How would you describe your prose?

How would you describe your prose?

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shallow and pedantic

its the best i can do

Energic, haunted, passionate, incantatory, ironic, obsessive, earnest, pain-drenched, at once sensual and spiritual, and profoundly tender.

Of course nothing says the description is truthful.

Sparse and based.

Stilted and, well, just sort of shit

(You) can be pedantic. (You) can be pedantic.

Pretensious,and inconsistent, but can improve to become something... i guess.

Like pouring out a bucket of water.

Derivative, pedestrian, rusty.

Shitty and unsalvageable

Clunky and autistic, like reading the diary of an istitutionalized madman.
I'm actually pretty ok I just read too much Borroughs in my formative years.

You can (not) improve

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Intelligent, nihilistic and wickedly humorous.

Me on the right.

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Detached, long-winded, and probably overwrought as well. I get saddened enough from reading it back to myself that I eventually grow to resent every project that is ever started.

intelligent and autistic , weird sentence structure / phrase

not exactly how i need it to be

Obsessive and neurotic

My prose is like an oasis of mania, lost in a desert of stifling self-consciousness.

Translation: pretentious sophomoric

Enigmatic

Constipated

Definition of sophomoric

1 : conceited and overconfident of knowledge
but poorly informed and immature
>a sophomoric argument

2 : lacking in maturity, taste, or judgment >sophomoric humor

If you take out "mania" and "stifling" it actually becomes really good.

Like bags of sand

I would describe it as bad and I would describe it poorly.

Like throwing shit at a wall and taking pictures of the ones that stick

great

underrated

nonexistent, but if it did, retarded

it makes me cringe

Prosaic

Tryhard shit, at least trying, more than as might be said of a whole slew of things, prone to omission of articles, perhaps in imitation of So and So. Delighting in sentences started with of- also derivative. Meandering and arrogant, full of pride and sudden shame that announces an awareness of the self speaking. Struggling to find voice, desperately desiring admiration, striving for honesty in a hackneyed and confessional manner; occasionally beautiful by pure accident.

Fucking garbage.