What are some books about destroyed innocence?

The Rape of Lucrece

My Twisted World

try going without it for a week, completely

This isn't what you're looking for but Songs of Innocence and Experience

Thanks for this thread, I was about to go look up some pics but it reminded me to not do it

What's the literary equivalent of Facial Abuse?

>The red waters corrupt the white roses, imbueing their veins with a scarlet tinge. These apotheoses of the splendor and majesty of this worldly crucible are foolishly innocent; they themselves the fruits of the perennial brutality and struggle. Their countenances of indifferent fairness tease one's hatred and sympathy. This hatred born of envy and this sympathy of pity fall on the deaf ears of these porcelain buds; stopped short by unknowing ignorance, never having entered consciousness. The rot and decay of death nay tarnish as that of the blood-hued poison. Malady assimilates the pure; propagators assume honor as sentinels; crimson petals the only sight left to see.

What do you all think of my shitty writing?

Women don't even hate it. They merely experience it.

Genesis

my diary desu

Did you create that video?
Did you start that porn studio?
Did you advertise to have young women degrade themselves for cash for your advance yourself up the capitalists rungs?

No, you just loaded the gun and killed all those who sinned against God.

youtube.com/watch?v=Iak_rzewOt8

I'll tie your noose extra tight.

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The Book of Genesis

Prettymuch. Its like a hentai collection with several chapters with different themes. Real all-embracing with fetishes too.

Highy recommend for fetishfap.

I want to recreate this feeling but reading.

No one wants to critique this? :(

I just want honest casual criticism so I can improve. I've just started to write for fun.

The fucked up thing is that my retarded mind is telling me I now have to look at some hardcore femdom or something to balance things out and scrub the images I’ve seen out of my head, even I know quitting porn completely is the answer. At least the fact that I’m feeling so remorseful means I’m not a complete subhuman

I hope nobody takes this or my previous post as a joke because I feel like I’ve committed a grave sin

maybe try reading Monsieur Venus by Rachilde. Poor feminine boy corrupted by rich lady. explorations of new evils. I liked it.

Maggie by Stephen Crane, though it's more about her reputation being destroyed.

your brain will go through whatever ridiculous rationalizations that it can to keep you on the dopamine feeding tube, just start the process of quitting now so you can see how painful it is

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Gravity's Rainbow

It sounds like it's trying too hard to be profound. Trying so hard, in fact, that the actual meaning and image of what you're trying to depict falls in between the cracks of your strange word choices. I'm not sure you use semicolons properly, either; the first one should be a comma, since the second phrase is not a complete thought, as it lacks a predicate. You could argue the verb is implied, but it doesn't really read that way, and the structure is kind of cumbersome, especially with the bloated language. I'm not sure of the context of this excerpt, but I'll venture a guess that it doesn't merit the use of the word "nay" in the twenty-first century. Also you might want to look into parallel structure; the last sentence falls flat because the last phrase differs from the wording of the two preceding it, leaving a feeling that you didn't really resolve the thought satisfactorily.
I think if you put more thought to overall structure, rather than individual words, you'll get a better sense for how to convey the tone and image you're going for. There's definitely potential, though.

Start watching mommy POVs. It's the only way.

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What are some books about the innocence of a sympathetic male protagonist being destroyed?

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Demons by Fyodor Dostoevsky

I'm sure I'm using the semicolons wrongly. I think I was trying too hard too. I'll definitely look into parallel structure like you mentioned. This was just something I wrote when I was procrastinating from studying. Thanks for the input and critique.

Seriously guys, it’s been over 24 hours since I watched that video and I still feel like I’m complicit in stealing this woman’s innocence and that my soul is permanently damaged

If any ex-degenerates can reassure me that the self-hatred will eventually dissipate I’d really appreciate it

>the self-hatred will eventually dissipate
It will if you're not a spineless wimp (you're coming off as one). Eventually you'll forget about it after few days because your mind will be occupied with something else. Fuck women.

YOUR diary, fucking slut

Lolita

Then why did you even visit such a disgusting site in the first place, and perform such an act, if you suddenly grew an inconsolable conscience afterwards?

Maybe go to a priest?

less than zero

It's too prolix, and cumbersome, there's a density of descriptors but the images are not being very evocative or clear.

I wouldn't need to suck all these socks if I didn't get raped when I was 10...

The Catcher in the Rye

Echo and Narcissus

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You're too pretentious for a high school kid

ctrl + F: no Leopardi

Okay then, remain stupid.

Paradife Loft

Billy Budd, Sailor

absolutely 100% so y
whores are objects made to be abused and discarded. not even trying to sound edgy or anything right now, its just the dang truth. and it's entirely their choice.

S-sauce?

I was horny to the point where it eclipsed my values, went on a /gif/ binge which led me to xvideos and now here I am

I’m sorry, I just needed somewhere to confess my guilt

Ovid - Metamorphosis

>/gif/

Ok, now that's over the line, you really need to reconsider your life

I mean the pic

>Ha ha lol like emergence ha ha right guys it's so like sad yeah like shindo L wtf lol it's like the saddest thing I've ever read
Why do normalfags hate emergence so much?

based my dairy poster
never ever stop

The idea that women have reason and dignity equal to men's is very recent, the cellphone precedes it.

because its actually the most important doujin of our time. It's a deconstruction and satire of modern pron trends and normalfags can't stand self-awareness and someone holding up a mirror to show them how massively hypocritical they are.

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Literally fucking this so much, holy FUCK

why would you ask for non Yea Forums related things on Yea Forums? That doesn't make sense to me.

OP's pic is not Shinmeme though

The End Of Alice by A.M. Homes

A Sentimental Novel by Alain Robbe-Grillet

A better question is Why would you post pictures that's not Yea Forums related?

You think the ancients didn't witness--and indeed themselves act out--worse shit? Think for yourself a little, and realize that your higher faculties cannot be harmed by as trifling an action as jerking off to a porno. Is porn a waste of time, and does it distract from better things? Of course, so use it moderately or not at all. There is no evil magic it can work on your "soul," unless you will it to.

redpill me on Robbe-Grillet, is he the best of the Nouveau Roman group? what works are worth reading? don't they feel too weird?

Thank you.

What you think of it, never see it mentioned here

It's topic related to a post on Yea Forums that has not been removed by jannies, therefore it seems appropriate.
You on the other hand are deviating aaway from the topic of the post by looking for "source" on different sites that have nothing to do with Yea Forums anymore.

I know that my point still stands

what book, fucking faggot.

JANNIES!
DO YOUR JOB. CLEAN UP THIS FILTH.

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Catullus

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The Idiot

Read Les Miserables

Every time I go to watch porn I think of Fantine and die a little inside

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So you are saying is that Shindol is too deep for them?