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Google "Spending Mother's Day with Mrs. Parr". It features Helen Parr
There's two versions: A vanilla one and a futanari variation
Let me know what you think (and none of my stories feature niggers)
why does this look like a creepshot lmfao
Shit. It’s fucking garbage.
Ideas on how to improve it my man
Hey nigger your constant spamming got me back into writing smut. Thanks.
yikes
Based. What about?
Imagine advertising your sex stories by making the same thread everyday like OP. What a fucking pathetic person
It works
The short description in my dossier is "Daphne had liked Velma's perfume, but finding out the scent was her sweaty, heavy balls made her really appreciate it". Lots of ball worship, older-woman-seducing-young-partner stuff. When Daphne decides to swallow a load instead of letting it splatter in her hair, she finds out it's contagious when she grows one.
Sounds awesome and I'm glad I inspired you to do it.
Forgot to say, futa on woman is big these days, so you're definitely on the money. I just wish I was more into futaXfuta or even yuri.
And where do you usually post stuff?
Sounds very based
It's not done yet, so it's not anywhere yet. I'll drop it in the writefag thread on /trash/ when it's ready.
You really should put it up on sites, unless you just want to be completely anonymous on all levels or something.
I'm not going to upload a half-finished story, user. Besides, this way I can edit it as I work, shuffle it around a bit if I think it'd work better a certain way, that kind of thing.
why is underage allowed on that site
I didn't mean incomplete, I meant on AO3 when it's done under the Scooby Doo section with Velma/Daphne tags and an explicit rating
>black woman's body
>white woman's head
Pixar knows what's up
Oh, right. I dunno, AO3 strikes me as a place of ill repute in terms of its regulars. Lots of fujos there. Not the kind of place I want to get ingrained. Still, I'll see how I feel later.
My fics have done decent numbers on AO3 (have you read them? lol), I don't get a fujo vibe except out of specifically fujo sections like TMNT.
There's also AFF, and the cartoon section there is also pretty populated with straight stuff on the front page all the time and decent response.
Just the MK ones, but I've already given you my criticism a few times.
It might be my perception is skewed, and actually it's probably likely given that the last time I went there was to look for ideas on how to write ass-eating, which naturally gave me mostly fujo shit like Dean and Castiel.
I didn't find any help, by the way. It was a waste of my time and I ended up just writing the scene on my own.
>Just the MK ones, but I've already given you my criticism a few times.
Did you rike it at least?
>It might be my perception is skewed, and actually it's probably likely given that the last time I went there was to look for ideas on how to write ass-eating, which naturally gave me mostly fujo shit like Dean and Castiel.
I filtered it down to M/F and F/F
It was okay, nothing special. I don't like the fight scenes and it's not always clear what's going on, like the second Sheeva scene post-timeskip is practically unintelligible until halfway through, and it focuses on the wrong stuff like when most of the passage is dedicated to how it feels for some guy to watch Sonya get ass-fucked by some weird red monster, rather than just Sonya getting ass-fucked. I also hate the main character and think that he either needs to be a bland observer or a fully-fledged character with personality, not a self-insert with no personality but who is also the driving force in the narrative and an active player.
I worked out the ass-eating woes, and regardless I wasn't in there for personal pleasure. It doesn't bother me to have to read Naruto getting his salad tossed by Sasuke for reference sake, even if I'd never beat off to it.
God, I want to choke on Helen's cock.
I remember that one, yeah. I get what you mean and I can only hope I improve with the sequel story I'm doing
Hope you read "Spending Mother's Day with Mrs. Parr: Recut" as it has exactly what you want.
Also, writing smut got me thinking about something I hadn't thought of before.
I'm not from a country where circumcision is practiced. Foreskin is a fact of life for me and there's a lot of eroticism in it, like the way it rolls back off a cock's head as it stiffens up, or a girl pulling it back for the first time and gasping as the cool night breeze dances along it. Not only is that incompatible with the american understanding of the cock, but I've heard it's a turnoff. Makes it kinda weird, writing american characters in an american setting for an american audience makes me want to make the characters circumcised but that's very different to my own experience.
Imagine being this dude's family
Sometimes be vague about it so you can appeal to both, but I get what you mean.
base
Also if a futa grows a penis, then they don't have to be cut.
What about the baps tho
How will her son react once he finds all the porn?
shes making literal millions. he'll go in to the family business
>Parzival
Never noticed how humorously true and poetic even the little dialogic she did have, had
>how will her son react once he finds the porn scene where her son finds all the porn?
make a fic where she gets blacked
Stop writing fucking smut fanfiction. Nobody gives a toss about your writing and nobody ever will. It cannot be 'improved'. Stop now while you have a chance, get out of the house, get laid and find a proper job.
Fuck off
>get out of the house, get laid and find a proper job.
Nope
it's garbage and you're a pathetic loser. now please stop spamming your trash.
this story, despite it's old age, had excellent preggo and lactation scenes. Also Moorish beauties getting bleached. GRRM wishes he could be as good as the real medieval writers.
This. Elastigirl needs to cuck Mr. Norwood with bbc
Have sex
>lactation
reminds me of The Boys and how they could show someone getting their brains fried live but not a man getting breastfed, even at a distance
Calm down, incel
Basis
Unga bunga, me wanty
Also more pics of Elastigirl pls
based
What did you think of the story?
idk didnt read it lol
Well if you like the idea of the concept in anyway, let me know if you do
Incredibles 2 has a lot of these shots. They knew exactly who their audience was
Based creep animator
JUST
FUCK
HER
no
>those days of Helen Parr birthing Violet rule 34 where she has to pretend to be in pain when she feels nothing but pleasure
>her stretching out like a hyena while the doctors watch in horror
They disappeared like 10 years ago. No one believes me.
Make it a comic and then i'll read it