Kimetsu no Yaiba 151

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"Because" doesn't seem right here. It feels more like an "even though" situation.

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sounds about right, i'll change it

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in the third panel, is the meaning of the first bubble something like 'they were trading blows'?

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it originally said 'whole thing' but i thought it was kind of ambiguous so I put fight.

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in the 2nd panel, would it be better to put 'transparent' instead of 'invisible'? since i think he's seeing through to akaza's muscles or something

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Nice work, TSanon

Thanks TS user, hope you can sleep soon.

Thanks, m8.

NO IT CAN'T END
YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE with this tension.

Thanks as always

gonna nap now, keep this thread alive for TL user

also fixed this page a bit

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Always much appreciated.
The Kamados are all awesome.

Thanks user

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Hang on there user.

I wonder if roles were reversed, would have Nezuko managed to join the demon hunters?
Would have Tanjirou been able to suppress his curse of would he have turned evil?
And most importantly, would have Nezuko become the demon hunters' madonna?

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Tanjirou is a pure boy that would never hurt his imouto, he would have been fine. Nezuko I would be a bit more worried about, but I think she could have made it, if with more difficulty

That Kanao is quite pretty.
Tomioka is ugly as always.

Any questions you have?

Before general prs

pan 1 note (missing): A flashing memory in the middle of a fight.
pan 1 bub 2: He almost never had any emotional outbursts. He was always gentle.
pan 1 bub 3: And that never changed in the slightest, even during his last days prior to his death. [got rid of the sickness part for more impact]

pan 2 bub 2: But it is a very tough one, and the performer has to dance continuously from sunset to sunrise.

Wait which one is page 4? This one ?

yeah, in the 3rd panel where he's weaving the sandals there's two bubbles in the bottom right corner

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here's the original page btw

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pan 2 bub 2: Back when I learned the dance from your grandfather
pan 3 small bub (missing) [stitching noises]
pan 4 bub 2: But what’s important are the correct breaths and movements.
pan 5 bub 1: When you do these,

pan. 3 bub 1: Utilize your five senses and become aware of your entire body down to the tiniest blood vessel. [liberalized a little from text to make meaning clearer]
pan 4 bub 2; Just keep the necessary thjngs from those movements and close everything else. [tried to change for context]

This chapter really begs the question, what the fuck is the deal with the Kamado family? The dad was obviously some sort of priest. I hope Crocodile goes into it sometime soon.

he was a woodcutter

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pan 1 bub 3: Our neighbors lit their iron basket fires and put up ropes lined with suzu bells.

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You have orig page for this?

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pan 2 miss bubs: [heavy breathing]
pan 3 bub 2: It seems dad noticed its presence because the bells never rung.
pan 5 bub 2: But if you come any closer, I will not let you off easy. [Does this work?]

pan 1 bub 1: If anything, or anyone, tries to harm my family,

Oh, the because is supposed to be even though. My bad.

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pan 1 bub 2: Thumped to the ground together with the bells.
pan 3 bub 1: He had to, or it would’ve been impossible to chop its head off with an axe that size.

pan 1 bub 1: Was effectively a form of perception training.
pan 2 bub 2: Learned this the exact same way for sure.
pan 3 bub 3: If you keep working hard and never slack off, you can tear down any wall in your way [at some point]. [bracketed because its literally there, but it might sound better without that part]

pan 3 bub 1: Both he and Goyuu-san are trading blows

pan 2 bub 2: I entered it for just a moment. [emphasize “entered” not moment]

pan 2 bub 1: [transparent is better]
pan 2 bub 2: The same thing happened when Hangengu was hiding in his own heart.

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pan 4 bub 1: I will ise this to the best of my ability and defeat Akaza!!

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I think that should be it unless you see something else that bothers you.

i think that's it, i will upload

mangadex.org/chapter/570828/1

mediafire.com/file/smw745pf6kxcq7b/KnY_ch_151.rar/file

thank you for your hard work

10 ot of 10, great job

Thanks, you guys

thank you!