Danchigai

She fast.

Thank you user this was really cute.

Wholesome.

>a step towards adulthood

rape Mitsuki in front of her otoutou

I want to take a step towards adulthood with this ninja!

Satsuki is the best sister. Shame she is under utilized.

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Satsuki is gonna be a smelly NEET just like me!

And Haruki seems to be growing as well, watching over his sister like that, so you could say they're becoming adults together.

>is this her pretend play
Is she playing pretend?

>with candy, that comes
with candy that came

>What is
should be a lowercase w

>this place was hard to see...
that place
But I think "I thought it was hidden..." would sound better.

>if it was just pretend play
if you were just playing pretend

>self-serving
Is this supposed to be a comment about how she went from treating him like a villain to her lord after getting a gift? It kind of makes it sound like she's acting cute on purpose to get shit. Maybe something like "You're still as easily swayed as ever..." would be better.

10/10 onii-san

>with candy that came
I'm okay with the past tense, but wouldn't removing the comma make it sound like it's just the candy that's coming out? I mean, it's obvious from the context, but I still wanted to keep the two parts separated.

>she went from treating him like a villain to her lord after getting a gift
>she's acting cute on purpose to get shit
It's supposed to be somewhere in the middle, like she's only acting cute because he gives her stuff. "easily swayed" kinda works, except I don't think it fits with the last line, which takes a little jab at that attitude of hers, since being only after your own interest is an adult thing to do.

What is her next step to adulthood going to be?

I don't think so. x with y is a common enough title and the context makes it clear. I guess you could keep the comma and go with "which came out today" for the second part.

I was assuming the last line was about her leaving the house on her own, like the "first errand" type thing. It doesn't really make sense if her "first step" is something that "hasn't changed."

did someone say based imouto?

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Yeah, it's probably clear enough without the comma, now that I look at it.

Definitely not "bundled with", though. That changes the meaning, since the candy is actually inside the figurines.

And yeah, the line itself is about her going out on her own, I just feel like that's what the "definitely adult" part might be alluding to.

thanks again d/a/chiguys

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