Does It Look Bad?

Great start! My only issue with it is that the visual design is too simple to me. Maybe add some details to the textures to give the locations some life?

Put it on Itch.io.

That's really cool, but it's way too bright and glowy.

It looks amazing,but if you want an indie game to appeal to reddit and youtube,Heres some tips.
Add lore that not even you understand,People will make theories trying to fin out something you didnt plan and think there solving something
Add a waifu,Make it “pure” so people will be like “DONT LEWD HER SHES PURE HAHA”but also make them easily pornable so it appeals to r34 waifu fags
Make it have forced difficulty,So people will get mad and it will end up in rage comps.
Make it have meme bait characters so people will make unfunny memes
Make it have 2 males,ship wars will go crazy even if they never meet in game!
Make it have “retro indie graphicz” but dont do it for any good reason and just do it so you can appeal to nostalgia!

No man it's fucking amazing. Wow. Never seen untextured cubes done so perfectly before

i keep reading it as vrizzle

We're all being ironic right? I mean this is obviously shit right

Sengoku Basara is all the right amounts of retarded

It looks fun.
Atleast provide contsructive criticism
More bait for reddit
Jumpscares
Meta 4th wall breaking
Epic meme gamer refrence
Screaming
Farts

As others have said it is not great on the eyes, but looks decent enough. Truthfully I'm not a big fan of the sound effects either
Solid 7/10.

Thanks ^
When I got some friends to played it they struggled so I had to add something to make it easier
Either free or like $1
Thanks for the advice ^ I wanted to give it a Tron aesthetic but if its too much the options let you disable Bloom and blur effects
I can work on that. Thanks
I have some lore stuff going on but I'll add a waifu lmao. Thx for the advice ^

I would expect something like this to be $5 to $10 on steam. I would buy it on a 75% sale or for like two dollars. I wait a long time before buying things though. I'm not sure why it wouldn't sell for $5; it looks fun.

I'd buy it for three to five dollars (if its long and gets creative).

wait what
does that horse have fucking exhaust pipes?

The sound of the gun is REALLY annoying.

It's neat. Better than most other puzzle games I've seen. Then again I'm not huge on puzzle solving games.

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I'm bumping your thread because it seems cool and is video games

I'll second turning down the bloom a bit. Also, add MORE glowy shit if you want tron. Small things to separate shit, like the highlights on an outfit. sound effects could use some work, too. Otherwise, it's a new idea. Hard to tell how fun it'll be playing around with it. Will probably need you to be pretty good at level design.
And I don't think slowmo is a great idea. Portal felt satisfying when you manage to pull off some stupid but mechanically challenging solution to a puzzle. I don't see how you could have any challenge with it.

>Little bit faster, I'm not going to tell you to make it less floaty but higher acceleration and top speed of the character and moving objects would attract me much more
>My fucking eyes aarrrrrghh

Like what , you could add more bits of glow to outline things and tone down the huge walls of bloom. Call me a fag but I would have to close my eyes every time I enter the hub, and the burning glow of the gun would eventually drive me insane. Maybe add a "night mode" or "blacklight" option in the video settings which preserves the aesthetic but uses less harsh colours?

Cool game OP, would definitely try it out. I have a small nitpick and is that the sound of the gun gets a bit annoying, it could certainly use a bit more polish. But the core gameplay looks solid.

Is this better or worse?

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> Thanks for the advice ^ I wanted to give it a Tron aesthetic but if its too much the options let you disable Bloom and blur effects
Instantly better than most AAA devs

looks good man, definately wouldn't give it for free, but wouldn't pay more than 5$ from what I see

here
Wow, that was quick. That's much better for me.

There's this AI dude that follows you around sometimes and gives the player tips. I can easily change it to a waifu if you think that will attract more players.

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Really appreciate it. It's hard getting constructive criticism irl and I find it difficult to look at this objectively

Looks too much like portal

It looks really cool, the bright colors aren't my thing and I like the idea of creating platforms to complete puzzles. kinda reminds me of portal

How similar is this to Thalos, QUBE, Turing Test, Quantum Conundrum and other FPS puzzles?

that little guy is pretty cute
don't try to make it waifu shit, it looks great as is

just make it more feminine.

>outline
that's the word, I feel fucking retarded now

yea bro too much glow, it becomes an eye sore after a while, make it more like q.u.b.e. or portal

People might compare this to Portal, but it seems pretty interesting mechanically with all the shit you can do with the triangles. What's important is the length and difficult of certain puzzles. It might be a good idea to release a free demo and get feedback from that. Otherwise looks pretty interesting so far.

I'm not even memeing make it a waifu

Suggestion for you dev, make the levels longer and harder, with the little easy levels that you've made essentially being the tutorial section for new mechanics.
Ramping difficulty, secret stuff and colour coding "worlds" are great to keep people interested. You've got something good here

Cool gameplay concept. But the art is very lacking, looks similar to an untextured test map.

>delayed gun movement
>with slow-mo
Kill yourself

Well you're doing great. Can I ask what the tree is about?

If possible make sure to not make it 100% linear in terms of puzzle room. Good puzzle games like Qube and Thalos Principle allow you to try different rooms if you are stuck, and maybe learn something that will help you in the previous room you were stuck in.

Nothing of significance. I needed something to make the lobby less boring so I added a tree.

I'm done with the puzzles but if this game gets more than like 100 downloads I'll make a second one with your ideas for sure.

introduce hyperbolic and elliptic geometry and it'd be cool

Maybe make it so that every completed puzzle grow a small plant next to the tree, or start the tree smaller and make the tree grows as the game progress

Interesting, so the red gun makes the force field bouncy and the green gun makes it so it reverses your gravity?

A good idea might be to have the color of the force field change depending on the color of the gun, just to better help the player.

Also some fun ideas for a puzzle if you end up making more would be to use it to separate liquid or objects into respective containers, using it to help a ball or moving object get through an obstacle course, getting through a trippy MC Esher styled room with multiple platforms, bridges and shit on the walls and ceiling of the room requiring you to use the green gun multiple times, etc. Just some ideas. Good job OP would play/10.

I wish you best of luck OP, looks really interesting. How do you intend to distribute it?

Scratch that I just realized they do change colors, it's just hard to tell.

This is a fantastic idea. I don't have much to say beyond what said but it's nice to see concepts like this and you deserve some encouragement m8

>I can easily change it to a waifu if you think that will attract more players.
Jesus Christ you're going to be laughed out of here if you're so fucking desperate for sales

It already looks cute so people will want to fuck it

Don't make it visually waifuish at all, but the dialog can make it so. That'll make the character much more memorable.

To add to that, it doesn't even need to be super overt. After explaining a basic mechanics, it can say "good luck!" and then later in the game when things get more dire, it can explain more complex concepts and give more heartfelt messages like, "...I'm really rooting for you!" Stuff like that.

Cool idea
Yeah, you unlock the different colors throughout the game
I'll work on the force field color a little more ^ and I have a puzzle like that heheh

I was thinking about Steam but some Anons mentioned itch so I might do that instead.

Thanks :)
Lmao true. I just don't want it to have like 5 downloads. It's happened to me before and it makes me feel like I'm wasting my time

Looks interesting user, just wanted to add some comments/sugestions:
- I agree with the other anons, less bloom is better. And during the video I couldn't figure out right away that the gun's change in color made it do something different. Maybe make it a bit more obvious, add some sound to the change (or maybe I'm just being retarded)
- Have you thought about making the AI buddy seen in shaped like a sphere? To contrast with the geometry of the game as a whole. Not sure if would look good but I think it's worth a try
- The aesthetic is cool, but maybe you should use less of those "light grids" like the green lines in the walls, or make them more discreet. Use the lighting to guide the player through the levels, to highlight something you know, give some kind of hint to what they should do or where should they go
Other than that, nice job user

>an actual CREATOR comes to this God forbidden site
>immediately user decides to bait with le ironic shitpostin xD
I fucking hate you so much.

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this unironically looks great

only advice i can really give with what limited impression i'm getting from the game is maybe make the colors a few semitones darker just so it's easier on the eyes when playing for long sessions

I don't think that's "ironic".

I was making fun on cliches in games but that a.i freindo looks cool!Maybe make a seperate waifu bot who acts as a hazard.Like it shoots lasers as it doesnt know how to interact with people

You should add the ability to create different triangles for the different gun effects, it would allow for a greater puzzle variation.
For his, mine and this site's sake, I'll assume it's ironic.

Well, it that helps you sleep at night then that's your prerogative. You think this is insincere as well?

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Your pic related is just good ol Yea Forums autism.