If you were the author, how would you have fixed this fucked up scene?

If you were the author, how would you have fixed this fucked up scene?

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Well, I would have made the trap to become fit instead of a fat fuck. Aside from that, nothing.

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I would have had the husband there with her.

have her tell MC that she extracted his semen while he was in a coma and had an invetro fertization procedure done

I would have made her wait for him, or at least be conflicted seeing him again.
Instead of shitting on the person who saved your life and change it for the better.

mc would stand up and choke her like Shinji with Asuka

The baby would start suckling at her teat. Both hands.

I would have her die and never come back.

have atleast a chapter where the trap and main girl work together to get funds to keep the mc hooked up or some shit then we could atleast see them bonding and fall for eachother

I want to know what happened to that other timeline, the one with the detective and hospital

Shop my face onto the baby.

It was kinda surprising but nothing that bad. In the end he was never originally in love with her, just wanted to help stop a tragedy.
That Airi chick seems to have had the hots for him from the start though.

What's fucked up about it?

Kayo didn't owe him anything. Infact I wouldn't be surprised if she dated other members of his group before settling for the rich doctor trap.

Not. It's perfect.

Stop self inserting faggot. No woman will wait for you to wake up from a 15 year long coma. Besides he was a 29 year old man and she was 10 at the time. Why would you even ship it? He had no romantic interest in her. His goal was to solve the child murder mystery and save his mom. He did that. All Kayo owned Satoru was gratitude and pussy you fucking virgin.

Virgins believe women should wait for them while they are in a coma. Fuck that.

>liking NTR
Disgusting.

thats illegal user...

Don't bring the kid into the scene. Whether or not she has a kid is irrelevent. Her holding the kid is what is insulting about the scene, like she couldn't just put the kid down before seeing the main character.
The presence of the kid changes the scene from a touching reunion to weird cuck vibes and the kid steals the scene.

It's there to show that she fully moved on and that there was never anything between them. The only people who think she betrayed him are the ones who think there was ever anything between them besides gratitude and respect. She owes him nothing.
>NTR
It's not even close to NTR.

I'd add a proper birth scene with some of Japanese cultural elements and folklore

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I would have made here a nervous wreck of a neet who developed an obsession towards satoru due to guilt from basically fucking up his life so she could live.

>It's not even close to NTR
yeah, it's beyond NTR.

I would love this, or have her commit suicide the day before he wakes up.

AGAIN?!?!? THIS FUCKING THREAD AGAIN?!?!? HOW MANY TIME DO YOU HAVE TO POST THE EXACT SAME SHIT TO GET SATISFIED?!?!? GOD PLEASE STOP!

Explain explicitly in small words, so no idiot can misunderstand, that the protagonist is happy about this because he wasn't romantically interested in her, and besides that is glad he's back in a time period where he can pound Pizza Girl's pussy.

They can keep this pseudo-NTR scene, but there should've been more screen time with the MC and that other girl from his workplace.

It was good. The MC's entire goal, his happiness was that the people he saved could move on and live a good life. The two kids he rescued marrying each other realizes that. He'd have failed if Kayo had waited years for him to get out of his coma.
People are only mad because they self-inserted and forgot that the character had his own agency when it was clearly spelled out for him.

I would have made sure none of those Yea Forums fags saw it so they wouldn't continue to whine about nothing.

Have the father be there and also be black with a big bulge in his pants right at the eye level of the MC

let him go back in time once more.

The manga rushed and skipped through most of it.

>The manga

Meant the anime*. The manga also further drives the point home in the final chapter that they were meant to meet.

she should have given him sex

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Make the father some random guy instead of the gay friend.

And then shoot a smug look at the MC.