ITT: come up with short newspaper comic ideas and give constructive criticism.
ITT: come up with short newspaper comic ideas and give constructive criticism
James Barnes
Chase Flores
be white and write in a token black characters out of some misguided attempt to prove you're not racist to those who are actually racist.
Eli Wilson
Bump
Angel Reed
people who draw like this have no talent, change my mind.
Mason Nelson
Oh Boy! A Yea Forums monster fucker thread! Give me your best shit, fuck my life up.
Chase Murphy
obsessed
Colton Scott
Two parasites in the stomach of an unfortunate Ugandan child make slice of life conversation and philosophical musings
Why would I change your mind? You're right
Ryan Allen
A monster fucker comic WITH token Black characters?
Daniel Roberts
That just sounds like the Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy
Nathan Rivera
An orange chihuahua that likes to eat meat loaf and he pees on everything he likes baths not sure on a name could just call him Taft.
His owner is a female a woman named Jane Archiebuckle
Jason King
Change it to the inside of an animal and put it in a magazine for pets like the kind you’d see at the vet
Michael Wood
A guy who looks like Howdy Doody breaks into people's houses at night and steals their stuff. Humor comes from the secrets he learns about his victims while digging through their possessions.
Ryan Perry
The comic is funny but the third panel is insufferable to me. I hate the deep face, like the type of shit you'd see in a tomska or popular "draw my life-esque" YTer. It's not cute, it looks fucking stupid, and it completely ruined the comic for me.
Jeremiah Rodriguez
Sophomore in college who works a late night job at a gas station where weird, but still realistically grounded shit occurs?
>For example:
A guy who just got out of a car crash walks into the store, however his left arm has been ripped off, so he's bleeding all over the store, but the guy doesn't seem to notice due to being high on drugs.
So while the one-armed guy is walking around, our main wagie character walks behind him, cleaning up the blood that's been spilt. After getting what he wants and paying for it, the guy walks out of the store before dropping the ground dead.
After that, the wagie cracks a morbid joke about how the mess he made costed him "an arm and nearly a leg".
Caleb Gutierrez
Jesus Christ, you turned my unfunny shitpost into a hundred dollar idea
Anthony Gonzalez
A cockroach and a rat living in New York making commentary on current events
There is a squirrel who is a count and a pigeon that the rat is constantly trying to eat
Jonathan Turner
that's what i was thinkin' man!
Isaac Adams
I say that cause i know theres gonna be some contrarian fag who thinks otherwise, they're probably an odd1sout bot licker or somethin', ya know?
Isaac Reed
that's actually a really good idea
Brayden Gomez
*BOOT licker* FVCK!!!
Christian Wright
come up with your own ideas faggot
Dominic Perry
Austin Peterson
A girl dealing with the challenges of large breasts, something inspiring and to bring attention to an often overlooked problem in society.
Charles Scott
Call it Just a Dummy and have the covers look like a mad magazine where he’s like digging through someone guys sock drawer and finds a dildo or finds peanut butter in a dog kennel and he just looks at the audience knowingly
Carson Nelson
>This summer Rob Schneider has really been screwing around..
>WITH HIS WOOD
>and he’s about to find out that what it’s like to hit a home run when he has sex with a nail!
>Rob Schneider’s new movie Nailed it!
Cameron Evans
Maybe a pack of trash-digging racoons commenting on their finds would be better.
Brody Wilson
She runs on the track team but her tits get in the way. Gets rid of the well she only had tits cause she’s fat shit people would say cause the bitch runs track. Make her coach a pervert where she has to struggle with if she wants to report it or not but eventually she does and wins the big event all on her own regardless of her coach being a pervert and her big tits being nothing but an obstacle she overcame all obstacle
Asher Taylor
Woah woah woah. COONS?
In this day and age? user our paper is not a place for your racism.
Now a group of crows who steal shiny things for a pretty white womans attention now that is an idea
Aaron Miller
Racoons. Hard R.
Juan Wright
That shit might fly in a Tarantino film but we have morals and integrity here we publish Garfield and Cathy for Christ’s sake
Carter Gonzalez
Heh, I bet you made that guy feel like a real dummy!
Jonathan Young
*your
John Morales
If you made this:
Shut the fuck up, user
If you didn't
Good shitpost
Kayden Howard
God lives with a roommate and gets up to wacky antics, causing the roommate to say the line goddamit
Benjamin Perez
Damnit, God!
Charles Torres
Buck Chuck
A young slave gets into wacky situations trying to meet his cotton quota or escaping his plantation. Includes a modern version that's an urban Democrat voter
Cooper Brooks
A housecat tries to murder its owner everynight only to fail hilariously and for its attempted assassination to be mistaken as some harmless and cute mishap that they owner gushes over and posts to the internet.
Levi Ramirez
you've inspired me to make another
Brandon Lewis
A human gets pulled into a universe of eldritch abominations and incomprehensible horrors.
As he is a human in THEIR universe, his physical, non-magical body and adherence to physics is their equivilent of an SCP and he's imprisoned in a containment facility alongside others of that universe's SCPs (Like "a bowl of fruit" or "A common housecat") and the comic is about his interaction with the scared shitless Eldritch abomination researchers.
Asher Stewart
I don't like the ears, makes him look like an anthro axolotl now make him interact with an anthro axolotl girl
James Perez
And it's named Punxolotl.
Adam Walker
Perry Bible Fellowship motherfucker.
Samuel Hernandez
I wanna fuck the whore with a cigarette in her mouth
Christopher Perez
Donkey would be proud
Lincoln Thomas
Dragon x Knight is very common!
Jonathan Stewart
Eli Williams
James Hall
Brandon Gomez
What the hell are you correcting?
Lucas Stewart
>constructive criticism
bestialism isn't constructive btw
Jacob Wright
Gavin Hall
Lucas Morales
Josiah Wright
Caleb James
Link the tweet
Jordan Wilson
Sauce?
Even Yandex failed me...
Matthew White
Fucking retard dragon you don't own the concept of fire.
Samuel Stewart
Oliver Long
I've been thinking of giving it ago.
The comic would be about a dragon stable boy. A princess lives alone in a tower with a dragon guarding it. The ironic part is that the stable boy is the same age as the princess and they hang out a lot even disguising her and take her into town.
Just a slice of life of the dude who takes care of the dragon poop. There's a more sinister undertones of the king using his daughter as bait to lure prince's to kill so the neighbor countries are easier to take over
Camden Ross
Rate this one-shot, Yea Forums. Tell me if it's good, meh, shit.
I think it's kinda lengthy depending how I have my artist draw it.
>3 people; 1 blonde guy, 1 brown haired guy, 1 latina with glasses.
>Panel 1: They're yelling at 2 lesbians, making fun of them and telling them to take a hike out of town and never return.
>Panel 2: Blonde guy: What do you call lesbians who live up north? Klondykes.
>They laugh
>Panel 3: Blonde guy: What do lesbians do after an argument? Lick each other’s wounds.
>They laugh
>Panel 4: An interracial couple walks by, a latina and a white guy.
>The blonde guy: Aw the icecream man got my order wrong. I said wanted my ice cream chocolate or vanilla, not mixed.
>Panel 5: They laugh awkwardly and look at each other. The blonde guy looks suspiciously at them.
>Panel 6: He grimaces realizing they have a thing for each other. The brown-haired guy says he has a surprise for the latina and to wait there with the blonde guy.
>Panel 7: The latina confesses she actually has a crush on the blonde guy and asks him out on a date.
>Blonde guy thought's: (That's disgusting.) Blonde guy's answer: Yes, but on one condition.
>Panel 8: The latina grimaces.
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Zachary Cox
>Panel 9: The brown-haired guy returns with a red heart-shaped box of chocolates and roses.
>Panel 10: He looks shocked and agaped. His hsboc cracked and chocolates dropping from it, all of his rose's petals falling off.
>Panel 11: The latina is making out with a Jessica Rabbit-looking redhead woman in high-heels, dress and everything. The redhead woman "Oh yes, yes, fuck me, X" they're both drawn from the side so the audience knows what's going on. The latina has red lipstick marks all over her face.
Panel 12: The brown-haired guy leaves in shock.
>Panel 13: Latina: You have some really weird fetishes. It is revealed the redhead was actually the blonde guy in disguise wearing a wig.
(end here or continue below?)
>Panel 14: Latina: How would you like it if I dressed like a man?
>Panel 15: Blonde guy: Heh sweetie, that'd be an improvement over your Mowgli-looking ass.
>Panel 16&17: They argue, the redhead slaps her and leaves.
>Panel 18: The latina looks shocked, with lipstick kisses and some of it smeared over her face.
>Panel 19: Some passerbies: Heh, typical dykes. Their relationships never cement.
>Panel 18: The next day the 3 people wait at the bus. The latina staring heartbroken at the blonde guy with a slap mark on her face, the brown-haired guy staring shocked at the latina and finally the blonde guy with the biggest grin on his face staring at the audience.
Deleted scene: the brown guy separately ALSO confesses in private to the blonde guy his love for the latina starting at panel6 which would make this far lengthier than it already is.
2/2