Or /coc/ thread if that's what you look for in the catalog.
Wiki:
the-conservatory.fandom.com
Past threads:
desuarchive.org
Weekly Yea Forums creation thread
Connor Ramirez
Ryan Reed
>How does this work?
>It works like a community toy chest. In the /coc/ threads you are free to post whatever ideas/settings/characters you want, but you have to be OK with other people playing with them (tweaking them, putting them in stories, using them for things, etc.)
>There's no guarantee that what you post will catch on either.
>If the OC you are posting is YOURS for something you are personally doing, then it would go to the "How is your webcomic?" threads.
>If you just want feedback on an OC of yours, then it would go in the "donut steel" threads or drawthreads.
If the thread dies suddenly or you still want to discuss something when there's no thread:
boards.plus4chan.org
Last time:
-Progress on the Highway Robbery comic
-More drawings of the elegant passionate romantic male character with a brash stubborn action adventure female love interest
-Supermoms crossover greentexts
-I Know A Guy conversations resume
--Greentexts
--Huge pastebin full of possible ideas - pastebin.com
-Doodles
-Bullion script writing
-Other stuff I didn't mention
If the thread dies early then it's likely because it's Mother's Day and I had plans.
Brandon Powell
I posted this in the plus4chan IKAG thread, but I'll re-post it to the weekly thread too.
In regards to the IKAG pastebin Artist user put together:
I've only had time to read through the "opening story attempts" so far since I've been busy with my own writing project, but here are my thoughts so far since the Sunday thread is going to be made late due to Mother's Day.
I feel Conner's past is better hinted at than shown at the start of the story. It creates more mystery/intrigue that way.
If there needs to be an origin for the bartering, then maybe tie it into how he got the raw materials for the augment suit, or how he bribed his way into creating an opportunity to "borrow" the official augment suit while making his own. After his recovery, he keeps doing the trades because people still come to him asking for things. He's compelled to be useful and sees this as the only interactions he'll get where people aren't afraid he'll blow up a building again.
I think it is a mistake to put ALL of the super kids in the same class. Amelia should not start off in the same class as Conner, she'll put herself in that class once she takes a personal interest in him. He should only come to her attention via his deeds which, ironically, would be an accomplishment Conner can't refuse credit for. Furthermore, I thought Hayleigh was older than Rudy and Conner, did she get held back a year to be in the same class as them?
Maybe my perspective is a bit off, but I think the best opening story is to just throw Conner in the middle of one of his trades, see how readers respond to it, and then see what kind of story you want to tell VS the type of story they think you are trying to tell.
Dang character limit. Cont.
Jayden Allen
>shuttlec0ck
Ah, I see. Now the censored swears make sense. Pastebin's policies really have gone off of the deep end.
I tried up add my Bullion #6 script to the bin I've been sticking them in and it rejected it for inappropriate content. The shitters. We could just make use of the wiki for an easy place to dump and edit text. It does have user pages and blogs for that sort of thing.
Who did the later commentary on the shuttlecock story? They have a point about not every story needing huge escalation. That's something I realized with the Pepper intro story, it didn't need massive escalation, it just needed a conflict and it was a fairly low grade conflict that also helped to introduce Amelia more to the the readers.
That's all I have so far, I haven't had time to read through all of the other story drafts yet.
Brayden Scott
And the last little bit the Bullion #6 script I didn't finish last thread.
Page 12
Panel 1
Bullion is laying Iris down on the roof, she's knocked out. Olympian is standing next to them, inspecting Iris.
Bullion: "She's OK, just unconcious."
Olympian: "Whatever these black things are seem to tax a person's mind."
Panel 2
Close up of Olympian, looking sly and upwards at Bullion.
Olympian: "So, how did you get it off her?"
Panel 3
Bullion is readjusting her shirt, pulling it down so the rip isn't letting her girls fly free. In the background Billy has turned his head and is whisteling, like he's trying not to stare.
Bullion: "My hunch was right."
Panel 4
Bullion has her hand up indicating she wants the jar from Billy who is handing it over, it hasn't changed hands yet. Olympian looks shocked.
Olympian: "A hunch?! Kid, you're way too reckless!"
Bullion: "Look. Whatever this thing is-"
Panel 5
Close up of the jar, the black bars are pressed up against the side of it as far away from Bullion as it can get. Bullion is leaning down to show Olympian and Billy is leaning down to get a closer look at it.
Bullion: "-it really hates being near me."
TO BE CONTINUED
Carter Taylor
Aaron Russell
Happy Mother's Day OP!
Brody Peterson
And I'm off for probably the next 7 hours or so to spend the day with my mom and grandma.
So good luck to the thread.
Nathan Phillips
>I feel Conner's past is better hinted at than shown at the start of the story. It creates more mystery/intrigue that way.
Ok, save it for later down the line, if at all, rather than getting it out the way
>I think it is a mistake to put ALL of the super kids in the same class.
If you can elaborate on this later on when you have free time, I'd like to hear your reasoning
>Amelia should not start off in the same class as Conner, she'll put herself in that class once she takes a personal interest in him. He should only come to her attention via his deeds which, ironically, would be an accomplishment Conner can't refuse credit for.
Good rationale
>Furthermore, I thought Hayleigh was older than Rudy and Conner, did she get held back a year to be in the same class as them?
Is she that much older? I thought it was a few minutes difference between her and Rudy, and they were all in the same grade as a result. Since having them all in the same class was the important part
>Maybe my perspective is a bit off, but I think the best opening story is to just throw Conner in the middle of one of his trades, see how readers respond to it, and then see what kind of story you want to tell VS the type of story they think you are trying to tell.
Finding a good trade story to start with is still difficult. I need to restart the teddybear story as well
>Ah, I see. Now the censored swears make sense. Pastebin's policies really have gone off of the deep end.
Yeah it seems like you can get away with one or two 'shit's but if you go with a few of them and/or 'fuck', 'cock', 'porn' then the system gets mad about it, even if it's part of a legit word
>Who did the later commentary on the shuttlecock story? They have a point about not every story needing huge escalation.
I did, there's a couple drafts I ended up adding notes or contextless thoughts to at the very bottom
Hunter Green
Dunno if you have a Pastebin account but you can also sent people DMs on that site if that's necessary