I finished the first chapter of a comic recently, and I'd like to share it with you.
100 Page Story Time of the first chapter of The Concord Initiative
I finished the first chapter of a comic recently, and I'd like to share it with you
Jaxson Garcia
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David James
1/100
Josiah Foster
What’s it about?
Benjamin Miller
2/100
The young king of a declining Empire is haunted by the phantoms of his disdainful ancestors. He tries to spark a nationalist movement among his hopeless, despairing, vengeful people. His plan: recruit and rehabilitate exceptional criminals and lawmen to play the parts of national heroes and agents of old world chivalry and spectacle. The situation steadily degenerates.
Evan Garcia
Cameron Martinez
Justin Ward
Dominic Bailey
Looks cool.
I'll be back to read it after dinner.
Jordan Johnson
Jayden Price
Dumb
Ryan Reed
Caleb Perez
Jack Murphy
James Sanders
Bentley Ward
Matthew Sullivan
Jace Watson
Nolan Hall
Jaxon Jenkins
Justin Jenkins
Benjamin Morgan
Caleb Nguyen
Jaxon Mitchell
Parker Williams
Luis Miller
Andrew Adams
Artstyle seems familiar. Can't quite figure out from where.
Is that guy holding a cannon?
Julian Young
Connor Rogers
I'm digging the sparse use of color.
Jaxon Gutierrez
Yes he is.
Also, I'd be surprised if you recognized the art style. This is the first time I've ever made something to be consumed. Perhaps you've seen me posting my stuff before? I've been at it for a year.
Nathan Stewart
Evan Wood
David Ramirez
Julian Sullivan
Nathaniel Morris
Aaron Collins
Daniel Cooper
Nicholas Sullivan
Grayson Davis
Ryder Lee
Thomas White
It feels like a vague memory from long ago so it's unlike. I think it's something about the clothe's designs and the teeth. The first thing that comes to mind is Courage the Cowarly Dog for some reason.
Xavier Flores
I have been told I have a late 90s early 2000s style. I lean into it more as the comic goes on, I think. All eyes and teeth, you know?
Lincoln Gray
Ah yes the classic opening balcony shot.
Carson Martinez
That took an irresponsible amount of time, let me tell you--and it's bunk compared to what I think I could do now. God bless people who draw cities...
Cooper Myers
Gabriel Rivera
That took an irresponsible amount of time, let me tell you--and it's bunk compared to what I think I could do now. God bless people who draw cities...
Aiden Butler
This looks straight out of a call of cthulhu campaign. And don't think I didn't see that cute ghost.
Christopher Garcia
The teeth are what make it desu. You didnt waste any time getting into the characters and action either, not bad.
Ryder Murphy
Great webcomic so far, so im glad you are storytiming.
If anything sometimes I feel it is too ambitious and I dread you wont finish it.
Jack Jenkins
Ok, this made me chuckle.
Ayden Flores
It is definitely way too ambitious, especially since it is my first project of its kind. That said, I know when and where it ends, and--presently--I am wholly committed to finishing it. I have big ambitions when it comes to this world.
Caleb Jones
Adam Turner
Elijah Cox
>And don't think I didn't see that cute ghost.
The flesh is weak.
Jonathan Nelson
Colton Hughes
Anthony Ramirez
Adam Perez
The action is really well handled for a first webcomic I have to say.
Jonathan Phillips
Juan Kelly
I'm thrilled to hear that. I want to make sure great fight scenes is one of my calling cards.
Jack Lopez
Logan Rogers
Matthew Martin
>pompf
Please admit whether that was intentional.
Carter Turner
I never could have come up with that sound effect on my own, are you kidding me?
Josiah Peterson
Gotta say, so far I'm not invested, but I am very interested and impressed. We are not even 40 pages in and this is very enjoyable.
Really love the framing here. From the dull tones on the orc to indicate that he's out and he pops out of the panel to give a better perspective, to the way the obscured guy is barely vidible in the first panel only to be revealed by the light in the second.
Sebastian Turner
Anthony Lopez
I appreciate you saying so. "Enjoyable" is no small thing to me at this stage!
Landon Anderson
Isaac Johnson
Isaiah Hernandez
Juan Ward
Adrian Perry
Juan Flores
Henry Fisher
Jose Williams
Lincoln Stewart
Benjamin Roberts
Dylan Powell
Michael Clark
What the fuck are the other two even doing?
Kevin Peterson
Being knocked out cold.
Jason Miller
I dont know why but the "ghetto elves" feel reminds me of Dragon Age.
Anthony Butler
Bentley Rogers
I can't help myself. My elves are slavs, and I won't be able to resist them being anachronistic in their mundane habits. Too many Russian memes.
Evan Perez
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Owen Anderson
Angel Perez
Jordan Gutierrez
Juan Wood
Christopher Walker
Levi Wilson
A mage, an eldritch abomination and one stabby boy.
Lincoln Rivera
Noah Collins
10/10 page.
Luis Myers
Samuel Thomas
Based baldie. Kill all criminals.
Michael Miller
Isaac Parker
Isaac Evans
John Rogers
Aaron White
Jaxon Williams
Oh, that's award.
Jonathan Thompson
Juan Turner
Tyler Roberts
Blake Hall
I actually feel bad for baldie. Guy is just trying to deliver JUSTICE and uphold the law.
Caleb Ross
>I finished the first chapter of a comic recently, and I'd like to share it with you.
Just wanna make sure I’m understanding this right, by “I finished” you’re saying that “I finished CREATING the first chapter”, as opposed to “I finished READING the first chapter”? Because if you did make this: great fucking job man. LOVE this art, especially the expressions.
Dominic Edwards
Thats what he gets for not reading the synopsis of the story before entering the scene.
Charles Sanchez
Yes, I should have clarified that I finished creating this comic. I'm thrilled to hear you like it!
Levi Gonzalez
Christian Powell
Jason Moore
Reading the synopsis is for the weak!
Logan Richardson
Julian Anderson
William James
This wont end well.
Alexander Sullivan
Caleb Martinez
I know this is going to backfire HARD, but I don't know who is going to be burnt by it.
Jackson Gonzalez
This can only end well.
Zachary Torres
Justin Lewis
Liam Robinson
Oh, I remember this page from a time I checked in on the How's Your Webcomic? thread at random one time.
Christian Cook
Nathaniel Thomas
Joseph Lewis
Connor White
Noah Miller
Andrew Sanchez
Luis Turner
Michael Lewis
Easton Williams
Carson Hughes
Caleb Wood
How do you wear those masks and not realize you are an antagonist.
Ian Wood
Joshua Cooper
Bentley Anderson
Nathan Sanders
100/100
And that's that.
tapas.io
I'll post some supplementary material to close it out.
Nathan Davis
Elijah Sanchez
Brody Reyes
Keep it up, I might bump later in case some user catches the thread.
I strongly reccomend this webcomic so Id be glad to.
Jace King
That's hilarious.
Hunter Scott
Christopher Baker
Kayden Johnson
Btw, OP, I changed my mind. You can consider me invested this shit was primo. I was planning to go to sleep like an hour ago, but this was too good.
From the dialogue, to the colors, the artsyle, the composition, the action, and even the smaller things like the different speech frames for each character.
Thanks for sharing, what a entertaining read. One last thing. Frosty is without a doubt the final boss, just look at that short semen demon.
Grayson Thomas
You've made my day, user.
Christopher Brooks
Frosty is hot
Andrew Mitchell
Adam Richardson
Grayson Gonzalez
Adrian Long
Sharing this fanart here because why not.
Aaron Perez
Julian Barnes
I liked it, op. Thanks for sharing
Julian Hill
Thanks, bud.
Zachary Cooper
Nolan Powell
Nathaniel Garcia
Caleb Richardson
Consider me interested. The art could use improvement on some technical levels but the worldbuilding, designs, and characters are all pretty solid so far. Also, despite some of the technical flaws there's a lot of aspects I like about the art, especially the action scenes and the framing.
Brayden Evans
Goodshit
Tyler Edwards
Post the cuernobites one.
Jack White
Luis Watson
I was curious what Estella could look like behind the mask, wew.
Jaxon Evans
Hudson Martin
OG Estella from last year.
Aaron Anderson
I dare to say, still would.
Logan Garcia
Kayden Gonzalez
Cooper Jackson
Leo Murphy
no one paid attention to you so you come to Yea Forums right? there is no other reason to be here.
Gavin Green
I started a comic once only because I wanted to see threads on Yea Forums about it, despite it barely being a real audience. It was retarded but inspiration is always welcome.
Bentley Sullivan
>starts a comic
>"why is Yea Forums not speaking about the comic of a literal nobody?!"
>makes his own thread
that was retarded dude, and you know it.
we have this kind of threads by artist who refuse to go to /ic/ (mostly because the would get eaten alive) every week.
Jonathan Wood
Oh im not OP. I never finished that. What I mean is that sometimes making a thread to share your stuff with Yea Forums is motivation and reason enough and not just a last attempt because your stuff aint famous. For me storytiming my comic here would be THE objective.
Is it a dumb reason to create something? Sure, there is no real audience here. But at least for me, just being inspired is a lot, plus seeing reactions of the anons I interact with.
Cant tell if any of this relates to OP though, might be as you said.
Matthew Myers
Reminds me a bit of Nashandra for some reason.
Juan Rivera
I love that scream effect, very nicely done
Adrian Campbell
God forbid we talk about a comic on Yea Forums. Who cares if the artist is shilling or not its a good product, if it was shit I would agree with you but this has clear passion put into it.