How would you react had Negi written Toubun with Sasuga kei/Seo style? Like F dating different quints first before eventually marrying the bride, while also keeping the family/sisterly drama stuffs. Would it be better than current writing with one and only true heroine trope?
How would you react had Negi written Toubun with Sasuga kei/Seo style...
Joshua Mitchell
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Kevin Lewis
I just want to see Nino fuck her step daddy.
Carson Bennett
Caleb Lopez
I hate seo and his stupid drama story
Colton Perry
> Sasuga kei/Seo style
Blake Ward
Nino a shit
Cooper Campbell
>37 chapters
Benjamin Hernandez
>37
Camden Lee
Based hivemind
Adam Miller
"No."
Christian Gomez
>Would it be better than current writing with one and only true heroine trope?
No.
Christopher Murphy
I honestly couldn't enjoy domestic na kanojo or that fuuka shit. Everything just irritate me the more i read. What kind of brain and lifestyle do you need to have to enjoy these shits?
Owen Howard
If I had to give credits, I still don't know how Domekano will end, just like toubun.
Also Hina > Rui.
Andrew Watson
Nino a shit
Carter Cruz
*best
Joseph Williams
Only for Nino/Miku to later reject them.
Dominic Hill
>37
Tyler Jenkins
The brain of a woman
Evan Butler
I would like for him to start dating one but then another pretends to be her and he ends up knocking her up
Lucas Gray
>sex before marriage
Drop
Carter Ortiz
they have all fucked maruo, especially nino.
Dominic Baker
Would that mean a truck though?
Jayden Price
Yotsuba fucked Maradona
Camden Brooks
Lies!
David Morris
It would be utter garbage, just like domekano.
Noah Wright
I think this is how Seo writes a 5 Toubun story
>MC has a crush on 1st sis
>2nd sis and MC and some bro are close friends
>suddenly 3rd sis arrives and became a huge part of MC's life
>MC still likes 1st sis
>4th sis introduced and is mistaken for 1st sis
>suddenly 1st sis likes MC now
>but 1st sis has boyfriend and MC doesn't want girl who has boyfriend
>3rd sis and 4th sis introduces 5th sis from overseas
>5th sis is perfect in every way and is clearly best girl
>but MC is a faggot and still likes 1st sis
>4th sis pretends to be 1st sis to cheer MC up
>huge drama ensured, first kiss accidentally stolen yadda yadda
>MC hangs out with 2nd sis and discuss his problems
>2nd sis is a beta cuck and tries to hook up 1st sis and MC
>but all of the sudden MC mistook 5th sis for 1st sis because they all look same
>5th sis has growing feelings for MC, typical romance trope
>MC likes 5th sis now but 1st sis just broke up with boyfriend
>2nd drama, sis infighting etc.
>MC decided to go with 1st sis anyway
>whoops turns out MC likes 3rd sis more because she has been there for him the longest time
>another whoops because 3rd sis died of car crash
>another drama intermission, MC is not going out with any of them
>MC found out that 4th sis was the one who was 3rd sis all along, the girl who was there for him
>MC discusses his problem again with 2nd sis, oblivious of her one sided love, because best girls never win
>5th girl asks MC for sex
>MC is still too beta, still has zero character growth, and doesn't realize his best bro 2nd sis is best girl
>step sis introduced, a fucking tsundere bitch at first glance but her shallow character quickly warmed up to MC
Etc. Etc.
Benjamin Johnson
>Sasuga kei
Which quint gets fucked?
>Seo style?
Which quint gets used and discarded like a condom?
Julian Sanders
Negi is already a better SASUGA/Seo
Any drama flows better than those shit, fuck the time i wasted reading Good Ending jesus fuck
Noah Allen
Anyone who honestly enjoys reading anything written by Seo/Sasuga is unironically mentally challenged.
Brandon Lee
I am glad I never read his works.
Joshua Parker
I've read a lot of things I didn't like, or liked at first but went off of, but Seo is honestly the only person to write something I genuinely wished I'd never read.
Adrian Morris
>another whoops because 3rd sis died of car crash
Oh shit
> >MC found out that 4th sis was the one who was 3rd sis all along, the girl who was there for him
Fuck.
Wait, so it was 4th that died, not 3rd?
Josiah Lopez
MC why won't you choose 2nd sis? Fuck you MC
Josiah Jackson
Seo really likes his unnecessary drama. After following kimi no iru machi, I never read his work again.
Jason Walker
unironically have sex
Not defending Seo's writing since it lacks proper foreshadowing, direction, and common theme/message, but the this shit that happens is what really happens with irl women.
Also
>5th girl asks MC for sex
>MC is still too beta
MC does have sex tho.
Benjamin Williams
>this shit that happens is what really happens with irl women.
Are you okay user.
Luis Morris
>with irl women
(You)
David Myers
>but the this shit that happens is what really happens with irl women
Yeah, and that's the problem. Fuck reality
Easton Lee
t. Seo
William Edwards
Also how can 2 be the best girl if 3 was always there for him?
Ayden Parker
>step sis introduced, a fucking tsundere bitch at first glance but her shallow character quickly warmed up to MC
When is Negi going into introduce La Hermana?
Connor Peterson
She is best girl though, too bad she's forever bro-zoned by that fucking idiot
Noah Martinez
If you get all these drama shit by having sex then i'd rather stay vergin
Jason Lee
How can 4=loli be out already with ch90, yet filthy 11's buy out eatsuki and then nino/miku dakis before Yotsuba dakis?
Same reason: 11's have shit taste.
Isaiah Allen
Shows the state of these threads when we're barely talking about the series this thread is based upon and instead different authors and other pointless shit.
Luis Cruz
t. dead 3fag
or 4th. I don't know.
It's pretty fun. Much better than the usual shitflinging.
Josiah Hall
The beauty of 5toubun is the unnecessary involvement of girls that will be forgotten anyway because they hold no relevance to the plot of the story.
David Moore
OKAY I DON'T KNOW WHO THIS SEO GUY IS SINCE HIS WORK IS ALWAYS SHAT ON
NOW POST THE CHARACTERS COMPARABLE TO THE QUINTS
Luke Smith
> huge drama
> yadda yadda
> repeat
Basically the same.
Ryder Martinez
You don't know how it will end because of the shitty writing. So many red herrings tossed in and forgotten that the end is just a jumbled mess. Sasuga could learn a few dozen things from Taishi Tsutsui about story structure, introducing characters/teases, keeping only to relevant plot devices, etc.
David Adams
Oh, and you know how Go toubun will end?
Camden Anderson
How the fuck can you not know Hina will win
That shit's the most obvious thing you see from a mile away
I love yakuzaman but he sucks at keeping only on relevant plot devices
Blake Johnson
Is that file name deliberate?
James Russell
I wonder what the new kimetsu ln is going to be about.
Oliver Adams
It's better than iceguya's arc at least.
Parker Sanders
> That shit's the most obvious thing you see from a mile away
Have you read her previous work?
It feels all too familiar.
Ian Anderson
Why are senryu threads dead
Jaxon Baker
>new kimetsu ln
Nice, any info on that yet?
Angel Young
>How the fuck can you not know Hina will win
I think you mean Rui
Christian Kelly
I've been burnt out by GE all those years ago
The start of Domekano shows promise but halfway through Rui's relationship there's just no fucking way Hina will not win
>druggie
>best girl theater one
all filler no killer, Rui is the only legitimate threat but her chances are all but gone now
Isaiah Lewis
>3
>always there for him
Obsessed orbiting is different than actually being by his side
Asher Powell
No TLs, no progress, scans 30 chapters behind.
Yeah, comes out in october.
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Hunter Stewart
Bro characters are the best after all.
> No TLs, no progress
Rip. Wait, did the TL stop TLing the chapters?
Asher Sullivan
>Rip. Wait, did the TL stop TLing the chapters?
I think he was putting them off because of the break. Wait, but that means he won't translate them in today's thread.
Daniel Bennett
I'd be kept ambiguous for 50+ chapters with red-herrings suggesting she could be either. Ultimately, it leads to her having an existential crisis with her being haunted by the equally ambiguous ghost of the girl who died.
Kevin Thompson
>Bro characters
Stop it user. 4-chan's already loaded with loser-flags. We shouldn't be adding more on.
Sebastian Perez
Keep telling yourself that
Dominic Nguyen
*It'd
Xavier Scott
Sex with Nino's toes!
Gabriel Gonzalez
How.come Negi shows so much favorism to Nino? Why make the bride so obvious?
Julian Roberts
Bros shouldn't take cream from their bro's cheek with their mouth.
Christopher Clark
37 chapters. Never forget.
Ayden Martinez
When did the art take a dive?
Zachary Cox
Don't. You'll trigger them and derail the thread.
David Lewis
Too late.
Jaxon Hall
>rui
>winning
kek, imagine thinking this.
Nolan Baker
After 7G, those few weeks were really awful
Evan Flores
she appeared first, he fucked her first, and she's the same age as her.
He's not going to get paired off with a bird who's that much older than him, come on now
Jace Price
>she appeared first
Moot point, read her other manga. Kei doesn't care.
>he fucked her first
see above. Moot point again.
>she's the same age as her
What? I know what you mean but its not even a factor and shes only 6 or 7 years older than him, most relationships have a bigger age gap than that. Everything in the story is pointing to Hina. Buts lets not derail the thread.