Just finished the script, it probably requires some proofreading. Also I don't have time to typeset it right now, so feel free to.
Full pastebin here: pastebin.com
/1
I just want to live a plain and peaceful life.
That’s all.
All because of her,
My life’s been torn to pieces...
/2-3
Cover spread.
How old is the guy?
nice. any typesetter here? I can do it but I don't wanna.
/2-3
Cover spread.
Typing this because captcha. Not sure if anyone's noticed this, but this manga is from the author of Suzuki-kun, another ecchi that is incredibly cliche. gammaplus.takeshobo.co.jp
/4
Ah!
Ah!
Ah!
Ahh!
Ah!
So good
Ah!
It’s just between the two of us.
/6
Haah...
Haah...
[Featuring an AV actress that looks like the national idol Himetan]
[Let's have some secret fun together!
/7
It's all her fault that I'm like this...
Haah...
I wonder why I'm even alive.
?!
Then I shall give you a goal to live for!
Missed a page number there. /5
So the idol is a canon whore? Aahhahaahah
/8
I have come to pick you up,
Ryuunosuke-sama.
W-who are you?!
Why do you know about me?!
I-
I'm calling the cops!
S-stop...
D-don't come closer!
This manga is a giant shitpost and I like it
/9
What are you trying to do?
D-
Don't come any further, I beg you.
...
Please pardon my rudeness.
Mgh?!
Ngh!
Let's go.
A kidnapping?!
Why is this...
Happening to me...
/10
Ryo...
Wake...
...suke...
Wake up, Ryuunosuke!
This voice...!
It's been a while, Ryuunosuke.
Ah!
Father...
/11
W-why is Father here?!
This never happened before...
The twenty million that you borrowed 9 years ago.
Return it right now.
You said you'd definitely return it.
How long do you want to make me wait?
Ah,
That's-
You've had enough time, haven't you?
I... can't.
Then repay me in another way.
/12
Another...?
You shall pay with your body, Ryuunosuke-sama.
Join the Zaizen company, and of course,
Make the Zaizen Group prosper as its President.
There's no way I can do that!
?!
/13
Please rest assured.
In order to groom you into a fine heir,
You shall first...
/14-15
Go out with these ten women,
And pick one of them to be your wife.
/14-15 (continued)
/16-17
(Right page)
Shinonome Ruri
Hoshitani Urara
You will live with them,
Shirayuki Konomi
Older Sister Takanashi Shizune
Younger Sister Takanashi Ayane
I like Konomi and Ayane's design.
/16-17
(Left page)
Kisaragi Rin
Ichigotani Hime
Minato Chizuru
And every week,
You shall dismiss one of them.
Kurumizawa Lily
Yurizono Reika
/18
Also,
There is something I forgot to mention.
Furukawa Natsuki is among them.
Natsuki?!
She's...
Among them...
Ryuunosuke.
You could make him a better businessman and person before he has the chance to fuck it all up though.
/19
Then, let us begin.
This matchmaking party,
Where you shall find your fated bride.
Bury your damned past,
Haah
Haah
And live a new life.
/20
Don't bully him, Maid-san!
>T/N: Urara uses Kansai dialect, you might want to express this differently in English.
You don't seem very well. Are you okay?
D-don't come so close!
What's wrong?
?
Hi-
/21
Himetan?!
Ryuunosuke-kun!
You know about me?! (T/N: Hime uses her own name to refer to herself, you can add this in if you like.)
Eeeeeek!
I'm glad!
>infinity amounts of good manga untranslated
>translating some trash because "haha it's 5toubun ripoff lol hehe"
/22
Shit, shit!
Haah
Haah
What was that?
I'm fine with just watching Himetan smile on TV.
Haah
Haah
I don't want the real one!
I don't need money or a wife.
I'll go back to my apartment...
?!
I'm so dizzy...
You can suggest some and I'll see if I have time for those.
>EOPs being picky
/23
...Hey.
Why did you ask me for this?
If it's just studying, you can ask someone else.
Eh?
Like, someone you'd have fun with...
Killjoy.
It's because it's you.
Why?
As for why,
That's because
You're rich.
Thanks, I hate it.
/24
Haah
A dream...?
Haah
...?
What... happened to me?
I escaped, then...
?!
>zaizen
>idolshit
wtf, I came here for 5toubun killer not another VRAINS thread
That's what you get from manga nips parent.
/25
W-
Who are you?!
You're finally awake!
You're so mean, escaping like that.
?!
You supported me, didn't you?
You'll choose me, right?
S-stop...
Kinda wished they went full smut instead.
/26
I don't need the real you!
I like the Himetan,
That smiles on TV!
You're not interested in the real me?
Y-
Yeah!
Then,
Why is this place getting hard?
?!?!?!
That's...
Your body wants me, you know?
Stop!
...!
/27
Uh...
Ryuunosuke-kun,
Ah...
You've never touched the real one,
Stop...
So you don't know yet.
I'm sure,
You'll like the real Hime too.
That idol my favorite hanayome now.
Same
/28
Hime...tan?
Don't worry, leave it to me.
Squish
Whoa?!
W-
Wait!
Make sure you choose me in the end.
This might be a good hentai read, I wonder if the author could've just gone for a hentai publisher instead.
Maybe you should learn nip and translate them yourself, you useless incompetent EOP.
thanks user
absolutely disgusting first chapter
Yeah. Unless there's a bigger whore to replace her.
Among 10 of them, there will always a bigger whore than that idol. Idol is the biggest whore for now.
Is this the battle of the whores now?
>muh battle royale harem
Is this going to be monthly?
Parent probably will get away with it by saying "we do this for you" or something like that.
It's biweekly
The author uploaded individual character pics on Twitter: twitter.com
>prostitutes
>white
oh, the irony
This shit is literally harem time
best girl
that was terrible
>be rich as fuck dad
>don't do your job as a parent for almost a decade, letting your son turn into a waste of oxygen hikki neet
>don't even use your assets to hire someone to raise him for you
>randomly decide that you now want to make that kid with zero qualifications and millions of issues the president of the company
>instead of getting him professional help and top-tier tutors, just throw a bunch of gold diggers at him
I'll take yukata-glasses-braids-chan thanks.
Is someone TS this?
Not sure if anyone's going to. I would do it if nobody does, in the next two weeks.
I can but I don't know if one of the lurkers here has already started doing it. I don't want to waste my effort. It's almost 30 pages after all.
cont. If someone can compile all the pages, rename and upload them somewhere else, that would be fan fucking tastic.
sell me this. what's different from the other harem series out there? all I can see the MC is gonna have a larger than the other harem tha. most.
*forgive the last part was half asleep and didnt proofread what I wrote.
This manga is quite fappable. I guess I'll unzip for it every 2 weeks.
It's gonna be lewd from what I see. Hope there's an uncensored version too.
Is this the new Hachi Ichi?
>reeeee translate my manga
Imagine being this retarded.
Literally nothing. It's hot at least
An absolute idiot of a father. Do he want all his riches goes to nothing? He should make the MC be a capable person first before making him go for bitches.
You just realized how bad of an excuse the plot is.
This is just a hentai plot but without the hentai.
Looks like nobody is interested enough to help.
I'll leave this to another TS then, if there's any.
Thanks TL user.
I'm not TL user, just a random TS. If you want me to TS the chapter, do since I'm too lazy to do all these tedious chore..
TL user here
Raw: files.catbox.moe
Script: pastebin.com
Thanks TS user
This is not even a hentai plot. This is a BAD hentai plot.
kill yourself
It has some lewd maybe they will fuck
>KINJITL
Oh, hello there.
1. shit posting on 4ch
2. criticize how OP chooses to use his time
1a. be pot
2a. call kettle black
1b. live in glass house
2b. throw rocks
etc.
I guess that right now chances are 50/50 between "everyone fucks" and "everyone almost fucks, but MC manages to run away just before sticking it in".
At the very least we can expect some nipples in tanks, judging from the censorship style.
>become a neet over a girl
3dpd too strong, pls nerf
I will have one Lilly, take away please.
Personal preference, user.
The author wrote Satou-kun and Suzuki-kun, which are stories that revolve around some app that shows MC the inner thoughts of the girls around him. It's one of the most cliche hentai tropes other than time stop, so I'm not expecting much here.
>other than time stop
What is brain control app?
Thanks user
Place your bet on the winner of the PTSD bowl. My bet is on Konomi
Thanks user, that's fast! TSed and cleaned all by yourself?
shit manga for shit people
I'm the Sonic scanlator after all.
She's already the center girl, and probably a childhood friend.
Can't wait for the inevitable plot twist in chapter 19 where it turns out she's also a gold digger.
Isn't the story the usual "betrayed by your friend that actually just want the money" thing? But plus shitty parents.
ok, I'm interested, I want to see where this goes
The only thing I'm interested in is the "each week you need to eliminate a girl" premise.
I hope it turns dark and nasty instead of tear jerkers.
>They are all here for the money
>They develop feeling for the mc since he is actually gentle
>drama over their feelings being real and mc doubting it
>harem end
Wait this is a survival game?
Now I'm interested, I didn't even bother reading the manga at first thinking it would be a shitty hentai.
Classic
Girl to the right looks like a bro for life
but he has to get rid of one each week
>writes a one and done wank porn premise
>except makes it a "clean" quarter assed version and stretches it to 50 chapters before they run out of ideas
I don't know if this guy did porn prior but I fucking hate when porn authors half ass going "legit" with shitty blue ball notPorn "ecchi" series instead of actually just going legit. If you're going to leave porn leave fucking porn. I hate that halfassed shit because I'd rather just actual porn.
Porn without story is boring and meaningless. Take Brazzers for example, their porn scenes are complete generic shit but the plots are often funny and entertaining.
It's not having a story that I have a problem with. It's when hentai authors are too incompetent to stray from their porn roots and take premises meant for a quick fap and try making that into a long running series under the guise of "ecchi".
>The only thing I'm interested in is the "each week you need to eliminate a girl" premise.
I have a feeling that it won't last long, regularly dropping haremettes doesn't seem like a good way to milk a serialized harem manga.
Yotsuba is a fucking slut
At least we know idol slut will stick around.
>Idol slut
That redundant
She is one of the three that has flowers after all.
Why are people trying to relate this to The Quints Manga when it seems to be a Bachelor style manga and has sex right in the first chapter.
How can this manga even last when every week, a harem member disappears?
It's just a waste of character design.
Manga premise should have been which girl gets pregnant first in order to be the first wife.
Its like the bachelor.
Its really the only thing going for it other than being raunchy so far.
Its only the first chapter though.
I think she is going to be the first one to get kicked off.
The author's other manga seemed more romantic and cute.
Why isn't that getting translations?
The Maid seems to have said something to MC before knocking him out but no speech bubble so we don't know what she said to him
>How can this manga even last when every week, a harem member disappears?
Having a shorter run might be better.
Who's the best girl?
My vote goes to delicious brown.
Anyone who doesn’t have the flowers might as well be irrelevant. Also I like the twin tailed genki tomboy. Guess that makes me the hipster.
Bottom left is most irrelevant.
5 to 7 of the girls will definitely be eliminated.
Ayane, Konomi and Hime for me.
That's the phone app one I was talking about. It's pretty much the same stuff, hentai but not really. I think the final chapter will pass for hentai though.
So which one of them is secretly a lesbian
One of the sisters probably.
Hime, Ruri, Konomi, Twins.
>Anyone who doesn’t have the flowers might as well be irrelevant.
Pretty much, even the mangaka already laid it out
I'm looking forward to that sisters 3P
you picked the correct one, user.
the one named Lily
>Why are people trying to relate this to The Quints Manga
Because it has "nunerical no hanayome" as its title. People are stupid.
numerical*
For some it’s a joke and they now know it’s actually the bachelor with a misleading name. Others will keep the stupid meme until the end believing every haremshit is the same.
So considering that there's only around 10-15 weeks of timespan for the plot, will this still reach its ending first before 5Toubun?
Author makes it sound like 7 girls will get elimated and then he will drag it on with three girls.
I posted it yesterday.
You are lucky the black hair won’t get eliminated.
>Implying this will last 40+ chapter
hey, i rmb this, the classmate is cute
your jean is torn, MIss
london bitch fashion sense
I don't know, the rest of them have that red string of fate thing going on. I assume that'll be important, since the nips really love those, or maybe just a red herring the author is putting out to fool readers. Also, idolslut looks like she's gonna get herself eliminated first for being a dirty slut.
Someone hasn't seen Danganronpa.
I just noticed that Hime and Konomi have the same front hair as the trauma girl.
Anyway, Konomi looks like a textbook main girl, and she's probably Natsuki, who actually always liked the MC, with whole past issue being a misunderstanding. Hime is most likely in for the money/career, but will fall in love with the Nice Guy™ MC. Black-haired chick will appear relevant, only to inevitably lose. The rest are blatant extras. Pretty much the real showdown will be Konomi vs Hime, and to be honest, at this point I'm not really sure which one is supposed to be the designated winner.
>inb4 a misunderstanding or just a lame joke that backfired horribly
inb4 MC picks the maid instead
Yeah that’s not going to happen.
Maid is the 0th harem member. happened in Harem TIme too.
Red String is there to show they have other men destined for them.
What classmate? I don't remember it having classmates, then again I always lightspeedread it when fapping.
Should have been a story about the shut in MC and the Maid whose job is to turn the MC into a capable person.
You are pretty dumb brining up dangaronpa in a haremshit series.
Not when MC also has it tied to his finger.
That would be fine if this wasn’t the bachelor.
if i am not wrong, the classmate is MC crush and then join the harem later for money. FUcking guy should keep drawing doujin instead of shit shounen
I bet the maid is the trauma girl.
She's going through an arc where she traumatized him and is now aiding him.
Unless this manga kicks out the three prominent girls first then you might as well ignore the red string of fate.
Sounds a bit like the new Morishige manga
Better question is which one is a trap
That would make sense if the plot was.
>I just noticed that Hime and Konomi have the same front hair as the trauma girl.
So does the Rei clone and genki twintail
>5toubun
I fucking knew the title reminded me of something.
Anyway I'll give it a try because of the "eliminate one each week", though I don't have much hope.
So thi is like Toubun but with porn
No.
It's like 5toubun in that it's also a harem, yeah.
Toubun but better with better girl design
brown or Lily
No similarity other than the title and the MC marrying one of them
I always thought she was a customer at the shop he works part time at. Yes Tosh is fucking wasted on that plane crash that is Soma. Literally all his doujins are Onanism masterpieces.
>better girl design
Nah, none of these girls is as cute or sexy as Nino or Ichika
>Maid mentioned about that girl
>Turned out that she is the one and is secretly plotting to steal him away
based
There’s gotta be at least something unique concept/turning point next chapter, if not, it’s gonna be axed in like five chapters
you are my bro now, i am glad we communicate and share similar interest at a meaningful level, it meants alot to my current mental state
Most magazines are not shonen Jump.
> it meants alot to my current mental state
You okay my dude?
Author should decide the final three by poll.
Literally me
Frankly its nothing like gotoubun other than having hanayome in the name
Does Jump not allow Tosh to make unrelated hentai on the side?
I'm glad of that. More importantly user, daijobu?
I think they do. He completely stopped dishing them out hasn't he?
That cleaning fucking sucks. Apply yourself next time, it's not like anyone is gonna release this any faster.
Yes. Shoukugeki got old years ago and he is being held hostage. His seto no hanayome doujins were some of my first faps to hentai doujin
nobody fucking cares about quality. it's not worth my time.
this pair of pages is one of the stupidest shit i have ever read
Prison Lab is translated up to chapter 37 or something and only 10 days passed out of 30. These authors can stretch this shit for as long as they want.
has potential, if only they weren't censoring it...
>His seto no hanayome doujins
You are really my brother from another mother. I fapped to those to no end.
Then why are you doing it in the first place, you stupid nigger?
Not a girl from that group full of thots
So the point of this is to find the girl from the last? This guy is ripping off on so many levels and sources. No shame literally, and the bait title too.