom McCarthy
Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse
Slaughterhouse Five by Kurt Vonnegut
Story of the Eye by Georges Bataille
Submission by Michel Houellebecq
The Bible
The Brothers Karamazov by Fyodor Dostoevsky
The Canterbury Tales by Geoffrey Chaucer
The Communist Manifesto by Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels
The Death of Ivan Ilyich by Leo Tolstoy
The Four Books by Yan Lianke
The Fox Was Ever the Hunter by Herta Müller
The Map and the Territory by Michel Houellebecq
The Master and Margarita by Mikhail Bulgakov
The New York Trilogy by Paul Auster
The Odyssey by Homer
The Satanic Verses by Salmon Rushdie
The Sense of an Ending by Julian Barnes
The Sorrow of Young Werther by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
The Stranger by Albert Camus
The Teleportation Accident by Ned Beauman
The Unbearable Lightness of Being by Milan Kundera
The Wind-Up Bird Chronicle by Haruki Murakami
To The Lighthouse by Virginia Woolf
Underworld by Don DeLillo
War and Peace by Leo Tolstoy

>or from the perspective of a character that has no friends
It's this. The writing is shit but the main character is also supposed to be autistic in the non-meme sense.

Dead company

>Ikabey flops
>company dies
>translator dies
more like cursed company

maybe, if you have brain damage.

Rance is one of the most kino protagonist in eroges and reminder he is a top dad
youtu.be/0NnFVJTou0M

I play eroges where I with one mc fuck almost all cute girls Im not for sidestories of some villains or antagonist life in the past or what if stories.

I read the mobile you had a female mc and a bunch of hot dudes. Sounded more and more like fujo fantasy and I know the originals had strong male support.

>no Malleus route
its shit

This, Dies Irae is overrated. Also, they should have cut Kasumi route, she is annoying and her route is kind of pointless, because almost nothing is revealed at the end. The game should have been better edited and shorter.

Before dies irae was translated it was lauded around here as an epic kamige that eop where missing, etc. But as you said, F/SN is a more solid chunni game in an urban setting. Those that said F/SN is not better, probably did not played both.

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I just installed it. It is actually fun!

I played F/SN before Dies Irae and I think Dies is way better. You have no clue what are you talking about.

Should've posted the kino that trascended all kino.
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Overrated trash pushed as good by JOPs for years and proven to be shit. Nothing to see here.

seething

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Based and chuunipilled

coping

>foreknowledge foreknowledge
>the desert eagle is the world's heaviest, biggest, most hardcore and impossible to use gun but Shirou can use it flawlessly by being a rad dude
>foreknowledge
>if it was anyone else even attempting to fire a single bullet would break every bone in their body but Shirou was firing two deagles at a rate of one thousand shots per second without breaking a sweat
>foreknowledge foreknowledge
>it didn't do shit because his opponent is literally immune to gunfire but Shirou still kept at it for 30 minutes because I really like writing this cringeworthy shit
>foreknowledge
>Shirou got hit by some superhuman monster and broke twenty ribs but kept firing his atomic hand cannon aka the legendary desert eagle, the world's most insane and radical gun
>foreknowledge foreknowledge
>seriously, take a break and go jack off to Shirou right now
>foreknowledge
>eventually Shirou's opponent went away and was killed by someone else in the following chapter
>"Tch... I'm tired of this damn foreknowledge..." said Shirou as he used his deagle to light a cigarette while playing some totally sick guitar riffs with his huge dick
Masada is a true master, we might as well wrap up the entire genre because it doesn't get any better than this.

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Dies Irae is my favorite VN, but damn, this shit always gets me

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>"All that begins must end. So, too, all that lives, dies, and in dying, value finds. Thy vaunted eternity is but hollow slumber. Beast of Disaster, evil born of mankind's folly, thy desperate wish that thy love not go unrequited shows thy rejection's roots."

>"Of rank, nor station, nor the title Grand have I need. Bear witness, goddess of life, to the testament writ with mine own blade. Thou fallen god, to beasthood turned, If Primordial Mother be thy title, attend, and hear my name. From the mountain abyss, I come and only death do I bring, I am the Old Man of the Mountain, the First Hassan-i Sabbah. The bell of evening tolls thy name. Touch not the sky, by Heaven's will I shall strip thee of thy wings!"

can't wait for the anime to get to this part and pray they don't fuck it up

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why do people say camelot is good
I fell for this shitty meme and wasted hours

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Honestly though, what do you expect from a chuunige?

if DI is so great, how come no one ever discusses or even mentions the heroines? Cause Saber Rin Sakura Illya Rider etc. are just superior.

Its all about homo dudes

that's not Camelot.

That is Babylon

Camelot and Babylonia were voted by nips as the best chapters so they went for adaptations. Babylonia won though.

This was pre-lostbelt. I do wonder if they will adapt some of the chapters in part2 for the future.

ah
well in any case my statement still stands

funny because the dudes in Fate are better too. Best priest is best

I'm not sure if it's apt or ironic how we eventually came back around to U Mad.

People don't have good taste, news at eleven

>mentally retarded teenager with superhero complex
>2 gay high school friends that deal with their gay friendship in different ways
>assassin teacher who basically doesn't speak
>older, browner version of retard that hates himself and acts like a chuuni instead
>golden jobber
>a worm grandpa and bald yoga instructor
The only good men in Fate are Lancer and Kotomine. Fate is pretty easy to beat in this regard.

Only good Fate characters in Fate are Shirou/Emiya and Kotomine though. Dies blows F/SN out of the wáter in terms of characterization.

>Best priest is best
He even has the nerve to appear in FGO and kill Da Vinci

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so what you're saying is he's based

There's a difference between shooting the shit and actually having a conversation.

I know it's not vidya but this post reminded me of the absolutely kinoest of MTG flavor texts.

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>includes "the" in alfabetical order of a list
you disqusting pleb

Wow

Yes

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>better edited and shorter.
this applies to 99% of VNs. They just ramble on and on about the most inane shit.

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this just looks like Stay Night fanservice
doesn't she come back later anyways
why is FGO such shit

I more inclined to think men get straight to the point and then change topic to continue talking about any other nonsense but with women they tend to go so much in detail that perhaps we lost the original topic we were suppose to talk about.

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sounds like this gentlemen hits the pipe on a regular basis

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She is dead she just had prepared an homunculus in case something happened to her, the homunculus isn't exactly her so she act a bit differently. Originally Da Vinci didn't expect to survive the previous ordeal with Salomon thats why she had a counter measure.

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Pretty much. Can't believe people unironically eat this shit up.

Keep coping my friend Yea Forumsnons

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>I don't get excited for comiket anymore.
describes current Yea Forums pretty good. Gone of are the days of the wild C85 discussion threads on /jp/. The current thread is an embarrassment.

But the best fate character is Angra?

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Why?

youtu.be/eoAk8s3H4u0 it's not the best moment, but I was certainly hyped up for the boss battle.

Ataraxia is the one that expands Angra Manjew. He is still a meme character though

perhaps I'm too jaded and unfair since it's so early, but I remember those threads were significantly more energetic and filled with hype back then. On the same Sunday years ago all of /jp/ was downloading and playing soku already.

Why would I be mad about good fapbait? The plot is complete trash but at least the women are good looking

>Angra
>meme character
No?
He is the MC, how can he be a meme character?

You can be a main character and still be lackluster and unmemorable

I do feel there were more doujins games. Remember of the fighting games or rpg came from there, those who now are on steam were born in Comiket.

That was literally confirmed to be one autist from /alter/ trying to strum up a retarded ebin thread war.

Good thing Angra is neither of those

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The plot is good though.

I just checked again, apparently ZUN doesn't appear until the 4th fucking day. I feel silly now.

Reminder this killed Dies Irae
youtu.be/cieWE_2VaiA

>gacha instead of a fighting game
what were they thinking

In japan every company want a little piece of gacha money, if you compare fighting games in asia that sell 200k units or less, Blazblue and Guilty or UNIEL only did around 100k, to what most mobiles sell in 1 month. The difference its huge

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yea I know why they did it
but they should have just made a fighting game anyways

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Honestly yeah could have worked trying to raise the hype from another angle. Mobile should have come a way later but they already started wrong with the anime which many claimed to be awful and a waste of money.

They had bad luck is all. Both companies they hired for their gatcha left them in the dust, one because it was incompetent (SuperAppli) and the other bankrupted.

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>complains about unnecessary fluff and surface level writing
>suggests Umineko

kek

I wish I could be this aesthetic.

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Years later and there are STILL goats mad at ryukishi.www

>Caring for ryukishi at all in 2019

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>not caring
when WTC 1 2 3 and 4 were all masterpieces, 5 is bound to become one too. Stay goat

Rose Guns Days is R07's best work

Really? Without r07's name on it it'd strike me as totally generic. Guess I'll give it a go. Is the manga the best version like earlier WTCs?

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bros where can I download these?

>post-WW2 mafia VN
>totally generic

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Rest in peace, Conjueror.

"She fucks like a tiger". Fan translators should off themselves.

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Truly, Takuji is a man of culture.

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yes
see

He was only 29. What the fuck man.

My IQ is rising

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I'm 29 too, but I have the sense to stay away from suicide-inducing kusoge.

>"moebuta should die"
>*dies*
starting to realize that Conjueror was a veritable lolcow

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Just be in relative good shape and buy yourself a german world war uniform

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