I will be reading this out loud to my wife tomorrow. Try and stop me, faggots.
I’ve waited, and waited, and waited For someone like you I waited, and waited, and waited But I never thought that you would come
I though that you were a dream A creation of my imagination Nothing but a construction But you’re real, realer than anything
You’ve disproved all the doubts I had You’ve proven what it means to be one One with another human soul Nobody can feel what I can feel
How could they know, when they don’t have you? How could they, when they don’t know love? How could they, when they don’t know life? You’re the greatest thing a man can get.
You’ve made me know what it means To be a man, in this cursed world With you, I can overcome it all The world is paradise with you at my side
writing poetry for your girl is patrician, but lose the >You've made me know what it means >to be a man in this cursed world Bro, a woman doesn't want to be with a guy who doesn't know what it means to be a man. you should know what it means to be a man without a woman. Yes, I know that "It's not good that a man should be alone", but you should change that into something along the lines of making you complete or whole. I'm serious and I'm trying to help you out. women need strength, and by saying that she makes you know what it means to be a man, well, that's just not strength.
the last line is great, but lose the first three lines of the last stanza and tell her something like how she's your missing rib.
let us know how it goes. hope you get laid at least
>You're the greatest thing a man can get don't call her a "thing" also, Gillette already has that. youtu.be/ThDBf14qPsc?t=56
Christian Edwards
I guarantee you faggots, she will be on the end of my dick and begging for another baby.
Nicholas Clark
...probably this. Women love when men write poems for them, as long as they like the man who writes it.
Julian Lopez
Poetry doesn't work with modern women bro. A girl I was sleeping with showed me a poem some guy from her course sent to her house. It was hilarious (his writing was pretty decent to be fair).
Adam King
Trust me bro, modern women love poetry, as long as you're good looking, of course. Don't come across as "that poetry/literature guy" and they will like it.
Brody Edwards
Honestly, it's not something I'd call good, but I can for sure guarantee your wife will love it
Jason Young
True it's the guy who's doing it.
Brody Cruz
This guy has has sex before, 100%.
Colton Jones
HAHA FAGGOT
Liam Gomez
If you're so sure of yourself, why post it here? You're clearly looking for criticism. If these are your wedding vows, great. If this is just some shitty poem you wrote her, then lmaoing at your life
Ian Johnson
I'm just baiting you faggots with my shitty poems, which you autists (and myself included) will think are shit, while my wife will think are amazing.
William Green
>A creation of my imagination >Nothing but a construction If you read it, I hope she throws you down the stairs, op
Connor Powell
She will suck my dick for at least 30 minutes, before I blow a load inside her, but I won't make her pregnant as she's already pregnant from 5 months ago.
Hunter Jackson
What the fuck is this strange level of exposition you're one?
Ethan Ramirez
With my wife, yes
Grayson Martinez
Poetry without Rhyme Structure (X) Poetry without Syllabic Structure(X) Poetry with reliance on repetition as main focus (X) Very self-centered poem (i.e. something a woman would dislike) (X) Literally dogshit. Just go all the fuckin way and put "You make me want to be a better man" and you have a complete trite, banal, unoriginal, POS, if you wife enjoys this divorce her, because you married a mentally challenged woman, and you should feel bad.
Do you have an accent? This unironically won't work if you aren't foreign.
Samuel Gray
HAVE. SEX. INCELS.
Isaac Cruz
Having sex is very, very easy. Tinder exists. I don't fucking understand how you people are still virgins.
Dominic Gray
Nah, it would've been super cringe if she didn't love him. But trust me, we love this stuff from men we adore. She's his wife, hopefully she adores him.
Adam Jackson
Like a true patrician Im a fucking volcel, repent you damned sinners
Wow, okay this might work because she likes you, maybe. But jesus, this is trash. If a man I was dating gave me this, even if I already liked him, I would seriously be questioning my choice at that point.
It's so lame and unoriginal, it's almost insulting. Despite the fact that this is supposed to be a 'love poem', the actual content of it is all about you. How is that romantic?
Cooper White
how do i do it? i've been very straightforward and my messages literally just boil down to something along the lines of "wanna fuck", and i'm pretty attractive so i get a lot of matches and a good 1/10 women say yes to it, but when push comes to shove i chicken out and stop responding. help me. i need an outline of every single step i need to take to get laid or something to satisfy my autism because i've been repeating this process for the past few weeks.
