Chapter 3rd of Nagatoro. 16 pages, not that lewd, just battle between geniuses. As always please check for grammatical mistakes and weird phrasings. ---- Naga: Mn~ Bread from the canteen is pretty meh, isn't it~
Naga: Well it's good enough for its price, but... the taste lacks a punch... Sen: You sure are extravagant...
Chapter 33: 'You're having bento, Senpai?'
Naga: You're having bento, Senpai? That's rare. Sen: It's because I'm broke this month... and this looks like it'll save some money...
Naga: Did you make it yourself? Sen: Yeah...
Naga: Let me see~ Naga: Your grand achievement~...
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It really is user, DMC3 tier. Not going to spoil you more, so hope you get it soon
Elijah Green
>Bullies: Exclamation Mark, Question Mark. epic
Julian Rivera
Ha ha ha. That face in the first panel. Naga fucked up And it backfired
Tyler Johnson
I can't wait for sleepy slut chan's capture of senpai
Thomas Jenkins
Based as fuck
Matthew Martinez
The unpredictable hurricane that is senpai
Joshua Price
Thanks dude. Enjoy that wild ride. Gonna be joining soon
Jayden Rodriguez
Naga just keeps losing.
Brody Lewis
Suddenly, Soma.
Gamo: The harmony of the fluffy exterior with the soft juicy meat!! Unbelievable. Yoshi: Soft juicy!!
Goma: Even though it's cold, the delectable rich taste of the chicken is racing through my body!! Goma: Unbelievable. Yoshi: Chicken race!! Naga: You're exaggerating.
The need for seed is taking effect on her personality.
Daniel Reyes
That's not Naga saying the last line
Julian Edwards
That must be the most phsycopatic Nagatoro I have ever seen
Christian Scott
Incoming Nudetoro
Ayden Murphy
my fucking heart.
Connor Hill
I hope so.
Grayson Morgan
>Incoming Nudetoro Nanashi please
Colton Thompson
It better be.
Oliver Cook
Gamo: See? It's good, isn't it? Yoshi: C'est Bon! Naga: ・・・・・ Sen: Pollack roe filling... Sen: I'll have to try making that next time... To Be Continued!!
---- And that's it for this chapter. You have no idea how tempted I was to just censored the last page to mess with all of you. Next chapter is on the 26th of March. Have a good day/evening/night.
Looking behind her left hand, is her breast drawn deformed or is it because a nipple should be there? He really should just draw her fully nude without anything covering her, even if it's featureless.
Looks like the birth of Chameleontoro--Nagatoro blending into the background.
Liam Morales
GET SOME, SENPAI !!!
Liam Powell
I like how nanashi keeps taking concepts from many other romcoms and other Manga for his chapter ideas. So far we've had similarities with Takagi San, that manga about a glasses dude drawing a gyaru, Kaguya sama and Soma on this chapter. I'm most likely forgetting some others.
Jaxson Flores
I've seen the page where Nagatoro has captured the stalker. >yfw Friend C continues the date with Senpai after defeating the stalker
Transforming into one thousand white hot burning suns of blinding fury.
David Smith
So sleppy wants pretend sex with Senpai?
Landon Cooper
oh shit, what the fuck are you doing senpai
Noah Campbell
Sparks fly, off of me and onto (you)
Christian Martinez
I just started playing it, god am I bad at it, Goliath kicked my ass multiple times before I could finally beat him. Should I just decrease the difficulty?
What I'm getting is >Senpai and Sleepy go on pretend date to make the stalker fuck off >Nagatoro quietly raging >They see the stalker while on the pretend date >Nagatoro fucks him up (letting the anger out) >Senpai see's her in a different light or something
Leo Gray
She can't that's why she's so irritated whenever other girls interact with Senpai.
Grayson Evans
>Senpai see's her in a different light or something No. He and Friend C just fear hear monkey strength.
Sebastian Young
When Naga kills friend C
Brandon Lewis
Nobody falls for you over food. Trust me ;_;
Carter Watson
Gamo is /fa/ as fuck. Yoshi is just Yoshi. Nagatoro looks like a 10 years old with long hair
She merely wants to pretend to start a loving family together.
Leo Phillips
God, gamo is so perfect
Julian Anderson
The manga should be renamed Please stop seething Nagatoro-san
Carter Brown
Noodletoro is always naked.
Daniel Mitchell
I hope they take a group selfie with Friend C grabbing Senpai while Nagatoro is in the back with crazy eyes.
Leo Russell
Wait he was eating it too, so where the fuck was my nude senpai?
Nathaniel Mitchell
I can see the Zawas over Naga's head.
It gets even better in the more refined pages, Gamo had great fashion sense.
Nathaniel Rivera
Is Yoshi gonna have a SUGOI DEKAI shirt or something?
Samuel Jackson
Nagatoro is a bad cook.
Hunter Gray
>sluts >family
Jackson Nelson
The most surprising thing in this chapter is that Yoshi is smart enough to even know what C'est Bon means. Everyone having a foodgasm is second most surprising, but definitely the best part.
Brandon Roberts
>yfw it's her I LOVE DOG shirt.
Grayson Johnson
C has such a retarded face on the right panel
Tyler Walker
Go away, Nagatoro.
Xavier Young
She is one of those pure sluts, user
Christopher Wilson
It looks cute! Something about that sleepy expression.
Mason Moore
t. seething Niggertoro
Cooper Collins
Do they literally not have names yet
Xavier Wright
Yoshi, Gamo and reveal soon. Canonically senpai hasn't been named yet.
Wyatt Morales
They all have names. Have you been skipping chapters?
>that Nagatoro looking at Senpai's back as he is with another girl while they both walk into distance Nagatoro's greatest fear right here.
Bentley Howard
M'senapi.
Parker Peterson
There's no such thing son, please realize it before it's too late
Angel Cook
>Senpai turning to look at Nagatoro at that bottom panel God, I want to see Nagatoro's face of pure hurt and jealousy.
Kayden Smith
Given how mental Nagatoro goes at senpai spending time alone with another girl, what would happen if Senpai's childhood friend becomes a thing. Should we expect a really nice boat?
Her ribcage area wasn't done very well, was it? Her upper torso wasn't given enough shape and the line below her collar above her breasts makes it weirder.
Hudson Thomas
[insert witty comment] I just couldn't redraw it on time, i'm on the clock right now. Nanashi isn't as accustomed to draw big tits or girls with more muscle as I thought he was. Overall looks fine, asians tend to have a large torso.
Hunter Williams
Gamo needs to comb her hair
Camden Turner
Thank you, Stalker!
Bentley Williams
Never judge a book by its cover folks.
Jack Morgan
and leglock
Brayden Murphy
nobody did, not even most japs thats why we are here
Eli Hernandez
Should have used Nanashi's art for the last panel.
Having something spicier doesn't mean other foods don't also have a spicy sensation. I mean flaming hot Cheetos aren't that hot but that doesn't suddenly mean they're without any spice at all like a normal cheeto.
Jack Williams
So, are Senpai and Sleepy a thing now? If they get married, will Nagatoro bake the wedding cake? Cause that would be hilarious
Luke Diaz
That's what I want to happen, but it's actually them trying to catch a stalker by pretending to be a couple. Of course Nagatoro is having none of it.
Jaxon White
Nagatoro a shit
Jaxon Phillips
But what if sleepy wants to continue the pretending the next chapter
Zachary Anderson
Then my body is ready.
Austin Gomez
try some english mustard
John Nelson
NTR fat man joins the fight!
Carson Brown
she's been aiming for senpai ever since he displayed alpha characteristics inviting the girls to follow him ignoring the idiots when they first met, He also maintains a calm nest with examples of his creativity and hard work displayed. He's like a bower bird.
James Robinson
Girls with big tits isn't something nanashi does on the regular user, you should know this by now
Easton Rodriguez
that is just acid retard get the fuck out make some real sauces
So is it unusual for people to pack lunches all the time in Japan? Seems like something as expensive as eating out every day should be less common than animu has led me to believe.
Nicholas Cooper
I would
Alexander Richardson
>He also maintains a calm nest with examples of his creativity and hard work displayed. >He's like a bower bird.
I think there's some unwritten rule in manga work to not lewd stuff up that you're officially involved with. I think the artist for the Haruhi manga got in trouble when they found out he was doing hentai doujins of Haruhi on the side.
She's hurting someone other than senpai! Double NTR!
Jacob Martin
>That calm eye >That psychotic eye you can barely make out
Nanashi is a fucking master even when sharing previews.
Cooper Morales
>invited her friends to lunch to make fun of senpai’s box >it’s so neat and tasty that she gets btfo in front of her friends based retard nagatoro
Charles Barnes
adding even the hottest mustard still only waters down actual peppers you tonguelet cope harder
Samuel Hill
You are stupid. No one is talking about scovilles but you. The chemicals in mustards, wasabi, horseradish, etc isn't the same chemical as in peppers and isn't the same type of hotness. You might as well saying peppers water down the mustard because they are different chemical reactions. You are a plebe, an entry level fan of spicy things, a casual. I bet you watch hot ones.
Ryan Davis
you know it's some good bento when it fucking blows their clothes off
>No one is talking about scovilles but you dropped your brainlet post right there quote me where I mentioned scovilles you coping "muh horseradish" tonguelet
He retranslated to spanish and then uploaded an english version.
Logan Taylor
>Spics are thief And water is wet. Just report them.
Alexander Walker
>stealing >unofficial translations I remember stalker not wanting any credit before, so I don't know if it's totally okay for this shit to happen, even if anons want some 'justice'.
William Roberts
No, her messy hair is a charm point.
Joshua Bailey
It now mentions/a/, so everything is cool now and S.T.A.L.K.E.R in particular never wanted any credit anyway, he is our Dark Knight.
Gavin Murphy
>Yoshi: C'est bon ! Absolutely based and redpilled
I hope someone releases a proper version cause the typesetting and lining absolutely fucking sucks in this one. Spics are fucking garbage in scanlation.
Leo Scott
Needs an Ash Ketchum edit.
Tyler Turner
Congrats you got an idiot pregnant. Now your kids will be raised by an idiot.
Christopher Bailey
>Should I just decrease the difficulty? no, just stick with it
Wyatt Torres
FASTER JEANNU FASTER
Hudson Price
Go fuck yourself
Landon Edwards
I mean he does it for free. I've had my scans stolen by spics and italians. Not that big of a deal.
Jaxson Martinez
The picture you posted and the peppers you talk about. Everyone can see it, you don't even know what you're talking about when you talk about hot. You don't even know the words for the things you describe. Your projection of assuming I prefer horseradish over reapers or anything of the sort is completely off point. You were wrong and ignorant, and since you were wrong and ignorant and stupid you thought you knew what you were talking about and chose to share your views with everyone so the entire thread can see how stupid you are.
Austin Clark
I hope 774 draws all the girls getting fucked by pigs in his next work.
Michael Wright
>no quote did you brainlet expect me to read your drivel, coping tonguelet?
Jose Sullivan
Boy, you sure took your hour just to embarass yourself with more autism.
>boring as fuck chapter so lets randomly put lewds of the characters for no reason
Its shit.
Lincoln Lewis
Thanks as always Stalker.
Levi Scott
>I’m gay, the post
Cameron Phillips
It depends on if they are under a contract. I know raita can't make porn of anyone from valkyria chronicles because Sega said so. I imagine anyone else just doesn't want to draw porn of there own characters. I know that guy cakes gets salty if anyone draws his character with the big tits that cna remove her head naked or fucking
Asher Cook
Degenerate fatfucker, neck yourself.
Blake Hernandez
Pay attention to her left tit...it looks massive.
Owen Bennett
>yoshi: thick body and massive tits, probably has a plump ass >gamo: big tits and fit body, probably has big muscled ass >nagatoro: shit
I wanted each character to have their own font like the original. I just wanted Gamo to stay with her bold font like nanashi gives her, but just do whatever.
gamo and yoshi seriously need their own senpais to bully
they deserve to be happy
Jordan Flores
>just a bunch of blobs a real breast connoisseur, aren't you?
Isaac Powell
They said they thought Nanashi wasn't used to drawing big tits, I just provided evidence otherwise. Or are you really so dense you didn't realize those are all drawn by Nanashi?
>Sen: Pollack roe filling... >Sen: I'll have to try making that next time... So prezpai doesn't dislike spicy foods and just played along with being baited so he could make the trade Nagaya wanted to offer.
Pretty good, and I understand you wanted to make them different, but Gamo's nips look awful compared to Yoshi's. Also, you forgot to color part of Yoshi's left boob.
