She's not "kinda" bland and inoffensive, those are her primary character traits. There's nothing to her, much like her crappy origin comic series where nothing happens.
You know I thought the story was heading in this direction where she would be investigating her town and finding everyone else was special and had powers while she was actually the only normall one. Then having it revealed that she does have powers, she's from a different earth just kind of took me out of it.
See I'm not pissed that Bendis went ahead and made ANOTHER black character for shameless brownie points. I'm pissed because he aged up Jon, sent him off the LoSH, and now Naomi is being introduced in Superman. Fuck that bald asshole with a rake, and fuck him for Teen Lantern too
This has pretty interior art but the pacing is fucking garbage. This is now how a capecomic should be delivered. This is clearly a different genre altogether. You can't have a bunch of WORDSWORDSWORDS and like zero action to make up for it. This is a visual medium not a fucking fanfic.
Lackluster first issue that made reading it a chore. Christ.
>I'm pissed because he aged up Jon nigga, just drop Superman the Kent family is gone and super sons is virtually impossible now, there's nothing we can do about it
Joshua Jenkins
Why doesn't he just use bigger word boxes intead of som many tiny ones?
I haven't bought ONE fucking issue of Superman since Bendis took over. However I will read the storytimes on here. Because goddammit I will not let it be said that I didn't give Bendis a shot, and I want to be mad
>another Bendis OC that will eventually be OP as fuck
Angel Nguyen
It's boring, it's drawn out for no reason with the entire second issue beginning and ending in the same place, Bendis abuses double page spreads, Naomi is a dull Mary Sue, the dialogue is atrocious, the artist seems to have gotten bored halfway through and stopped trying, it's basically just another fucking Bendis comic, and the fact that she's most likely named after the great Dwayne McDuffie is just the biggest slap to the face of all. It's shit.
Doesn't Clark blur himself out of every photo by vibrating slightly or moving out of frame so he comes off like a big goofy loser always fucking up pictures?
Josiah Torres
The art gets worse the longer it goes and I'm tired of Bendis dialogue, he's like fucking Joss Whedon at this point. Just remaking the same fucking thing over and over
I don't really care about her but I do dislike that she's just "Naomi" and doesn't seem to have any kind of super hero name. What even are her powers? I do know her origin is that she's like the last from her species from another earth so that's something completely original that has never been done before ever.
>Jacksonville >All these trees and not a fern in sight. >Big ass bridge but absolutely no metropolitan sprawl around it. I know the artists can't afford to like, go on vacation and research the places they draw, but spend a good five minutes in google image search. Like fuck.
Justin Gonzalez
>go full page window >zoom in because it's still just a bit too small >page is super HD and a single panel covers the screen I hate it
I didn't mind it at first when it looked like a twist on the Superman mythos and she was an ordinary girl that was adopted by aliens. Then she became super special and awesome from another dimension and I lost all interest. It's pretty inoffensive though and nowhere near the WOKEfest Yea Forums was promising/dreading
This is where I stooped reading, they spend an entire issue padding the plot just to end up in the exact same place and situation, you could have made these two issues a single one.
Only problem I have with it is that it takes... five issues? to do what could've been done better in two or three. It's a perfectly acceptable origin for a rather milquetoast character, so, you know. Every super hero origin ever, pretty much.
Does anyone notice they tend to give Bendis some of the best fucking artists? Like artists I'd love to see on any other comic, artists that can do and but mostly do page after page of pointless dialogue or characters staring at each other while speechless. FUCKING WHY?
He's always been able to get good-great artists. I'm a Bendis apologist a lot of the time but I'll be mad forever about how he hogged Stuart Immonen for so long on bad Avengers stories
>What does Yea Forums think of Naomi? As someone who read the issues here on Yea Forums, if the supporting cast of the new "hero" you're pushing are way more interesting than her, then you are failing to justify why that new "hero" or character needs to exist
It was the same with Pichelli. I don't get it, is it in his contract? Although I did hear that part of the reason Pichelli really enjoyed working with Bendis is because it's absurdly easy work. 90% of it being people standing or sitting around talking to each other.
That's why he gets the good artists. Book is guaranteed to sell and they get a cushy job. Fuck, look at the comics posted here, most of the panels don't match the dialogue at all. They ignore his script and just draw the real comic.
Sebastian Rogers
Oh good grief. These metaphors are just so inscrutable! I don't understand, what's going on here?!
Adam Hughes
What the absolute fuck is shreking.
Ryder Russell
The pacing is bad but to be honest I've seen worse.
Ian Turner
>The crowd in the background is completely motionless throughout all panels.
Panel 1 and Panel 3 are the exact same except for the third girl, who's just an edit of her art from panel 2.
Gabriel Morris
>The dialogues alright Good grief, there's no hope for this planet
Adam Lewis
kids dont even have lockers anymore
Caleb Ortiz
Seriously? I've only been out of school for 5 years and we had lockers.
Ayden Jenkins
yeah its to stop bomb threats
Luis Martin
>bendis >blacks ocs jesus this dude needs help
Aiden Reed
>you're, no offense, the town mechanic. >We've never actually spoken before... how do you even know what day I was adopted?
LAST FUCKING ISSUE Dee is on first name basis with Naomi and that doesn't strike her as odd? Is that a small town thing. Every body knows every bodies name but knowing the day the one black girl in the whole town came to town is a huge red flag?
SERIOUSLY, there isn't a singe panel with any other black characters anywhere.
Robert Hughes
The only thing I'll argue with you about is the art. There's some lazy shit like copy and pasting on certain pages, but for the most part it's consistent and holds up. I see your point about artist losing interest but for a shitty Bendis comic at least it's alright to look at.
The Bendis shitty character power hour. My favourite kind of thread
Camden Campbell
Plz no bully Dee.
Joshua Foster
Everyone stop bullying Dee!
Leo Hernandez
>SERIOUSLY, there isn't a singe panel with any other black characters anywhere. Apparently that's supposed to be part of the story I don't know how since if only Dee and her parents were aliens that doesn't explain why there's no more black people around.
Michael Lewis
their town was smart and exterminated all the other black people
Jordan Murphy
Naomi was bad. And not in a fun way either. Just a dreadful Bendis boring bad
That entire 2nd issue could have not existed and it would have saved us a lot of time.
It bothers me that she is completely covered except for the tips of her toes.
Hunter Kelly
>she's most likely named after the great Dwayne McDuffie Really?
>Naomi is a dull Mary Sue I wouldn't call her a "Mary Sue" but she is dull.
Liam Price
So... do the suits come with the powers or that world just has that kind of fashion sense?
Brody Russell
>try to be vaguely Supeswank >Daily Planet (underlined 2 times) >CLARK KENT? Probably sums up Bendis better than anything.
Asher Hughes
She's a qt there.
What's she like?
Chase James
Bruh it took like 4-5 issues to say shes an alien
Wyatt Rivera
>What are you talking about? The pacing is what kills the book, they could have told the same story in 3 issues.
Easton Fisher
I don't see it was paced well I said I was too much. I feel the origin should be the simplest part of a hero, but with her we get the reveal her parents are aliens, she's also an alien but not of the same kind, from a different earth they know guy who's basically a retired villain, and a villain from home dimension shows up to fight, that all sounds like stuff would get added to a hero's origin years after they've been around.
Nathan Harris
So they just went with Naomi. That's her superhero name. That's like a superhero being named Peter. Not that there's anything wrong with that, semi-common biblic names can have interesting meanings and Naomi could probably mean some more other than a shallow smash the patriarchy reference mixed with a Naomi Campbell reference. I mean she's a character in the bible who chooses to give herself a new name other than the one that was given to her, surely Bendis integrated that in the story of a superhero named Naomi, right?
No thanks, I don't like that book after what they did to Amethyst. >Crystal are technology instead of Magic >Turquoise is useless >Carnelian is the polar opposite of his original self >And Dark Opal is a fucking joke.
The worst part is that they use Brianne Drouhard's design for Amethyst but is nothing like the shorts.
This kind of scene is already bad in the movies you're poorly trying to ape.
Sincerely,
Some guy.
Xavier Torres
Earth 2?
William Gutierrez
>You father was a gaming software engineer. He knew strategy games and that made him an outstanding wartime tactician in the real world. Is this meant to be ironic?
Jonathan Murphy
Who is this Naomi bitch? Why should I care? Give me a rundown on her.
Levi Anderson
[wololo]Anonymous, friend, you should pander to the RTS audience.[/wololo]
Did anyone think this was a Black Lantern symbol for a second.
Through this issue with the from one persons point of view of past events, I thought this was going to be some her parents are the bad guys twist at the end.
Grayson Reyes
Why the fuck do Bendis books sell? I honestly don't understand
Justin Howard
Bendis' DC books haven't been a great success apparently.
Christian Perez
Then why are they still giving him books?
Colton Myers
He works with really good artists
Aaron Turner
Stopped here and its crap. I Guess that now you dont need skill to work for dc, yeah yeah this comic has some parts with decent art but its meh
Sebastian Wood
Can Bendis just stop putting his daughter OC's into the books. Also why do most if not all of his daughter OC's steal their power or weapons from the heros.
Hunter Wood
some shit superman ripoff
Isaiah Cruz
what are her powers
Brayden Sullivan
I've no idea, hopefully Bendis' Legion is the straw that breaks the camel's back
She goes barefoot when she powers up, therefore I fucking DESPISE her.
Ryder Lewis
>crowd never changes >black girl and pink hair girl same in panels 1 and 3 >Goth girls shrug stand EXACTLY the same in 2 and 4, just with a different head
This is disgusting.
Angel Rodriguez
So wait, she just goes super sayian without the flair?