How would you rewrite SU?

How would you rewrite SU?

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Go away Geoff Johns

Brown Diamond snubbed again.

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Is my version good?

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Rebecca Sugar is killed in a tragic car accident in 1996. SU never gets made.

Plot wise mostly the same but the redeemed characters actually stick around and get to live with Steven like the other three main gems. Peridot gets her star earlier in the show and Lapis is less of an asshole.

Aesthetically more like season 1 later season have too much scifi when the gems used to look more magical that technological.

For townie episodes the gems are involved in one way or another instead of just being Steven and some boring human.

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make white a lot less human, like when we first saw her
>As for this latest little game of yours… thank the stars it's over! Did you have fun? (Eyes narrow slightly, voice takes on a slightly menacing tone) Did you get everything out of your system?
she was totally aware rose was PD, but the war was basically a joke to her
she was probably one of the first if not THE first gem ever manufactured, so she probably has a hand in the destruction of whatever race created the gems
make homeworld a surveillance state with white-puppeted gems controlling everything. Yellow and Blue mostly work on their colonies, with the only reason to be on homeworld is the occasional appearance
season 5 ends with pink, blue, and yellow evacuating all gems from homeworld while white blows homeworld and herself in a mad attempt to punish an entire population of disobedient gems
steven now takes the place as top diamond out of necessity, instead of the diamonds just doing shit for him because they adore him

fix the pacing
do the twist earlier
introduce white diamond clues earlier
when lapis flies off, she fucks off for good, only coming back at the end after the diamonds are beaten

SU is one of those things that could only come from sugar's diseased brain, only a fool would try to completely overhaul it

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COHERENTLY

Dude aliens.