Hey guys, any ideas as to where I can dump this ugly cringy gem...

>Just imagine the hard "thwack" as your bat makes contact with her stupid ears, cracking them and maybe even shattering them in the process.
Gem bodies don't "crack" they're not made of stone, and also the bat would just snap in half once it makes contact because gems are probably stronger than the metal leaving a confusing spinel to wonder what you were trying to do there

This is shitty writing

This emotional anguish is positively exquisite.

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does anyone have a gif of spinel waving and blinking like an idiot

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I want to read more of this. Why do I want to read more of this?

thanks

I hate this thread.

You're either a masochist or a sadist

Everyone on this board is gonna get together and make you suck our dicks

Now write one about her trying to go somewhere after that and being a lonely hobo.

I'll take her off your hands!

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Please no one bully my wife

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Probably both. On one hand, it makes me feel really sad, but I get a kick out of vicariously seeing something get ruined. I find it kind of funny too, something about it is absurd to me and I can't help but laugh at the idea of her head getting caved in, and the description of her holding herself for warmth is so vivid that my first instinctual response is this huff of humor. And then I find it funny that I'm laughing at something like that, its such a weird contrast, that I end up having a proper laugh about it. Its so heartbreaking, it feels like something that shouldn't have a right to exist, and the fact that it does exist makes it fair game to abuse and destroy and act malignant on. It's a miserable thing going through misery, exactly as it should be, yet its own being is such a contradiction of comedically tragic happenstance.

Does it make me a bad person? I don't think I'd treat a real person like that, but from the bottom of my heart the honest truth is I find so much joy in imagining obscene suffering like that.

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Do you read Clive Barker and Harlan Ellison, by any chance?

I mean it would be fun to watch her eventually decapitate people who do this to her and then literally salt the Earth around them so everything they knew dies and nothing new can grow, sure.

>satan has entered the server

>Does it make me a bad person?
Maybe but only a wee bit

>Sticking your dick in crazy

Do you think she'd look pale, or redder pink if someone choked her? What could they say that would REALLY freak her out and fuck her up as they do this? Something about how pink mentioned her to them, and said all these horrible things about how she was always annoying, clingy, and boring? And then said how she was right because of all the things she did?

You could have some mcguffin they inject into her to make her temporarily not stretchy, and a gang of people come in to pull on her pigtails and limbs and beat the shit out of her while he says this. Maybe it could be inside of the palace? Some disgruntled gems jealous of her being the new favorite? Maybe pink pearl, who WOULD know how PD really felt about her. Maybe they scare her enough to make her run away, and they find a way to smuggle her into some hell planet.

Since we're all opening up about our horrible fantasies, I'll share mine too.

What really gets me going is thinking of actually being spinel's best friend, spending time with her and hanging out with her almost every day of the week. Having a great time and being happy with each other's presence.

But you just slowly stop enjoying the time you spend with her. She's only got like five good jokes and the way she acts is honestly embarrassing in public where others can actually see you. She doesn't seem to notice you slowly pulling away and thinks you're just busy or tired so she doesn't say anything even though she feels a tiny bit sad that you don't call her up as much.

She still texts you daily though, you know that she only got a phone so she could talk to you and it's not like she has any other friends to talk to so you get a steady supply of messages from her every day, the only difference being that they're no longer amusing to read like before. You still respond, it just takes you a little more time to get to it. You know she wants to hang out but you pretend like you're busy with work so she doesn't say anything.

But even replying to her texts becomes a chore in and of itself. Ten minutes turn to an hour and then a few hours and eventually you just reply once or twice a day. You set your phone so that her messages don't ring because the pinging is just annoying and she doesn't seem to understand that you're not interested, to the contrary she misses you so much that she sends you twice as many messages to make up for your lack of responsiveness.

On one of the rare occassions where you actually agree to meet up, she seems so much quieter than usual and you can tell there's no spark between you like there used to be. She averts her eyes and you notice her hands fidgeting nervously as you pull into a coffee shop where the two of you sit down to grab a drink before calling it a night.

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She asks you frankly if there's been something going on. You can tell there are tears in her eyes and her voice cracks for just an instant. She's worried about you, and worried that you're not alright but you honestly can't call up the sympathy to respond sincerely. You tell her that you're just tired and that you'll go back to hanging out every day like you used to soon enough.

And she actually believes you, it would be amusing if it weren’t so fucking pathetic. She immediately lightens up and goes back to her normal playful self that you have long grown tired of and you say your goodbyes. She doesn’t even know that you’ve already decided to block her contact on your phone and all social media when you get home.

After that a few months pass, you haven’t heard from her since and she never came by to check up on you. You do however hear through the grape vine that she seems a lot more depressed lately but you brush it off. It’s really her fault for depending on you so much.

A few weeks later you’re out with some friends having a good time when you spot her. Her face looks haggard and she is so much thinner than you remember her. She’s walking toward your group and you can see just how conflicted she is. Her eyes are turning redder by the second and she freezes in place just as you pass

“hey the-“ you hear her all too familiar voice and see her raising her hand but you just continue on your way, completely ignoring her attempt at a greeting. A friend nudges your shoulder and asks if you know her in a low voice, but you assure them that you don’t and before long Spinel is just a memory.

You know she probably cried herself to sleep that night, and many other nights after that. You think about her every now and then, only vaguely remembering her. Just another stone along the path.

Did you get enjoyment out of writing that?

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I certainly enjoyed reading it.

>tfw you did this to a girl once and have absolutely no regrets
>even threw her a pity fuck right before ghosting her

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This, she gotta big stretchy womb just waiting to be inflated with your cum

If she can consciously stretch it she can get great cervical suction too.

It hurts so good, bros.

Where is the original from?
Some reddit story time?

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bruh just screenshot these to /r/Yea Forums and get between 50-5000 karma.

You need Jesus wtf

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This thread is mean.

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That's absolutely monstrous

It's a pasta you moron

People like you are why I am okay if humanity becomes extinct.

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It's not, user.

this actually happened to me practically verbatim (I was the "spinel" in this case)

it was not fun

I think I should get myself committed just to avoid the internet

Greg's van, Steven needs a sibling.

Give her to Dib. Dib loves some space babes.

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Haha, yeah. I can definitely imagine my bat going "thwack" as it hits one of the many balls Spinel she would pitch toward me, sending it past her and into the grassy field beyond the both of us.

She would look at me with a pouty face, eyeing the faint beads of sweat streaming down my forehead as I stretch my arms before I set the tip of the bat on the ground. "What am I doing wrong? Why do you keep hitting every ball I throw toward you? Aren't you tired of doing constantly swinging your bat?" I would merely let out a chuckle as you wipe the beads off your forehead and look at her with a smile. "You've been pitching the balls the way I taught you to. Why don't you put your own spin on it?" Spinel merely glances at me for a moment before she nods her head once and spreads a sly grin across her face like she was going to bash my face in with a well-pitched ball... Not that she would do that.

As Spinel turned around and stretched her arm into the field to pick up the ball I swung past her, I would raise my bat and position it behind my right shoulder. My heartbeat gradually begins to speed up as I think about how fast her next pitch would be. Will I even swing my bat when I see it whizzing into me? It's that smile that's throwing me off...

As my worries continue to cloud my mind, Spinel readied herself as she brought one foot high into the air and continually spiralled her throwing arm behind her, the sight of which chilled my body into place. Why didn't I think that she wouldn't take the phrase "Put your own spin on it." seriously? It was only when she stomped her foot on the ground that my body told me to jump away from the comet that would soon follow it as she unravelled her arm. The metal fence stretched itself outward and rattled for several seconds as the ball firmly lounged itself into one of the many diamond-shaped holes that were scattered all over the fence.

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tfw lack of normalcy

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Actual LOL.

Diamond-shaped... Maybe that's why her pitch was so hard. It only took a change in the look of her eyes to give her wide smile an entirely new context as she leapt up and down on the mound she stood on, slightly burying it on the ground with how much leaping she was doing that in her bout of happiness.

"Hahahaha! I threw that ball so fast that you didn't even want to hit it! Just wait until Steven and his team decide to challenge me to a game of... Baseball, was it? Eh. I just know that I'll definitely win that game!" Spinel snickered to herself in sheer pride before she looked at me as I crouched low to the ground and clasped my head with my hands. She stretched her neck and one of her arms to me to lightly poke my back with a finger, which was enough for me to turn around and unfurl myself. "So... Can I bat now? I feel like I've been pitching balls for quite a whi-" "N-no thank you! I still need time to recover from that. With how well you can pitch, I'm sure that you'll quickly get a hang of batting. Just remember the advice I gave you, alright?" Spinel simply gave me a look of self-satisfaction as she grabbed the bat and twirled it around for a bit before she walked toward me as she withdrew her distended neck and arm to her body. "Yeah. I think that might be for the better. I wouldn't want to hurt ya by hitting a ball so hard that it could cave your face in." I could only laugh my worries away from my mind as I lifted myself off the floor and wiped away the dust that accumulated on my uniform as I planted it on the ground. If she bothered to put enough time into any of the games she played, I think she would never lose a single one...

That would be so funny. It would be like a cartoon.I've been wanting to write something that involved Spinel and this thread gave me the chance to do that. I think it also needed a light-hearted story after the other two stories it had.

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As
says, this is edgy and kind of sad.
This feels like user just rewrote a copypasta
and added Spinel.

Thank you user, I needed that after watching the movie...

Why did no one give that poor thing a hug...

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>Today
>Right here
>Right now
>I'll love again
>I've already found someone

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How would you react to Spinel confessing to you?

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Try just touching tips with some dude, evaporating into a cloud, and creating a magic baby. Worked pretty well last time.

Honestly I have my own issues with confidence so I’d probably respond with why.

Honestly. It wouldn't be very hard to make yourself the object of Spinel's affection. I've dated a few clingy girls and while I wouldn't do it again. The process to getting them to love you happens near instantly. Obviously you need to cultivate their affection and make sure to be someone they want to date in the first place. But the switch from "I like this person kinda" to "I would destroy the earth and kill everyone if you were to die" takes seconds and all it takes is a phrase that makes them feel like you're not going to abandon them. "I'm not going anywhere" would make her go weak at the knees.

I wouldn't be surprised if someone like Spinel, who is an extreme example of someone suffering from abandonment issues, were to fall in love with you just because you said a kind word when she was feeling down.

Any tips to improve my writing? I wrote the first one and want some tips on making it more impactful for readers.

I'm an IRL therapist, so pretty average, all things considered...

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taking notes

A good trick is to actually read out loud what it is you're writing. Your 'ears' are more in tune to what sounds like natural speech.

I'd probably wake up

>I wrote the first one and want some tips on making it more impactful for readers.
From how many replies it got, I think it already made a large impact on the people who read it.

Give it more breathing room You've got too many things going on at once, and you either needed to cut down on some or split the post up. You've got a good eye for which details to focus on, but the problem is you dont illucidate on them long or clearly enough for the reader to really empathize with them, cause by the time you have a good anchor you've instantly moved onto the next with no room to digest. A good writer juggles different textures, picks and chooses the ones to focus on to get the point across, and ideally the result you'd want from any text is to give the reader the feeling that they were there with the character feeling the things they felt to give the clearest picture possible of their predicament. Even if you're going for shock text, this still applies.

Keep practicing, write what you feel like writing and improve. Even if the subject matter is morose, people react strongly to it, and you have a good talent you can nurture with enough improvement.

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based book golem

Any stories?

What a wholesome response to such a cursed pasta.

As was said already it moves too quickly, for example:
>She looks up at you, teary-eyed, still processing what just happened , lips quivering with shock. "what did I do wrong?" but you just smile at her and tell her that it's a special game, and that if she wants to keep playing she needs to stop being such a crybaby. Obviously she has no frame of reference so she'll suck it up and force a smile even as you bring the bat up for the second strike.
More detail/etc here
>I honestly feel my heartbeat quickening just imagining her tears as she huddles up against the cold concrete walls when I lock her up for the night. She doesn't understand that this isn't normal, she blames herself for not being good enough. She wraps her arms several times around herself and hugs her knees while burying her face into her chest, doing anything she can to feel the warmth you deprive her of.

A good way to think about the flow of prose is that each sentence ought to be used as the transition from one detail to another. So the right balance is adding enough sentences to paint a bigger picture, but also keep it moving along to the next idea you want to write. For instance, you could've written something between her asking what she's doing wrong, to you saying something like "nothing, as long as you play this game right", have a sentence of her understanding it as a game, and then when she takes it it hits harder because you actually have a fuller picture of why, instead of being bluntly stated.

It's unironically just poetry, you want it to have a rhyme and reason to it, the WAY you go about it is as, if not more important than WHAT you're writing about.

I worked at a medium security prison for ~2 1/2 years. I'd got the job straight out of college, so I was pretty pysched; I live in the middle of nowhere, so getting a job like that was amazing in my eyes. I started out with just drug rehab, but as other counselors started quitting/retiring, I got my own unit.

Problem was, the unit I got was Protective Custody, so my clients were cops, snitches, and pedophiles. Lovely.

I also got saddled with 'intake', which is just a basic go-over with any inmates coming in from out-of-system prisons, or new people. One of these guys was coming from the maximum unit in Santa Fe. I can't name names, so unfortunately it's all just my word on it, but that's just how this works. He was doing life for murder. Back about twenty years ago, he'd heard a rumor that his cousin was being touched and, considering the words 'big town' and 'New Mexico' don't exist if you don't live in Albuquerque, he knew exactly who it was.

Cut his head off in the caliche pits a few miles outside of his house. Life sentence, obviously. During his initial intake in Santa Fe, they had to put him in protective custody because his case made the local news, and he'd be targeted as a result (don't ask me why; inmates hate and actively try to kill pedophiles, so I couldn't explain why this guy would be in danger) so he had to go in protective custody.

Of course, his cellmate was a pedophile. Of course that guy was dead about a month later. Ever see Pulp Fiction? Knocked him out and curb stomped him on his stone bed frame. Solitary confinement for a LOOOONG time for that. Bear in mind, this guy is Rob Zombie's Michael Myers sized, so I'm not happy with telling him that he gets to go back into PC at my prison...

Luckily, my prison actually gives a shit about lawsuits, so they put him in with a crooked cop, and up until I left, they were doing fine.

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Meant to say American History X...

Damn.

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>This is a thread about a cartoon character that triggered several sadomasochistic fanfics, a small course of creative writing advice, and a prison story
bruh...

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I didn't mean for the baseball story to come off as masochistic but I can see why someone would assume that it was sadistic. Regardless of that, the writing advice is neat.

It's a good story, user may have skipped over it due to reading the other one.

Thank you all so much. I can really feel the deficiency in my writing that your advice is communicating and after looking over my first attempt I can see that there are definitely places where I can rearrange things/add context to make it a more complete and succintly flowing story.

Next time I'll try to write a story that makes you regret ever coming to this thread.

I get the feeling someone's going to come out of this thread with the motivation to change something about their life.

Cringe but redpilled.

attaboy

Thank you for the compliment. Hiding almost all of the text in the story also might be the reason why it isn't getting a lot of attention.

this is the kind of existential dread I go through every day

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Forget abandoning her.

Just wither away in front of her. You dwell in your room nonstop, you spend all day laying in bed looking at the wall, your life fades before her because she's witness to it all. She's always present there with you, you don't mind her being there at all, just sitting or standing by in your room. Don't neglect her, don't get rid of her, you don't hate her or anything. But nothing she can do can pick you up, she can't enliven you to the best of her abilities. Her whole reason for being and creation, was to entertain and brigthen your day, to be your best friend.

Nothing works, she's always there always standing by but powerless down to the core of her being. You rot living, and desperately she struggles to save you any and every way she can, by her nature and purpose for being you are like a fire to her for her to stoke but the fire is dying in her hands. Perhaps she can even coax what appears change out of you, to her hope, but it doesn't last or despairingly, makes it worse. Ever responsive to her, always there for her, but her hugs, her dances, her antics yield nothing. Maybe a weak smile, maybe a step outside, but it never lasts.

If you abandon her, she can take that as something wrong with herself that she can change, can fix. Like an old toy thrown away, she just wasn't fun enough or too silly to be seen with, but in control of herself and knows she can change and do better for you. Or hell, she can turn it against you, it's reasonable to hate you for abandoning her. The point is she has the choice, the power. But imagine being the toy of an owner who never gives up on you, but you can never bring joy. If the onus is on you to bring the light to their life, and you do everything you possibly can and fail, then you're flawed in a way that cannot be fixed. You can't hate them either since there is no bad guy in this situation. Worse than anything, you're just powerless, in the one way you were supposed to, and were made to be powerful.

Fuck this is sad

Had it happen with a relative, most upsetting thing in my life.

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Why did you die?

Pink Diamond killed Spinel's joy.

You kill her hope.

I know that the show called Seteven universe have Steven Universe as the protagonists, but i think it is kinda wasted potential that all the drama ends up beign resolved by " Steven saves the days by loving and talking to people", but this clearly shows that there is a limit in the amount of emotional labor that Steven can put out, taking sight of his own emotional state time. Steven quest of restoring the gems in the movie leaves me vety sad about Spiny. He is right to trstore his friends by spending time with them, and the way spinel just stays there in the sidelines not ever reciving an ounce of Steven atention is sad but reasonable. Spinel just got there, and doesn't matter how much Steven wants to help he just don't have the same emotional care with her and this is fine. So it would be intresting if Spiny had the chance to interact wih anyone that isn't steven, be it human or gem.

The ending felt to rusehd for me, Spinel should have made friends in earth instead of going with the diamonds, it felt like she was a drug addict going back in the path that made her a junkie in the first place.

It feels like they wrote that scene back in the very beginning of production when the story was simple and never bothered to revise it once the character became more complex and the ending didn't make sense anymore.

Reminder that Steven never hugged Spinel

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>Spiny start to break down again, yelling how no one likes her and how they are going to leave her alone
>Someone hugs her and tell her that its all going to be okay, she will not be alone anymore and that they will take care of them

j u s t

That's what I wanted to see so fucking badly.

Just imagine how sublimely healing it would've been to have Spinel on the verge of her breakdown, looking desperately to be reassured that she won't be thrown away or left alone. To have Steven at that very moment shut the fuck up and hold her tightly in his arms. Her eyes opening wide in shock for before she suddenly realizes that it's been 6,000 years since anyone has even tried to hug her. The realization that she has people who won't get tired of her and will be her friend. Her arms wrapping around Steven as her knees give way and she collapses to the ground, crying, begging to be forgiven while grappling to come to terms with the things she's done. Steven quietly reassuring her that she has a home now while the rest of the cast looks on at the two with hopeful expressions.

It would've been fucking perfect.

It worked for me. It gave the diamonds someone to dote on, and they share similar experiences with "oh yeah, pink was a shit and we didn't see her for 6000 years".

Stopping the injector was the only thing she had going for her on Earth, and as soon as she did that Steven went right back to forgetting about her and worrying about something else. Its her own flaw that she reacted so violently to the thought of abandonment again, but that's part of who she is.

MAYBE it will be better with the diamonds, but she has to figure things out on her own, and Steven is just a huge reminder of how she was abandoned in the first place.

I wouldn't be able to stand "good" spinel because of her childish behaviur, but on the other hand "evil" spinel is soemone that i would like to help heal and mature, to help her heal from her emotional scars and help her grow to be more independent and mature. The girl just need a hug FFS and those faggots couldn't even deliver that. Every breaking point she had could be solved with this + some minor thing. When Steven drops her weapon and she starts to cry? Just break that shit, tell her that you will not erase her brain and hug her.

This.
FUCKING THIS!

In the damn series Steven likes to hug everything including things that don't want to be hugged, but no for the movie the one character that was practically begging for a hug from the moment we find out about her backstory, just... doesn't get one.

It's just why...

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You deserve cancer for that post

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Welp this thread made me depressed time to leave

She still kinda wanted to kill him, I think.

>Lars is now Steven's personal uber and storage unit

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don't worry, your interest in her will fade away in like a week or something

Nothing beats someone angrily channeling their angst into your dick. Holy fuck.

what's this chick's name anyway I've just been calling her Pink Cuphead to my friends

>when a girl starts crying while going down on your dick, but goes in even harder with the deepthroat

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thoughts on this scene?

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That's kind of sad, luckily spinel isn't real so she can't be hurt by us moving on

>evil spinel
Shes reformed from that evil. Gems change their appearance as they mature, right?

I really, really hope they are going to bring her back in a different, matured shape.
The runny maskara faded, but still there, she now has eyelashes and eyebrows. Looks less like a jester and more like the diamonds.

I think good spinel can really work if its mixed with the person she's become. Like shes nice and friendly but is alot less naive. Like she's still can of whoopass that's waiting to burst if tested. But at the same time she'd rather make friends and be a goofball.

I really really really want to see what her mature form is going to look like after she moves on from this trauma.

Hopefully she keeps her darker color scheme and hair but ditches the runny mascara and maybe her clothes will change a little to reflect her experiences with the diamonds?

You mean after she said she only wanted to be someone's friend?

"You are flawed in a way that cant be fixed"
This is the phrase. I wanna say it someday just by how much it hurts to think

Jesus
People on this board need serious help

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For this purpose I like xkcd's way of saying

>That cycle of mediocrity isn't due to some obstacle. It's who you are. The thing standing in the way of your dreams is that the person having them is you.

Good Spinel learns very quickly that her childish behaviour isn’t working on Steven. Notice how after a little while she takes a back seat and lets him get on with shit. It’s when Steven gets outwardly despondent that she steps in. If her tact doesn’t work she changes it.

She’s clearly complex, understand social context and capable of growth in that regard. She’s mostly reactive to Steven but gradually she even becomes proactive. Don’t forget when she’s good she’s a “young” gem who needs to develop. She develops much faster than the others, actually.

I think Spinel as an individual has a lot going for her. Despite all her initial childishness etc her power of empathy and social understanding is quite strong.

I hope sue keeps the runny mascara and panda eyes. They make her look so hot.

I'm so hard right now

I loved it. She kinda calls out Steven’s bullshit but at the same time she’s so far gone with rage that nothing he says will impact her. Everything he does to defending himself will be twisted into a justification of everything she does. Then Spinel gets angry when Steven refuses to attack her, because he’s proving her wrong.

If Garnet hadn’t changed right there, I think Steven and Spinel would have been able to talk things over. Him breaking the Rejuvenator scythe should have shocked her and was a perfect set-up for Steven being able to start getting through to her. I was disappointed this didn’t happen.

>only you can change how you feel
What did he mean by that?

he means you're in charge of your feelings
unless you're autistic

Oversimplified “change starts with you” self-help bullshit

He meant that only she could make herself better

Nobody is in charge of their feelings.

t. autist

t. retard

You can't really 'stop' feelings, but you can control feelings. So in a way, you do have a responsibility in terms of controlling these feelings and not letting it affect you and then others negatively

You can control what you do in reaction to your feelings. Like not kill strangers because you’re hurt.

Can I animate this or something i love this

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charcoal

fuck you

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had chills reading this

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>But Pink Diamond, Spinel is our friend

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>ears

um....bruh

>Kill Spinel

>Areyousureaboutthat.gif
Also Gems can get cracked by that energy bat/taser wand that defused Garnet. The scythe created temporary cracks on Steven, and Amethyst cracked herself from falling off a cliff. Their light bodies might be hard but considering all the gem shards from the cluster, the mutants, and those who died in the war, a good hit to the gem could crack/shatter them. Hell even Lapis was cracked by a Bismuth sucker punching her in the back.
>Also we know White Pearl was Pink's original Pearl
>We never get to see PD throwing a tantrum/cracking her first Pearl like the spoiled brat she is.
>Not seeing the delectable suffering of both Pearls as they're very existance/story shows they were replacable like Spinel.
>OG Pearl was replaced by our Pearl and NuPearl was replaced by Greg and Greg was Replaced by Steven

Even in her pursuit of "change" PD stayed the same.

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>Can you imagine that?

I am not that sadistic, user.

My bed.

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this time i won't be talked out of suicide

If you can animate, you can. I usually find myself wishing that I can animate when I write scenes like that.

This gives me a Patrick Bateman sized boner more than the generic edgelord up the thread

user, Who fucking hurt you?

This shit happened to me, I was that annoying insensitive clingy friend. I go to his house everyday, constantly talk to him about irrelevant shit, hyperactive, etc.

I didn't understand his coldness towards me until I got an autistic friend myself and he did the same fucking thing.

Who else? Pink Diamond.

i'm pretty sure canon spinel was only so insufferable because she had literally no other friends and was told her life's purpose was being one person's friend. without that she'd probably be very popular. in fact, you'd think she was your best friend but discover she was two timing you with eleven other people and sees nothing wrong with that

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Perfection user.

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>Friendship with Pearl ended
>Now Small Bird is my friend
>Wait, Pearl needs to do my laundry
>Resume, resume

>what is fluffy poni for 1000

Same shit, different autistic object. Get this disgusting shit out of my face

Well Spinel would have other friends, but she's the kind of person who could still care deeply about you despite her having multiple friends. Only issue that would arise if she had little time to hang out because she was with other people.

EXPIRE YOU SADISTIC MONGOLOID

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What makes it worse is that this does happen to people.

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Do you have the link to the original post? Or at least the post number?

The hero this thread needed.

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lmao at these replies and how soft nuchan is

Sorry, this is a combination of like 3 posts I wrote over on trash. I wasn't even the one that made the cap.

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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA FUCKING DIE

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Post the full, more painful version, you coward.

I wanted to post just the part where they're happy together to try and counterbalance that fucking psycho torture post.

Here, have it

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Here's one of my happy ones too because fuck your negativity.

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Thanks, found it. Don't know why I didn't check trash
Also, fuck

Thank you my good bitch. keep writing that good suffering shit

She dies as soon as you do it, so there’s really no downside.

Gay post I ain't reading it

I'll take her

What will you do when she tries to kill you for revenge

t. nigger faggot dyke jew who is a big big boy

And this is very good, user. I know I'm just restating what happens, but I love how, in such a short space, they end up on opposite sides of the window argument

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Do you have thethe gif of SPinel punching herself on her head?

lol what an idiot

Spinel's hand wraps itself tightly in your own, her warmth seeping into you as she carefully regulates her grip so as to avoid causing you pain. You feel her gaze hanging just inches away from your face, though your eyes are too weak to see her anymore. You know that she is looking at you with the same eyes you fell in love with so many decades ago.

"I'm so sorry, spinel." You murmur as you have so many times in the past few years. You had never known, or at least had never wanted to know how cruel you were to make her fall in love with a creature whose life is measured in seconds like your own. She never blamed you, never even tried to resent you for it. She was your best friend, and so much more than that.

A humid warmth drips onto your chest, she's weeping so very softly. "Y-You kidding? You're not the first to get rid of me, I'll be fine somehow." There's a terrible sadness in her voice and she stops to sob momentarily. You muster whatever's left in you and strengthen your grip on her hand, squeezing ever so lightly.

"I would never have left you, Spinel. If it were up to me I would have spent every moment til this star and all others subside with you. I didn't throw you away, I could never do that to you." Your voice is a trailing whisper, barely audible. Yet, somehow you're sure that she's heard your final message. You feel dizzy for just a second and then a creeping darkness overwhelms you. The last thing you ever perceive is her face buried in your chest, and the wild grief in the heat of her tears.

Spinel lived for many years and ages after you died, and though it took her years to recover from your death, she even made friends, thousands in fact. Across the galaxy there were only a scant few who never ever heard of her. Of course, there were also those who wanted to be her best friend. She would always smile sadly and tell them, tell them that she already had a best friend and that she was waiting to meet him once more. Someday, somewhere, somehow.

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YAMERO

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Thank you. I think it's a bit of a shame that it's not getting a lot of attention but I think that happens when almost of the text in the story is covered with spoiler borders. That and I think people on Yea Forums tend to gravitate toward dramatic stories.

Sasuga, user-san
DISGUSTINGLY based

That was a nice story thanks you

this is sweet. you're sweet.

Fuckin' love it but I don't think it makes much sense for the character, I mean getting hit with a bat and they don't understand it at all? That's just retarded, but anyways good writing, would fap again.

He group hugged everyone, but her. She longed for a hug ever since they were in the garden and she got her memories back, and no one ever hugged her.

No but I got this.

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based sadist ryonafag

Kind of sucks how steven has to be the catalyst for characters to open up. Feels like a missed opportunity for bismuth, peridot and lapis to mention how they almost or attempted to kill steven after spinel deactivates the injector and feels used. Steven dropped his spaghetti hard but literally everyone else was there, bismuth and spinel relate really well and she likely could've calmed her down if she just said something. Too bad spinel only imprinted on steven and and only viewed him as a friend.

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I need a montage of Steven getting hurt.

Amazing, I will remember this random post 70 years from now. user, I hope you still remember my comment by then too.

She deserved a hug.

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I just want to know WHERE she got that damn injector from??

I'm glad this place still has some good writers in it.

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That was pretty lame and stupid. I've seen lots of edgy greentexts and scenarios like this in my day, and this doesn't stand out. It just feels like it's trying too hard, and it certainly doesn't hold a candle to the genuine depravity and autism I've seen on /r9k/ and in Fluffy threads.

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I remember fluffy threads, god I never thought that I had that side to me, but reading those god-forsaken threads all those years ago awoke something awful in me.

I’m glad you liked it so much user. It makes me really happy to read that, honestly.

w-what are fluffy threads? they sound familiar, like maybe I've heard of them while watching youtube videos 6 years ago about the dark web familiar

she reminds me of this one clingy desperate virgin chick I knocked up and ditched at a college party

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A niche subset of dudes on /mlp/ who made fetishistic guro artwork of retarded, child-like ponies being tortured, raped, and killed. It's curated exclusively by disturbed autists who post long, incoherent comments under crude MS paint drawings on Fluffychan. It has that "esoteric DeviantArt fetish" vibe, although said autists furiously deny there being anything sexual about it. The scene had the dubious honor of being universally-hated by everyone on /mlp/, and then by everyone Yea Forums when it was banned from /mlp/, and then by everyone /trash/ when it was banned from Yea Forums.

An offshoot of the MLP fandom dedicated to torture of tiny fluffy ponies. There are threads for it on /trash/. I used to be into that shit.

I have a lot of fun reading these because I have this obsession with going to bed thinking about a complete reversal of these stories which always end up having a "it' was all a dream" ending and all the characters are loved or at least not abused.

It's how I enjoy those "doing mean things to your gf" panels.

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All the more reason for me to pile the hate on PD. Spinel was able to mature in what could be just a couple hundred to maybe a few thousand years, Whereas PD couldn't mature in a millennia.

thanks, love you

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Bump

For toxic people to change, they have to first accept that they are, in fact, toxic.

Otherwise telling them they are bad and they need to change will just make them angry, and retort that you are in the wrong.

Are you the same person who's been bumping this thread for like a day now? Just let it die. It's been at page 9 like ten times now.

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We need some cute stories, it's too late at night for me to even try though.
Spinel at Carnival?

Amazing

Worry not anons Spinel has gained many fans inspite of the edgy green texts, and they all just want to see her happy.

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fuck it hurts

Kinda curious with how therapy is in a prison setting. I've worked with outpatient partial hospitalization groups, which occasionally has clients that are trying to avoid prison under the condition of attending therapy. Requires a lot of patience, since a lot of the clients aren't interested in doing anything beyond filling a chair in the room. I'm still a baby therapist, so I'm not great at finding ways of engaging clients that are only showing up to sessions out of obligation.

and now I'm sad

Was Steven getting his super strength back? A gem punch should have shattered his face.

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And then Steven came and turned him into a pink undying zombie like Lars.

>Everythingwentbetterthanexpected.jpg

>ywn find spinel crying on the side of the road after being abandoned again
>ywn sit down and talk with her until she finally calms down and admits that she has nowhere to stay
>ywn convince her to come stay with you until she can get back on her feet
>ywn watch her smile light up like a christmas tree when you grab her hand and tell her that you're there for her
>ywn see tears of gratitude welling up in her eyes when you hand her a towel and spare shirt so she can get herself cleaned up and dry
>ywn see her awkwardly laugh and stutter as she tries to explain that the lines on her face aren't actually runny mascara
>ywn wake up the morning after to find her cleaning your apartment with her stretchy limbs, desperately trying to pay you back for your kindness
>ywn promise to come back from work while stopping her repeated attempts at pulling you back in due to her fear of abandonment
>ywn come back from work to find her working on a perfectly delicious sandwich after burning her first attempt at food
>ywn get absolutely destroyed at sports by spinel because she's a dirty cheater who extends her arms and legs
>ywn be on the receiving end of her banter as she lovingly belittles you for sucking at sports
>ywn wake up to the sound of her knocking on your door, tears streaming down her cheeks after she wakes up from a nightmare
>ywn wake up one day and realize that spinel actually is your best friend, and you actually kind of love having her around
>ywn propose to spinel that she stay with you and give up on the job hunt
>ywn hear her go silent and look up in time to see tears streaming down her cheeks, realizing that you actually truly like her for who she is
>ywn pull her trembling hands in for a hug and hold her in your arms for half an hour, comforting her for as long as it takes for her to believe that you actually want her
>ywn kiss her forehead and promise to be her best friend forever
>ywn see her smile softly as she thanks you for loving her

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Don't you try to pull a face-turn, you damn poopy.

Just kidding. I suck at writing so I hope you find a way to improve!

i just finished the movie and wanted to talk about cute spinels. why are you all such faggots?

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based

Fuck you MEGARA, you ungrateful cunt.

user
she doesnt have ears

>Nihilistic, with a wicked sense of humor

You tried too hard with your diction and if you write purely for shock factor, your writing will always be hollow. I guess that's what happens when your only experience in writing is rooted fanfics and high school English.

And then faggots have the gall to pretend that these people have actual potential when they do nothing more than regurgitate the same sadistic dreams that have been enacted on thousands of characters before. It's not a fascimile of creativity, you're taking characters that aren't your's and merely posting the thoughts of syncophants past, pretending they're somehow new or novel.

For fuck's sake, descriptively write about what a gem feels when it's shattered or cracked. At least no one has done that at length vs baby-blender #12,467

Pretty good.

kek

>That and I think people on Yea Forums tend to gravitate toward dramatic stories.
True, it's Yea Forums after all. But at least you and the other based anons in this thread lit some candles in the cynical darkness that plagues this place

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