Scriptanon here

Scriptanon here

Did some rewrites. Page 30-ish is always a bitch to write, since it propels the rest of the story moving forward. Lemme know if this version works better.

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>detective tyrion
holy fucking based

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Any advice on writing scripts OP? I always fuck up the formatting

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My current format method is definitely not industry standard. But it works for me. I'm sort of copying what I've read from various screenplays. I read "The Princess Bride" a couple months ago, the screenplay that is, and the format for that script has influenced how I set up the page.

IMAGERY/SET UP
Followed by continued action or explanation.

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>How to ruin a decent joke
(You) since you want them so much

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One and only bump for anons who wanted updates.

Wait so is the story finished?

No far from it. Only just started really.

based

>DISTORED
Yeah okay, not reading your thirthy page meme.

Thanks I'll change that.

>What do you mean?

>WHAT DO YOU MEAN!?

loving this shit so far

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Should he make a cameo?

Finish it!

i think the part where he takes a break and leans back should be at the end of the scene, and the part where he looks at those 3 seasons should be before it.

Based autism

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Shit...this is autistic isn't it? What kind of loser would write 30 pages of a peter dinklage detective screenplay... what am I doing with my life?

just get a writerduet account, theres a good free version

Well it's creative user, you're doing better than everyone who's off topic shitposting

>MOVING AT HIGH SPEED
>Dinklage is driving the moped
This is amazing user. I really hope something comes of this

bump

polite bump

it's pure cringe. stick to frogposting and not having sex

>frogposting
Based, but I prefer frenposting more
>not having sex
Fair

Unfazed.

If you adapt the script so it's more of a radio drama we could get some anons on vocaroo and make this a real thing

Just have one user be the narrator. Works much better.

fuck off back to spreading your genetic disorder warwick

What actors would you love to turn up in the script? Asking for a friend

Aiden Gillen

Great call. Big if true.

Thank you, user. Differentfag here btw, I want to try my hand at a script/screenplay, but the formatting is weird to me.

Writer user, it's good. it's funny. keep at it man

Thanks fren