Duke's Daughter thread

will iris ever stop with the isekai otome orphans bullshit Yea Forums?

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Iris is probably the most physically attractive out of the ones in the guide image
God I want to just have tea with her and maybe cuddle

I personally find Mary more attractive.

It might be the clothing
Iris's outfit is impeccable

No surprise, Mary's manga excels at highlighting her sex appeal.

She's.... fine, but I prefer Mary with her alloy drills,
But neither are fit.

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GOOD COMFY isekai about old man that doesn't take itself seriously!
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BAD EDGY chuuni isekai about old man that takes itself too seriously! Author bullied at school!

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Which one is Mary again?

What if I told you that he bought

Mary Albert AKA The story of a noble lady that accidentally became a wingwoman.

Cutest: Bertia
Beautiful: Iris
Hottest: Diana
Handsomest: Eliza
Fluffiest: Isabella
Best dressed: Iris
Biggest cupsize: Diana? Sonia?
Best hair: Camilla It's unique
Worst: Britney

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Rate this idea for an isekai

>high school boy gets isekai’d into a medieval village
>proceeds to dedicate his new life to battling dystentry and spreading awareness of proper hygiene

I'm interested in picking up Erica, but I want to know if she'll remain a loli or will she eventually grow older.

Ah that one. Kinda forgotten about that because the manga chapters are so fucking short.

are you trying to make someone cry

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Fittest: Eliza

I think Rachel is the biggest.

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If you're gonna post at least update it.
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>“If that’s actually the case, then I might as well be dead. I am the King of Plerion. Life outside Plerion is meaningless to me. If I’m going to die either way, I’d rather die in my country.”

How do you even write a decent ending for Sahyuk at this point?
-Finds an emotional anchor in this world and gives up on Akatrina?
-Everyone grows powerful enough to wipe out all demons in the multiverse and they help her reconquer Akatrina?

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>no flattest justice tier

Sorry

which pastebin contains
>get send back in time and/or isekai'd as a cute daughter with a doting parent

We're in the school arc right now, so yeah.

Mary has the best artist. Iris is probably the second hottest. I think it's a bit lame how some don't look like villainesses at all. Bakarina's design is just a shoujo heroine design, for example.

Ah, I was afraid of that. It figures, but I wanted to make sure.

Bakarina looks pretty evil to me.

I need more Irene, I need it now.

Damn, you might be right. It's definitely between Sonia, Rachel and Diana.

It didn't even take until chapter 3 for me to absolutely hate this man. Most are detestable from ignorance, maybe even spoiled brats that are used to their power, or shitty tsunderes. This man merely exists to be loathed.

Villainesses need big boobs.

She looks too tomboyish.

I too prefer villainesses who actually look and play the part.

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Without the boobs she wouldn't look like a villainess. Villainesses need boobs.

Rey is such a lucky girl.

It's no problem. I don't mind you posting the lists, but please use this version. I can't be in every thread anyways.
I think I've seen this before, but I'm not sure what it's name was. Check s(he) knew the parents in the Gender Bender haha list

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There's an actual Japanese novel with that premise, only it's medieval Japan and the MC uses their medical skills to bootstrap them into modern medicine.

It's called Jin, I believe.

Villainesses with small boobs are cuter with the power of gap moe.

How much boob do they need, exactly?

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Luckily she has enough for Rei to have fun with.

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Forget what I said that's a tensei. A punished loli in the Loli MC list fits that too.

Someone please tell me the title or plot to Sonia's

That's acceptable.

Flatties are heroines, not villainess. Trust me, I'm an expert.

Extra Chapters with Rei sucking those milkies when?

All of these are in Jahy's 'Otome(Many villainess)' pastebin.

-She spends the rest of her life in the trashcan where she belongs.

the NU listing is a mess of this and dunno why

Just consider the translation dead. A-H's quality is particularly atrocious even for them, and you're better off MTLing yourself over reading Djurasico's.

She needs a hug or five.

Unless they're a Maou heroine, then they can have all the useless meat they want.

Hajin wouldn't give her one
Bell wouldn't give her one
Suho wouldn't give her one
Shin Extra wouldn't give her one
Rachel might give her one, if she asks, which she won't do

The only road is to marry Rachel and together watch Hajin from a distance

>A-H's quality is particularly atrocious even for them
I eat shit like imouto's TL, it can't be worse, right?

It's J>C>E translation by a translator who doesn't know the first thing about the series they're translating, to the point of getting genders of main cast wrong.

Hajin might, if he ever develops a sense of remorse.

>remorse
We are talking about a guy that leaves her daughter alone for months, possibly years.

If that doesn't cause him to feel remorse then there's no way Sahyuk could do it.

Actually, Suho might give her one if she asked. Didn’t he offer her some food in the tower when he saw her sorry state and wasn’t really that offended when she swore at him?

How do you deal with the crushing fear of disappointing the people nice enough to give your writing a try?

Maybe he'll get to meet Jesus and develop it.

Go in with the presumption that they'll critisize you left and right. Then it's either "as expected" or you might be pleasantly surprised.

Get the thickest of skins and write stories not for people but for yourself. Wrote something you didn't like? Scrap it and rewrite it. Wrote something you're extremely satisfied with but people don't like it? They're the dumb ones.

I still feel disbelief when people tell me they like my thing, so just imagine how you'd feel if the thing you liked reading a lot stopped out of nowhere.

Don't read comments and keep writing?

>Author writes something
>Give encouraging comments
>Author goes on hiatus
>1 month later, novel and author's account deleted

It happens a lot, and I stopped giving encouraging comments.

If your enjoying your story than that’s good enough.

Which homebrew?

shitposting isekai

Any stories where the heroine or the sister villainess supposed to hate end up becoming the villainess' best friends/buddies/something like this?
Already read Katarina, Christina I, Claire, Lilia, Violette.

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Mary Albert-ke.

Well there's buta otome, but thats sort of like sub villainess befriending original villainess and the heroine is a bitch nobody likes.

Reika too

I finished ~half of the outline for major plot points in the first volume of my concept, how about the rest of you?

well?

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Heroine was not a bad girl, she just lacks nobility sense that she annoyed the hell out of everyone even the Villainess who became less of a bitch thanks to white pig

I'm writing a super exciting meeting between some influential officials.
It's a lie, the meeting is boring as shit and is only there to show the MC is part of a greater plot of which he has only seen a glimpse.

Dropped everything I was doing
Started writing some other shit
And tomorrow will scrap that to start all over again

As far as I could tell, it wasn't nobility sense, it was that she was preaching that natural beauty is superior from the point of view of someone who is gifted with natural beauty, speaking to a group of girls who's appearances are mediocre or worse by default. Which was reacted to with a "speak for yourself"

Can't get past chapter 2 so i'm procastinating reading soudouki

Got some outlines but transforming them into actual chapters is hard af. The words don't leave the keyboard.

I realized that I actually have to write lyrics for songs that don't exist and I'm scared.

Ole

I’m trying my best to have a little restraint before I inevitably go into full retard power level wankest. I’m basically on the first arc of Bleach before the captains are introduced the story goes completely off the rails.

Is it that time once again?

Trying to iron out the serious pacing whiplash between chapter 16 and chapter 17 in my brew
I went through two arcs in 16 chapters but the next arc is slow as utter fuck and most of it is just walking, talking, walking, talking, bash a skellie's head in, walking and I need to figure out a transition

She's also the reason Britney ended up falling down the cliff since she wouldn't back down. And kept being overly nice to guys with fiances causing the guys to compare her to them. She just seems obliviously stupid at times.

Es hora

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I did something similar with my first story. I didn’t write full songs, mostly a first verse and a chorus, just enough to give a gist of the feel for the song. I don’t know how you plan on using the lyrics in your story though, so I don’t know if that would work for you.

that sounds like a good opportunity to throw in some worldbuilding
switch focus to something more important/exciting that's happening in the world at the same time that the MC's party will eventually run into or have to deal with

start with nailing down a tune in your mind then find some existing songs that are similar, see what themes they use, and build on it from there
the shitter/casual option is having the song be a foreign/ancient language so you can get away with typing random bullshit

I request that Alty's title be changed to Demon Lord or something. Maybe Final Boss.

>switch focus to something more important/exciting that's happening in the world at the same time that the MC's party will eventually run into or have to deal with
...that's a really obvious solution isn't it. Since I was also wondering when the fuck I was going to shove in a conflict coming up.

Should Claire be on here? From I Favor the Villainess?

Oh wait I'm an idiot.

Why shouldn't she? Because she ended up getting the V instead?

I have a similar issue.
Right now the MC is just fighting thugs, some wizard elf bitch and people on a pretty tame powerlevel but eventuallly the faggots with "cheats" (though I wouldn't call them like that since only a few are extremely overpowered) will show up and everything will go to shit.
And that's not even taking into account the wuxia beastmen, Apostle knockoff demons and God knows what else.

>switch focus
while a good idea you will get comment like
>reeeeee i don't like this go back to mc
>whaaaa i don't like this i just skip it
>weeeee i don't like this why you write this

fucking manchilds

>be 40 year old man that gets reincarnated / time regressed into the past
>act like a typical dense MC despite having adult memories carry over and always end up doing an eye-catching action that exposes your circumstances to any non-retard watching
everytime
i should just start skipping stories with this kind of concept desu, what's the point of having the reincarnator be an old man if they act like your average young man in that same situation?

Yeah the shitter option seems appealing, as I really fucking like Ar Tonelico. Fictional languages that are fleshed out are cool as fuck. Maybe I can just do both the shitter option and go all out at the same time?

I think it's worse in manga where the first pages show you a badass old man and then 5 pages later he became a teenager with black hair for no fucking reason.

>weeeee
He sounded like he had the time of his life

Eliza. It take hundreds of chapters before you even meet the heroine though. Worth it.

You are very silly

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user good girl didn’t try to hit someone you are in love with especially when you only know him for like an hour or so. And especially not when you are busy seducing other guy just before. And especially not when you already have a fucking fiancé.

The heroine in white pig is a whore.

Yeah I'm dumb. I realize this.

Athy, she didn't hate Jennette but it was not a happy friendship pre isekai. 2nd time they become true sisters if the spoilers are right

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Man the artist is so damn good. Real nice, especially since both the publishing label and the artist (and the author?) are relatively newbies.

That's only an issue if you spend like 5 chapters focusing on something else or if you release chapters once per solar eclipse.
If they complain about one or two chapters focusing on something else when you have a decent pace, then they can go fuck themselves.

Not giving a shit about those people.

It's a shame there are so few illustrations, but it makes sense

I really sympathise with Jeannette. Why can’t most otome villainess shit stop making their heroine literal hitler just to make us sympathise with the villainess?

just don't completely forget the MC's party exists for an entire chapter or two
make sure the reader knows they're still farming/grinding/leveling/traveling while these other events are happening

Will the Chad isekai nip murderhobo ever get his own manga adaptation?

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>Viollette
I feel so bad for her, her fat5her is a piece of shit

Does he even get better?

He is a scum that better off dead. Soon.

He's the reason why Violette turned evil in the first place, but she misplaced her hatred on the Heroine who did nothing wrong

>spoilers
Post em user

Oh I agree, which is why i'm hoping he gets better, dead, or put in his place by the heroine because it's so enraging to see him shit on the MC when she's done nothing wrong and he fucked up

Thats why I like my chink novels. You so much as stub the female MCs toe and dont apologize, you will get tortured

I am actually at this part now, and it should be criminal how amazing Claude looks after he catches Jennette roaming around.

Yea, it kind of turned me off of the Duke's Daughter with Iris. Just too perfect for me.

I'm reading white pig where the author really tries to make the heroine unlikable over retarded reasons but I'm rooting for her more then the MC (villainess) dosen't sent help that the person you're supposed to be rooting for is a passive mat
Also went on the comment section and saw comments like
>I wish the heroine gets raped and murdered by bandits
When she didnt even do anything bad

Can you put the titles on this damn thing please!

Until the chink heroine makes a 13 year old marry her rapist cause she was being a kid as a 13 year old would

I feel like there should be a balance

I actually hate when 'villainess' characters are just immediately surrounded by people who love them. Cheapens the entire thing.

I swear this shit is Chinese novels/comics poisoning people's mind to thinking that PAY ENMITY BACK ONE HUNDRED FOLD is good or reasonable writing.

Please.

Is there a light novel of Violette?

Adding the titles would ruin the organization of the chart because some of them are so huge.

Is that the one with the socipathic former empress? I disliked that one, I get that MC went through a lot but she's so bland and emotionless there's no reason why anyone likes her. At least in Shen Yi Di Nu you can see why MC is so fanatically loved by some

The 13yo was helping her get raped tortured then married to the guy (if its the one I'm thinking of) so while not okay I could sorta understand why she went with it

Ole is a deconstructions for that then. Since everybody fucking hates her.

Yea, I was meaning to say, come on dude, please, just hang out a couple of threads here.

There needs to be a balance. No need to go off the deep end like chink stuff, but not as much bland forgiveness as some jap shit either

Just add the damn titles!

Translation dead/hiatus for 2 months now

Needs to add Athy at the very least.

Didn’t do anything bad? She’s literally a whore

The manga is more light hearted than the novel.

And then FemMC won't give them face

Yeah, I really like Ole for that reason. Of course it would be grating if she just rolled over and accepted the hate too, but she obviously doesn't. Not to mention people do eventually come around to liking her, but she actually has to work for it as opposed to people just falling over themselves to do anything for her the moment they set eyes on her.

Also, she's just a great character.

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Survive as the heroes wife. The real heroine dosent evenike the Male lead and just wants to run her territory but cant since the law don't premit women too. So she get get the MCs and Male leads help to change the laws

Ah I meant to ask Light novel, I already know about the web novel, I just found it kinda weird how a web novel has a manga adaptation before it has a light novel.

Give it one more month, by then ot'll be up for grabs.

Hope violette and Yulan end up together.

And she still keep her personality. Not my favourite type of personality, but I appreciate the author not turning her into moeblob door mat just to be liked. She unironically a strong woman.

>read the manga
>kinda like it
>read the LN
>Full of NTR bait

What have I got myself into?

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But shes not seducing the guys.Shes being friendly with them. Which I guess in noble terms is fucking them. But thay can be attributed to her being raised a commoner And for fucks sake brittany was being so retarded about the Ricardo situation. They had broken off the engagement off teo times due to her creepy cousin. Its not like the heroine was going behind her back. She told her too her face thay she liked him and acknowledged her as a rival

Is that "im afraid my fiance is a villain"?

Nah fuck that, I seriously want Violette to say 'Fuck you all I'm going become a nun!"

It fucking sucked I dropped the novel when some dickhead spirit are trying to ntr her.

Pretty sure it's Doted on by the Neighbouring Country's Crown Prince, or something like that.

Do you forget that the heroine already had a fiancée? What kind of a whore tries to go after other man while already having a fiancée?

Hey spearfag is strong now!

No that's "The Villainess is Doted/Loved/Adored By The Prince of A Foreign Country"

NTR bait, by the sounds of it.

>Finally get married
>People still tried to NTR the Villainess

Never thought it will get any worse

Nice trips but i rather like for Violet to be a nun. Yulan isn't even better than the prince.

Are you talking about the carriage scene? She didn't have a fiance

It's not so much as Ioke the heroine it's just that I despise brittany. I really dont know what her personality is supposed to be and she let's herself get wallked on by everyone. She helped her territory bounce back from almost bankruptcy yet cant even choose her fiance

Just finished reading the first volume of pic related (official version). Sol still hasn't released 80K Gold, but from reading this and Average Abilities I'm getting a strong impression that FUNA has a very strong habit of constantly changing settings and making the protagonist do lots of different things without much in the way of overall goals, rather than having an actual plot with direction and arcs.

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3500 words to go still...

It definitely takes some writing skill to make your character a consistently sort of a haughty bitch but still also likable.

tfw no Camilla headpats

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Potion Loli > War Crime Jew Loli

>rare sighting of Camilla not getting bullied

If you make your MC such a blob even a knife wielding serial killer would look better in comparison

Isn’t she engaged to the northern nation prince? And yeah Brittney isn’t really likeable. The villainess princess is nicer.

It's taken 50 chapters, but it feels like she's going to get a little less bullied now. Maybe. Hopefully.

Yep. Average loli is getting very boring. I’m thinking I’ll drop it by the next volume if it remains the same.

Thats later in the story if the spoilers are anything to go by. When she confessed that she liked Ricardo she had no fiance

blame LOL MAKE SOAP and LOL MAKE HOTSPRING for making her market value too high for her love interest to obtain in a political marriage sense.

This. Every character in this shit is irritating fucks except for 1st princess and maybe the tall one.

Level her up. Kill her off and make Hajin have enough pity on her to modify the setting so that she gets reincarnated in her original world while still being able to use all the OP shit she learned, battle the devils/demons and not repeat the same mistakes.

I've only read the manga and the first part of the WN for Britney because the translations for the first part of the novel are reprehensibly bad (inserting stock images into the middle of fucking chapters bad), but whatever happens to Nora?

Its not even that. Her cousin wants to marry her himself. And he broke off there engagment. Literal NTR

Latest chapter she's in a marriage interview and it might actually go well. Only problem is that the cousin says the guy is more interested in work than women, but that could change.

Last time I heard she got butthurt toward the heroine because she keep shitposting saying “just be urself gurl ;)” to Nora and other ugly girls.

But the SS arc is peak bleach

Everyone beside brittany is a middleschooler. Seems about right

A hug from Evandel can save anyone.

Holy fuck I wonder if this will happen.
A Hyuk sobbing uncontrollably in Evandal's tiny lap.
I need it.

K-drama plot twist: Chundong was actually the one who knocked the concubine up. Sahyuk gets daughterzoned, Evandel gets a sister.

I'm reading Ex-Hero Candidate Who Turned out to be a Cheat from Level 2 and found myself pleasantly surprised

just from the name alone I though "oh great another series about a piss-ass OPMC that does jackshit and gets a harem" but there's a lot of difference with it and your average isekai

-MC is not from our world but transported from a fantasy world to another fantasy world
-MC is monogamous, lot of chicks go after his dick but he only fucks his wolfgirl waifu
-MC doesn't buy slaves
-other characters have their own personality and arcs (happens in isekai but it's rare and always appreciated when it does)
-after awhile OPMC takes a backseat while the story follows demon and kingdom shenanigans (while he fucks his wolf waifu)

Oh shit Maine got an anime.

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>I'm reading Ex-Hero Candidate Who Turned out to be a Cheat from Level 2 and found myself pleasantly surprised
I read this as the title honestly

really that trope is more common than the heroine being a bitch/slut

usually if there's anyone that's usually put on the shit spot it tends to be the Prince character

Dump eet

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It's been a while comrades, say did you work in your projects today?! Anyone working in anithing this days?

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What did Isebella do to be the traitor?

>tfw you have no talent for drawing shit for you homebrew so you use a pseudo-paper doll tool to make "illustrations" of your characters

your late, the og minofag already got the yous

Marry outside of her social bracket.

>look and play the pa
But Jin got most of the medical details right. It is a miracle.

She marries Hajin.

Nice try hyuk.

Break the 4th wall and acknowledge that Boss and Sahyuk are actually the same girl but just with different hair color and merge them when Chundong and Hajin eventually merge for some kinda kino pairing shenanigans. Then the author don't even need to commission another Boss or Sahyuk drawing either.

Reading Broke Mercenaries. Come on now, we don’t need a jerk ass adventurer every novel just to show off how sugoii or MC are. It’s getting tiring and annoying. Lapis is still the best jewess tho.

It's more of a miracle that EGScans even managed to translate so many chapters of it given how technical it was. Then again I think EGScans is dead now right? At least the ones I follow from that group are dead, like Gunka.

At least Klaus became more chill after getting worked like a slave by Lapis.
Hopefully the cunt from the newbie party won't be too annoying.

>March 7th
>Still no chapter

This means we get bonus chapters this month right? RIGHT?

shit Kamachi really outdid himself with this one

But potion loli also committed war crime of chemical weapon use.

It can't be Kamachi, he is too busy turning old men into best girls and fapping to Thelesma.

Cousin is gonna win the piggy end isn't he?

Wait, notguts and ass deamon still getting translated?

This is the one who proposed to the fluffy merchant's son?
Best girl material.

But user, this is wish fulfillment fantasy; you can only show how sugoi the MC is by showing how shitty others are.

That's why the scan stopped! Now I see.

Too bad, I enjoyed a lot of their work.

Yes, the TL didn't drop it after all.

Don't have it saved but I remember some of it the evil NTR brother is still alive and erased Claude's memory of Athy. He exiles her away and is cold to her. Athy thinks her dad hates her now. There's amnesia kdrama stuff where Athy eventually runs away after getting magic and dad goes crazy looking for her cause he subconsciously loves her. Athy teleports around in disguise and becomes real friends with Jen. Dad sets up a trap to get Athy to come back and force her to stay (he would die if she moved too far from him) stuff happens and they forgive each other, i remember that claude had athy's drawings saved. Claude broke his curse when he thought Athy died, Jen is actually the evil uncle's daughter and he sacrificed himself to break Jen's curse which broke Athy's curse. They all become a family in the end

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When are we getting more of this girl is a bit wild?

Yeah he turn out to be a decent guy. The hero in goblin cave is a pretty decent guy too desu, it’s just that his bitches are dumb whores.

Yeah, it’s on the third arc/volume now.

>tfw you fail your Daomerge

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Blessed day

It’s just like my generic otome villainess shit!

Why did he sacrifice himself? I thought he was an asshole.

people will laugh at me

good story, the ride gets even wilder if you can imagine
but skyfire avenue is still my favorite chinkshit even though it jumps the shark at the end

We are already laughing at you for being such a pussy.

at most you gonna get like 2 replies telling you to work on your grammar

Just be Chen Mou and you can have everyone be intelligent. Perhaps too intelligent.

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Which of the chink stuff that was already completely translated had the best endings?

too many parts need to be fixed and rewritten

Tales of the Reincarnated Lord :^)

I like Camilla because she has a very human character

The characters doing stuff is the plot, user. Characters doing stuff they want/need is all the plot you need if the characters are interesting enough. Average loli and PMC Recettear have strong enough motivation and get into wacky enough situations that the story development feels natural.

More isekai need to have character driven plots desu.

I am asking about endings, not axes/drops.

thanks
I had already finished Desolate Era and was rereading it; I'll give Skyfire a try

Agreed, even if she's a bit of a heavy tsundere

Dunno I've never finished one because they all end up fucking up horribly at some point causing me to drop it.

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Otherworldly Hero Business (Circle Zero) - is it bad that I am enjoying this?

Quick isekaigen, hit me up with a powerful Scandinavian name for one of my gods

a few threads back I outlined the foundation of a fantasy where mind magic accelerated the rise of a dystopia through competition between an """individualistic""" nation and a proper hivemind nation

I proceeded to forget about it until I listened to some Serbian/Bosnian turbofolk. Remove bugmen

Webtoon S2 when?

Fion

Enjoy it while you can user, there's not long left now

2 1/2 months from now on.

Kawaii

not sure, spoilers for that weren't detailed. i think he still loved his daughter even though he was so twisted so he paid the price for her curse so she could be happy

When is Volcanic Age coming back?

user=Loki

When Aflame Inferno does.

Sauce

to be fair, TotR was a satisfying ride and it was dropped just as it was losing direction.

His other novel Black Iron Glory was almost promising but then with the later chapters he gets an incredibly plot convenient ally out of nowhere like RtW shenanigans and goes full murderhobo on the later chapters too as provoked looking-for-trouble """self-defense""". I seriously don't understand why this went downhill so quickly after chapter 80. It was going so pretty okay with the pacing and worldbuilding until around that point. Never trust chinkshit again.

What are you expecting from next chapters of Lucid?
>inb4 implying expectations

I'm so glad I realized Im Dal-Young was a fucking hack early on so I never grew to care about any of his shit

Thanks user. Not gonna lie that is a little to much drama for my taste but the art is great so fuck it. Athy a cute.

The artist literally has cancer so I would pray that he actually survives first.

What about stealth chinkshit? Lots of that in RR.

AI sex

>losing direction.
How? It was literally building up to Augustus' downfall.

It's literally written on the bottom of the pic, though NU and the TL add an addtional "-er" at the end of the title.

Since this seems like one of those slow powerbuilding, it'll be great if that can happen in 300 chapters without any asspulls.

>full murderhobo
>Blacksnakes were literally planning to mutilate him and probably kill him
>still having moral concerns over killing them

You sound like one of those fags that would side with robbers over the home owners that shot them.

>Never trust chinkshit again
Well, in terms of endings I was actually fine with the Warlock in the Magus World ending. I honestly don't get why people got so upset about the DnD arc. I thought it was hilarious.

Martial World (not completely translated yet, but close). It is the best serious powerbuilding that chinkshit has to offer.

If you kill the robbers, they win :^)

Which translation are you using, Seigi or Rebirth?

>Rebirth
>ever

Muhammad

Not sure if Scandinavian, but Cuhr'ul Ac.

I curse you.

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Sköll if you wanna get down and chuuni

I was reincarnated as villainess, I'm confident in my look but I lose my fiancee to this rabbit looking heroine?!

>tolr axed
>most people dropped it because of info dumps
>new story from the author
>still full of info dumps
BIG has less info dump but come on
fucking 80 chapters of sol before magic arc

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I want to read an isekai about a leaf MC. How long would he survive?

there's one in RR about a leaf girl, with a dick

Same. It was fun seeing him powerlevel through their entire power system.

What about a tree MC?

ncode.syosetu.com/n1618fc/

Is it full of sex?

So that's what the orgasming dungeon loli looks like.

True villainesses like Yurushia are better than fake villainesses.

Is reference to video games good?

there are some lewd chapters... not many

This artist has serious case of sameface. That he really like those eyes shape really doesn't help.

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Info dumping is the author's style, it's not for everyone. Plus the author still dumps way less than Carlos Zen who can literally have his books summed up within 17 pages of a manga chapter if you took out all the info dumping and only included panels of characters taking action.

Not liking it for info dumping is a totally different story than claiming murder hobo when the vast majority of the time neither MCs do so. They do naturally fall into temptation over time though, but even with Lorist who had close to 600 chapters, he doesn't go out of his way to create situations where he can murder hobo, he just enjoys it when it happens and he recognizes it himself. He even admits he gives no fucks about the planet's long term health, which is more than what most isekai MCs from nips and gooks can claim when they industrialize their isekai worlds without even trying to learn from our world's history. In fact the only reason Lorist even bothers with cleaning out by the roots is because that's the culture of his isekai world just like how he recognizes the more stringent rules of the noble game on the continent and plays by it instead of trying to implement modern Earth morals completely.

Then again it's probably due to the info dumping being so unsettling to these anons that they fail to read properly and get the wrong picture.

He really does. The same face could still be worse though.

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Have we gotten huge fallout from him proposing to two commoners yet?

>Maid
>Trading Company President
>Classmate
>Privateer
>Now the Princess
Add another one to the harem

Yukino worst sex slave?

I choose the one that kept changing the names every 5 seconds

depends how ya do it really, do you want to be on the readers face or something more subtle?
its's all about how and when to execute really.

Ah... Tifaliza.
You deserved better.

Is that the actual volume cover? I can understand censoring but it just looks a bit cheap given the copypasta of the censor.

Then he should focus on showing the rest of their bodies instead.

It could be better if he just kept himself from using those eyes each and every time.

They all deserve a better MC than Satou.

I don't understand the censoring, nothing would be visible anyway.

Image pulled from the artist's website.

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well yes they do.
but Tifaliza holds a special place in my hearth.

Well we knew the princess would join the harem before he went to the desert kingdom. Also she's going to be the legal wife I guess if the story actually handles things properly.

I dislike the massive amount of politics info dumping in Hachinan but at least it does handle some of the stuff well. Like how the priestess girl is the legal wife because of her status, while the other girls are recognized more as concubines than wives.

>Put some nujabes to help out with the homebrew making
>Already got 3 chapters done

Who the fuck was Tifaliza again? The assistant that almost married a Satou impersonator?

The way I see it the censorship is just to avoid the fags who cry all day these days. But like I said usually censorship is less lazy and more natural, even when it's parody like in such a case they would usually have 3 different censor images instead of just a copy pasta x 3.

So it doesn't differ from the official I guess.

Proud of you babe.

>meanwhile back at MC's house

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What is this? Also why does the chick's face have some small semblance to Mizuryuu Kei girls?

Tifaliza was her subordinate.
The LN artist's website for clarification.

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>tfw the only reason you’re writing is so you can fap to the characters you created when imagining them in various sexual situations
It feels so fucking great. I bet this is what it must feel like to be a God.

Old hag

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But is it good?

Old enough age shouldn't stop Satou from taking her virginity, yet young enough he doesn't mind bathing with her.

Based and word.

>Tfw living out your fantasy of being a girl in a gangbang
Unlimited power.

The music? yes
My homebrew? Below average as the title says in the pastebin.

>writing a homebrew to become the little girl
What other reason could there be?

Do you just make a rough draft at once then fix it, or you just wing it little by little?

>not becoming a little girl (male)

Big rough draft at once, i find it easier than doing it bit by bit.
It's a bitch to check for errors tho.

>page 5

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Everyone hitting the bed, even the shitposters

Please don't be mean, even writing 2 pages is too much for me.

Arisa knows the score and getting more girls to help her.

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Well, that's like, just your opinion, man.

She just needs to open a brothel on their private island and work there with some of the others, Satou will have no problems paying for her that way. I still want to find out about her using the familiar connection for lewd communications to Satou, or even just him avoiding opening a door due to being alerted to danger by his skills because Arisa is naked and already got started herself.

Did someone say Camilla?

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I’m still here. I just don’t have anything to write. Ahahahaha. Kill me.

I heard Yulan turns into a closet rapey yandere. Don't know how true that is but it just makes Marin or nun end seem much better.

Since there are tons of writefags here, surely some of you have better English than I do and can address this question. Is writing 'in the continent' correct? I've always been taught that it's 'on the continent' but all the translations I've recently read always use in.

What's the context? Neither of those really sound like a "proper" phrasing.

>What's the context?
There's way too many for me to narrow it down.
>Neither of those really sound like a "proper" phrasing.
Well it's not a complete sentence, for example say XYZ is the biggest kingdom in/on the continent.

context is important
here it would be on
also consider using "in [name of continent]" instead

Depends on what context you use it in. The Statute of Liberty is on the continent of North America. Chicago makes the best pizzas in the continent of North America. The first one, the statue is physically located on a continent. The second one means figuratively through out North America. Or something, I don’t know.

How do you justify a forest fairy to be in the middle of a desert?

It should be, 'in'. A kingdom is in the continent as a tree is in a forest. France is in Europe, not on it.

oases

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in sounds better in both contexts here

colloquially, "in" makes no sense here

Oasis
Magic circle protecting them and shit
Inside an underground cave
Land sky in the middle of the desert

According to 2hu, fairies are nature, so they can be wherever there is an untouched landscape.

motherfucking secret laputa

It's a very old fairy that used to be around when the desert was a forest.

'France is on Europe', is improper though, and saying, 'in the continent", is bizarre, but only because not defining the continent is bizarre.

I heard Silk becomes the legal wife. The princess also gets married to Balud though.

Read Kingdom's Bloodline

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continents and countries might both be considered locations, but the usage is different because of connotations
nations exist as collectives encompassing not only a physical location but a national identical
continents are big thick plates/shelves upon which things exist
a shelf is something objects are on
a box is something objects are in

If human and fairy breed, how will their children look like? Shota and loli? Human with wing? Fairies but slighty bigger? Human but with greater magic potential and affinity for nature?

>implying half-fairies
Heh.

someone post the akame ga kill cum bath

No, it's much more enjoyable to binge instead of chapter by chapter, so I stopped right after Thales and Moriah got busted to save up the juicy parts. It's worth sacrificing discussion for unlike say The Sahyuk Extra.

If you can replace "continent" in your sentence with "world", use in. If you can replace it with "planet", use on.

Ex: "This generic MC's harem is the best in the unified fantasy kingdom that comprises this continent because I am lazy as shit" vs "This generic MC's tsundere friend's tits are the biggest on this physical continent."

Also as said, in [continent name] works too.


Discarded onahole.
Fairy is an adventurer, has your story's equivalent of Endure Elements.
Fairies are like migratory birds, this one got hurt and is stranded.
If chinkshit: the feng shui of the land is fucked, which is making the forest fairy show up or the forest fairy is fucking up the feng shui of the land.

looks like the one where a dude has two japanese people suddenly appear in his head, some old jew samurai and a salaryman, don't remember the name though

The Sahara is once pretty lush.

You're missing out man, huge reveals happening right now.

No I'm not, I'm just missing out on the discussion, which there clearly is none anyway. It's not like I'll never read it. And huge reveals and happenings are always occurring in KB, that's like the bread and butter of the story.

user... fairies could fit in your palm, even micro penis would kill them.

W-wew, hitler should learn from her.

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>Men were sometimes too logical and wanted to explain everything clearly. However, in a woman’s opinion, that would make it seem like he was either underestimating her intelligence or else feeling guilty. Since they both weren’t stupid, the matter was already obvious enough and he didn’t have to explain it in details like asking her why did she have to use a skirt and such, right?
>This was the difference between men and women. For men, they would need a very detailed and clear explanation even if it had happened in the past. That was why men couldn’t understand why women still kept pestering them even though they had explained so clearly. However, it was different for women. Especially it was regarding another woman. Since he could even clearly remember the nail polish that she wore and the reason she came here, then if it not because he cared about the woman, why would he remember that much?

This hits home too much.

>Funa MCs.
>All literal Hitlers.
What's up with this anyway?

There is no need to stick that in to get one pregnant, although pregnancy could kill them anyway. Unless you somehow have a male fairy and a female human.

What's Funa?

Colloquially, continents are not treated as discrete objects, they are treated as areas, within which there is no distinction specific to the ground itself. France is not found upon the object known as Europe, it is found within the area known as Europe. Besides that, a country is not on top of the land, a country has a claim on all the land within itself, above and below ground, and thus the land is part of the country. You can't go under the country by digging, at least not by any reasonable measure of digging. France is, thus at least to some extent, inside of Europe, even if you were to define Europe as a discrete object.

Author name.

>not knowing about magical elastic fairy pussy

Depending on the fairy's size, it's the entire body that's elastic.

Aren't fairies supposed to be spirits? How the fuck do you breed with a fairy? That's like wanting to breed with a ghost.

user...

If there's a hole, it's a fantasy man's job to thrust into it.

A little girl's mind isn't meant to deal with the stress of being isekai'd and given power, it causes a programming error that leads them to commit war crimes.

Where is this from?

Ghetto Brendel.

Sadly too many refuse to do so.

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Where's lelei?

Fae like Titania, Morgan Le Fay, and Lady of the Lake are human sized anyway.

I wish she was there too, or we would get another of her for the artist's pixiv account. Regardless, Yao didn't need to be there at all, either replace her with Lelei or just remove her entirely so we could better see Tuka and Rory. Maybe Itami just didn't think she needed a condom?

Yes, and?

>human sized
Ruined

Where does Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear fall?

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parallel world pharmacy

On my dick

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You wrote your characters to have flaws, right Yea Forums? You didn’t write a story full of Mary Sues, right Yea Forums?

His flaw is being misunderstood by other despite being a genius with 300 IQ

Only the MC is kind of a Mary Sue, unless you count being a narcissistic sociopath as a flaw (I don't.)
In my defense, I already put him at the bottom of the powerlevel scale and with no hopes of ever getting close to the top so if without his bullshit intelligent and "charisma" he would be fucked.

My favourite isekai

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Too paranoid and prideful in his own intelligence and it has and is fucking him. He's working on it at least.

Her flaw is that she can't draw worth beans despite her perfect hair, deep aquamarine eyes, slender and well-proportioned perfect figure, melodious laugh, radiant smile that can illuminate the room, and her glowing magnetic, personality.

Easy, MC's flaw is being a murder hobo.

mc only ability is staying alive no matter what happens out of sheer luck and is only a device to progress the story and present other more interesting characters while he remains useless through it

healslut nigga you're trending and on the front page, release a new chapter now if you have literally anything written

The problemen with a villain protagonist whose flaw is flawed moral thinking is that it can very easily come across as an edgy treatise on that evil philosophy.
What I need to do is show more often how the MC's prideful nature is handicapping him. Both in his relationship with others and in his endeavors.

Edge and Absurd?

Their only flaw is that there are multiple Mary Sues, and they've gotten into a deathmatch to determine the Supreme Mary Sue.

>caught up to daughter of the emperor
that last chapter had me at the verge of tears

I'm just waiting for top wannabe Scot to get ressurected as a little girl.

Opinions on Wanwan Monogatari?

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Already wrote the first book. It clocks in at 45k. Tried to write the second book and go into edge territory but sadly writer block strike

double the word count.

Can a villain be fun and interesting enough to keep you engaged if they do everything impractical yet has self awareness to not become practical?
> Why the fuck didn't you just do this plan instead of wasting time and resources to do this?
> Because, that would be fast and not as fun.
To the point where even their interrogations end up being just unusual and strange.
> Why the fuck are you pouring milk on me? And flipping me off in the process?

You reminded me of this, though he wasn't self aware.

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I'm still getting angry when I remember the ending. A long and perilous adventure should've been awarded with what was promised, not with a big 'fuck you'.

The kind that makes a ambush invasion on a kingdom by digging all the way to the castle instead of doing it in a roundabout way from behind or exploiting lax security. That kind of villain only except he is aware of easier and probably more effective plans but doesn't want to.

Rate my idea:
>The school's bully bitch reincarnated as a tragic otome heroine in another world!?

It sucked for Kon, but the one who needed a happy ending the most got it. Sorta

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one way of adding the titles would be adding numbers and a reference list along the bottom?

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Has Truck-kun gone too far

Did vamp loli win yet?

Not far enough

Can't believe how fast this thing fell out of favor.

WE WILL NEVER FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENED TO OJOU-SAMA!

>axed
Too bad. The idea was pretty interesting.

I've seen a couple instances of truck-kun getting cucked. lately
SYD, back to the kaa-san, is the Isekai trade under threat?
this is allso relevant
youtube.com/watch?v=nVzzhq5whWE

With some potential for great reverse isekai at the end.

mangadex is being shit blocking search anyone got a direct link?

isekai gyaru

>reverse isekai
Another world is transported into an ordinary Japanese high schooler?

That just sounds like a cultivation MC getting a cheat to start at max level.

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>Got the gay dude's balls.
>His fiance will be impregnated with those balls and his children will look like the gay dude's children.
Is this being a cuck or not? I'm confused.

there are no (((vampire lolis))) where you're heading
keep reading

I'm not sure, how much of the genetic code of the sperm is his and the gay dude's?

She did a little twirly thing with them while they were in midair, so I want to believe they were 'purified' at that point.

Both the balls he had at the end belong to the gay dude so his balls at least have the gay's genetic code. And sperm is made from the balls so I don't know whose genetics it would be.

Wait, why's that?

Too many isekai, too little time.

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Was she objectively wrong?

Funa? More like FUNAscist amirite?

I finished them all then decided it'll be a huge ass to actually write that story and started low-key sequel to it.

>he used the O word

.50 cal is a bit too much.
Why not use chemical weapons or white phosphor?

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.50 cal is a lot easier and safer to store and move around, also the cleanup is easier to deal with.

But it lacks impact user. You'll likely have to use it several times compared to white phosphor or superirritant agent.

So what's that brand of isekai called where the MC is send to their own world, except some key detail is different, like the gender roles are reversed or the beatles never existed.

Recognizing them from reading stuff on your own is half the fun.

user, you don't have to worry about the cleanup of WP and chemical/biological weapons if you use it in your enemies lands.

>So what's that brand of isekai called

I don't know but I'm calling you a faggot

No user is canonically a huge fucking tease.
Only like 5 of those matter and you'll easily find them by googling character names.
I think she was going to 404 rioting farmers in her owl lands or something.

What's the point of attacking your enemies lands, if you aren't turning those into your lands? Or looting them?

>you asked for it
isekai

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Did she win though?

She wants to start civil wars in empire, that way she can just watch it without spending energy to do the clean-up.
Also it's a lot fun to see your enemy kill... clean-up themself.

Then using chemical weapons makes even more sense.

Where's the fun?
Think of this just like gladiator. All you do is sit down and watch people killing each other. That's fun.

Use berserker/hallucinogenic gas or waterborne agents

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Traitors don't win.

no, the pre timeskip library rounded megane loli is pretty much the winner so far, she de-frienzoned herself and improved by losing the megane and growing balls post timeskip.

Too much work. You still need the land, you don't need the people that currently reside on it.

What's more fun than watching those people killing each other?

depopulating the native peoples means you waist decades reestablishing trade and farming practices not to mention self sabotage and booby traps
benignly supplanting their government is quicker and simpler

Just replace govt officials with doppelgangers

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fuck off Demiurge

rachel updated

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Who?

>depopulating
Don't need. That take too much time and effort also risking wars between Ethnic group. Colonization is the answer.

rachel

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youtube.com/watch?v=5f-_oigazHs

>story mostly has human, elves and dwarves established as the major races
>want to add other races like dryads in the future
>have yet to make any references to their existence so when they do show up it’ll be like “by the way here’s some dryads who have always been around this whole time”
Should I just start making early references to every single race I plan to use so that they don’t seem like ass pulls when they show up?

If MC doesn't deliberatly seek knowledge about the world and there's no dumb infodumps at the beginning - it makes sense for details like these to be revealed later. Nothing wrong with that do you know all the species of insects on Earth?

w-what if MC woke up in the middle of nowhere and you need to infodump about surrounding area and his thought and feeling

Depend on the place where is you going to introduced the dryads?
Like the MC in major human city and suddenly there's a dryad wandering around, that's pretty stupid. Well if its a slave maybe it can work.

Don't infodump what he doesn't see. Narrate story from his perspective or perspective of other important characters. No need to dump Dryads and stuff like Demons, Strangers etc. right off the bat since they're rare and secretive.

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This creepy weirdo is your protagonist for today.

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If a character wouldn't know what a Dryad is then don't drop hints about them through said character unless they're being explained by someone else and the character is merely the "ears" for the audience. Always use an appropriate character for related infodumps.
>w-what if MC woke up in the middle of nowhere and you need to infodump about the surrounding area
Then use the 5 senses and nothing else. If a character doesn't know the history or geography of the area than he shouldn't have a large knowledge of the land as if he had lived there for most of his life. If you really need to, then use a voiceless narrator to do infodumps for you. Otherwise, just do what says

Who?

The thing is in my story I don’t want to treat them as super rare magical races. I want the minor races to at least be big enough to have a small village. I do plan on introducing them in an area far from the general civilization, but their existence should still be common knowledge for everyone.

ナイン改

I will post my chapter 1 in

Doesn't mean that common knowledge should be pushed into readers faces without good reason for it.

In what?

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Maybe his butt hurts

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>tfw your ear is bleeding and it aches so bad you can’t concentrate on writing
Getting old and having weird shit happen to your body sucks

>>>/blog/
See a doctor retard.

Only if you hit like and subscribe

Not unless you faggot have at least 15 chapters.

And rob him of his chance at getting isekai'd? That's crab bucket mentality user.

Never heard of MC dying naturally being isekaied. You have to at least sneeze yourself do death in your sleep.

I don't think dying of ear bleeding and infection is a natural death user.

It's consequences of natural retardation.

Reminder that most of isekaigen believes in reincarnation strawpoll.me/17448399/r

What's wrong with that? You fail to learn your life lessons as a human - you get to live as goblin next time.

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>you will never have a genius loli NPC in your party that is so badly specced that it would be delete/remake worthy if she was a player instead

What if I’m already a goblin?

What if it was human size Asanagi's shortstack fairy?

Also if they are not about the same size as you, it's hard to write them into love interest instead of pet.

Then you get to be a giant centipide or something else even worse off than a goblin.

>or something else even worse off than a goblin.
You mean like a Chinaman?

I got distracted writing ASoIaF fanfiction. I need to stop and go back to writing my own story, but I'm having fun.

>Also if they are not about the same size as you, it's hard to write them into love interest instead of pet.
Pathetic.

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Do you ask objectively or not?

Nothing wrong with it. I just think it's a really interesting statistic.

Chinamen defy heaven and earth and are one with the dao while surfing on their flying swords, I don't see how that's worse than being a goblin.

>Palm size
One strike
>Act like brats, look like one
Two strike
>Different race
Out

The only thing worse than being a goblin is being an old goblin, because it means you've existed long enough to get old.

My theory is that we're in educational simulation of sorts and nobody is getting out until lessons are learned because IRL any faggot can mash up dark energy bomb in his 6D garage and blow up ten galaxies.
You don't take advantage and make best of cards dealt in this life? Well then in the next one conditions will be worse so you'd have less freeplay to fuck around.

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Winnie the Pooh. Tianamen Square. Etc.

...holy shit that's actually a pretty fucking good theory

Fear the old goblin because he survived long for a race that usually dies young.

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user, that's exactly why Chinamen always choose to defy the heavens.

...

Question for writefriends. Did they ever teach creative writing in your grade school? I mean I remember a teacher telling us to write a short story before, but no one ever went in depth with the technical stuff like how to punctuate your sentences when using dialogue tags.

It's easy to fuck one, but how do you fall in love with fairies?

Be me

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I dunno defying the heavens seems easier than handling the wilderness of Australia. Have you ever heard of anyone ascending from that hell hole? Well then again I guess it's just a matter of choosing whether you wanna survive against biological monsters such as radioactive emus and spiders or mechanical monsters such as trucks and escalators.

Australian isekai MC would fit like a glove in Konosuba.

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They didn't teach us, they just graded us on it.

too big

No one want sexual defiant MC.

Australian wildlife is basically heavenly calamity tier.

>sexual defiant MC
>defiant
No, that would be asexual and who wants that?
>deviant
Yes, it's actually pretty bland and pretentious to have a prude MC this day and age.
I'm sure such anons don't even exist at all.

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Don't neglect the Bogans.

She's like three bites user.

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Do you know that furry level chart? Fucking a fairy is like on level 4 or 5 in that chart.

SURUDOI KIBA KATSU

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>fucking monmusume anywhere on the furry chart
She's not even covered in fur or scales, retard. Not that it would make any difference.

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I meant it's the same level of immorality.

Only in your deluded mind does that make any sense.

>Fucking a fairy is like on level 4 or 5 in that chart.
What the hell is this slut saying?

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>immorality
Take a hike pastebin.com/jHnqQfsg

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Immorality is subjective.

God I want her to sit on my mouth.

delet'd?

>Answering the man’s beckoning, I also reached out my right hand…
>“Gakkh!?”
>And returned it to mist, which then proceeded to invade his mouth, filling his lungs and stopping his breathing. I drained him dry from the inside.
Any more gas monster rabbit of doom protags out there?

it's moral to my dick

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I generally think my writing is shit, so I don't have to deal with that. It always amazes me when I come back from one of my wilderness drives to find that people missed my semi-regular updates.

2hu fairies are the same size as human children, so they are OK

I think it's pretty likely that Hajin will be exposed as the Black Lotus by the end of the Orden Assassination arc.
All the conditions are right to maximise the drama - nearly all of his friends are part of the assassination team, along with a bunch of the top tier heroes and the strongest Djinn groups around.
It would also fit the general flow of planned events in the original story - I'm pretty sure it was mentioned that Chameleon Troupe were supposed to take centre stage as antagonists after the Orden arc, but Hajin went on hiatus before he wrote it.
This would be a way for the "rewrite" to acknowledge that, since CT won't be going full antagonist in the current situation unless shit gets way out of hand.

Vampire Hunter D had monsters like these.

By not giving a fuck. Feedback is appreciated but unless you do it for your own satisfaction - don't do it at all.

>I'm pretty sure it was mentioned that Chameleon Troupe were supposed to take centre stage as antagonists after the Orden arc
I don't remember this, I only remember CT was supposed to be involved after the time skip like during the artifact hunt and that the Devils/Demon Realm Transformation would come after Orden.

Maybe I'm retarded and made that up somehow, because I can't find it now.
What the fuck, I could have sworn I read it.

I'm just telling you what I remember, for all I know I could be the one going senile.

the chameleon troupe stops being important in the later part of the story

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So this means it really is The Sahyuk Extra now right?

Well, now they have motherfucking Hajin so they're gonna be important forever.

coauthor's OC bell also makes them a lot more important since they now have ties to the last boss of the novel

Well, here's the latest (277) spoilers, read at your own risk: Sahyuk said what must not be said to Boss, Boss fucked her up, Troupe imprisoned her and wanted to lure Bell out using her. Bell literally gave zero fucks: 'they won't kill her and this shit will only make her stronger anyway.'

>status windows
>levels
>doing the most trivial shit grants you a skill
>godlike overpowered MC
>magic is like programming

lots of boxes are ticked

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based bell

>general view of a walled city in the background with awfully shit art and fucked up proportions

this one should be added in an isekai bingo

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It's not for status, but my isekai use game window. What's wrong with that?

does it have an item box too?

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Are there slaves?

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Counting on Bell giving a shit is a bad idea because the guy is literally incapable of it.

How I become etrian oddsey final boss: the isekai, except without the scifi part

>implying isekai magic isn't post-apocalyptic transhuman technology

Only one guy from Aussieland has ever ascended.

"Once a Jolly Swagman, camped by a billabong."

Dudes a legend now.

>reddit spacing

NIGGER

damn, this isekai doesn't make sense

Fuck off moron. I was breaking the lyrics from the rest of the text.

user that's just a ghost.

how the fuck do you not understand that the words "europe" and "continent" aren't completely interchangeable and are used differently
fucking goddamnit
stop talking

He's speaking objectively.

>2 498 000 gold

I wonder where the store keeps this thousands tons of gold.

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But he's still singing his song. He's become a Shinto deity.

NPC shopkeepers are all Jewish confirmed.

Shinto deities are just licensed ghosts user. Ascending means you've graduated from the stage like Jesus and Buddha and play with the big dinosa-err I mean heavenly dragons.

To give the familiar a loli form that is the question.

Obviously he's just gathering Ki to restore his body from all the people singing his song. Then he'll reincarnate at the center of Ayers Rock and become the physical embodiment of the continent.

>tfw chinks probably made flood dragons based on crocodiles hence 'hidden dragon' due to crocodiles always hiding in water while the folklore for heavenly dragons was due to a chink or two seeing a crocodile 'leap' 15 feet above water space jam style hence the 'soaring' into heaven not realizing it was actually just a crocodile that got caught in a geyser eruption that blasted it off somewhere and ends up falling onto a chink village which spawns the tales of dragons descending

Does Paul Bunyan count as ascending then? Since he's crafting mountain ranges in the Arctic by wrestling?

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Hard to say, I mean he does fit the whole Xianxia MC thing where he is fully grown at 10 and keeps on growing anyway. But if he ascended that means FGO is canon.

Well, that's just, like, your opinion, man.

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>chinks put antlers on dragons because they saw a crocodile having trouble eating the head of a deer while the antlers were poking out of the corners of the mouth

successfully delet'd

Extremely. 1/4 of the men in britain were dead after WWI since the women kept on shaming them to defend the country after "news" of atrocities in other nations came out.

why is it always female?

A cute shota is fine too.

Because it's my fetish.