New omake is out.
Dumping the previous chapter and the translated omake after that.
Siscon ani to brocon imouto ga shoujiki ni nattara 31 omake
Chase Richardson
Ryder Robinson
Grayson James
Elijah Bell
Alexander Ortiz
Ethan Phillips
Daniel Sanchez
Hurray!
Parker Walker
Logan Hall
Blake Ortiz
Austin Torres
Hudson Diaz
Jackson Harris
Ayden Murphy
Ryan Gray
Chapter end, omake next.
Aiden Torres
That's it, I just got home so I'll grab something to eat before dumping the novel.
As always, please point out any mistakes so I can fix them.
Jose Ward
>use it as a necklace
wear it as a necklace
Angel Edwards
MY DICK IS READY
Justin Morgan
Lewd
Xavier Cook
Incest is bad.
Liam King
Shut the fuck up faggot
Juan Reyes
But if feels good.
Chase Jones
kill yourself nigger
Cameron Nguyen
>womb massage
He can barely wait to impregnate her
Caleb Robinson
Adam Cooper
Thanks as always. Those are some perfectly small breasts.
Chase Peterson
Fixed, thanks.
Gavin Lee
Actually, I got that wrong. It should be "wore" in this case.
Cooper Gomez
No problem, fixed.
Nathan Hill
Blake Foster
Gavin Anderson
I wouldn't say that Uta is small. Rather decent medium. Some of her friends are even smaller.
Camden Flores
Ryan Flores
Josiah Jackson
Owen Rivera
Joseph Butler
Oh shit
Colton Williams
Jason Richardson
Samuel Thompson
One more to go, fixing something I had fucked up.
Jose Robinson
And that's it for now.
As always, please point out any mistakes so I can fix them.
Jace Nelson
The mom knows
Angel Smith
>Ritsu casted
cast
>home, while searching
home while
>once and again
again and again
>hour at worst
hour, at
>also came home
had also come
>at once seeing
once upon seeing
>lifesaver
savior
Sounds better to me.
>my keys
Should this be singular? It was in the previous part.
>And mom?
Mom
>looks away
looked away
>I thought I had to stay
I would have to wait
>sticks out her
stuck out
>They can't do
couldn't
>They see
They looked at
>in REIN
on
>There, there
there, there
>neighbors see
saw
>but hardly saw by being there in this way.
but rarely ventured out into like this.
Current one is awkward.
>cheeks, and hit
cheeks and
>a soft voice.
voice, (I'm treating these boxes like pseudo quotation marks)
>pretend being a couple
pretend that they were a
>W-Wha
Wh-Wha
>reflected on
in
>my friends asked me persistently about it today.
my friends were persistent in asking me about it today.
Sounds better, I think.
>voice, as he
voice as
>how is our relationship
how our relationship is
>closing down and
close and
>lights of the living
in the
>were on
came on(?)
>the mother
their mother
Also, being in the backyard qualifies as "in the house" for these purposes, Slutha.
Xavier Nguyen
Zachary James
I'll skip page 2 for now since I have to expand one bubble and reorder stuff to fit it.
Cooper Torres
William Bailey
Matthew Mitchell
>a soft voice.
>voice, (I'm treating these boxes like pseudo quotation marks)
I don't understand what you mean by that. Why a comma there?
Luke Powell
Michael Hill
That's how you transition to dialogue. Narration, a comma, then the quote.
Uta said, "This is my line."
It's just strange to have a period end the sentence before it gets to the part that the sentence is describing. I suppose it could be "Uta spoke" to avoid that.
Isaac Evans
And fixed up to here.
I'm working on page 2 and waiting input on page 6.
Brayden Sanchez
Thanks for all your hard work. I can't believe Japan wants to ban this.
John Powell
I see. That last suggestion makes more sense to me, so I went with that.
Still redrawing page 2.
Colton Ortiz
And fixed, thanks as always for the help.
Landon Morris
Cooper Wright
>Cycomi website now only shows the first and latest chapters, and you have to download their app for everything in between
Fuckers really want people to download that app
William Johnson
I downloaded it and get the free coins daily, so I can spend them all on this manga. But Japs really love their sports manga, don't they? They're always the top ranked manga.
Justin Harris
Was it rape?
Andrew Williams
Imouto tummy