by Hiroshi Shiibashi (Nurarihyon no Mago)
Yui Kamio Lets Loose Chapter 1 Dump
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Camden Kelly
Kayden Gomez
Nolan Richardson
Why is he so wide?
Josiah Sullivan
Why is Hana Yori Dango in a shonen magazine?
Justin Thompson
Liam Baker
Levi Taylor
Not the weirdest thing I've seen
Christopher Fisher
Alexander Cooper
Blake Sullivan
>Life lovers
Fucking gay ass name
Lincoln Phillips
James Peterson
Nathaniel White
Male bonding
Nicholas Martin
I can't believe it's not shoujo
Jonathan Perez
Jonathan Bennett
Cameron Cook
Please be better than Illegal rare
Dylan Diaz
Blake Campbell
Nao is a better love interest than the guy.
Jaxon Hall
Christopher Gray
Cooper Sanders
Is it me or does the main girl look like a Clamp character?
Tyler Wright
reminds me of hungry marie for some reason
Michael Watson
Jace Walker
Isaiah Richardson
Elijah Walker
Yuri in mai jampu?
Tyler Long
Evan Murphy
David Scott
the guy fucking sucks, not looking forward to more of him
Ryan Perry
>beat a girl in front of a yacht party
How American is this guy?
Jace Anderson
Why can't she be the main love interest?
Jaxson Wright
Chase Baker
Ethan Gray
Go to Japan, buy 1000 copies of Jump, send questionnaires.
Nathan Hall
Jeremiah Rodriguez
Julian Taylor
Jordan Evans
John Watson
Eli Ortiz
Kevin Collins
go on
Aiden Butler
Leo Collins
Bentley Miller
Jose Cook
Is this supposed to be a parody of HanaDan's F4 or something?
Nathaniel Jones
James Myers
Kayden Miller
Yes, the guy is basically a parody of Tsukasa, too. I wonder if Jump's audience will get it, tho.
Levi Cox
Jonathan Long
It's the hair.
Owen Anderson
Cameron Reed
Elijah Mitchell
They probably will, it's the most popular shoujo manga ever after all.
Tyler Thompson
Nathaniel Sanchez
Christopher Rodriguez
Oliver Myers
Jose Cox
She can't be the heroine, even as a joke. In a shounen she would be passed up if she wasn't the interesting girl's friend, and in a shoujo with a male lead like this the feisty one would be the preferred type of MC. HYD doesn't have millions of clones for no reason.
Daniel Roberts
Noah Edwards
At least he's not the usual meek romcom protagonist. Pigtails acts like that though, so I'm not sure why anyone wants her to shack up with the heroine.
Angel Reyes
Anthony Cook
WIIIIIDE
Jordan Rodriguez
Hunter Lopez
I'll be honest, I like this page a lot
William Jones
Alexander Carter
I'm not sure if I agree with basically performing magical lobotomy on someone no matter how violent their actual personality is.
Andrew Morales
Yeah the art is pretty great
Ayden Bell
I actually think the artstyle is repulsive, if I'm honest.
Blake Wilson
Jacob Bailey
It's his style. It has an oldschool feel.
Angel Williams
It looks like late 90's manga.
Noah Myers
Kevin Reed
yeah but it's also 25 years old
Blake Martin
Not a fan of every character flaunting over the main girl and main guy desu.
Weak start and feels very shoujo-ish.
Ryan Moore
Jonathan Walker
shes so pretty, has nice hair, long legs, cute face, so perfect!
You dont like reading that in every page? weak
William Phillips
Joseph Fisher
Liam Cruz
Thomas Garcia
>Yui Kamio Lets Loose
Please tell me that's not the official localized title.
Hudson Gutierrez
Kind of weird. Like Rosario x Vampire but there is some random girl who manages the transformation. Or from another POV a random guy who now shares a secret with main girl.
Don't know how this dynamic will work of this goes romance route.
Easton James
Nicholas Ward
Viz niggers are retarded as usual
Nolan Murphy
It's too much because that's also what's happening in Act-Age's current arc.
Samuel Cruz
The Japanese name is Kamio Yui wa kami o yui, an untranslatable pun.
David Nelson
Dropped.
Ian Cook
I get the feeling we're gonna have to make space in the club for a new member.
Leo Sanders
Pretty shitty first chapter. But not dropped just yet.
Thanks for the dump.
Justin Ramirez
Kamio>Saiyuki
Feel free to prove me wrong because Saiyuki's first chapter was meh
Wyatt Sullivan
>Ne0
>Kami Yui
>Sakio
>probably Chainsawman
All of them won't fit in that page
Dylan Price
Do you have the under 30k picture. The one in the sumo club
Brody Peterson
Savage
Monks, no sense of right and wrong.
Liam Adams
Swap Chainsawman with Higuma
Brayden Hernandez
Does this artist do porn? The art feels a little familiar but idk from where.
Zachary Cooper
Both are mediocore. At least Saiyuki picked up in the 2nd chapter.
Christian Miller
It was OK. I like Black Yui. Mangaka introduced too many characters in the first chapter. Should have focused just in Yui and the guy.
Henry Moore
ignore me I'm retarded and should learn to read OP
Anthony Butler
Saiyuki has too much redundant exposition. Chapter 2 was 2 characters talking in a room about stuff the audience already knows.
Jack Morris
I guess that's true. It did a good cliffhanger at the very least.
Carson Thomas
did the other new wsj manga got dumps?
Jackson Kelly
Do Saiyuki. CM, Jujutsu, Act-Age and this already got dumped.
Daniel Wood
I want Higuma to live
Adam Collins
Why do you even need a dump? They're both free on mangaplus.
Wyatt Harris
It's kinda shoujo-ish and the main guy isn't generic so I'll give it a chance. Hope it becomes better.
Tyler Lopez
Pretty standard stuff overall, but I'd say:
>The Good
>Gitsune + Tsurara + Moka = Black Yui, which is awesome. She's the best part of the manga
>Had some funny moments from an author that doesn't specialize in comedy
>Male lead got more tolerable as the chapter went on
>Introduced quite a few characters
>Art, especially the style when black Yui is involved, is great
>The Meh
>Very generic and is blatantly very similar to Rosario Vampire
>Action isn't as fleshed out as a battle manga, but is more standard for a more comedic series
>Other than the MC and Yui, no one else was really fleshed out
>The Bad
>No overarching plot really established
>General plot and genericness don't really pull you in
>MCs are too 'perfect/popular'
>Other WSJ series do what it does, but better
I don't think it was as good as the Saiyuki and was more just the generic, standard WSJ series. Not as good as Nurarihyon or maybe even Illegal Rare, but for an author branching out to a largely different genre, it's not terrible.
If it's quality stays the same, I'd say it only lasts for as long as other manga are worse than it. It needs to up it's game, but it has some decent ground work to work with and for a first chapter, it isn't the worst thing in the world.
Bentley Morgan
I like it and all user but it's axed soon
Aiden Collins
I knew this shit should've just been yuri. Fuck this basic shit
Bentley Wright
I'm not too hopeful about this one, the MC seemed different from the usual at the start but he turned out pretty regular.
And just like with Saiyuki it feels like the author is banking on the premise being interesting but everything else is pretty meh.
Adrian Mitchell
Go back to lleddit
Christian Kelly
I really don't see how this being Yuri would've changed anything that happened in this chapter.
Hunter Sanders
Second chapter preview:
>Delinquents from all over Japan aiming for Black Yui?!
Is it going to turn into a fighting manga?
Ethan Jones
One less character would give it some room to breathe. It was very crowded.
Connor Wilson
No ecchi?
Elijah Bailey
It's a comedy, not a romcom.
Daniel Cruz
This wasn't very funny. You'd expect it to be, but it didn't have the comedy that made Nisekoi enjoyable at the start. Not sure if Japan will like this
Benjamin Cox
It adds context so that you understand why anyone bothers coming up to them, but I agree it does get tedious. That bit where the male lead says she's not like any girl he's ever met felt hollow for that reason. Like really? You've never met a girl who thought an interest in helping living things and acts nice inside was admirable?
Brody Green
It's advertised as a romantic fighting comedy series. It's like Yuuna but with no ecchi.
Michael Parker
>romantic
dropped
Andrew Ward
Worse, a haremshit
inb4 it becomes the next Nisekoi
Isaiah Young
Dragon Ball is 35 years old, just saying.
Ian Ramirez
If it became a harem series, then it really would be copying Rosario Vampire. I don't think that will happen.
Andrew Watson
I hope they go the monk route with fist fights then, i dont think shiibashi can do romcom much less full romance
Robert Lewis
To me, I'd say the good outweighed the bad in this first chapter. I hope we get some more delinquent fights from this series. It reminded me of something that'd end up getting published in Champion instead of Jump.
Matthew Nguyen
it felt tedious to read, the art style may be all right but the way it's laid out isn't pleasant to read
James Harris
Younger people in Japan know about it because of its extremely popular and successful live action version that aired last year. There's also an ongoing manga.
Parker Baker
I hate harems
Adrian Lopez
Shiibashi's art was always great, so not surprised.
Anthony Jackson
Why bother with new manga if they are just gonna cancel it anyway?
Anthony Ramirez
Because it may just be that one manga that doesn't get canceled.
Luis Bailey
Personally, Illegal Rare was much shittier, it was already unsalvageable from the very first chapter.
I loved Nurarihyon no Mago so much, I really hope the author will some day put out something at that level.
Alexander Ramirez
He's a one trick pony.
Eli King
Axed
Zachary White
Act-Age > David > Shudan > Alice to Taiyou > Yui Kamio > Saiyuuki > Invade You > Higuma > Cross Account > Lycopene > Noah's Notes > Chainsawman > Japan > Seiji Tanaka > Golem Hearts > ne0 > Jujutsu > Momiji > Full Drive > Bozebeats > Ziga
Matthew Sanchez
Garbage taste
Ryder Butler
>Kuso Account this high
>Jujutsu this low
Terrible taste.
Blake Baker
>dark skin: the series
Nolan Wright
My eyes are burning from your awful tastes
Ryan Johnson
Cross Account would've been higher if the author wouldn't have made the childhood friend so irredeemable in the first chapter. Jujutsu just bores me
Easton White
So does this look like a manga that will be quickly axed?
Looks like a shoujo manga to me. Didn't expect
that to be honest.
Easton Ross
Pretty good, shoujo as fuck but the delinquent action parts make it shounen enough for boys.
It’ll survive for atleast 20 something chapters since the mangaka is well known, say goodbye to souma or Yuuna instead.
Julian Hernandez
With how bad every other new series in jump is doing along with Soma being close to finishing, it will probably last 4 volumes at least like Illegal Rare I'd wager, assuming that the plot doesn't pick up from here and the male lead doesn't improve.
Jason Hughes
Oh hey the hot guy is actually hot and muscular.
Anthony Reed
do want
David Gomez
Great tastes I see
Jason Thompson
Delinquent's pretty fun too
Jayden Wright
I mean it's true, sure he's got te kpop haircut but he's apparently tall and he clearly has a good body and while he's a bishonen his face is not girlish due to a strong jaw. Also angry face.
I know japs have different standards but c'mon those skinny twinks in every other manga make no sense.
Ethan Williams
I'd be surprised if there is not any fanservice, also there is clearly gonna be at least some romance between the two.
Unless this is bait I find it impressive that you actually read and remember enough of all of these to actually rank the ones that got axed, I barely even remember what some of these were about.
Leo Garcia
I agree. I get excited whenever there are more masculine characters in manga.
Julian Long
A lot more things annoyed me then I thought was good. The only good was Black Yui and scar guy (I already forgot his name). Hopefully he shows up more.
The bad was the generic feel of it overall, the shitty main boy character, everyone obsessing over Yui and rich boy, and nothing to keep my interest when the chapter ended. Just "hey this is what my life is like now."
I'll probably still keep track of it for a while, but I have no hope for it. Black Yui herself is like the only redeeming part, but she can't hold it up herself.
Juan Edwards
I agree, I also like how the MC isn't a bland, generic self insert. I like him.
Justin Richardson
He's not the MC though
Gabriel Cooper
user what is he then
Benjamin White
Is gin no kanojo worth reading?
Jose Flores
The main love interest.
Jordan Parker
Looking at Japanese Twitter, it's probably gonna outlive some of the other series from mangaka loyalists for the first axing round.
Ian Campbell
>wants to be a vet
>doesn't even know how to feed fish
Eli Watson
twitter.com
The guy isn't even in the PV.
Elijah Turner
WIIIIIIDE WIIIIIDE MAAAAAAAAAAAAAN
Parker Diaz
Ole Golazo will forever be a punchline, whether we like it or not.
Charles King
I don't get it. They weren't the ones who bumped into her friend.
Jayden Jones
Should've been 'Yui Kamio lets her hair down'
Evan Ramirez
It was their lackeys.
Easton Fisher
Fuck you. I liked Ziga. I have been missing Kaiju.
Jose Howard
The Viz translator literally said she hated the word hair and banned all suggestions to use it in the translated title.
Ryder Hughes
What a faggot
Wyatt Moore
Is the translator bald or something?
Owen Myers
Why bother working on the translation at all then?
Thomas Howard
That's still fucking terrible
Austin Rogers
Viz translators are 4kids level localizers.
Jace Williams
Are you bald too, what's your idea?
Grayson Clark
because the shitters at viz will pay them
Joshua Torres
Instead you got the usual shoujo love interest: hot boy, extremely rich, arrogant, easily fall to the only girl not interested in him. In the end it's just trading a tropey, generic archetype for another.
Ayden Sanchez
All shonen series should have FemMC's and yuri relationships
Change my mind.
Easton Campbell
As if I needed another reason to never support those retarded faggots
Adrian Peterson
Yeah, but since he is in a shounen he us treated as a joke.
Michael Gomez
>the usual shoujo love interest
I've seen so many shoujo manga (and kdrama) with this rich guy trope that I'd take an average self-insert over it any day.
Ryder Gutierrez
I don't have one, I just think Lets Loose is better than what you suggested even if it doesn't capture the spirit of the original title.
Also, the English title doesn't matter except to Western normies
David Scott
>western normies
>not riajuu
You mean like you?
Caleb Mitchell
Why do I feel that this is the manga that only last less than 20 chapters?
Hunter King
aaaaaand Souma will survive again.
Tyler Smith
Yeah
Brandon Johnson
Soma's length has nothing to do with the new series. It's ending on certain volume count.
Lincoln Harris
I like the artstyle and the delinquent girl, but everything else is just so painfully generic. It also lack focus and does not tell us the general plot direction. Is this a supernatural, fighting, or comedy manga? Who is the main character, the girl or the guy? Do they need to introduce the other rich guys in the first chapter? Should have used that screen time on the girl instead.
Finally, is is possible to have a lamer name for your rich kid clud? Life Lover, seriously?
Jack Lee
He's treated as a joke in shoujo too. It's usually to "humanize" the archetype and make him more down to earth, but at the end of the day the MC is still pursuing an arrogant rich guy.
Ryan Ward
It's a fighting comedy.
Ian Hernandez
Hanadan Hana Nochi Hare is still on going and have been adapted into a drama series last year, which also features the original F4 in some episodes. Younger audience will eventually gonna take a look at the original series when curiosity kicks in.
Andrew Wood
The gimmick is okay, but it's so generic.
Jeremiah Russell
>Chapter 2: a gang of yankees targeting Yui appear
Asher Thompson
>it's another 'girl mc's best friend makes a better love interest than the main guy' episode
Why do they gotta repeat this one so many times?
Lincoln Miller
Nip girls like this kind of setting so this might survive for now. But they have to make the male MC more gimmicky and charismatic for that to happen.
Jacob Martin
>It's too much because that's also what's happening in Act-Age's current arc.
But Yonagi is a pro. Who wouldn't praise a real pro like her?
Zachary Bennett
Amou!?
Dominic Robinson
Male mc already is all of that
Nathaniel Sanders
Please elaborate how and why.
Gabriel Clark
Don’t like the male mc. He seems like he and his friends would be some side character gag love rival in any other romcom manga.
Levi King
Not that user. Simply the fact it's from an author with a popular older work.
Jace Turner
The panelling fucking sucks
Brandon Murphy
Old farts can't into panelling
Robert Reyes
What is that in the first panel? I can't tell what she's holding to or who the guy on the right is or why her chain slipped. This guy isn't good at conveying action. I'm only a few pages in and already I can't tell what the fuck on.
Brandon Hall
yuri?
Eli Walker
I meant to say the fuck is going on. Anyways I get it now. I feel like I shouldn't have to interpret shit like that. The chain getting caught on something came out of nowhere.
Samuel Bennett
So she's basically reverse Dr. Jekyl and Mr. Hyde in every sense.
Christopher Diaz
You know despite the state of series I still think "Food Wars" is a stupid fucking name. Sounds like they're throwing pies or launching fucking coconuts at each other.
Jonathan Harris
The guy is literally Saiko from Saiki Kusuo.
Grayson Thomas
kek
Ayden Price
Wow they're pretty transparent about how they'll be marketing this aren't they
Jonathan Powell
On a scale of 1 to 100, how likely is it that this show will be axed by the end of the year?
Elijah Fisher
You need more chapters to say.
Jack Nguyen
well, shitty first chapter but I'll wait for the demons and mythological creatures to appears
after all, this is a battles serie, right?
Mason Torres
Were there any cases where an axed manga looked like it was going to get axed as early as chapter 1?
Nathaniel Rogers
Of course. Just read the first chapter of Ne0lation from the last round. It's not axed yet but it will be soon.
Hunter Morgan
Given the author and genre i think it'll be ok in the short term but I doubt its ability to be an actual success, even a modest one
Landon Lopez
Other examples?
Aiden Sanders
I'd say it's safer than most other new things
John Cook
What about that other new WSJ manga?
Nicholas Harris
The girls are cute. Picked up.
Gavin Taylor
eh, not an offensively bad first chapter, but I'm still confused about what this wants to be.
Ian Collins
Which one? If you're talking about Saiyuki, it's at a disadvantage because it's not from a well known mangaka.
Ryan Morgan
I didn't like Saiyuki much but it felt more competent than usual. Most new series feel like they come from complete rookies, which is often the case
Samuel Garcia
Maybe I am too cynical but I think it might be left a little vague on purpose until they figure out which part is more popular with the audience ie the fighting, the romance or the comedy
Carter Sullivan
So, this is kinda like Rosario Vampire.
Cameron Morales
>couple of old bald men capture a girl in an attempt to "discipline" her and make her a proper lady
Feels like a scenario for a doujin.
Nolan Ward
Other than maybe chainsawman, all the other 5 previously added new series are in the bottom five and are likely to get canceled. Add in Soma clearly being about to end this year and both new series (saiyuki, yui) have a decent chance of surviving most of the year at minimum.
Elijah Myers
I'm fairly sure that's the opposite of what monks or any religious employee is about.
Chase Brooks
This made me notice the uniform changes too.
How does that work? It's not a part of her body like her hair.
Dominic Scott
Such speed!
Jose Nguyen
Henry Perez
Dark energy magic
Jackson Baker
>Nurarihyon no Mago author
Please be good.
Evan Davis
Fair enough DM, fair enough.
Now how which chapter you think will come up first?
The inevitable chapter where both sides of her have an internal argument over something in some mental realm?
Or the quite possible chapter of both versions of her physically separating, which eventually has to be resolved that both sides need a bit of each personality so they reform?
Mason Watson
>Yuri in mai jampu?
Considering the number of homoerotic bait Shounen Jump titles tends to attract and bait fujos, why not do it to yuri fans?
Jordan Reyes
It's obvious what the endgame of the series is. If it's allowed to survive, it's gonna end with Black Yui outgrowing White Yui, and the final chapter would have a touching and sad farewell to White Yui.
Jeremiah Williams
Fujos buy manga. Yurifags are useless.
Jason Gonzalez
Or they can somehow split the two and end it with the black-haired one becoming a teacher while the male MC goes off to travel.
Lincoln Ramirez
I feel so sorry for her since she will fall for rich guy first.
Josiah Scott
I liked it. But I really hope it dares to play more with the flaws of the characters and them being somehow awful people. Nao is oblivious, Kiito is a shit and at least is not "stronk rich guy" but one who tried to scare people with his money. MC two sides is interesting but I hope it doesn't turn into getting rid of one of the personalities, favoring the other one.
The style worries me, I feel it was a mess of line art, a shonen mangaka should help the artist to make fighting scenes. Which I hope we get. This is one of the stories I wouldn't mind more action.
John Miller
>Fujos buy manga. Yurifags are useless.
That's not a detailed reasoning
Jack Nelson
They're going to fuse to become grey Yui
Justin Adams
Black Yui is overwhelmingly popular right now, so they need to do a bit more with White.