what are your thoughts on this poem?
What are your thoughts on this poem?
Gavin King
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Jeremiah Peterson
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David Sanders
You started a poem with "Rain on rooftop"; "uneven click of keys" tells me that you did so as part of an earnest description, and not as a presention of a cliché that can then be broken or subverted. Realizing this, I throw the poem in the trash. Try again!
Jason Hall
well it's not a poem is it?
Noah Fisher
not a poem
Oliver Ortiz
It is a poem, just a bad one
Easton Powell
is anything written in verse a poem then?
though this isn't really in verse either
James Baker
cut the tontoism
Landon Cruz
how about this one?
Bentley Carter
>no rhymes before the first stanza break
stopped reading right there.
Zachary Bell
flows like a rock
as in not a bit
Noah Martin
>who would slap her cock against my cunt
Weirdly erotic. I love it. Give us some more.
Jace Taylor
you can read more here:
sam-weinberg.tumblr.com
Oliver Fisher
nice
James Reed
>tumblr
>jew
Gavin Foster
if people who go on like this read more
they'd know
they were the sort
that so many real writers
make fun of
in their novels.
Caleb Morgan
I dont get poetry, I might be retarded
Camden Gray
you probably would, had you seen any decent poetry
Camden Perry
what does him being jewish have to do with anything?
Owen Butler
jews are dogs
Luis Collins
ow edgy