Fushigi 125

I'll just finish this quickly

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oh yes

Continuing from last time, the flower viewing
"Anyways, cheers!"

"Grrrrr"

"Oh dear, your tummy rumbled"
"It took a while to get here since some stuff happened, after all"
"Sorry. Seriously..."

"I apologized a number of times already, but I made some food. So let's all have some"
"Yaaaay!"

"What did you make?"
"Fufufu, you see..."

"Russian Inari Sushi"
"She came up with another dumb idea..."

125: The mystery of Inari sushi
Only one of these inari sushi has wasabi in it.
If you don't get the wasabi, you win.
And if you do eat it, but you don't show it, you're safe.

"Huh?"
"But Asahi-sensei, don't you know which one has the wasabi in it?"

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"Sensei gets to be in charge of seeing who wins"
"Unfair!"

"In turn, if I can't tell who got the wasabi one, I'll treat you all to yakiniku"
"You promised that, sensei"

"Okay, so please just face the other way, Asahi-sensei"
"If you see us, you'll figure it out"
"Okaaay"

10 minutes later
"We picked it"

"That took some time"
"Well, we don't want to pull the wasabi one"

"Okay, let's all eat it at once"
"One two..."

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"It has wasabi!!"
"Everyone!?"

"There's no way to pretend we didn't eat it! There's too much wasabi!"
"No no, I got the wasabi one!"
"Wait a minute people..."

"Why are there so many wasabis?"

"That's what we want to ask!"
"You're the one who made this!"
"Yeah, but even if you say that!"

"I mean, I only put wasabi in one of them, okay?"
"You're all just pretending to eat wasabi, right?"

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A quicky for proofreading.

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"Does this look like pretending?"
"S-sorry..."

Did I really put wasabi in all of them...?
That can't be right...

I mean, I packed them in the box after separating them with plates.
There's no way I could be wrong.

But what if... by some chance I actually reversed the wasabis and non wasabis...?
There's a chance that there's only one winner then...

"Your turn, Asahi-sensei"
"Eh, I'm eating?"

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"No no, come one. Don't worry and just eat the right one"
"It's not like you put wasabi in all of them now, did you?"
"The pressure!"

The wasabi one is this inari...
So if I take anything but this one, I would not be eating wasabi...

But right now...
I can't tell which is right...!

"Asahi-sensei?"

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"This inari is great"
"The wrong one"

"Why..."
"Wait, did I actually put wasabi in all of them?"

"...huh?"
"There's no wasabi...?"

"What is happening...?"
"Sorry sensei"

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"I actually hypnotized everyone while you were facing the other way"
You will all be eating wasabi sushi
"The lengths you all go to for yakiniku scare me"

"Okay, I guess that means I actually the only one with wasabi..."
"I never thought you would actually get the bad one yourself"

"So what do we do in this situation?"
"It's not a valid match..."
"Let's just get rid of the hypnotism and eat the rest normally"

"Yep. This is normally good"
"It's really special while watching the cherry blossoms"
"This is great"

"...this feels lacking..."
So in the end, everyone ate yakiniku on the way back home.

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Yeah, about that, do you run these by someone else after you're done? The last chapter had a few mistakes that weren't there when I looked at it.

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I reworked the lines. You can PM me on mangadex to point for fixes.

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>You can PM me on mangadex to point for fixes.
He can also post them itt, you know.

Can you rework before you post them so I don't have to do it twice?

This works as well.

Take me a while so I can't make any promise here.

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Is that a no, then? I'd rather do quality control on the finished "product" than a work in progress that's still going to change.

The initial corrections are pretty helpful though.

Well, thank you, but that's not really the point.

>It took a while to get here
"It took us a while" or "It took a while for us to get"

>I apologized a number of times already, but I made some food. So let's all have some
I apologized a number of times already. I made food, so let's all have some.

>Sensei gets to be in charge of seeing who wins
the judge?

>You promised that, sensei
That's a promise, Sensei.

>Okay, so please just face
Okay, please face

>If you see us
"If you look at us" or "If you see our reactions"

>We picked it
"We made our choices", "We're done picking" or at least "We picked them"

>Okay, let's all eat it at once
them

>It has wasabi!!
It has wasabi in it!!

>There's no way to pretend we didn't eat it!
I'd use "I can't pretend I didn't eat it!", so Chiaki's line makes more sense.

>people
"everyone" or maybe "you guys"? Sounds a bit rude.

>so many wasabis
so many with wasabi

>one who made this
them

>Does this look like pretending?
Do I look like I'm pretending?

>I packed them in the box after separating them with plates.
I had them on two separate plates before I packed them into the box.

>reversed
switched, swapped, confused...

>It's not like you put wasabi in all of them now, did you?
>You didn't put wasabi in all of them, did you?

>The wasabi one is this inari...
This one has the wasabi...

>So if I take anything but this one
any of the other ones

>which is right...!
"which is which" maybe? Or "what's right".

>Wait, did I actually put wasabi
No "Wait", it doesn't really fit the circumstance.

>Sorry sensei
(I'm) sorry, Sensei.

>I actually the only one with wasabi...
I actually ate

>what do w do
we

>It's not a valid match...
The match is not valid...

>hypnotism
hypnosis

>This is normally good
"It's good on its own"? If that's what TL-kun meant?

>...this feels lacking...
...This is not enough.

Based

>"Russian Inari Sushi"
you're missing the quite important word roulette there, otherwise it's just russian sushi.

Thanks