Yuragi 164

I have to leave right now, so someone please dump.
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164: Why Yuuna-san and the others are fighting
[side] The pool here is full of fun!?

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Dumping.

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still disappointed at Karura's spirit armor

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Fucking end this arc already.

It is so fucking boring/annoying

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thanks

When are these three cockteases finally going to fall for Kogarashi?

Rare idol Hibari!

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Thanks.

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They probably aren't. Yaya's pretty content with being more of a pet. Matora's all about Nonko and being Karura's wingman. If Chisaki's vision of the future is anything to go by, I'd place higher odds on Koyuzu hooking up with Miria than on her ever developing feelings for Kogarashi.

It shouldn't be long now. They already have a way to turn everyone back, and are halfway there. They just need to kick Nadare's ass.

Sorry for being slow. Apparently the restaurant I went to yesterday had a rat infestation, so I’m feeling like crap now.

...looks like you used up all the power in your replenishing stone.
Fuyuzora-kun!!

My right arm and my legs...
Damn... it...
It seems the parts which you focused your energy into are crumbling first.

TSanon here. Just checking in to say I am around as well.

The harem is in decently sized margin already and still doesn't balance out the focus. Adding more will just be wasted development.

This power is too strong and dangerous...
So please only use it for a short time!
Yuuna actyally warned me about it... but I was naive...!

Riria-san’s barrier is...

...this isn’t good.

The harem is not going to get bigger,it's okay like that.

Kogarashi-san?!
Hey... his legs and arms are disappearing?!
So he got beat by Tenko Nadare...!
But he’s still breathing!
Looks like we made it just in time!!

Yuu...na...!
...wait, you’re all...?!

Wait... you got back to being adults?!

Sagiri-san!
Right!

I... I’m back?!

...right, I’m now a second year in Yukemuri High...
And I’m friends with Yuuna-san and the girls...
...and... Ko-kun...!

You okay, Chisaki-chan?!
Y..yeah! It... it feels like I remembered everything...!
What the heck...?!

I fixed the spell... but Fuyuzora Kogarashi isn’t back to normal?!

Well...!

It looks like it will be hard to get him normal again because he was made younger for a long time.
His medium qualities made the spell worse than usual...
...gh... again because of being a medium...!

So does that mean he won’t go back to normal ever?!
N-no! The spell itself is already gone.
It will probably go away if we give it time...

Then by then, the legs and arms will be back to normal!
But I don’t know how long that’ll take...
...we don’t have time to wait!
We’re gonna go get Nakai-san and the others!
Ah! So everyone’s inside that ball thing... that’s what that Nadare guy said!
Sl that’s the strange law barrier!
Wh... wha? Speaking of which, where is that Tenko Nadare?!
I saw him disappear with teleportation.
Maybe he’s afraid of us since we’re back to being adults now so he ran.
We better escape before the next attack comes!

I... I’m so sorry, Nadare-sama!

Nadare-samaaaa?!

I’m sorry... I wasted more energy than I expected.
I’ll just... focus on recovery for a bit.
An artificial spirit crystal!

In that time... please take care of it.
I’ll leave those kids to you.

How is it, Yuuna?!
...we might be able to teleport with the hole you made, Sagiri-san!
But... we’ll probably be restricted by the rules of the world if we go in.

We can analyze it from the outside and neutralize it though!
Can you help us, Urara-san?!
Alright!
Is-is this okay?
Are Koyuzu-chan and the girls okay...?!

There’s a hole, right! I’ll just look through with clairvoyance...!

Wha...?’
Hiougi-san?!
Wh-what do you see?!

Relax... they’re on cacation.
What the?!

It’s careless of you to get rid of your spirit armor like that.

Chisaki?!
So basically you know, we...
Don’t plan on killing you girls here.

It’s more like...
We’re saving you all!

She’s back!
Saving us... you say?!

Yeah but anyways
I’ll put it this way...
The only one we wish to defeat is the Yatahagane-san~

Yatahagane as in...
Me...?

Wha...?!
Wait are those...
Garandou?!

This manga is so trash. Kill it with fire.

Even the true spirit armor, which is difficult for Tenkos...

Can be blown away with just one powerful attack.
Hibari!!

Hibari-san! Kogarashi-san!!
Focus on analyzing, Yuuna-chan!

...hm
Let’s just leave it to them.

Ah right, missing side
>Something weord is happening to his body because of a power overload?!

Fix in last panel
>I’ll leave them all to you.

A pest of this level...
Is no match for me now.

...are you serious?!
Isn’t thag already transcendent level...?!

Now... Riria, or whatever.
How can a weak maiden like you
Exactly try and save me...?

Well of course...
It’s because we’re the Tenko family!
...what does that mean?
You’re from the Tenko branch family!

Our elders are afraid of you all.
So they want to all finish you off before you get too strong.

But nadare-sama...
Was against that since that went too far.

Nadare-san was...?!

So basically... we purposely turned you into kids and neutralized your strength.
So we could convince the elders while letting you all live.

And if it failed...
We don’t know what the elders will do, okay?
See! That’s why can you all just quietly...
Drink the potion and go back to being kids or something?

...that is sucj a dumb story.
Yeah... going back to being kids is the same thing
As telling us to die right now, you know.

And you... are underestimating our power here.
Do you really need to save us that way...?

But of course! I think, okay?

This is...!!

I can’t hold out...!!

Kgh...!!

S...shit...
Why am I... every single time...!!

...well... I’m not surprised.

These are the garandou Nadare-sama entrusted me with
And you destroyed them all...

But well... it looks like your spirit armor
Can’t protect you anymore~

S... stop it. Just leave me alone... I sureender.
They... really don’t want to beat you guys...
Going back to kids... again... isn’t too bad.
It’s better than dying, right...?!

...what a dumb question. Plus, I don’t... want to lose my memories... with you...
Ever again...!

That’s right... if you go back to being kids... you’ll all...
Lose your memories of the inn...!

A future where Kogarashi-dono and I both don’t know each other...
Is so horrible I would rather die!!

We won’t let anyone... not even you, Kogarashi-san!
Do that to us...!

Nobody’s taking...
Out Kogarashi-san!!
[left] A dilemma... but strong resolution!!
[bot right] Next issue, a super wounded Yuuna-san and company versus a fully recovered Tenko Nadare?!

I won’t check that much now because I’m having too many stomach problems, so if there’s anything really big, point it out so I can fix it.

I haven't encountered anything big thus far. I'll go ahead and dump what I've gotten done so you can check sooner rather than later.

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Just tell me if you see anything off. Or if anyone else sees something weird.

pan 2 bub 1: It looks like it will be hard to get him back to normal because he was young for a long time now.
pan 4 bub 1: And by then. his legs and arms will be back to normal too!

Fixed.

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Panel 1 bubble 1: As written it sounds like the Tenkos have difficulty with true spirit armor in general, when judging by the Japanese it's saying that even they can have trouble with it. So that bubble should probably be something more like "Even the true spirit armor, which can be difficult even for Tenkos..."

Last two bubbles: "exactly" should probably be in the first bubble. Something more like:

>How exactly can a weak maiden like you
>try and save me?
or maybe
>How exactly can a weak maiden
>like you try and save me?

That sounds good

The first one sounds better in terms of paneling.

Okay, done.

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Done.

Pan 6 bub 1: should it be "failed" or "fails"?

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And page 19 for checking. The first two bubbles need some work. As it stands the sentence in the first bubble cuts off awkwardly, and the second bubble is a sentence fragment. Maybe something like:

>Bubble 1: We won't let anyone... do that to us!
>Bubble 2: Not even you, Kogarashi-san!

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pan 6 bub 1: But if that fails...

That’s a fine change

That Matora is so useless,she always say that she wants to fight but when there is a fighting situtation she gets one-shoted or she's not even there.It's fun

Fixed.

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Changed. That's the last of the things I've seen.

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Okay I got nothing, though i’m also feeling like crap now so I didn’t dig through like I usually do.

Well, well nothing else stands out to me, so there shouldn't be any show stopping issues, and we should be okay for today. Give me a minute and I'll post the zip.

Alright, here's the zip:

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I hope you feel better soon TLanon. And goodnight.

Thanks for the chapters anons. I can see the light at the end of the tunnel.

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