Yuragi 148

It's time now.

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Time for despair.

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I hope Chisaki remembers everything.

Chisaki ;_;

"You're in a prophetic dream world now!"
"Please wake up, Chisaki-san!"
148: Chisaki-san crosses time

"Everything... everything... was all a dream...!?"
"So the eleven years I spent here..."
"My life with Ko-kun is...!"

>>The last pages of the chapter

;_; that's too sad.

"What... is that...?"

"The town..."
"Is falling apart..."
"And it's being sucked away...!?"

"What's been up with you, Chisaki?"
"You see something weird...?"

"Am I the only one who sees this...!?"
"Th... the city's falling apart...? Ah!"
"M-maybe Y-Yuuna-san is getting rid of the technique..."
"So the dream world is coming to an end...!"

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An sad but beautiful chapter. At least we know she would've won the bowl

"Wh-what if Miyazaki-san gets caught in the destruction....!"
"S-so we should wake her...!"
"...you know,"
"I just got proposed... by Ko-kun just now"
"P-p-proposed!?"

"Despite all the troubles we had, we overcame them together..."
"Finally..."
"But... but..."

"Please don't mess with me!!"

"Chisaki-san...!"
"W-w-w-we're so sorry Miyazaki-san...!"
"...we are really sorry, Chisaki-kun"
"But just listen to us"

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"Your dream world... was partly acting irregularly by your outburst"
"But it's by no means your delusion!"

"My magic eye laplace sees everything in the world at a certain point in time"
"Everything from a single spirit strand of the person in front of me"
"To the nucleus of dust drifting around a planet a several million light years away...!"

"And using this periodic data from this magic eye..."
"This vast amount of information that I myself can't even confirm"
"My shikigami nous can calculate the past and future"

"At the end of the day, this is just a calculation, and you won't be getting this actual future itself"
"But because it's a calculation... unlike just looking into the future"
"You can actually reverse calculate the future you want from the present moment"
"So basically... Chisaki-kun"

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"If you know what caused you to arrived to this future... then you can make it real"
"The dream you're seeing now... is a prophetic dream"
"You can definitely make it a reality!"
"So please wake up, Chisaki-kun!"

"What caused this future"
"If I know what it is..."
"I can actually reach this blessed future again...!?"

"Information... on the future!"
"Chisaki-kun, looks like will be a super big opponent now more than ever...!"
"Yuuna-san...!"

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[What I said last chapter]
...right, the biggest thing about this future
Was Ko-kun losing his spirit powers...!?

Then because we were looking for a way to get Ko-kun's powers back...
Yuuna-san unsealed her own memory. ......
And that's why she passed on.

And because the Yatahagane and Tenko Genryuusai passed on,
The war occurred
And as I result... I ended up
Spending more time with Ko-kun alone than the others...!

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"...Chisaki?"
"Did you... go back to high school again...?"
"...can you tell me... Ko-kun"

"How... you lost your spirit powers?"

"...eh?"

"K-Kogarashi-san lost his...!? What do you mean, Chisaki-san!?"
"I... don't exactly know why!"
"Ko-kun, do you remember!?"

"O... of course I do, okay!? I..."

"...can't remember...!?"

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>"I can actually reach this blessed future again...!?"
But at what cost?

>lose your ghost gal pal
>your boyfriend loses his powers and nearly gets seriously injured
>all your friends are heartbroken and you never contact them again
>but hey you can totally have this future if you want it, no big deal
It's like you're begging her to lose

What's the text next to Chisaki?

"E-even you!? How could we forget something so important...!?"
"Uhhh, Miyazaki-san!"

"Maybe you can't remember the past..."
"Because I destroyed... the d-dream world just now!"
"Wait... is there a way to remember it!?"
"Th-the dream world is a lump of memory... so everything is connected... to memory!"

"If-if you did something that made a big impression..."
"Y-you can recall something by touching an item connected to that memory... maybe!"
"Like back then...!"

"...sorry ko-kun"
"I..."

"Have to go now...!!"
"Chisaki!?"

"Calm down, Chisaki...!"

[side] The reality she didn't want to know just...?!

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"L... let me go, Ko-kun!"
"Seriously, what's wrong Chisaki!?
"Can you at least tell me why..."
"I... I can't!"
"I can't tell you...!"

"Please... Chisaki"
"Why do you want to go home so suddenly...!"

"...it's not like I want to go home now"
"Then where...!?"

"Back to the night of that school trip"

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Uhh, I'm gonna take a bit of a break now. This chapter left a sour taste in my mouth, so I need to walk it off a bit.

I understand. Take care user. Here's an cute comfy Chisaki.

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Why? I am impresed the autor had the balls to made this up, I hope the next to get mindbroken Sagiri

If Chisaki gets all sad and shitty about this I'm going to be pissed.

>I hope the next to get mindbroken Sagiri
There's no point.

she better gets something back, a date would be the bare minimun

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I think she loses her memories of that by the next day. So I guess in the abstract she knows she gave up a future with him, but can't remember that future as if she lived it at least.

Based TLanon is a Chisakibro.

TSanon here. That's fine. What you've done so far is enough for me to get started.

i dont understand why everyone roots for the Onodera clone, she is fated to losen anyway. The series will end with Kogarashi dying and passing away alongside Yunna

>this is what Yuunafags need to consolidate their victory
God what a kick in the balls. If I were a Yuunafag, this would be a Pyrrhic victory at best.

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>I hope the next to get mindbroken Sagiri
no

Not really, but nobody deserves that treatment.

Also, the chapter itself is really played for bitterness, kudos to the author.

this is some actual cosmic suffering going on

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I don't get why Chisakifags are so assblasted.

>but nobody deserves that treatment
In real life maybe, but this is a manga, so its ok

Fucking savage way to lose

I'm here from that weekly romcom roudup thread
what the hell's happening?

I'm not. I'm actually relieved to know my girl would've won the Kogabowl and we had cute back to back chapters of sexy milf Chisaki and such. This chapter is the final knot of my ship in bliss.

Anyone else hope Chisaki remembers all of it?

>assuming the ship war is over.
It’s only just begun.

Me neither, its just fiction

Exactly. Chisaki lost an secured victory. She can still win in this changed future, who knows what'll happen?

At the end Miura pulls the status quo BS snd has Chisaki forget the dream.

Where do you see anyone assblasted? People are just feeling sorrow like during when Hibari was rejected. There's nothing wrong with feeling emotions.

>Yuragi manga threads
>shipwars

No, I am hoping there is no forgetting. At all. That would be amazing. In fact the best thing would be if she remembers but is still okay with it.

Over the last few chapters, the 2nd most popular girl went to a fortune teller both that had a fortune teller with genuine powers. Girl got an offer to see a vision of a possible future where she was together with the boy she liked, aka the MC. It would even be shown to her as a dream to keep it private. She agreed, but the spell went haywire and as a result spent - what was for her - 11 years within the dream living a possible timeline where she eventually gets together with the MC. Over the course of that she forgot it was a dream and accepted it as a reality. Just as the MC proposed to her in the dream, the fortune teller and the others helping her finally broke through to the girl to tell her it was a vision/dream and they'll be getting her out of it shortly.

Also the path to her winning in that timeline involves the MC losing his powers, the main girl who is a ghost passing on without confessing to the MC, a Yokai war being fought because of those two things, and the MC rejecting all the girls after him before the girl gets another chance at him years later.

>11 years within the dream
She spent 1 year in the dream and remembered the past 10 years prior.

That wasn’t first her mind went back in time and it wasn’t her last.

MONGUL

This user gets it.

So you also watched that Justice League episode?

Cmon user, think about it. I'm not a huge Chisaki fan but making a mini arc just to absolutely destroy any hope of a girl winning is going to leave a bad taste in anyone's mouth.

Except for that one Sagiri fag who hates all the other girls I dont think we have ever had arguments about girls.

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As a disclaimer, I should probably say I am not a ship person. It's just bitter in general. Anyway, back to work

Ganbatte.

If you ever come to my country let's go for a beer TLanon.

"...so this is a prophetic dream work that Yumesaki-sensei and Ryuuzen-san created...!?"
"There's a limit to believable...!"
"You... believe me?"
"...it's what you say, Chisaki"

"I'm sure back then... I did something, I think."
"Something that made your powers disappear...!"
"And if I figure that out..."
"Ah okay... so if you figure it out"
"You can make this world a reality again!"

"...yeah"

"...anyway, let's just look! You got no time, right!?"
"Y-yeah! The uniform and textbooks didn't work"
"Is there anything else..."

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"...so how about this? Chisaki"
"The school trip booklet...!"

"The one I made together with Ko-kun..."
"As the school trip reps...!"

"Fuyuzora-kun's powers disappeared... what do you mean!?"
"It's the work of Yoinozaka Shakuhito...!"

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"He found a time when Yuuna was separated from Fuyuzora Kogarashi..."
"Then sealed him in darkness to seal his powers"

"The spirit sealing crystal..."
"So he used that tool which sealed Fuyuzora-kun's powers before"
"When the CHuuma village got attacked... I thought everything in the storehouse vanished"
"But to think he stole something... that's our fault"

"I... it'll be okay, Yuuna-san!"
"You can fix it, right!?"
"I... I don't really know... but!"
"I'll do whatever I can do fix it...!"

"...you remember Chisaki?"
"Y... yeah"
"...Yoinozaka Shakuhito-san... was the culprit?"

"...eh?"
"I... didn't do anything...?"
"Huh...? Then that means..."

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"If I... continue to do nothing"
"I can reach this happy future...?"
"So basically, Ko-kun and I were actually"
"Destined to be together from the beginning...!?" [Oh ow]

"...Chisaki"

"Can you..."
"Promise with me?"
"That you'll come back to this future again...!"

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"...can you hear me, Yuuna-san?"

"Y-yes, Chisaki-san!"
"Fuyuzora-kun... is being targeted...!"

"By the man who attacked the Chuuma village, Yoinozaka Shakuhito"
"That man...!?"
"He's trying to seal the Yatahagane's powers... with the crystal that seals spirit powers"
"...!? W-wait the one from back then!?"

"So please just got to Fuyuzora-kun right now... Yuuna-san!"
"Alright then! Leave it to me, Chisaki-san!!"

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My eyes. They can't stop tearing up.

What a chapter. Damn.

faggot

"...thanks Ko-kun"
"But sorry"
"I can't take that ring"

"...I saw it all"
"Yuuna-san's despair when you two..."
"Stopped being able to touch each other"

"And everyone's tears"
"The night Yuuna-san passed on..."
"Without even knowing what her regrets were"

"Then your battered appearance..."
"As you tried to shake everything off"

"...if this was something that was long since finished..."
"I'd have no choice but to look to the future, okay?"
"But"

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"Now that I know how to get to this future"
"If I'm the only one attaining happiness despite doing nothing"
"I can't accept that...!"

"...figured!"

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"You really are the woman I fell in love with"
"Chisaki...!"

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Goddamn, gotta twist that knife in good, huh?

"You're awakw!!"

"Th-thank... goodness...!"
"G-good morning, Miyazaki-san!"
"Thanks to you letting us know what you saw in your dream..."
"We managed to chase off Yoinozaka Shakuhito!"
"And I destroyed the crystal, so... we're all okay!"
"Sorry, Chisaki-kun...!"
"I was trying to show off my good points to Genryuusai-sama..."

"Thanks... Miyazaki!"

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FUCK
THIS
GAY
PLANET

Really?

imagine if she was pregnant when this happened

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lol

"Chisaki!"
[side] And so she chose...

"...fh...."
"Ngh..."

...in the end, it really was nothing but a prophetic dream.
The next morning, almost everything she saw in that dream... was forgotten.
As well as why she cried the night before.
[side 2] The real tomorrow is coming.
[bot right] Next issue, Chisaki-san is back to the school trip. And then!?

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Thanks for the TL user. You deserve some rest.

That's pretty brutal

Thanks. That's pretty damn cruel of the author. Fuck.

>dream was forgotten.
I was expecting this but I’m still disappointed.

>everything she saw in that dream... was forgotten
Miura is brutal, damn.
Thanks TLanon, now let's wait for TSanon.

it says almost everything so hopefully this will have some effect on future arcs

Jesus Christ
Author really fucked her up huh
If she wins, will he be forgiven?
It doesn't look like it's endgame yet.

Dickest of moves. Also, is the chapter end implying the next one is also a Chisaki chapter?

I think I should clarify this for anyone who didn't know what just happened, but there are now officially two timelines:
Line 0 (original) : Chisaki does nothing and becomes default winner of the bowl.
Line X: Chisaki saves Fuyuzora and keeps the door open for every possibility.

Thanks for the clarification Doc Brown.

Yeah, but we all know Yuuna's gonna win the 'open' timeline.

So Chisaki sacrificed her own future for everyone else's. This is her Uruka moment.

My assumption is that what she remembers will either push her to confess to Kogarashi this arc, or that she'll accidentally call him Ko-kun and she'll end up continuing to call him that.

>This is her Uruka moment.
I'm sorry, what?

He's talking about Bokuben/We can't Study.

Yeah, bare minimum she needs to be more aggressive in trying to win from now on

but why

Loved it.
;_;

>Uruka moment.
You mean still smiling after the self-shooting she's been doing for the past chapters?

I'm still rooting for Chisaki, even though I know the obvious endgame is Yuuna, though I don't hate her at all so that's that.

I just figure that's so it's less sad when she inevitably loses now

Yuuna is a spirit.

How could she possibly win? Abe would not like that.

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>nips still think yuuna as the best girl
Fucking hell, all other girls at least struggle and develop.

That moment where she told Nariyuki she was leaving Japan and cemented her exit from the game.

What does Yuuna's memories have to do with Kogarashi? His powers didn't even come back when they found them.

Wait, she's leaving? Damn it's been a long while.

Miura wrote that copout ending line 'Next day Chisaki forgot the dream teehee!' specifically so that he wouldn't have to deal with the fallout from this.

There are moments like this where he shows great writing talent but in the end he just wants to be a hack.

...

The manga was a lot better when it was just about supernatural hijinks instead of all this war stuff.

>Except for that one Sagiri fag who hates all the other girls
He's here

Question: if this is a harem manga about supernatural girls, why include a generic human girl option in the first place? Why put a Betty in a series full of Veronicas? Why add in a character you know will not only lose the main romance, but was never even considered to be endgame at all?

The worst part of it is that even if the MC does choose a girl in the end, all the other harem members will just end up single and lonely, since they devoted all of their time to the MC and had no backup plan. Look at Nisekoi - when Ribbon Gorilla won, the epilogue showed that the only girl actually going on dates afterward was Marika, and that was only to appease Y-San (note: before you say the extras in the last volume, we don’t know if Onodera actually got married or if she just went to a sperm bank).

What I’m trying to say is if you’re trying to make a harem, either commit to it or give the losing girls some option for happiness.

Much thanks.

>why include a generic human girl option in the first place?
Because part of Kogarashi's character was a desire for a normal school life. After growing up in an orphanage, constantly getting possessed by ghosts who forced him to learn all kinds of skills and dragged him into all sorts of things, meeting someone who could teach him and ending up in a battle shounen adventure, coming back from that and still having to do shit like stop a war on his middle school trip and spend the rest of it getting chased around; he wanted to enjoy a normal school life and finally get a chance to make some friends.

A fairly normal human girl who is generally okay with the spirit power related shenanigans works well with that.

>Sagirifag
I'm a Chisakifag though.

FUCK. THIS IS EXACTLY LIKE THAT EPISODE. This Black Mercy arc is too cruel for any girl in this series, especially Chisaki.

As painful as cutting off her own arm.

Oh boy, I just know the nips raged. This is just going to increase her popularity especially since she's already the second favorite.

Fuck

If Kogarashi kills himself he can become a spirit as well and be with her

Just turn him into the demon lord and give him a harem, problem solved.

Yuuna sucks

dat face has seen some shit

>unlocking Yuuna's memories could be the key to restore Kogarashi's powers
how

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Wait, is she fan favourite?

by about 900 votes

>No Hibari
Terrible chapter

Byakuei sealed Yuuna's memories to keep her from interfering with him as in life she was highly skilled due to Byakuei teaching her so she'd be useful to him. He only unsealed part of her memories during his arc, so she could battle Ouga. Specifically he unsealed mostly just her memories of how to use her powers. Her memories of her personal life are still sealed, which would include her regrets. However, they don't know if Byakuei unsealed all memories of her powers or that are related to using spiritual powers. She might know a technique that could break a seal like Shakuhito tried to use, but it's currently in her seal memories. Or items or artifacts that could be useful in breaking the seal might be things Byakuei knew of, or even had lying around in a separate storage area, but that knowledge is in Yuuna's sealed memories. So it seems Yuuna unsealed her memories in an attempt to check, and promptly passed on.

>No Hibari
Amazing chapter

Looks like Yuuna can still pass on without Kogarashi losing his powers. Some threat just has to show up that is unaffected by any technique the characters know thus far.

Goddammit I dont even like her

>forgot
What the fuck? If you are going to brutalize a character then at least have them remember it.

>The real tomorrow is coming.
The tomorrow with Yuuna's win!
This was some shit, You can say Chisakifags at least got their version of the future, but at was cost, that ending was brutal.

The title girl wins? At least we can be sure that all the despair the rejected girls will face will look beatiful, like this one and Hibari's a few months ago has proven.

>Line 0 (original) : Chisaki does nothing and becomes default winner of the bowl.
That's only because she ended up meeting with Kogarashi. Line 0 could have the exact same thing happen and if one of the other girls had met future Kogarashi first it is possible that he would get together with them.

FUCK, That would be amazing, can anyone speak moon and tweet that to Miura? Ask him to add it to the tanks or something, like an after chapter page. That's if he didn't already give hints already.

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That would make me cum desu.

>That's only because she ended up meeting with Kogarashi.
No shit, they were "destined" to be together in the current timeline. Nothing was gonna change that path until Chisaki decided to interfere with the present to save Koga from losing his powers. The other girls never had an shot and doesn't have the same future as Chisaki.

>mindbroken Sagiri
A common end for kunoichi.

Thank you.

She met Kogarashi by chance in Tokyo. Him losing his powers is only the first step along the path to the future where she's with him. Even assuming that the war and everything else went the same, it's possible that Kogarshi could be sent to a different branch of his work and she never encounters him in Tokyo or he just misses the train that day instead and she fails to encounter him that way. There are factors along the way that aren't in Chisaki's control, and those may or may not have gone in her favor.

Contrast, she represents "normality" among the others and considering there is a name on the title that isnt the MC we can guess how it will end.

Granted Yuuna winning is kinda hard but that happened in Tasogare Otome x Amnesia so ...

>She met Kogarashi by chance in Tokyo.
Yeah and that chance was their destiny that was gonna inevitably happen again. It's not that complicated to understand, nothing was gonna change that path.

Well kinda but it does mean she have to spend more time with him and they have to spend less, she "won" because he broke away from the rest of the girls that became busy and she was then reunited with him and was the only one ... thats a win by default as everyone else had dropped out.

She can still get win but have to be aggressive with that and not taking a no for a answer, kinda like Hibari does despite being shoot down.

>she "won" because he broke away from the rest of the girls
Yes and that would've happened again if she did not changed the future. Like I said it's not that complicated to understand, she would've won in the present timeline if she had not prevented Koga from losing his powers.

Deredere Sagiri when?

Okay, still a few pages left, but time to start dumping my progress for checking.

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God fucking dammit this chapter hurt my soul.

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I don't think Chisaki deserved this at all.

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Any questions?

>I fashioned a prison you couldn't leave without sacrificing your hearts desire
>It must've been like tearing off your own arm.

Damn. This chapter is a particularly brutal rework of For The Man Who Has Everything.

So far,
Pan 1 bub 1 is somewhat awkwardly phrased.
Pan 4 bub 1 seems a bit unclear in meaning when she starts talking about "you won't be getting this actual future itself".

Pan 5 bub 1. I'm not sure what the best way to phrase her line is. As far as I can tell, it's just a fancy way of her saying "I'm not going home" as a lead up to her telling him she's going back to the night of the school trip as the first step of telling him this is her dream world. But I'm not sure of how to best phrase "I'm not going home" to be fancy without changing meaning.

Pan 1 bub 2 seems off. He seems to be trying to remark on how out there her story is, but the next bubble indicates he's not doing so in a way that expresses doubt. The current phrasing you have sounds a bit like he's doubtful, but I don't know if there's a better one.

I had to move some things around to match the bubbles. Also panel 4 probably should be double checked. At a glance it looks to me like she might be separately commenting on him fighting like he's trying to shake off Yuuna's departure, and commenting on his wounded appearance.

Time for president to finally come back right?

First girl wins. It happens in every harem in every mango ever written except for a few written by hacks like TWGOK.

It's way worse, because in that story Superman's dream was purely fictional. In this case Chisaki would have actually gottrn her desire in the reall world if she hadn't changed history.

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Still mad I see. The salt mine will never run dry, the tears will never cease. It is good. Also, several other romcoms have flipped the script, such as Ichigo 100%, you should read more of them if you think main girl winning is guaranteed every time. In this manga it's practically a foregone conclusion though, since the girl in question is in the title itself.

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I'm not sure that "You really are" is the best choice for さすが. A more literal translation like "as expected of" might be better, but it might be a bit repetitious coming right after the "figured" on the previous page.

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DROPPED

pan 4 bub 3: M-maybe Y-Yuuna-san is fixing the technique now...

pan 1 bub 1: Your dream world... may not have been perfect thanks to your outburst,
pan 1 bub 2: But it’s by no means a pure delusion!
pan 3 bub 1: This magic eye gives me periodic pieces of observable data...
pan 3 bub 2: And using this vast amount of information I myself don’t even understand,
pan 4 bub 1: But at the end of the day, this is just a calculation. So this won’t be tbe exact future you’ll be getting.

That’s fine. I tried to go for a different interpretation, but if you want the standard one, I have no problems.

pan 1 bub 1: If you figure out what caused you to arrive at this future... then you can make it real.
pan 2: [Did yoy rearrange the bubbles?]
pan 3 bub 2: Chisaki-san, it looks like you’re gonna be a bigger rival from now on...!

People still care about poor man's TLR?

Would he have stopped her, if they had a child together?

Right now it's better than TLR.

Probably not. He wouldn't be able to do anything anyways.

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Go for "That's the girl I fell in love with" instead of "As expected". Flows a little better.

I think he would.

pan 2 bub 1: If I can figure out
pan 2 bub 2: What caused this future...

TLR isn't good, and I'm speaking from colored memories since it was one of the first ecchi I read.
Yunna is pretty much the same, but this one chapter is better than anything TLR ever had.

Fixed.

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He is trying to stop her. That entire final scene is him begging her to make sure that this same future happens, because he wants to be with her since he's found true happiness.

pan 1 bub 3: ...that’s right. The biggest factor that led to this future
pan 2 bub 1: Then as she was looking for a way to get his spirit powers back...
pan 2 bub 3: That’s why she passed on.

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pan 2 bub 4: Th-the dream world is a lump of memories... so everything here... is connected to your memory!
pan 3 bub 2: Y-you can recall it by touching an item related to that specific memory... maybe!

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Fixed with a bit of a tweak.

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Onodera was the most popular nisekoi girl through most of the run until the author alienated her fanbase.

She'll turn out to be in a coma or some shit
t. Arina Tenimura

Yuuna is kind of annoying, and not even in a cute way like Hibari who's actually pretty fun.

How's this?

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I swear, if this event led to Chisaki sacrificing her chance to be with Kogarashi for Yuuna and the ending shows her able to "move on" and married to some generic no-face McNobody, im going to lose my shit.

We know that the future Kogarashi loves Chisaki, must mean something.

pan 5 bub 1: ...I'm not exactly going back to my house.

pan 1 bub 3: Do you... believe me?

pan 1 bub 1: He found a moment when Yuuna was separated from Fuyuzora Kogarashi...
pan 2 bub 3: when the Chuuma village was attacked... I thought everything in our storehouses got eviscerated.

Am I the only one reading this to mean that Chisaki will be the one he falls in love with no matter what?
I can't really see the author playing up their connection this much and then being "Well it's just cause Yuuna isn't there"
also, the fact that this future happened, in part, because Yuuna passed on while not knowing her regret.
It seems like it's setting up that she'll find out her regret and pass on.

Though 'he' only exists in this dream.

Maybe, but don't think the fans will allow it considering it's Japan.

This manga isn't called Yuragi-sou no Chisaki-san. If Yuuna is still around Chisaki has no chance.

Unfortunately this entire arc was probably the authors way of sealing off Chisakis route, he probably thought he was giving Chisakis fans a nice "what if" scenario but instead it comes off as the Black Mercy from For The Man Who Has Everything, as others in this thread have pointed out. This future is too perfect, the happiness is too substantial and real, and having Chisaki sacrifice it all for the well being of others is just brutal.

Fixed with a tweak as they pretty clearly live together so "my house" sounds odd there.

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pan 3 bub 3: He's trying to seal the Yatahagane's powers... using the power sealing crystal.
pan 4 bub 1: So please, just go to Fuyuzora-kun right now... Yuuna-san!

pan 4 bub 1: Then your battered appearance as you tried...
pan 4 bub 2: To shake off her passing.
pan 5 bub 1: ...if this was something in the distant past...

pan 1 bub 2: I can't just accept that I'm the only one attaining happiness
pan 1 bub 3: Despite doing nothing to earn it...! [Also, text alignment]

That works

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I just always assumed the series would end with her passing on, given the name and the premise

Except it's not a dream, it's a look into how the future would, and in fact, did proceed had Chisaki not gained future knowledge and changed events. Also, the fact that she lived out a full eleven years of her life in that reality is pretty hardcore, if this wasn't the kind of manga it is it's actually an amazing and impactful storyline. Of course, in this manga it just gets handwaved away as "it was all a dream" and will likely be disregarded as a simple bone toss to the Chisaki fans, which is unfortunate because this type of storytelling is actually really great.

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Like I said in a previous thread, there are times like this when Miura demonstrates he's capable of telling a deeper story but then reverts to Kentaro Yabuki Lite.

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Soul crushing chapter

>Harem ecchi turned psychological horror/Tragedy
I would read this.

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fucking hell. dropped

And the last couple pages for checking.

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I think he spent the last 30 chapters trying to see where he could push his manga. Like battle shonen during the Byakuei arc and now psychological. I do agree that Miura has flashes of storytelling potential though, if given the right setting.

STOP

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pan 3 bub 7: I was trying to show off my abilities to Genryuusai-sama...

Last one

pan 5 bub 3: Even the reason why she cried the night before.

Man, Chisaki just forgetting everything overnight is such a lazy copout.

man, thats fucking harsh

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Did a Chisakifag fuck his mom or something?

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Well, it's "almost". So there's a chance some details will play out in a later chapter. This is probably what will make Chisaki start getting more aggressive in the bowl.

I hope he gets lots of hatemail like this.

Fixed. If that's the last, then give me a minute, and I'll post the zip.

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I think I'm good. You see anything?

Nah, she's done. She changed the main thing that made her relationship with Fuyuzora possible.

If she at least had her memories(should have written it down) she'd know how inportant it was to pursue Fuyuzora but Miura closed the door on that too.

Just a missing period on this page. So here's the zip

www119.zippyshare.com/v/ncrWcPmh/file.html

and with that, good night.

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we don't actually know that's true
she's guessing that the reason they got together is because she spent time with him alone, but we don't know that's the reason.
Also, they made it REALLY fucking clear, this is a calculation so it may not be 100% accurate

I think it's a bit hasty to close that door, especially since she's second most popular among japs. I'm just gonna wait and see how it plays out next week.

Thanks user.

Thanks user! Have an nice rest.

Some Ara ara or other lasting effects might be nice.

>changed the main thing that made her relationship with Fuyuzora possible.
What? Despite the fact that she lost almost all of her memories? What did she change?

>Over 200 posts
Huh, except weeks where we had to bump over night I think this chapter and the Sagiri ntr chapter are the only times this has happened.

Chisakifags BTFO.
Sagirifags still have hope.

Hold me, i'm having hayate no gotoku flashbacks

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She'll end up like the ghost girl from Rokujouma obviously

The only character who had a remote chance of victory outside Yuuna was Chisaki, and this arc more or less ended that possibility. It will either be a Yuuna end, open end, or harem end, that's it, there are no other ways for this to go.

Making it so that the bond between Yuuna and Kogarashi remains.

>Still mad I see.
I am mad that the mangaka dropped the ball so hard the plot broke.

>this arc more or less ended that possibility
I keep hearing this shit but there are still no proof. What change? Despite she still have little to no memory of her time-travel?

>Sagiri ntr chapter
You mean arc.

>TLR isn't good
TLR:D isn't that bad. It's goal is merely different.

Uh huh, i'll believe it when i see it.

I mean it's even in the title. Showcasing all sorts of plausible Love Trouble (and its darker sides).

>It's a "Yuuna get's reincarnated as Kogarashi + Chisaki's child" ending.

(Yuuna influencing fate to will herself back into existence is not completely out of the possibilities.)

>This future is too perfect
It isn't.

Sagiri's NTR arc actually got a Yuragi thread to the bump limit. Before that I think it was Karura's room reveal that ha the most posts.

Um, if she had memories of all this it'd be easier for her since it'd give her a reason to go after him aggressively.

Not necessarily, it's more akin to process of elimination.

No, Sagiri has always had a solid chance after Yuuna as well. She was probably intended as the #2 girl before Chisaki’s popularity took off. That’s why she got the volume 2 cover and why she still tends to get a bit of special treatment. This chapter doesn’t close off Chisaki’s chances either. She just needs to be proactive in her pursuit of Kogarashi, as winning by default is far less likely of a possibility.

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I don't see how you think having a fulfilling married life where you both genuinely love each other isn't perfect.

This actually makes sense. Most likely will happen, considering Yununa is already, so how can she end up with him.

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fuck, even I am sad

she's in one panel

thank you

Those fucking faggots smiling at her, fuck them.

What did she do to deserve this? She was an honest girl. Her forgetting her suffering only makes it worse on her.

Not for her dumbass, for other character.

Being an Onodera is a sin

Haru was great, though.

Especially Kogarashi. Hearing Kogarashi telling her that he drove away Shakuhito immediately reminded her of the other Kogarashi she was gonna marry, whom she may never know in this timeline.

In what way? They all had a good future aside from arguably Yuuna, who Chisaki cares about enough to sacrifice her ideal future to help.

Those tits are so ugly.

Miura's being very thorough in closing the door on Chisaki's route. After putting her through that trauma and having her literally sacrifice her ending he's also erased her memories so she won't have any reason to be more aggressive towards Kogarashi.

>Haru was great

Haru was best.

What are you? Gay?

Even as a Chisakifag myself, I can't see a Chisaki end happening that doesn't involve Yuuna passing on (probably while "winning" beforehand), which is why this dream arc felt pretty realistic for me.

No, but those tits are suffering from inflated balloons syndrome.

There's already magic that allows her to interact with the physical world AND be seen, it's not that hard to extend that to magic allowing her to give birth.

Thanks for your dedication TSanon, you're as based as TLanon.

Stop being new.

The problem with Yuuna passing on is even though its supposed to be her destiny as a ghost, her fans won't accept an ending where the main girl gets pushed into the afterlife and Kogarashi ends up with another girl.

>Forgotten
I expected this and I'm still pissed, god forbid we have some actual development that lasts more than an arc. I would hope that she starts remembering pieces later, but I know I'd just be disappointed again.

dude really knows how to draw suffering heroines

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Not completely, read more.

begone tripfag

>feeling emotions
Fucking NPC

Serves them right for getting cocky and chatting shit.

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Thanks for the chapter.

thanks

>O MY 7 QUIRKS
>Soma and El Hermano
>I DON'T WANT TO KILL THE DEMONS
>now this
Is WSJ actively trying to kill every manga that isn't One Piece?

Imagine being such a bad character that the only way you can win the bowl is to have no competitors AND for it to be only in your dreams.

This is a very good twist, its just not in Yuuna's favor. Seriously, she's become the most boring heroine with Sagiri's declaration and Chisaki's tragedy

should've turned her to a kuudere

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>Not simply willing herself back into physical existence.

Yuuna isn't GAR enough for that.

Thanks for everything.

RIP

For the people who think that the "almost forgotten" bit means "this will never come up again and will have no impact on Chisaki", I would remind you that we last saw Ryuzen back in chapter 53, and the sealing crystal was from back in chapter 114, which was a comedy/fanservice chapter. It's entirely reasonable to expect that "almost" bit to have left enough for development.

Ghost blowjobs. Also, why hasnt someone made an edit of it yet?

Fuck the author this shit was too cruel

There is, according to the dragon god a physical body isn't that important.

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Fun fact: The mind break chapter (147) was exactly 100 chapters after Chisaki realized she was in love with Fuyuzora (47)

They don't have 11 years worth of memories of an unrealized reality. From their point of view they were finally able to wake her up after some magic bullshit happened and thanks to her "knowledge" prevented Kogarashi from loosing his powers which could lead to some serious shit.

That's for non-humans like dragons. Kogarashi is human.

>all this pottery
You guys are tempting me to reread and try to catch some earlier parallels.

Humans are also creatures, though. Also, Kogarashi is very vulnerable to magic so they can just hit'em up with something that would allow him to do so.

I think te second bubble is more important here.

That page is kino

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>Imagine being such a bad character that the only way you can win the bowl is to have no competitors
That's oversimplifying it.
She lost only one competitor in this scenario, the most important one, after that the girls lost, including her
She had a second chance later on thanks to a bond they built thanks to him getting the shit beat out of him during the Youkai war, but thtat was way later so the prediction that far probably is the least accurate.
One thing worth of note in that future he eventually realized it was a shit move to keep all of them waiting and then reject every single one of them, the present Kogarashi still didn't have that revelation.

Your lack of puns in that sentence is very disappointing.

thanks

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Humans clearly aren't the sort of creatures he's talking about.

It would be an interesting exercise, though I'm not sure how much there'd be. It's unclear how much longer range planning the author does, though he does have some decent planning in the short term. For example in the Ouga/Byakuei arc, it opened with Kogarashi waking up from a dream of his master and the scene focusing on his magatama necklace. We meet Ouga and she has a matching necklace, so you think that Kogarashi got it from her. However all the flashbacks show both Kogarashi and Ouga without a magatama necklace before the tournament, and with a magatama necklace after the tournament. Thus from the start of the arc he was setting up for the scene at the end where it's revealed that Kogarashi won the magatama necklace as the tournament prize, and it was Ouga who copied it to have a matching one.

>Reading battle shounen
It's your fault

Only thing I am suprised about is that people are suprised about it and expected actuall development

Isn't that retroactive foreshadowing?

I wouldn't call it retroactive foreshadowing, I'd call it remembering and making use of established story elements. My point is people keep talking like the "forgot almost everything" bit is nothing more than the author's way of permanently sweeping this incident under the rug, never to be mentioned again to the point he himself forgets about it. However the reality is that even in the event the author doesn't do anything with it this arc, his record for this series shows that he does remember things like this, and bring them up when they're useful. So the forgetting is just the author keeping Chisaki from turning into a crippled wreck with 11 years of false memories; not a return to the status quo with no developments based on this planned or possible.

To begin with, they mentioned that the future Chisaki saw was only a possibility influenced by the fortune telling. It's entirely possible it wouldn't have gone that way.

Why doesn't this series get as much shitposting as other rom com threads?

Bakuman chalked it up to a Mangaka rereading old volumes and looking for plausible things to hook a new arc or plot development into.
Though this did not concern the "forgetting" part.

That's just one of many ways to do it. Some authors have a notebook or a text file or whatever with possible future plot points they might explore later when they introduce something for example.

Or the Tolkien-way:
>Autistically world-build and then tear shit down until only ruins are left. Set your story in that.

The situations are wacky, but the characters just aren't very interesting.

This is regular ecchi.