This girl just wants to be Average, but that is no option for an isekai'd individual.
Just Your Average FemMC
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More like make this manga average and not dogshit
woe is me
Still very VERY angry how shit the 2nd party is and how hard they leech off of her.
Hope she ditches them soon.
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It's not like they can do anything but leech off of her, she's half a bahamut and they're only regular people.
So let us discuss the phenomena that is the magic swordsman. What makes them so appealing and is there a way to make a character an all rounder without defaulting to one
the thing I'm most pissed off about is the fact that magic swordsmen are in abundance but rarely ever utilize both magic and the sword seamlessly
And powerlevels are based on what "security clearence" you have or are assigned in a long dead sci-fi nation, while being in a medival-level society.
what's your idea of seamlessly and do you have examples of people not using their skills to their best effect
They are the laziest and easiest skillset an author can come up with.
Instead of having the MC have his strengths and weaknesses, you make him a god at both swordmanship/meele combat and magic/long-range combat, which also allows you to avoid the usual disadvantage of not being as good at magic or swordmanship as someone who dedicated himself entirely to one thing.
Plus, instead of writing interesting battles you can just copy every battle shounen in existance and have the MC cut faggots with his sword while spamming magic spells.
Yes, superhuman strength stats, mages who are underpowered but are actually good at their job, and priests in general are all entirely underused but can absolutely be balanced.
yeah but if the MC isn't good at everything then he not only has to form a party but other party members will be just as useful as he is
Not that user, but I'd like to see magic swordsmen who fight similarily to Vanguards in Mass Effect, i.e. create a barrier around yourself and launch that barrier containing you straight into the enemy while also using the sword as a medium to launch magical long-range shockwaves that knock enemies into trees, rocks or walls.
I want to get the impression that magic swordmen are pure weapons of mass destruction.
Why do they always have to be all rounders?
It's more fun when the MC singlemindedly pursues a single path.
because then he needs to have party members to shore up his weaknesses and that requires negotiation and some degree of charisma. Most MCs only get loyal followers by essentially showing their would be followers how unnecessary they are with their overwhelming power
Magic swordsmen tend to be adept at both and use only one of the two in a fight instead of having to rely on both because they lack the skill in the individual fields.
I.e. instead of oneshotting dragons with big fucking spells yet still cleaving the heads of a hydra off with ease, he'd have to cast magical buffs and debuffs before engaging, using offensive spells to weaken the opponent as he approaches and then proceed to finishing the job with a sword.
But then again, I suppose this problem is more about mc's being overpowered than it is about how they utilize their skillsets.
that sounds like the kind of stuff a character would have to learn or at least level grind to unlock rather than simply casting humongous fireballs and swinging his sword like a club
I don't know these days it seems more like master is in charge of casting whilst Fran does the swordfighting
>Most MCs only get loyal followers by essentially showing their would be followers how unnecessary they are with their overwhelming power
This shit always annoys me when it comes to MC gaining waifus and followers.
People worship the MC for helping them and claim they are kind, selfless and heroic and while I don't exactly disagree, I always felt like the fact that they are demigods diminishes that "kindness".
A regular guy who risks his life to save someone despite knowing he is likely to die is indeed heroic and selfless but can you say the same of a guy who is so fucking powerful that not only he knows that there is no way he will be harmed in any way but also knows he can deal with any repercussion that might come his way?
I mean, for the one being saved it probably doesn't matter because the MC still bothered to save her/him but from an outsiders viewpoint, a demigod doing such a minor act of kindness feels like a very minor thing.
It even makes me wonder if they would even try to do something like that if they didn't have god-like power.
Master is usually heal, buff, and shield bot. Usually Master and Fran tend to chain double spell or so for more powers.
In the end these two fight as one anyway.
Fran is part of a race of combat maniacs, so yeah, she's really good at hitting people with things.
But user, it was magic swordsmen, not magicswordsmen
her race is pretty pathetic if you've read the webnovel. They're scared of finishing of greatly weakened goblins
That kind of increases as time goes on. Though Fran can toss out really potent spells, she still focuses on swording, and lets Shishou blast spells off. However she has learned from him, and their teamwork. So if she didn't have him casting those spells, she would still be sure they were being cast.
Her ancestors were absurdly powerful, the current crippled population is honestly pretty irrelevant, Fran just needs to rape a dude at some point to keep the blood from dying out and it's all peachy.
Is this the thread or is it the other one? I think Jahy fucked up.
That's not a magic swordsman, but rather a person who half-bakedly learned magic and sword.
Rather depending on the lore, if there are no annoying "magic affinity" issues, then in high/hyper-fantasy world, a magic swordsman should drop any training for the standard elements like water/fire/earth/wind (aside from maybe the basics of basics like how to make a small flame for illumination in caves) and instead focus only on training gravity/space/barrier/telekinesis magic and learn a swordstyle that's taking these magics for granted - learning regular swordstyles is good for emergencies where magic ran out, but is not that useful for the magic swordman battlestyle. The problem is that such a fighting style would require a sturdy sword and practise with wooden swords would probably be costly and require a lot of replacements, so this is not an easy thing to accomplish even if we assume a hyper-fantasy world were magic is available all over the place and can be easily combined with each other.
those offspring would still be under the curse until an S rank evil being was defeated and I don't think Fran has anything on the Old Lady Black Cat as far as raising up powerful fighters. Give her a few years and maybe but by that point I expect some of those weaklings would have made something of themselves and be ready to evolve
Isn't a 'person who half-bakedly learned magic and sword' a rather accurate description for most isekai protagonists who weren't tensei'd?
Should I dump last boss? I was preparing to but the thread is already around
MCs rarely learn shit, they just get a cheat that makes them experts at both magic and swordmanship.
ah yes, my bad.
Yeah, go ahead.
If you want everyone to migrate to the other thread
>OP has no isekai
>Thread is filled with normalfags discussing past isekai anime
Yup, it seems even Jahy is not infallible for once.
I don't understand
they never show expertise though. Aside from space time magic and chant nullification most MCs don't tend to do anything complicated just big flashy things with no thought for MP cost. As for swordsmanship they're like Saitama incredible stength, agility and speed which masks their lack of ability
nobody wants to interrupt a dump, and everyone reads the last boss wn anyway
You dump 38 pages of the manga, you kill the thread for an hour. Nobody wants to post images during the dump or discuss something unrelated.
Oh well, I thought this was the only thread. It seems like there's a bunch around
Sorry...
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right thread. thanks.
Whatcha all reading?
Both threads are the thread, it's just that this one has attracts less shitposters.
Man, I want to fuck a dragon.
Which one? This is important.
>taming a girl
This looks like a doujin scenario
Considering Ruphas sama, it probably involved fisting. She fists everything.
>tfw Ruphas-sama will never tame you
What would it take for her to tame you?
It's very important, some are better than others, and some are just trash.
It's all good. Everyone makes mistakes, even me, like that The New Gate thread yesterday... but remember:
isekai = just some random thread
isekai = ZA SUREDO
If there are multiple isekai threads like yesterday, then just go with the consensus I guess.
Sometimes, very rarely, there is no isekai thread and only an isekai thread. It's fine to use that if it's clearly up and running with the "usual suspects" already being there if that's the case, but only if the previous isekai thread got archived already.
Mob otome.
>isekai = just some random thread
This isn't necessarily true. Just open the thread and see what'a being talked about.
god i wish that were me
Iris is like the only thing that makes that readable, the demons are basically a army of people that could be the boss of a gym while the human side is basically mindless idiots whose only chance at survival is listening to a dude whose sole goal in life is to grind like a cultivator in a chink novel.
I hate this story so much.
I wish I could expect the WN to change and not become solely focused on killing the next comically evil demons with a solution the MC just happens to have ready just in time. If it ever started to focus on anything like the MC having interest in the girls instead of just battle, Iris would never get anything either, when she's the best one.
>This isn't necessarily true. Just open the thread and see what'a being talked about.
I did mention the exceptions in the same post.
Dragon-san is pretty cute.
Chapter theme music:
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>Ruphas and Benet are going to fist each other at some point in the future
I can't wait
She is married
I want to be Best Bros with this Otaku Tsundere Storm Dragon.
This one is needs it herself. Komoe too.
>“Why is there asphalt in Africa?”
>Shin Jonghak muttered in a daze. He had expected a desert, but instead the road was covered with asphalt just like in a human city.
>“Shush. They did this in the movies I watched. So you’ll do it, too.”
I just want to pat Aileen's head.
Nobody mentioning that we have a new Kim in like a hundred chapters?
>Chameleon Troupe vs Vast Expanse
OH SHIT
>inb4 they off-screen the whole fight
>~ooh mister Hajin, your papers and essays make me moist~
>Kim Hajin a stimulus. Kim Hajin was intelligent and brilliant, gifted and creative….
And a bully.
based korean
I finally finished reading Fun with Dracon Pater. The MC's son is boring, but the daughter and mother are perfect. The last scene where the dad and son play in the water naked was also really gay and the story really needs a hook because SoL can only go so far.
You know, I decided that the final arc of super robot is going to be the protag fighting the ancient evil castle in the sky in the name of beauty.
1 per 7.81
no, we must uphold a zero tolerance policy for non spoiler threads.
I need some real anons to criticize my work, first chapter, 1.712 words, any help will be appreciated. I intend to use an omniscient narrator, but of course, when is required there is gonna be more dialogue.
I won't comment on grammar errors, but what the fuck? Did he die? Was that god? Was the 7yo his reincarnation? The storytelling was a mess.
If this was written in a western country, the novel would be down by now due to "accusations of racism".
It was really that messed up? Also, yes, no, yes.
Reads like a bad translation.
MT jewloli
Yeah, described it better. Try to work on your flow and your storytelling skills.
This is how to be suspicious 101
Just how many layers of keikakus is she on?
To be fair, she lived 200 hundred years
Funny how with all the Yea Forums offshoots, there isn't a toxchan.
Is she the mythical triple-crosser?
>that hentai
So fucking hot.
FeMC is the future.
Nah, both of them are fine. A male MC for battle-oriented story and a female MC for SoL-oriented story. If you realistically try the inverse, you ends up with Minerva Margaret from Rance or Jinshi from Maomao.
The "human" part is what makes this amazing.
Like, he doesn't just think africa is impoverished mud villages all throughout, he actually doesn't think it's inhabited by humans.
Africa is literally filled with nothing but monster for at least 4 decades in the story though.
Because it's generic, and the first thing most people's minds jump to. Swords were basically sidearms, except for the claymore/zewihander/longsword that always gets skipped in favor of an arming sword or absurdly large sword.
It literally isn't inhabited in the novel, though. I don't remember if there were countries remaining besides North Africa (they did mention Egypt higher-ups running away through the portal), but it's fully possible there are so few people there for so long, the infrastructure should have crumbled decades ago.
the novel mentions orden's kingdom being subsuharan africa, so this is the area in africa that humanity has been wiped out
I want to fuck a loli baba ghost
Based Orden.
I imagine Orden as something similar to this but with shining eyes.
you forget that he was the original author for it in the first place
I dont know ,that looks like too much of a baby face, and I would think he has facial hair or regular hair for that matter
Did we get any description other than this?
>On the screen, a huge giant was sitting on a throne. His outer appearance resembled a human’s, but he was much bigger, and his facial features were both human and non-human. His huge eyes flashed with a sharp blade-like light.
So Dr. Manhattan but dimmed?
>Their faces were dirty, their clothes were torn, and from their protruding bones I could assume they hadn’t eaten for a long time.
>Aileen, Shin Jonghak, and Jin Seyeon. They were all there.
So the traitor in this group is either Seo Youngji or Yi Yongha. What would Orden have offered to everyone?
>“When Mother was still Father, you said this: “a father teaches love strictly, a mother teaches love gently. That’s why, don’t be spoiled.” But right now, you are a Mother, so it is alright to act spoiled, yes?”
Oh man, this line.
>tfw no dragon son
Mira is a miracle of the universe.
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This has the shittiest chinky synopsis and cover but the actual story is actually paced well and worldbuilding is sufficient and decent for this medium. I'm convinced that the low ratings are entirely because chinkshit readers coming into this expecting the typical cultivation/power fantasy immediately (the synopsis shit in BIG doesn't even show up until after 10 long chapters) but get something with a reasonable pace instead. I find it so fucking criminal this is rated lower than putrid chinkshit like I am the Monarch.
Is the translation just making a lot of liberties? This reads almost like a western fantasy novel with the pacing and worldbuilding if you ignore the fact that the author's writing is basically the antithesis to show not tell. Or maybe that's just the translation
Guys, im trying to make my own homebrew isekai and I just realized that the only way I can think of making a character's personality actually genuine is by writing them as a self-insert
Is there a way around this, or should I just be careful not to avoid writing my wet-dream and just try to make a proper story?
Write whatever the fuck you want.
If a self-insert is the kind of MC that you would like to write about then go ahead.
for starters if you have no experience in writing you should get started with oneshots
Wish someone would pick up the novel.
My characters are all based off people i know, try that user.
Hoping this one doesn't have a big dog take over the story.
Why aen't more MMO isekai based off of Runescape?
>still can't decide which character to use as the PoV of an intermission because I have like 6 options and none of them have established personalities, other than one being brave and another one being a corrupt cunt
Do I roll a dice or what? The information I need to be convey will be conveyed regardless of who I choose (and the information that is exclusive to certain characters isn't really important) but I don't want to choose someone who the readers will find boring.
because then it'd be fanfic and there's a stigma to that (and runescape itself) unless you just write the MMO setting as a homage to runescape rather than 1:1.
Runescape just feels so juvenile, not even chinese isekai writers are ripping off it
Work on your prose. Even a story about a dustpan can be interesting if you word it right.
>“I will make him disappear from your sight.”
It's another bullying session waiting for her, isn't it?
Can you tell it from the viewpoint of a thief/thot who has been observing the party in order to rob them?
Yeah, he's gonna dote on lolihyuk while she watches.
>because then it'd be fanfic
That's not how fanfics works. A bunch of Isekai take inspiration from Final Fantasy, Ragnarok Online, and Dragon Quest especially in the MMO department.
>Runescape just feels so juvenile, not even chinese isekai writers are ripping off it
You seem to have a problem with Runescape.
>all those mangaonly confusions and reeeee on last boss
Jesus, all it takes is a bit more plot heavy series with a few twists around.
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And he specifically says that there have been major changes from his initial setting.
Remember that "Trash Isekai Bingo" we had flying around here a while ago? I am considering making one for Otome Isekai. A "Generic Otome Isekai Bingo". Maybe a "Trash Xianxia/Xanhuan Bingo" as well.
Any ideas for the squares of each?
No, bingo pics are shitposter bait therefore banned from all threads.
>hurr i'm the police of the thread
I agree with you, but stop acting like a cunt, m8
But I remember people from isekaigen didn't show any objections back then. Did I miss something about that going out of hand when I wasn't looking?
>tfw you'll never go kill knockoff BETAs together with chink fem!Raiden
>Crimes exposed in a public venue
>"Villainess" is actually a saint
>"Heroine" is actually evil
>Villainess' brother was a capture target
>Prince is dumb
>Villainess steals the original capture targets
>Villainess is the duke's daughter
Off the top of my hea
Some of the top of my head.
Engagement annulment
Academy
Reverse harem
Evil Heroine
Villainess is a baka.
it was being used to make b ait threads but thread cop over there is overreacting, do what you want user.
Is there anything where the "villainess" is actually lower ranked nobility that tried to go up in life and failed?
Laugh at them brother
I doubt it. The whole point of the character in the original story is to be the rich bitch who tries to crush the poorfag/low nobility heroine.
She is basically the otome version of the bitchy cheerleader who is the hot Chad's girlfriend in those high school romance movies.
Can't wait until Van and Oniwaka meet Vlad Gainscula, they're gonna worship the man like a god.
Oh yeah, for it to be considered Otome, is it necessary that the MC is a girl from a noble family? Or any kind of feMC counts?
The Male Lead’s Villainess Fiancée has a commoner villainess that's engaged to a prince.
Depends on what you consider 'low'. I don't think I've ever seen a villainess lower than a Count's daughter.
Nah, half the time the protag is a peasant upstart prodigy.
It's just my opinion, but to be considered otome isekai anything is fine as long as it's reincarnated into a world of otome game or any shoujo work (since there's no difference in practice).
If the world is completely original, just call it shoujo isekai or whatever.
I mean, for it to be otome, the MC either has to be or become early in the story a noble, right?
Or any story with a female MC counts?
Why don't you fuck off and ask some other place instead of bringing up your shitty original fiction and your shitty problems here?
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Wait, this has almost 200 chapters, how is it?
Looks decent from synopsis and art.
Except that its shit.
>I mean, for it to be otome, the MC either has to be or become early in the story a noble, right?
No? Where'd you even get this impression? Stuffs like Hakuoki or even Ouran won't be considered otome if so.
Hell, even if you use otome isekai as the examples? Albert House, IFTV and Bakarina all have the heroines coming from the poor side.
It's pure nonsense, but I like it.
the heroines
Gimme a name
Imagine xianxia protagonist in space commanding a fleet but doing 95% of the job himself and being obsessed with protecting the rights of slaves, poor-ass working class ants and other socially vulnerable elements while murdering a bunch of arrogantyoungmasters(TM)
Hope you don't mind stupid bullshit.
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I can barley follow death mage anymore. so many characters and plot points I can't remember and don't care to go back and refresh on.
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Arrogant young masters in a space opera?
I can remember the whole cast but I'm starting to need refreshers on names, at least Sam, his daughters and the bone krew are still there. Basically the current arc is Van going on a trip to the Dark Continent to meet another god to ally with and Ketchupboi going through Alda's dungeon and getting the shit pushed out of him by the angry midget taking over a puppet of him that Alda made for Ketchupboy to practice on. Van almost wipes his party out, one dude almost got soul broken and Rodcorte in all his stupid glory decides to fix the dude's soul by jamming parts of the demon lord's soul in there because that's the smart thing to do and won't backfire on him in the future.
Yeah, doesn't matter what the setting is, cultivation and arrogant young masters are everpresent.
Nevermind I read the first chapter, jesus christ this writing is fucking awful lolrandomxd, I can the author fitting whatever he wants whenever he wants with the tone this thing has.
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Young masters are even a thing in nip stories.
The author's previous work also reads like this. It got axed though.
The art looks like CG trash though
When I said shit was stupid I meant stupid, listen to warnings.
But in all seriousness, the discussion doesn't belong here since it's not an isekai
Am I the only one who would wish to become an omnipotent, invulnerable and immortal god who can create his own universes for his own entertainment and pleasure?
That's standard for manhua, you want something with actual art go read The King's Avatar, hope you don't mind serious business esports nonsense though.
All of these girls are MC's wives right?
Yeah, Balud has the fucking Tohno gland.
lol
Oh fuck this is that isekai where the trap prince and reverse trap gets married thanks to MC. LN art looked different that I didn't noticed
These are some amazing military uniforms.
>Personal maid
>President of a trading company
>Princess
>Classmate
>Privateer
Who are the other 2 on the right?
My god, he just finds a metal chair in the middle of the street after getting his throat slashed and smacks the ultra battle armor girl in the head into unconsciousness.
How many at the same time? Multiple, just 1, or still 0?
metal chair>cultivating combat cyborg
what the fuck, this is so bad
This is like something out of RWBY.
Honestly would be a funny running gag if I saw this show up again.
when will china have empathy and ditch confucianism and maoism
I just want a slow paced isekai that actually does its homework regarding how a medieval setting works.
I don't get it. are these translators just finding garbage from the chinese-equivalent of deviantart or something?
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I just saw this today and it just reminds me of the stupid romcom comics my sister tried to make with the retarded conversations and awkward development
Once they stop living in a dystopian shithole.
There are worse things on the same platform they're getting this from, the rabbit hole goes deep.
yeah but not everyone gets to have everything handed to them. This girl was reincarnated on HARD MODE under a poor noble (Marquis) in the countryside!
absolute cunt of a loli
>absolute cunt
>loli
What did he mean by this?
Does anyone still have pdfs/links of the tl of 86? It's been sitting on my backlog since it started being translated but never got around to reading it.
Heard it got licensed and sure enough can't find it online anymore.
book loli is a cunt and a jew
Her dad going "reeeeeeeeeeeeee, how dare you be born" is pretty wow.
Book loli stops being a cunt once she starts getting acclimated to her new surroundings.
Her being a jew comes from being trained by mega jew merchants, who are always pissed at her for giving away what would be considered extremely valuable information in that era.
YOUNG DAUGHTER, YOU DARE?
You can find the first two on goddess.
Having a daughter is the ultimate form of cuckoldry. With a son he could at least bang another woman with him.
Yeah, that's about right, add "extremely fucking girly" to the laundry list while you're at it.
He has a son, he also went full "REEEEEEEEE, MOM IS DEAD, HOW DARE YOU BE BORN".
You could say the girl cucked their family out of her mother.
i love otome tenseis so much
any where the prince actually stops to think and decides to stay with MC after realizing everyone being a dick
>double entry bookkeeping
Yes, although by that point MC is the Demon King.
How much reeeee? Just "Damn!" or pic related?
With a picture like that you gotta give me a name
>this person could destroy us all if they ended up hating the world
>we should all go and persecute that person to their face and make them feel like the world hates them, what's the worst that could happen
honestly, the country deserved it if they're this retarded
Mieruko-chan. She a cute.
Thanks
Looks like Sekai Oni.
We got anymore of these Sahyuk edits?
I'd recognize THAT one at a glance. What a fucking ride
is this shit on mangadex?
Yes but all rounders get shitted on my minmaxed builds nukes he starts with high or godly stats already.
I'm shopping 1-2 hyukfaces per day, they all will end up in these threads eventually
oh didnt know it was updated but yeah MC should just glass everyone in these type of stories
Seo : Love because every unwanted spinster above 30 years old in fiction and real life want that as their primary goal
Yongha : Promise to spare his family and neighbourhood from monsters with reverse as threat if he didn't comply.
That's not always the best solution, even if it might solve some problems.
>MISTRESS, SHE WANTED TO KILL HER YOUNGER BROTHER
>all she did was slow down his fall when he fell from a open window
These people are bloody retards, her mother is a cunt while her father is a spineless wimp, the only reason they're not dead already is because the girl is trying really hard to not let it get to her.
>Indefinite Hiatus
When it ends, Makoto's virginity needs to also end soon after. Not because it should happen within something like 5 chapters, but because the author will make up for lost time by writing 50.
>Author put it on indefinite hiatus because he written the story into a corner where MC can no longer avoid to not having sex
The absolute state of nip writing
The author could do that, by doing something unforgivable like making his answer be it will wait until after the goddess is punished and when the final boss Makoto doesn't know about is dealt with.
what do you call writing retarded irrational characters? It feels like it's just forced in so MC can feel wrongfully accused just to set up some shitty redemption afterwards. But it's to the point that it's so infuriating no amount of redemption will be enough without also feeling forced.
Same reason I don't understand why people like Slow Prison Life.
update when
Because Rachel exists just to be a cunt to the rest of the world and the only reason she got away with it is because everyone else was dumb enough to let her.
To be fair, the King isn't a dumbass and ordered her family not to do that shit specifically to stop that from happening.
I kind of suspect that marrying her off to another country was was to weaken the spirit King so that when she finally snapped the devastation wouldn't be so large and because countries without spirits might treat her better. The idea would have worked if the country/husband she got married off to wasn't so quick to invade.
It was nice to see somebody with half a goddamn brain in an isekai for once. It's a shame that everyone else is too damn daft to consider that in the new timeline. In the old timeline I suspect her personality was too broken by her shitty mom for anyone to man up and try treating her like a person once it came time for school.
there is slow paced, and then there is ascent of a bookworm, which tries to keep pace with the heat death of the universe.
I'm not even seeing any non Tsuki ga comments on twitter that aren't retweets. Why can't we even get an update just saying keep waiting?
if i was the king i'd honestly send someone to keep tabs on her family just to make sure they're not mistreating her since it is a national security issue
Gerard is basically just looking for a excuse to let loose at this point and that's dangerous.
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Despite rough start and wonky art this is pretty enjoyable, thanks user.
I just caught up on Eliza. Is the web novel on hiatus or something? I am already itching for more chapters.
That's probably the butler. He's fairly good at his job, but there's nothing he'd be able to do to stop the trauma from her trying to hug her mother or something and getting attacked. That mom is just too much of a loose canon to leave around the house.
The butler really should have done a better job at forcing the maids to realize she isn't a threat.
???
translations look steady. Not fast, but steady
>Want to read the moving whorehouse because of all the shilling
>Turns out it has 12 thousand pages and 3.5 million words
What the fuck?
I just found out the site I was reading it from is dead. I guess I have more reading to do. Glad it isn't dead at least.
Those Dragon Kings name is awesome, too bad their all jobbers
That's the purpose of dragons, to job to someone so that that someone gets to be cool for killing them.
they're*
Pretty sure a Harry Potter fanfic out there has like 25 times more words than the Bible or something.
>Loren can actually read, write and do math
Reminder that the longest written piece of fiction goes to The Subspace Emissary's World Conquest, a super smash bros fanfiction sitting at 4.1 million words.
Commuting Cumdumpster might surpass it if it keeps updating.
which novel?
Some KanColle fanfic recently passed that shet as the longest piece of fiction
Guy made a bunch of girls piss their pants from fear, what a ace.
Nah, that got surpassed by a MLP fanfic a while back if I remember right.
All of them are still updating.
Subspace emissaries conquest is also an Isekai technically, so we should talk about it.
>Commuting Cumdumpster
What's that? The brothel? That one is only a bit more than 3.1 million words. It won't ever catch things like or .
>“Oopsie. I was just messing with you, young man. Just a joke of poor taste from an old man. I definitely didn’t use X-ray magic to confirm so you shouldn’t look at this old man that way now. If you form a grimace like that, you come across as a total stranger and that kind of scares me a little.” (Ian)
>Ian waved his hands about and guffawed out loudly. Seol Ji-Hu could only leak out a sigh. He let his guard down and got fooled again.
>“I’m sure she won’t mind normal types of pranks, but isn’t it a bit much making sexual innuendos to a princess?” (Seol Ji-Hu)
>“You say that because you don’t know what she’s really like.” (Ian)
>“?”
>“Earlier today, I cracked a simple joke to her and she responded back with ‘yours can’t even stand up again, so why are you asking me that?’ To be honest, my feeling’s been kind of hurt, you know.” (Ian)
>“…………”
Actually based everything.
Holy shit seriously? I honestly didnt think that it got passed up already, cause y'know, it's held the #1 position for about 4 or 5 years iirc.
Hoping princess Pink Down There Too comes back soon.
>“Yeah, that’s right. Three out of Six Crazies? Whoa, man. That friend’s got a pretty particular taste, if you know what I mean.”
Who are the other 3 madwomen?
I bet on odds that one of them is that Luxuria Priestess that was hinted at a few chapters ago and another one is that tea shop mommy who moved to Haramark to mommy Seol.
Sounds good, what is it?
Dunno, "Yes, Mom" and Cinzia swear like sailors too.
creativenovels.com
Or the story of how I stopped gambling and learned to enjoy tomboyish women that swear like sailors.
>intimidated by 3.5 million words
Bruh, did you even Les Misérables and Cien años de soledad?
Huh, never even gave it a try after reading summary. Thanks.
>xMegadeathx
>someone unironically chooses this as his name
What the actual fuck?
Ever play a MMO? I used to see at least a dozen Kiritos whenever I remembered to log in.
My first wizard in RO was called ~HolyHell~
Night elf rogue, Grungeguy, reporting in
Yeah, thing is, that one is a shitty one that has a menu, but it's not a MMO and the one who chose it is an aboriginal, so my point still stands. What the fuck?
Oh, and it's a novel, but one of those shitty isekai ones at RR (slow progression, who the fuck does that?)
I have good news user. It's tomorrow.
What is?
420,000 words for Les mis.
144,000 for One hundred years of Solitude.
Both are shits compared to fanfictions and Web novels. The authors just need to get on the level of a twelve year old self inserter, geez.
Fag
DON'T REMIND ME OF MY OLD NICKS YOU ASSHOLE
Westerner start this "loyal slave waifu that will never betray you" sthick.
Ex: Count of Monte Cristo
>comparing les mis with shit like literal fanfiction.net and the fuckplace
I don't have a reaction image that can accurately describe this faggotry. Oh wait, I have one.
Cosette: the original daughteru.
Is anyone going to be commissioning art?
Back to Yea Forums
Also that image is bad and you should stop using it.
how come Japanese dark elves are always the best
like every Japanese isekai that has one the dark elf girl tends to be the best one.
Why are dark elves a different race from white elves? They're both elves?
same reason africans are a different race from europeans
>Newly isekai'd everyman gets caught stealing a loaf of bread and serves 20 years in prison, starts his life anew, adopts a daughter and tries to live a slow life with a revolution brewing in the background.
Well, as far as premises go it could be worse.
I kinda like CN ones more where MCs showing off their OP bullshit just makes the onlookers hate his guts and want to kill him (still gets a harem though)
Are there any isekai with black people in them?
Probably, but probably not many from Japan.
Second Coming of Avarice has a black dude as a member of the main cast, the first thing we see him doing is getting a blowjob in plain sight.
But that's not true.
>female isekai
>main goal is to live a normal, generic, slow life
>end up trying to fit into normal society until they accidentally show off their cheat, then they go someplace else and try to be normal
what's the deal with this? Is this how all Japanese women are?
Are you reading Funa's stuff?
oh yeah
elves suck period in that series
I think Hardy was right feeding them to a dragon
Not going for the traditional xXxGod_SlayerxXx
The dark elves sucked, and it was surprising they lived as long as they did. Tuka needs to suck.
Should I go ln or manga, boys?
Slime manga RAWs have just been released, two chapters this month, for those who are interested. I don't intend to create a thread to dump them just for the RAWs though. Only after shurim TL is released would I consider dumping the chapters, if someone else plans to dump the RAW in a Slime thread, more power to you.
Based
just off the top of my head,
I've Been Killing Slimes for 300 Years
Saving 80,000 Gold
Evil God Average
I Said Make My Abilities Average!
The Black Healer
All isekai with female leads where their stated goals seem to be just leaving a normal slow life without problems and without drawing too much attention.
Just steal it somewhere else and hire actual artist when you are actually going legit.
What's wrong with that? You've listed 5, but there are thousands doing the opposite. Is it that offensive to you?
This is fucking saturday morning cartoon tier. Wish it had good art.
From that list only Average Nanomachine Loli and Loli Jew are FUNA works.
Loli Jew doesn't specifically want a "normal slow life" though. She just doesn't want to be bothered all the time.
It just seems like female isekai in general follow a very different path from male isekai. Male isekai is all about getting their slave harem and overpowering their big bad, whereas the female ones seem like they focus on much more mundane daily problems.
It gets crazier.
Piggy Duke
I got to his new uniform and died of laughter because Jesus Christ that's one big fucking collar.
What are you reading today?
The protag is pretty cute and Hasumi is basically a less dickish Enjou, the whole thing feels like ersatz Reika really.
>Villainess walk pass Heroine
>Heroine falls out even when Villainess did nothing to her
>"Ow, you tripped me! Why do you hate me so much?"
>Heroine defense force aka Capture Targets came to Heroines defense and calls Villainess a bully even though she didn't do anything
Is this how a typical (evil) Heroine in Otome Isekai work?
Basically, unless the protag takes control of the woman's body after all the shit is done ala Iris.
What if Kenkyou's author were dead after all.
It happened. Isuzu Elf Isekai.
if you got isekai'd what would be your rice? i know i'd probably be bitching about wanting coffee within 24 hours
What what? The Isekai Truck becomes an Elf girl?
>isekai world
>no narcotic usage at all
Mayo.
Good thing I know how to make it and medieval times has all the supplies for it.
>The Isuzu Elf (Japanese: いすゞ・エルフ) is a medium duty truck produced by Isuzu since 1959.
Missed opportunity making her a kemonomimi instead of an actual elf.
Well, I take back the words about ch3 of super robot being hosted somewhere
>royal road needs a cover
>ao3 needs me to wait for days to get an acc
>fictionpress is basically fanfiction net and that site had a habit of destroying my formatting
Drug dealer gets isekai'ed within a couple of days has the entire royal family sucking his cock for another hit of heroin.
King offering his youngest daughters chastity for some.
Queen offering to oyakodon.
Eldest princess offering to mating press her while her most loyal knight watches in horror.
Brb...
The conversation between the editor and the illustrator was gold.
>Editor : The story is about high school girl getting isekai-ed.
>Illustrator : Okay.
>Editor : It's a story about the Elf being unbeatable in there.
>Illustrator : I see ( So it's a reincarnated as different race story I guess )
>Editor : I already got Isuzu's permission for that.
>Illustrator : Eh?
>Editor : Eh?
Where will he get his future supplies user. It will be unsustainable unless you give him one of those dimensional item inventories with unlimited stock or something.
>Web Novel "I Don’t Want to Become a Villainess, So I Aim at Becoming a Perfect Lady Together with the Prince!" gets a LN serialization
>First volume to be released on March 27 2019
Nice
Those later chapters will be like the cooking chapters where they try to make mayo but instead its MC trying to find the right combination of native plants that produce the same effects.
Why does the prince want to be a perfect lady too?
Where does he get the drugs?
How does he produce/cultivate them?
How does he distribute them?
How does he stay in business without facing a hostile takeover by an already established criminal organization or powerful client?
How does he even get close enough to the fucking royal family to get them hooked on his drugs?
How does he avoid getting murdered by someone who sees his actions as evil?
How does he deal with the eventual fallout when the upper echelon of the country's hierarchy collapses due to turning into drug adicts and either face a peasant revolt or get invaded by another country?
Why am I getting so autistic over a joke premise?
Don't google this. How do you make mayo?
Another for the list?
RR doesn't need a cover
Eggs vinegar a copper bowl and a whisk.
Why don't you want to be a perfect lady?
it will be
>makoto gives in and tells mio / tomoe he'll give up the D
>his two classmates somehow get isekai'd
>wait hold up i need to protect my virginity until i can sort out these feelings
and the hiatus continues
Googled it to double check.
Half credit for me.
Something something eggs something something oil something something vinegar
Villainess consults with the prince on how not to be a Villainess
it's in the pastebin under "Liz the Repenting" but no official image of her yet
>Liz the Repenting novelupdates.com
The only way I expect the two classmates get isekai'd is when Makoto, Tomoe, and Mio go to Earth and end up bringing them into Asora. I thought it also sounded like he was thinking about four people at the time he ended up making a decision.
Local villainess not so tough after getting bullied again
Oh snap is it that time again?
Whole egg, vinegar, salt, and lemon juice. I heard some people use horseradish though.
>Those items and hat
This 'snt real is it?
Why would you do that to yourself user?
No shit Sherlock. Nice quads btw
2:1 oil:vinegar with some sort of emulsifier. Egg yolk is good, but mustard and paprika can serve as temporary emulsifiers too with the caveat of possibly not matching the flavor of the rest of the dish/product. Oil added in small drops with high agitation speed when mixing for better dispersion and improved stability. And for fuck's sake use a neutral oil, things like extra virgin olive oil and sesame oil mayo sound like they could be cool, but in reality they're fucking terrible.
I had to do a lot of formulation tweaking for a product development course during undergrad, fuck off.
>Knowing what is in mayo and how to make it.
Literally Japanese MC tier autism.
I wish I had that autism.
If I get isekai'd then I hope my cheat is summoning my mom so she can make sure I don't die from starvation.
>2:1 oil:vinegar
Er, what?
It's a ratio you brainlet
It's still fucking dead.
Bullying time? Yes, always. Poor girl.
Those are for listening to music, not for cooking, dummy.
If you put half vinegar in the oil, I promise not even a dog will touch the result
The quickest way to make money in isekai world is to sell greasy food.
That's a real fast way to get killed by competitors too.
2C:1T, dirty Murrican here. I accidentally my units like a retard.
Fodder has the gangrape chapter up now.
Picked up.
Big think
Holy Shit Shirly is OP as fuck that ability is scary as hell.
Van do that tho his not doing it for money
2 parts bleach 3 parts ammonia. Put it in a bottle and shake it thoroughly, put in a drop of vanilla essence and make sure the windows are closed.
Sauce?
You have to be a bit more specific when it comes to Shirley's ability, because she has tonnes.
Do you mean when she locks people in a nightmare torture world?
With your typical cheat MC it'd be faster to just rob the whole kingdom.
Yes. I just finish volume 1 and going to start volume 2.
>muh japanese moral
v2 is much better than v1, imo.
That boy has nothing to fear. He should kiss one of the daughter- no kiss both the daughters in front of their mother and give her a wink for ss.
She'd atomize the poor kid.
Ruphas is not slow at all, damn it.
When you can solve every problem by punching it into submission you don't need to be smart, though fact is that old!Ruphas was used to playing 12d chess.
Anyone know what happened to the Taming Master translation? Did it get hit by DMCA or something?
I just found it funny about the comments calling her slow. Also a lot of trusting trusting toward demon king too. Did they forget that he was the reason humanoids are in near extinction?
Getting angry at Diina antics seems to have made so many people miss things like the next star they visit having the same info as the one people assume she didn't want MC to hear.
cola and trashy fast food
Lessons from the Chinese.
If you could receive any type of slave girl (I mean any human or not) as a personal gift. What type of girl would you want?
One that actually loved me
Oni
A true chink would already dig the eyes out of any person who dared to look at them.
Flesh of a frog wants to feast upon the song of the swan!?
>For example, my black hair, black and dark skin is due to Gerald’s influence.
>dark skin
Eh, is this illustration error or i'm reading the wrong novel?
If you look very carefully at the novel cover you can notice that she is ever so slightly tanned.
>fluffy tail
>doesn't act loyal from the start (it's a challenge to make her submit)
>prefered to be frontliner as I would use magic
>someone who actually believe in me
>have motivation and interest that isn't "SUGOI MASTER"
Yeah, she even switches to a pure sword class later on.
the black hair and black eyes should have made it obvious she's basically just describing having japanese racial traits in a european world
Is 'I made a homebrew, but I didn't think of a name and the people I asked were to lazy to help.' a good name for my work?
Sounds great! Go for it!
just use the 'adjective noun' format
HO HO HO SURELY SHE WON'T END UP BECOMING OP
OH WAIT THAT'S HILARIOUS
AH AH HA
Felines are worse than tsunderes, canines are a hit and miss, I'd like someone with a mild pleasing temperament maybe a sheepgirl, horsegirl are fine too I guess.
Haha!
Fox girl. Cute ears and fluffy tail.
n a n o m a c h i n e s
Onee san mage to give me lap pillows and clean my ears.
Also teach me magic.
I heard this shit get adapted. Cannot wait for Senator Armstrong crossover/jokes
This stuff might be real on the nose and cheesy as hell but I like it.
Yeah, but it's been a year and literally no news after the initial announcement.
user, I have autism and I still caught that user was being sarcastic. You need to go back.
Holy Shit Shirly calm down that's like Tsukoyomi in steroids
>I didn't think of a name and the people I asked were too lazy to help
truncate it to that or find a way to make "I made a homebrew," sound less ESL in a bad way (as in it doesn't even sound like asian engrish)
How about rabbit?
Useless bunny, only good for one thing.
tastes ok
If Ruphas is slow, majority of isekai mcs might as well as be called downright retarded.
Also punished Ruphas in manga soon
What ended up happening to her hometown?
being maintained to prevent the ouroboros from waking
You'll see soon. But oldRuphas was really as strong as a world raid boss.
Kuudere wolf girl to slowly domesticate with headpats and ear scratching.
Should i read the novel? How is it compared to the manga?
there's a big ass snek sleeping there that can reset the entire world to 0 if the goddess sneezes
so now besides the "collect the twelve pokem.. zodiac signs" and "meet-n-greet the heroes" she also gets the "suppress if not eradicate the 5 goddesses pets" quest along with figuring out what the fuck is going on with the demon lord
it's 55 chapters long and is basically only slightly ahead of the manga
a fast read with slightly different characterizations of the characters but otherwise I wouldn't say there's a big gap between it and manga
A bit better due to more world building and character building
I like the novel better because it does a better job building the world and character interactions. Manga's only advantage is cool visuals
the manga is a good adaption, but the novel is better.
>"meet-n-greet the heroes"
You mean avoid Benet like the plague?
Ahri in Evil god Average at least has a good excuse since she had a reasonably high chance of being executed in normal society.
Black healer is/was just hiding out until she could figure out the method for a return trip since she was kidnapped in the first place. That might have been how she lived, but it certainly wasn't her goal.
Thanks, i'll read it right away.
Chocolate.
can someone recommend me a novel similar to growth cheat., i like the skill system and that the MC isnt some useless beta baggage.
>gets into a fight to prove superiority of swords
>forgets to use the sword in the fight
Cute but dumb.
Meat, I fucking love meat. Modern logistics have made it very easy to have meat for every meal but it's not so simple for the typical medieval world, especially if you're starting at the low end of the power scale and can only afford stale bread and gruel.
Twelve year olds are usually pretty dumb. Also technically she used all the buffs her sword gives her, it's just that no one else knew that.
Editing is a pain.
>Felines are worse than tsunderes
False
>girl
>love
choose one.
Look again, she has a nice light tan.
The other girl is white as a paper sheet.
Well, RIP Merry's gate.
>Continue writing dragon dad.
>I want MC to meet another isekai'd person.
>The only two choices I came up with was a PvP Rhinobeetle man or a female (male) edgelord RP'er.
You bros got any better ideas for me to use?
isekai'd from the past
Mushroom sisters.
Whit piglet, however, shes only a henchman
novelupdates.com
"Britney - The White Pig" is already included, second row from the bottom, second from the left.
guy who some reason constantly tired and treat everything like dream
Maybe a Dryad or other plan girl/boy, dullahan was always my favorite, moth person, One asura guy would be cool if he/she was a powerhouse.
Good to see that you want to do something else besides the elf/dwarf thing.
She has half a tan. I wonder what the author thinks about the illustration since the cover absolutely confuses everyone.
A crystal golem girl(male).
fuck I'm blind.
Just awake up
>I just want to die, but every time I die I'm back
An awkward Chameleon guy who wish to be more sociable.
Bunnygirl
So the Mushroom Parent from Dark Souls?
>Good to see that you want to do something else besides the elf/dwarf thing.
Elves and Dwarves exist in the setting, but they're mostly slaves/not located in fantasy Rome. I just wanted the MC to encounter other strange Isekai'd people like him since the MMO he/they played was customizable with Player Avatars and he could run around like a mini-Dragon.
Bard
>time travel
>character that get sent to the past stop the bad guy before he get too strong
>but because of that, an even stronger and eviler guy appear.
I remember read/watch something like this, anyone know what it is?
gender bender Bunny girl
>I just want to be a man again
Diina's issues and other bits mangafags got confused will get explained sooner or later. Author planned his story for once after all.
I only get annoyed at the poor man overlord faggots
anyone reading Parallel Paradise?
Command & Conquer: Red Alert
>99% of the girls in TNE are cakes (24-25) or stale cakes (30+) now
It just keeps getting better and better.
isekai general is for permavirgin mc's
it's kind of a 50/50 at this point
either the heroine is a bitch like in your greentext or she's actually pretty ok and becomes the MC's friend
if I was the 12 stars I'd destroy the mansion
what chink series did you read?
Not always.
Yea, but I only specifically remember that happening with Yulia and it being implied to be like that for Iris as well before she got her reincarnator memories.
The irony that it doesn't pertain to this thread anymore.
>read Yulia
>not a reincarnation series
dropped
That’s the thing that bothered me - if it’s still a radical new world to the MC, would it still be considered an isekai?
Take Samurai Jack, for instance. He’s flung into the future, but at that point the planet is nigh-unrecognizable to him. Isn’t that just as much of an isekai as any other series?
The answer is honestly yes, but some people specifically want it to be dimensional changes.
Is Planet of the Apes an isekai?
>isekai general is for permavirgin mc's
Well let's see...
Slime is in a constant state of sex with Great Sage and Veldora. Also slimes reproduce through fission, so he is technically not a virgin within his race anymore the moment he used Body Double for the first time.
The God of Cooking, Crafting and Tourism visits brothels regularily.
Shield Hero ends up having passionate hot nights with his fellow God Slayer Raphtalia at the end of the story, while his human clones impregenate all the other girls.
For Mushoku Tensei there are the girls, each providing the MC with children.
Other people already mentioned Slave Harem MC is not a virgin.
Goblin / Hobgoblin / Ogre Variant / Apostle Lord / Vajrayaksa Overlord is not a virgin.
Chuuni Gunwielder is not a virgin.
Realist Kingdom MC is not a virgin.
Slavemancer MC is not a virgin.
Hey, I think isekai is doing fairly well in that regard. OK, I might have pushed it a little with Slime, but everyone else is obvious.
In a sense, it depends on how alien the new world is to the MC compared to the old one.
So Back to the Future isn’t really an isekai, since the 1950s are relatively similar to the 1980s. A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur’s Court? Massive difference. Definitely an isekai. So yes, I’d say your example counts.
It's about whether the "another world" aspect is ment subjectively or objectively. If it's subjectively then anything where the MC is in what he/she considers "alien", it would be considered an isekai. However if it's objectively, then it must be an actual other dimension to be considered isekai.
>Royal Road is a part of Amazon
Forgive me for my /pol/ hat, but is the site known for anything I should know about? Before I start posting there.
its just so you can publish your works there should you want it, besides that your first chapter will be manually reviewed
that's about it i think
imagine being the person reviewing the shit being submitted
Its probably outsourced to India.
The protag is literally like 4~ different people at once, the actual Evil Dragon Emperor, his public stand-in, the Evil Dragon Queen and his 5% Brain Power Dragon Son, shit's amazing and I need more like right now.
>Your first chapter will be manually reviewed.
Excuse me what? Explain further.
Its a silly thing to ask, but I'm trying to write a synopsis for super robot isekai and I can't stop cringing. Can I can submit it to royal road without a synopsis?
it's how they tag your shit, you can add new tags later tho
post it here
At least that bunny gets used the one thing they are good at.
Okay. Prologue and 2 chapters.
pastebin.com
pastebin.com
pastebin.com
Give a decent synopsis in return.
Can a woman with daddy issue become villainess?
A good chunk of them already have daddy issues.
Yes, but like most female villains people will get mad if you hold her accountable for her actions.
>Should a daughter become a villainess for the sole purpose of marrying her father and to eliminate her mother from their life!?
You're giving me ideas, man.
mine is about the princess stole a magical ring that can control people and monster and cause war with neighbouring country because her father keep focusing his attention to her younger brother, the true heir to kingdom
Don't get tricked into writing a homebrew. It's responsibility. The cunning minotaur is trying to destroy your comfy reading time.
In 2025, Hollywood will start adapting western isekai story.
Nah, capeshit is still strong. I give it until 2030.
>be sahyuk
>finds out that said bully looks like the guy who she betrayed once
>understood why she got bullied hard
>wants to make up with him for betrayal
>gets a big NO.
>said bully dotes on your fake loli self
>fake self proceeds to become a better ruler than she could ever hope to be
>gets cucked out of head pats and doting
poor girl
>Fantasy based story
>Cheap to produce
>This could have been boss
It's not fair
If popular and well made, it can generate tons of revenue and ad material, user. I know what I'm talking about, I'm a /biz/nessman.
FUCK YOU XLM IS FUCKING THRASH NOW
That pic doesn't fit Boss at all.
I imagine Boss like an older version of pic related (without the heterochromia shit, of course).
So, the "final" design? (can't find it)
>tfw only got a single reply when i posted my homebrew so i can stall chapter 2 forever
Even if people read your story, they won't discuss it here. So if you linked a pastebin, don't expect any actual commentary. I don't think any homebrew ever got anything except "it's good", "I like it", "I don't like it".
Everyone praises Couplet all the time.
I don't talk much about the homebrews here but I have posted good reviews in the ones uploaded to RoyalRoad that catched my interest.
good point user, that's not a reason for me to slack off
thank you.
Don't get tricked by the minotaurus.
Couplet is a bit of an exception. What I meant was that he won't get any discussion about what happened in the chapter. At most he will just get an empty (You) when he posts his stuff. And pastebin anons get way less attention not because their stuff is bad, it's because everyone expects them to not have taken their story seriously since they didn't officially post it. When a guy says "please comment on my stuff and tell me what to change" I expect his story to be bad and that he will make changes to it. I don't want to have to read the same chapter two times to know the edits so I just skip the pastebins until official release that won't be further edited.
Yeah, pastebin stories feel like they are inherently low quality or a "beta" of the actual story so I never touch them and tend to wait till the story gets posted in a more "serious" place like RoyalRoad.
Same with me. I wait until they post it. That's how I know they committed to the story.
About to make American Psycho inspired isekai
Wish me luck bros
And it's ask too much of a disposable anonymous thread, if you really want criticism then do the thing in RR
So post on RR if i want discussion?, got it thanks anons.
Or read Argent's bio and you'll know what to do.
That's if you want discussion. If you want criticism or corrections for your initial story draft, post it here (it's free). But if you want to continue, you're on your own.
If you want a real in depth discussion, post in RR and similar sites, maybe you can add some people to the fanbase, now if you not confident with your work, post here and maybe someone gonna give you some criticism, you can always ask jaja-chan to add in the list, and do some LIGHT chilling in here, please don't be another innfag.
the lucid nigga?
>innfag
I thought he was kill.
Nah, he's is always lurking
>too late to deletpost
Better luck next time delete user